九年级英语书面表达专项训练

书面表达专项训练

永堌中学陈万伟

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AstudentfromTsingUniversitysaid,"KeepingadiaryinEnglishforthreeyearsintheseniorschoolimprovedmyEnglishgreatlyandmademydreamcometrue.Atfirst,Ioftenmadealotofmistakesinwords,grammarandtense,butIsticktoit."

That’stosay,practicemakesperfect.第一部分Healthylife

Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

一天一苹果，医生远离我。Earlytobedandearlytorise,makesamanhealthy,wealthy（富有）

andwise。

早睡早起，人会健康、富有、聪明。AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.

只学习不玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻.

Proverbs（聪明）.Bob'sdailylifehealthandfitness（健康）1watchyourdiet2takeexercise3relaxyourselfTopicWordmapwatchyourdiethealthyfood

healthydrink

fruit

melonsapples…beefmeat

…chickentomatoesvegetables

carrots…water

milkjuice

unhealthyfood

hamburgerscandy…

unhealthydrink

Coke

coffee

Keepabalanceddiet…

…

Wordmapwatchyourdiethealthyfood

healthydrinkunhealthyfood

unhealthydrink

Keepingabalanceddietisimportant.junkfoodputonweight（增加体重）healthandfitness1.watchyourdietbuildwordmap2.takeexercise

takeexercisegoskateboardinggoskatingplaybaseballplaybasketballplayvolleyballplaytennisplaysoccerruntakeawalkswimgohikingfitnessclub/centre(健身俱乐部）healthandfitness1.watchyourdietbuildwordmap2.takeexercise3.relaxyourselfrelaxyourselflistentomusicplaycomputergamesdosomesportsgeteighthours’sleep(getenoughsleep)talktoothersIfyouareworriedaboutsomething,talktoyourparentsoryourteacher.Youcanrelaxyourselfbylisteningtosomemusic.healthandfitness1.watchyourdietbuildwordmap2.takeexercise3.relaxyourselfCanyouremember?动动手吧：请在笔记本上记下相关话题在课本上的出处！Groupwork以小组为单位，在课本中找出与话题有关的句子（或者自己总结），并每组推选一位代表总结汇报。关于watchyourdiet

的功能句:

关于takeplentyofexercise

的功能句:

关于relaxyourself

的功能句:

healthandfitness1.watchyourdietbuildwordmap2.takeexercise3.relaxRewiewKeysentencesabout“watchyourdiet”

1.Mymotherwantsmetodrinkmilkeveryday.Shesaysitisgoodformyhealth.2.Myeatinghabitsareprettygood.3.Alotofvegetableshelpyoutokeepingoodhealth.4.Youmusttrytoeatlessmeat.5.TraditionalChinesedoctorsbelieveweneedabalanceofyinandyangtobehealthy.6.It’seasytohaveahealthylifestyle,andit’simportanttoeatabalanceddiet.Keysentencesabout“watchyourdiet”

1.Ilovetoeatfoodthatishealthy.Iwanttotakecareofmyhealth,soIeatmainlyfruitandvegetables.AndIstayawayfromsugar.2.Ithinkmostpeopleareinagreementthatfruitandvegetablesaregoodforhealth.3.I’veheardeatingburntfoodcanincreasetheriskofcancer.(Book9)Keysentencesabout“takeplentyofexercise”1.You’llneedtotakealotofexercise—gorunningordosomesportsatleastthreetimesaweek.2.Alotofexercisehelpyoutokeepingoodhealth.3.Youcantakepartinafter-schoolclubs.Activitiesincludesports,musicclasses.4.Iamprettyhealthy.Iexerciseeveryday,usuallywhenIcomehomefromschool.5.Momletmegetupatsixandplayping-pongwithher.(Book8)KeysentencesaboutrelaxyourselfIfyoudon’tgetenoughsleepatnight,you’llhavelessenergy（活力，精力）

