高考英语写作话题7生活-锻炼健康饮食习惯和living well

语言专项四----人称是否一致

Travelbenefitsusbothphysicallyandpsychologically./wecanbenefitfrom/profitfromtravel……Foronething,ifwetakeatriporalongjourneyonourholidaystosomescenicspotsorhistoricsites,

wecanescapefromthenervoustensioncausedbyourheavyworkingloadandmeantimewe

arelikelytotastefoodwithstronglocalflavor.

Aboveall,travelcanwidenourknowledgeandconsequentlybroadenourhorizons.Thefartherwego,themorewewilllearnaboutthepolitics,economy,customsaswellasgeographyofdifferentcountries.Foranotherthing,ifweareluckyenough,wecanmaketheacquaintanceofnewfriendsandgainfriendship.语言专项五----名词单复数和零冠词

Travelbenefitsusbothphysicallyandpsychologically./wecanbenefitfrom/profitfromtravel……Foronething,ifwetakeatriporalongjourneyonourholidaystosomescenicspotsorhistoricsites,wecanescapefromthenervoustensioncausedbyourheavyworkingloadandmeantimewearelikelytotastefoodwithstronglocalflavor.

Aboveall,travelcanwidenour

knowledgeandconsequentlybroadenour

horizons.Thefartherwego,themorewewilllearnaboutthe

politics,economy,customsaswellasgeographyofdifferentcountries.Foranotherthing,ifweareluckyenough,wecanmaketheacquaintanceofnewfriendsandgainfriendship.语言专项六----定冠词和不定冠词备考P272It’smyhonortohavethischancetoshowyouaroundtheISLANDONTHELAKE.Firstwewillsetoutfortheislandbyferryboatat9:00am.Onarrivingatthe

island,wewillvisitthebotanicalgarden(s),whichare(is)fullofavarietyofcolorfulplantsandthe

siteofanoldtemplewithalonghistoryofover600years.Wewillhavelunchintherestaurantontheislandat11:30andafterthatwewillmoveontovisitthebirdhouse,wheretherearearangeofvaluablebirds.Attheendofthetour,Iwillleadyoutothegiftshop,whereyouwillbeabletobuysomesouvenirstorememberthisspecialtrip.Pleasereturnat3:30pmbycablecar.语言专项七----主谓一致/时态备考P272

It’smyhonortohavethischancetoshowyouaroundtheISLANDONTHELAKE.Firstwewillsetoutfortheislandbyferryboatat9:00am.Onarrivingattheisland,we

willvisitthebotanicalgardens,whicharefullofavarietyofcolorfulplantsandthesiteofanoldtemplewithalonghistoryofover600years.Wewillhavelunchintherestaurantontheislandat11:30andafterthatwewillmoveontovisitthebirdhouse,wheretherearearangeofvaluablebirds.Attheendofthetour,Iwillleadyoutothegiftshop,whereyou

willbeabletobuysomesouvenirstorememberthisspecialtrip.Pleasereturnat3:30pmbycablecar.语言专项八----时态和语态备考P270Iamquitesatisfiedwiththeservicesuppliedbythetravelagencyonthewhole.Firstofall,thelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists,especiallytotheold.Heexplainedeverythingabouttheplacesofinterestinaclearandlivelyway,whichhelpedtobroadenourhorizons.However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofusandquiteafewofushadtobuyextrafood.Inaddition,wewantedtobeledto

theshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargains,butwerenot./Isuggestthatthetravelagency(should)arrangeforustouriststogototheshopswherewecanbuygoodbargains./wheregoodbargainscanbebought.语言专项九----介词搭配、固定搭配/习惯表达

Travelbenefitsusbothphysicallyandpsychologically./wecanbenefitfrom/profitfromtravel……Foronething,ifwe

takeatriporalongjourney

on

ourholidaystosomescenicspotsorhistoricsites,wecanescapefromthenervoustensioncausedby

ourheavyworkingloadandmeantimewe

arelikelytotastefoodwithstronglocalflavor.

Aboveall,travelcanwidenourknowledgeandconsequentlybroadenourhorizons.Thefarther

wego,themore

wewilllearnabout

thepolitics,economy,customsaswellasgeographyofdifferentcountries.

