Unit10Ifyougotothepartyyoullhaveagreattime!【写作课】八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版）（学生版）

Unit10Ifyougototheparty,you’llhaveagreattime!单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度应用文建议信本单元以“建议信”为话题，主要谈论学生生活中所遇到的问题和困难，并针对这些问题和困难寻求帮助或给出建议。在写作过程中，学生应注意以下几点：能正确使用if引导的条件状语从句；2.能正确使用情态动词should提出建议；3.能使用生动的语言，把自己的观点表达出来；4.能在叙述的过程中，恰当运用过渡词语，使文章衔接自然。（三段布局法）1.结构：短文通常分为三个部分：第一部分：引入话题。第二部分：给出建议。第三部分：总结收尾。2.人称：第二人称。3.时态：一般现在时、一般将来时。【词汇积累】1.advice劝告；建议2.experience经验；经历3.organize组织；筹备 4.solve解决；解答 5.feelupset感觉沮丧的 6.careless粗心的；不小心的 7.understanding善解人意的；体谅人的8.unless除非；如果不9.makemistakes犯错误 10.keep...tooneself保守秘密11.getintoafightwithsb.和某人吵架12.arrive/belateforclass上课迟到13.loseone’swallet丢失钱包14.haveproblemswithschoolwork成绩不好15.discussyourproblems讨论你的问题16.tellyourparents告诉你的父母17.getadvicefromanexpert从专家处得到建议18.runawayfrom从……逃离19.solveproblems解决问题20.haveproblemswith/doingsth.在某方面/做某事有困难21.it’sbest1.haveagreattime玩得开心22.gototheparty去参加聚会23.wearjeans穿牛仔服24.stayathome呆在家25.talkabout谈论26.haveaparty举办聚会27.thanksfor感谢.......28etomyhouse来我家29.haveanexam考试30.bringfood带食物31.too..to太....而.....32.givesomesmallgifts送一些小礼物33.playthegames玩游戏34.afterschool放学后35.haveto必须36.studyformyEnglishexam备考英语37.beupset失落38.haveapianolesson上钢琴课39.givemesomeadvice给我一些建议40.buysomeflowers买些鲜花41.getenoughexercise足够的锻炼42.makemorefriends多交朋友43.beafraidto担心44.intheend最后45.understanding善解人意的46.thesameas与.....一样47.havealotofexperience有很多经验(not)todosth.最好（不）做某事四、句型积累1.IhavesomeproblemsandIneedyourhelp.我碰到一些问题，我需要你的帮助。2.Ihavetroubleingettingalongwithmyparents.我与我父母相处有困难。3.Ifyouhavetroubleindoinghomework,yourfriendswillbereadytohelp.4.Ifyougototheparty,you’llhaveagreattime.如果你去参加聚会，你会过得愉快。5.Thestudentsaretalkingaboutwhentohaveaclassparty.周学们正在讨论何时举行班级聚会。6.Second,bekindandfriendlytothemandtryyourbesttohelpthemwhenthey’reintrouble.7.Someparentsoftenasktheirchildrentostudyhard,buttheyaretoobusytoknowtheirchildren’srealtrouble.一些家长常要求孩子努力学习，但他们因为太忙以至于不能了解孩子的真正烦恼。8.Runningawayfromproblemswillmakeyoufeelworse.逃避问题会使你感到更糟。9.Ithinktalkingtosomeonehelpsalot.我认为和人交谈能帮助很多。10.It'sbestnottorunawayfromourproblems.最好不要逃避我们的问题。11.Sharingaproblemislikecuttingitinhalf.分享困难可以使困难减半。12.Somepeoplebelievetheworstthingistodonothing.一些人相信最糟糕的事情是什么都不做。◆开头句①Asmiddleschoolstudents，wehavealotofhappiness，butwealsohavemanyproblems.②I'msorrytohearaboutyourproblem.③IhaveaproblemandIneedyouradvice.◆中间句①Weshouldn'tkeepthemtoourselves.②Ithinkyoushouldfollowyourparents'wishes.③Firstly，I'lltellthemmyfeelings.Secondly，I'lltrymybesttodomorehouseworksothattheycanhavemoretimetorelax.What'smore，Iwillmakethemsitdowntohaveagoodtalk.④Whynotwaituntilyougetolder，andthentalkaboutitwithyourparentsagain?⑤Ifyouhaveproblems，youshouldtalktootherpeople.◆结尾句①I'msuremyparentswillgetonwitheachothersoonifIdoallthesethings.②Ireallyhopemyadvicewillhelpyou.【谚语积累】1．Twoheadsarebetterthanone.三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。2．Tohelpothersistohelpyourself.帮助别人就是帮助你自己。生活是如此的美好，人生有无尽的欢乐，但也有诸多烦恼。作为中学生，你最大的烦恼是什么？你打算如何解决你的烦恼？请你以“MyBiggestProblem”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求：1．文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名；2．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示：◆◆审题指导1．文体：说明文；2．时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；3．