英语周记写作

WritingaDiaryRevision如何写英文日记日记是用来叙述一天生活中发生的最有趣或感受最深的一些事情。写英文日记要注意格式、时态和和人称的正确使用。英文日记的格式为：日期(Date),星期(Day)天气(Weather)正文(Body)：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[写作指导]1.通常是在左上角写出当天的日期和星期，在靠右的部分写上当天的天气情况。正文可有标题，也可不要。要注意正确书写月份和星期的名称；天气多用形容词表示。首字母通常要大写。Days:Monday星期一Tuesday星期二Wednesday星期三Thursday星期四Friday星期五Saturday星期六Sunday星期日Months:1月----January(Jan.)2月----February(Feb.)3月----March(Mar.)4月----April(Apr.)5月----May6月----June(Jun.)7月----July(Jul.)8月----August(Aug.)9月----September(Sep.)10月----October(Oct.)11月----November(Nov.)12月----December(Dec.)晴---Fine;Sunny;Shining；雨---Rainy;Raining;雪---Snowy阴---Overcast雾---foggy多风---Windy多云---Cloudy暴风雨---Stormy;Thundering阵雨---Shower

Weather:2.正文：日记一般用过去时态。使用第一人称。

经过：按事情发生的先后顺序来记述。所以常用atfirst,then,lateron,soon,atlast等单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯。

结尾：发表自己的感想或评论，可根据具体情况使用过去时态、现在时态或将来时态。常用的单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯：Beginningoftheevent:first,firstly,inthebeginning…Courseoftheevent:then,lateron,after,meanwhile,atthesametime,what'smore,moreover…Ending:atlast,intheend,finally,inshort,inaword,asaresult…10月20日星期天，你和同学们到红星农场旅游。根据下面的图表用英语写一篇日记。6：30：起床、乘车出发去红星农场、一路欣赏风景、唱歌8：30：到达农场、受到欢迎，参观、植树、了解自然13：00：野炊、乘车回家有点累，但是很开心要求：用first、next、then和finally等连词使日记连贯,可适当加一些感受。writing[写作过程]1.审题确定格式、体裁、时态、人称等写作要点。2.列出提纲，确定开头句、扩展句和总结句，选择好适宜的句型。3.利用一些关联词或者过渡句把句子有机地连接起来，必要时可适当增加细节。4.仔细检查，适当修改，保证句子结构完整，要点齐全，人称时态主谓一致。5.认真誊写，卷面整洁。Step1:Form_____________________正文________________________________________________________________________________________October,20th.SundaySunny时态：____________人称：____________体裁：____________一般过去时第一人称记叙文Step2:Writedownthenecessarysimplesentenceswithyourpartners.

Somenecessarywordsandphrases:setoff/haveagoodtime/enjoythescenerygivesb.awarmwelcomeshowsb.aroundgetclosetonature/beonthewaybackDiscusstogetherTodaymyclassmatesandIwenttoHongxinFarmfortravel.Igotupat6:30Wesetoffbybus.Wehadagoodtimesingingandenjoyingthebeautifulsceneryoutsidethewindow.Wearrivedatthegateofthefarm.Thefarmerswaitedtogiveusawarmwelcome.Wewereshownaroundthebigfarm.Webegantoplanttrees.Itwasreallyagoodwaytogetclosetonatureandprotecttheenvironment.Ihadadeliciouspicnicwithmyclassmates.Wewereonthewayback.Althoughwewereallverytired,ourtravelwasreallyunforgettable.Step3:connectthesentenceswithconjunctionwordsandmakethearticlebetterwithyourpartnerOct.l0st,Sunday,

sunnyTodayIaswellasmyclassmateswenttoHongxinFarmfortravel.First,Igotupat6:30andwesetoffbybus.Onthebus,

wehadagoodtimesingingandenjoyingthebeautifulsceneryoutsidethewindow.Thentwohourslater,wearrivedatthegateofthefarm,wherethefarmerswerewaitingtogiveusawarmwelcome.

After

wewereshownaroundthebigfarm,webegantoplanttrees,which

wasreallyagoodwaytogetclosetonatureandprotecttheenvironmentatthesametime.Next,wehadapicnicanditwasgreatfuntoeatintheopenair.Thetimewentveryfast.

Finally,Itwastimeforustogoback.Althoughwewereallverytired,ourtravelwasreallyunforgettable..行文要连贯流畅语句要严谨、准确表达要简明、清楚句型结构要有变化语言使用适当得体牢记书面表达概要总结常用句型：外出活动、欣赏美景Wewentoutforapicnicwithmyfriendsyesterday.Earlyinthemorning,wesetoffforthefarmforavisit.Ontheway,wehadagoodtimesingingandbeautifulscenery.Weenjoyingthewereshownaroundthefarm,wherewesawmanybeautifulplants.Themomentwegottothetopofthehill,wewereattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Itwastimeforustogobackwhenthesunstartedtogodown.事故发生Unfortunatelyanaccidenthappenedtohim=Unfortunatelyhehadanaccident.IwaswalkingwhenImetwithanoldfriendofmine.HewassofrightenedthatIcoulddonothingFeelings:Althoughweweretired,wefeltveryhappy.Weenjoyedourselves.=Wehadfun.=Wehadagoodtime.Onthewayback,wewerelaughingandtalkingallthetime.Whatawonderfulweekendwehad!ThoughIwaslateforschool,I’mproudofwhatIdid.Itwananunforgettableexperienceforme.[常用过渡语]“启”first,firstofall,firstly,inthebeginning,generallyspeaking,now,recently“承”second,secondly,also,then,meanwhile,still,atthesametime,what'smore,moreover,afterawhile,afterafewdays,forexample,infact,inotherwords,indeed,ofcourse“转”anyway,afterall,but,nevertheless