Foranotherthing,ifweareluckyenough,wecanmaketheacquaintanceofnewfriendsandgainfriendship.备考P272

It’smyhonortohavethischancetoshowyouaround

theISLANDONTHELAKE.Firstwewillsetoutfortheislandbyferryboatat9:00am.Onarrivingat

theisland,wewillvisitthebotanicalgardens,whicharefullofavarietyof

colorfulplantsandthesiteofanoldtemplewithalonghistoryof

over600years.Wewillhavelunchintherestaurantontheislandat11:30andafterthatwewillmoveontovisitthebirdhouse,wheretherearearangeofvaluablebirds.Attheendofthetour,Iwillleadyoutothegiftshop,whereyouwillbeabletobuysomesouvenirstorememberthisspecialtrip.Pleasereturnat3:30pmbycablecar.备考P270Iamquitesatisfiedwiththetravelagency

onthewhole.Firstofall,thelocaltourguideJohnwasveryenthusiasticandconsideratetoalltourists,especiallyto

theold.Heexplainedeverythingabouttheplacesofinterest

inaclearandlivelyway,whichhelpedtobroadenourhorizons.However,thefoodprovidedintherestaurantdidn’tagreewithmanyofusandquiteafew

ofushadtobuyextrafood.

Inaddition,wewantedtobeledtotheshopswherewecouldbuygoodbargains,butwerenot./Isuggestthat

thetravelagency(should)

arrangeforustouriststogototheshopswherewecanbuygoodbargains.语言专项十----标点符号和是否适当使用衔接词语言专项十一----是否包括所有要点选择其中一篇错误较多的文章重写。语言专项十二----代词是否指代明确语言专项十三----内容和结构1、是否包括所有写作要点？2、文章所提供的例子或事实是否相关或合理？3、文章布局是否符合相关文体的要求？4、是否根据写作要点合理分段？5、前后文的逻辑是否矛盾？Topic7AboutHealthyLiving1.以不同的方式度过自己的时间2.经常锻炼3.呼吸新鲜空气4.对…有益5.对…有害6.精力充沛的7.感觉精神爽快感觉虚弱8.增强体质/肌肉9.改善健康状况10.身体好11.保持健康1.Spendone’stimeindifferentways2.Takeregularexercise;dosportsregularly3.Breatheinfreshair4.Begoodfor/beneficialto/ofbenefitto;dogoodto5.Bebadfor/harmfulto;doharmto6.Beenergetic/fullofenergy/fulloflife7.Feelrefreshed;feelweak8.Buildupone’sbody/muscles9.Improveone’shealth10.Beingoodhealth/shape/condition11.Keepfit/stayhealthy12.增/减肥超重的节食13.身心状况14.精神上不健康15.身心健康16.发烧17.….(部位)疼痛18.近视19.改掉不健康的饮食习惯20.形成做…的习惯21.吃过多垃圾食品12.Puton/gain/loseweightbeoverweightgo/beonadiet13.Physicalandmentalconditions14.Bementallyunhealthy15.Behealthyphysicallyandmentally/inthebodyandthemind16.Haveafever17.Haveapaininthe…18.near/short-sighted19.Getridof/getoutof/quit/break/kicktheunhealthyeatinghabits20.form/getinto/developthehabitofdoingsth21.Eattoomuchjunkfood22.保持均衡/多样的饮食23.保证/得到足够的睡眠24.从…中恢复25.缓解压力22.Keepabalanced/varieddiet23.ensure/getenoughsleep24.Recoverfrom25.Relievestress1.我们养成健康的饮食习惯是很重要的。

It’simportant/vital/essential/fundamentalforustoform/develophealthyeatinghabits.2.有好的饮食习惯，适当运动以及充足的睡眠是好的健康的关键。

Havinggoodeatinghabits,regularexerciseandenoughsleepisthekeytogoodhealth/agoodbody.3.正如汽车需要汽油才能跑，身体需要食物才能为我们工作。但重要的事情是我们吃什么：垃圾食品还是健康食品.