注意事项：注意段落布局并恰当使用复合句或连接词来增加得分点。◆◆思路点拨◆◆组句成篇MyBiggestProblemAsmiddleschoolstudents，wehavealotofhappiness，butwealsohavemanyproblems.Weshouldn'tkeepthemtoourselves.Forme，mybiggestproblemisfrommyparents.Thesedays，myparentsargueandfightalotbecauseofdoingchores.Ireallywanttorunaway.Afterthinkingtwice，Idecidetohelpmyparents.Firstly，I'lltellthemmyfeelings.Secondly，I'lltrymybesttodomorehouseworksothattheycanhavemoretimetorelax.What'smore，Iwillmakethemsitdowntohaveagoodtalk.Theworstthingistodonothing.I'msuremyparentswillgetonwitheachothersoonifIdoallthesethings.一、词汇积累(一)烦恼与问题类短语1．和某人吵架________________2．失去所有乐趣________________3．上课迟到________________4．丢失钱包________________5．没有足够的时间学习________________6．犯粗心错误________________7．感到害羞________________8．成绩不好________________9．起床迟________________10．在某方面有麻烦________________(二)解决问题类短语1．讨论你的问题________________2．告诉你的父母________________3．分担你的问题________________4．什么都不做________________5．向老师寻求帮助________________6．向某人道歉________________7．为英语考试而学习________________8．计划做某事________________9．环游世界________________10.接受教育________________11．上大学________________12．从专家处得到建议________________13．从……逃离________________14．与某人交谈________________15．要求某人更细心________________16．解决问题________________(三)其他短语1．太……以至于不能________________2．拥有丰富的经验________________3．最后________________4.感觉一样________________二、句子积累(一)佳句欣赏与模仿1．Ifweaskpeopletobringfood，they'lljustbringpotatochipsandchocolatebecausethey'llbetoolazytocook.【asksb.todosth.要求某人做某事；too…to…太……以至于不能】一些家长常要求孩子努力学习，但他们因为太忙以至于不能了解孩子的真正烦恼。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．Ithinktalkingtosomeonehelpsalot.InEnglish，wesaythatsharingaproblemislikecuttingitinhalf.【动名词在句中可以作主语、表语、宾语、定语等】逃避问题会使你感到更糟。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(二)用“if”推理下列行为的后果，并提出合理的建议。1．Mikedecidestoworkwithoutfinishinghiscollege.Ifhedoes，________________________________________________________________________Ithinkheshould________________________________________________________________________2．Ilostmywalletlastweek，butIamstillafraidtotellmyparents.Ifyou________________________________________________________________________Ithink________________________________________________________________________3．SuMei'sbrothercan'tdowellinEnglish.HeplanstogiveuplearningEnglish.If________________________________________________________________________Ithink________________________________________________________________________(三)给下面青少年存在的问题提出合理的建议。1．Bettyalwaysrunsawayfromherproblemsandtellsnobody.Ithink________________________________________________________________________If________________________________________________________________________2．Linglingisheavy.Someclassmatesoftenlaughather.Ithink________________________________________________________________________If________________________________________________________________________（一）1．Mike是一名中学生，他沉迷于玩电脑游戏，并因此影响了他的学习。作为Mike的好朋友，你打算怎么帮助他呢？请用下面所给的提示写一篇80词左右的短文(开头不计入总词数)。提示：giveup;wastetime;beinterestedin;haveagreattimeDearMike，Thanksforyourletter.Iamsorrytohearthatyouareintroublenow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）近年来，青少年的心理健康问题引起了越来越多的关注。你们学校的英语角这周的主题就是“青少年心理健康问题大家谈”。请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇文章，就这一话题进行发言。提示：1.学校方面：建立专门的部门；2.家长方面：给予更多关注；3.