Asacarneedsgastorun,thebodyneedsfoodtoworkforus.Butwhatmatters/isimportantiswhatweeat,junkfoodorhealthyfood.4.(专家建议,)人们应当吃/摄入适当量的各种食物并有规律地进餐。

(Expertssuggestthat)peopleshouldhave/takeinproperamountofvariousfoodandhavemealsregularly.5.已经证明早起能使人们精力充沛。早起有助于保持健康。

It’sbeenprovedthatearlyrisingcanmakepeoplefullofenergy.Earlyrisinghelpstokeepfit.6.健康一旦失去，做任何事都没有意义。

Oncehealthislost,itisnousedoinganything.7.以我们的健康为代价去取得任何事情都是不明智的。

Itisunwisetoachieveanythingatthecostofourhealth.8.没有健康，金钱变得没有意义了。

Withouthealth,moneybecomesmeaningless.9.没有什么可以弥补健康的丧失。

Nothingcanmakeupfor/compensateforthelossofone’shealth10.正如一句英语谚语所说，“早睡早起能使人健康，富有及睿智。”

AsanEnglishsayinggoes,“Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthy,andwise.11.众所周知，花很多时间来看电视对我们的学习和健康又很多坏影响，尤其是对我们的眼睛。

Asweallknow,spendingalotoftimewatchingTVhasalotofbadeffectsonourstudyandhealth,especiallyonoureyes.12.不吃早餐，我们上课就无法集中精神。

Skippingbreakfast,wecan’tconcentrateinclass.最近的一项调查表明：大约25%的学生有不吃早餐的习惯。请根据下列内容写一篇题为“TopMealoftheDay”的短文。内容包括：1.调查结果及学生方面总的原因；2.女生方面的原因；3.来自家长方面的原因；4.不吃早饭的结果；5.你的建议最近的一项调查表明：大约25%的学生有不吃早餐的习惯。请根据下列内容写一篇题为“TopMealoftheDay”的短文。Phrasesandsentences:1.Studytoolatethenightbeforeandwanttosleeplongerinthemorning,sotheyskipbreakfast2.Stayslim3.Parentsaretoobusytotakecareofthechildrenandtheygivethemsomemoneytobuybreakfastthemselves4.Feelsleepyinclass;can’tconcentrate;don’tdo/performwellinexams;can’tscorehigh/wellinexams5.Isamust/essential/necessary/indispensableprovide30%oftheenergyneededforthedaythinkclearlyformahabitofeatingbreakfastSampleversion:TopMealoftheDay1.Asurveyshowthatabout25%ofstudentsdon’thaveahabitofhavingbreakfastmainlybecausetheystudytoolateatnightandthereforetheywanttosleeplongerwithoutbreakfastinthemorning.2.Forsomegirls,theyskipbreakfast

inthehopeofgettingslim/withthepurposeofgettingslim/in

ordertokeepslim.3.Ontheotherhand,someparentsaretoobusytolookaftertheirchildren,sotheyjustgivethemsomemoneyforbreakfast,whichmaythenbespentforotherpurposes.4.Whateverthereason,theresultsofamissingbreakfastarenotgood:thestudentsfeelsleepyinclassanddo/performworseinexams.5.Inmyview,studentshadbetterformagoodhabitofeatingbreakfasteverydaybecauseitprovides30%oftheenergyweneedthewholedayandhelpsustothinkbetter.肥胖以经成为危害人们健康的严重问题。中小学生的肥胖趋势更为明显。你们班对此展开讨论。根据不同观点，写一篇五句话作文。内容包括：1.肥胖危害的观点及应采取的措施—节食与锻炼；2.超重就得减肥的观点；3.另一方观点及其作用认识；4.你的建议Adiscussionwascarriedoutinourclass.______________________________________________________________________________________________Sampleversion:Adiscussionwascarriedoutinourclass.1.Fatnessisoneoftheseriousproblemswhichhaveabadeffectonourhealthandatpresentthesituationintheteenagersisevenworse.2.Somestudentsthinkobesitydoesharmtoourhealth,sayingitisnecessarytobeonadietandtakesuitableexercisetopreventit.3.Tothem,thosewhoareoverweightshouldtakemeasurestoloseweighttobehealthy.4.Butitisothers’opinionthatlosingweightwillbebad/harmfultotheteenagerswhoareinthecourse/stageofphysicaldevelopmentaswellastotheirstudies.5.AsIseeit,it’sbetterforustotakethingsastheycome/letthingsruntheirowncoursewhileit’sessential/necessarythatwedoexercise/sportsregularlytoprevent/avoidobesity.下图反映的是某校2004年与2007年学生健康状况调查的部分数据。请你用英文为某报写一份报告，反映该校3年间学生健康状况的变化情况，应包括以下内容：1.过去三年学生的健康状况变化的总体情况是怎样的？2.学生近视的情况发生什么变化？3.学生的体重变化是怎样的？4.学生的睡眠质量和精神状况的变化是怎样的？5.请提出你认为的相应改进措施。20072004Arecentsurveyshowsthatthehealthofthestudentsinourschoolhasbeengoingfrombadtoworseinthepastthreeyears.Thenumberofstudentswhoareshort-sightedincreasedfrom78.2%in2004to92.5%in2007.Overweightstudentsaregettingmorefrom36%to52.4%.Nearly10%morestudentsdon'thaveenoughsleepandover15%morestudentshavementalproblems.Tobehealthierphysicallyandmentally,studentsneedplentyofsleeptorefreshthemselves.Supplementaryarticle1:BreakfastBreakfastisthemostimportantmealinaday.Foronething,afteranight’ssleep,mostoftheenergystoredinthehumanbodyhasbeenconsumed.Breakfastservesthepurposeofrestoringenergy,thusmakingusenergeticagain.Foranother,inthecourseofaday,morningistheperiodoftimeinwhichweworkwithhighefficiency.Withoutbreakfast,theefficiencywouldbedecreased/reduced.Finally,theconstantlackofbreakfastcanleadtostomachtrouble.