青少年自己：正确处理困难。参考词汇：心理健康mentalhealth;全社会thewholesociety;部门department要求：1.词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2.根据所给信息可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Nowadays,peoplearepayingalotmoreattentiontoteenagers'mentalhealth._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）新冠病毒疫情仍肆虐全球。在江阴政府的有效控制下，我们有幸在校学习。利用此契机，根据所给提示，以“BeaGoodStudent”为题写一篇短文，人人做最好的自己。要求：1.词数：80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥；BeaGoodStudentIfyouwanttobeagoodstudent,Ithinkitisgreatforyoutodothefollowingthings.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）一场疫情把人们都“封印”在家。父母和孩子天天近距离相处，引发了不少亲子关系问题。作为晚辈，我们应该如何与父母相处才能让这种难得的家庭时光变得更轻松，让亲子关系更加融洽呢？请你根据提示，以“Howtogetonwithparents?(如何与父母相处)为题写出一篇字数不少于70的文章，谈谈你的看法。提示：1.主动和父母交流在学校的学习和生活等情况；2.主动帮助父母承担家务，为父母分忧，比如整理房间，洗碗等；3.遇事多与父母讨论，多向长辈求助；4.……提示词：交流municatewith

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家务houseworkHowtogetonwithparents?Asteenagers,it’simportanttogetonwithparents.Whatshouldwedo?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）假如你是心理医生DrSmith，你收到学生Mary的来信，她在信中说，自己很喜欢看电视，但父母担心看电视影响她的学习，不让她看，她有时会和父母争吵，很烦恼，却不知道怎么办。请你给Mary写一封70个词左右的英文回信，给出解决的办法。提示词：arguewithsb．和某人吵架（六）6．假如你是劳拉(Laura)，你的好朋友蒂娜(Tina)对于将要到来的考试感到很担忧，担心不能取得好成绩。请你给她写一封信，针对她的问题，提出你的建议，并给她一些安慰和鼓励。提示词：worriedabout,normal,helpful(有帮助的),firstofall,next,if,will,nervous(紧张的),believeinoneself,best要求：1.语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；2.70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearTina,I’msorrytohearthat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Laura（2023·青海·统考中考真题）积极健康、乐观向上的生活是我们共同追求的目标。通过正确合理的自我管理和自我提升，我们都能遇见更好的自己。请参考右图信息，以“Howtobeeabetterperson”为主题，写一篇英语短文。写作要求：(1)语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范；(2)词数60—80左右；(3)文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·山东泰安·统考中考真题）强国有我！作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，青少年学生要努力成长为堪当大任的栋梁之材。请根据下面提示，以“Howtobegoodstudentsinthenewera”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做一名新时代（era）的好学生。要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。Howtobegoodstudentsinthenewera____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·湖南益阳·统考中考真题）学校正在向同学们征集开设课后服务课程的意见。假如你是学生李华，请你给校长写一封邮件，建议学校开设以下课程，并谈谈开设这些课程的理由。AfterschoolclassesReasonsdancinghappy,interestingswimminghealthy,strong......要求：1.内容可适当发挥，使行文连贯；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名称等信息；3.词数6080。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dearheadmaster,I’mLiHua._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopewe’llhavemoreinterestingafterschoolclasses.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua（2023·江苏无锡·统考中考真题）青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了TeensTalk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”SigmundFriend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。注意事项：（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；（2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。DearMr.Friend,I’mwritingtoyouabouttheproblemI’mfacingatthemoment._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua5．（2023·山东滨州·统考中考真题）假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。参考词汇:diet(v.节食),appearance(n.外貌),innerbeauty(内在美)DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________