Therefore,tokeepfit,wemusthavebreakfasteveryday.Itcanbeaglassofmilkwithsomebread,orabowlofporridgewithsomesteamedbread,oranythingelseofthesimilarkind.Anyway,wemusteatourfill,becauseagoodbreakfastcannotonlyensureourgoodhealthbutalsomakeagoodbeginningforanewday.Supplementaryarticle2:MilkisHelpfultoHealthMilkhaslongbeenanimportantfoodinpeople’sdailylife.Drinkingmilkisgoodforbuildingstrongbonesandteeth,whichisespeciallygoodforoldpeopleandteenagers.Drinkingmilkatbedtime/beforegoingtobed/beforebedwillhelpustohaveasoundsleep.Asaresultoflastyear’sincidentofpoisonedmilkpowder,nowadaysmanypeoplestilldon’tdaretodrinkit.Actually,thereisnoneedtoworrybecausevariousmeasureshavebeentakenbythegovernmenttomakesureofthequalityofthemilkproducts.Helpfulasmilkis,itisbelievedthattoomuchofitisunhealthy.Supplementaryarticle3:WealthandHealthWhichismoreimportant,wealthorhealth?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeoplepreferwealth,holdingthatmoneycannotbringeverything,butwithoutitonecandonothing.Inordertoaccumulatemoremoneytheycandoanything.However,otherpeopleregardhealthasmoreimportant.Oncehealthislost,itisnousehavingalotofmoney.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Ilovewealth,butIvaluehealthmore.Everybodywantstoliveahappylife.Sotheytrytheirbesttoearnmoneywhichtheythinkcanensurethemcomfortablelife.Butifhappinessandcomfortareachievedatthecostoftheirhealth,howcantheybehappy?Withouthealthmoneybecomesmeaningless.Noonewouldagreethatawealthypersonwithoutgoodhealthwillbehappy.Therefore,justdoourbestandkeepfit.HealthandLife(Supplementaryarticle4)

Asthesayinggoes,youdon’tknowwhathappinessisuntilyouloseit;youdon’tknowwhathealthisuntilyouareill.“Healthisofvitalimportancetolife”soundslikeacliché(陈词滥调)toeveryone,butitisabsolutelytrue.

Theneglect(忽略)ofthedelicate(细微的)balanceofyourbodyandsoul,theharmfulhabitssuchassmoking,excessivedrinkingandburningmid-nightoilwillcatchupwith(给你带来麻烦)yousomeday.Howmanybigplansareinterruptedbybadhealth!Evenanormallifeisimpossiblewithouttheguaranteeofhealth.Howtokeepfitisaneternaltopicofdiversityandcontroversy(有不同意见和争议).Regardlessofallthedifferentsuggestionspouredfromallkindsofsources,oneshoulddoatleasttwothingsforhim/herself.First,holdanactiveandoptimisticattitudetowardlifeandmaintainmentalwell-being(