thenextday.It’simportanttogetenoughsleep.Youcanrelaxyourselfbyplayingcomputergames,butyoucan’tplaytoolong.(Book8上)1.watchyourdiet2.takeexercise3.relaxyourselfWritingThewaytostayhealthyhavemorehealthyfoodanddrinkhavelessunhealthyfoodanddrinkplaybasketballtakeawalkrunswim…getenoughsleeplistentomusicwatchTV…dosomesportstalktoothersThinkingHowtowritealettertoJackandgivehimsomeadvicetokeephealthy?watchyourdiethavemorehealthyfoodanddrinkhavelessunhealthyfoodanddrinkWritingThewaytostayhealthyPayattentiontothediet./Keepingabalanceddietisimportant.youshouldhavemorehealthyfoodanddrink,likefruits、vegetablesandmilk.Asaproverbsays,“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway,”sofruitisgoodforhealth.Besides,don’teattoomuchjunkfood,suchaspotatochipsandbiscuits,becausetheycanputonyourweight.Meanwhile,someburntfoodcanincreasetheriskofcancer,pleasestayawayfromit.

(注意：关联词，句式，格言/谚语…）Step1:主题句Step2:对主题句进一步举例说明,阐述理由书面表达中可能会用到的关联词Firstofall,…secondly,…next,…then,…finally/atlastInfact,However,Inaword（总而言之）suchas/forexampleWhat’smoreTherefore（因此）takeexerciseplaybasketballtakeawalkrunswim…relaxyourselfgetenoughsleeplistentomusicwatchTV…dosomesportsGroupworkThewaytostayhealthy每小组选择一个话题组成一篇小短文。注意主题句，适当的连接词，句式，格言等。(尽量使用本节课所复习的短语和句子）比一比Youneedtotakealotofexercise.

Forexample,youcangorunningordosomesportsthreeorfourtimesaweek.Youcanalsotakeawalkaftersuppereveryday.Doingmoreexercisecanbuildup(增强）ourbodiesandhelpyoutokeepingoodhealth.ShowTimetakeexerciseChoosingproperwaystorelaxisnecessary.

Inmyopinion,Ithinkdoingsomesportsisaproperwaybecauseitcanrestourbrainsandeyes.What’smore,itcanhelpimproveourhealth.Therefore,IoftenplayPingPongafterclass.Besides,It’simportanttogetenoughsleepeverynight.Ifyoudon’tgetenoughsleepatnight,you’llhavelessenergythenextday.relax

Keepingabalanceddietisimportant.youshould…Asaproverbsays,…so…Besides,…Meanwhile…Youneedtotakealotofexercise.Forexample,…Choosingproperwaystorelaxisnecessary.

Inmyopinion,Ithink....Therefore,….Besides,It’simportantto....Ifyoudon’t…

Thewaytostayhealthythebeginningtheendcomposition:引出话题总结观点，表达祝愿或期望一、如何写出优美的文章1．选准词语。①语言是交流的工具。要使用通用的、合乎习惯的词语，切忌使用生硬的词汇。②选词要达意，英语有许多同义但用法不同的词汇或短语，切忌混淆用法。③用词要简明扼要，在不确定的情况下，宁可用常用词简单明了地表达信息。2．写好句子。①运用所学词汇、短语，结合一定的语法知识，按照句子结构特点，直接用英语写出相应句子。Summary②运用固定句式表达信息；把比较复杂的句子分成两个或两个以上的句子，减少写错句的几率。③把两个简单句用一个复合句或较复杂的简单句表达出来，这样可提高文章的可读性，但在没有把握的情况下慎用。④遇见生词或不熟悉的表达时，可以在保持原意的基础上，用不同的表达方式写出来。3．设计段落。一个完整的段落要有主题句、拓展句及结尾句。正确运用连接词使语言衔接自然、行文流畅。4．书写规范、卷面整洁。二、如何提升写作1．熟悉五种基本句式及一些使用频率较高的句式。2．收集优秀范文并大声朗读来扩展思路及培养语感。3．坚持常规练习。即：词——词组——句子——段落——篇章。切记：简单句是主菜，要做到运用自如；复杂句是佐料，有之增色，缺之乏味，但不可舍本逐末，以免弄巧成拙。4．仔细审题，要点齐全，人称及时态运用正确。九年级（全）Units13-14保护环境第二部分高频话题写作指导Practicehazegasrubbish从全国近5年“环境保护”相关话题书面表达的命题来看，通常会从记叙你参加过的一次环保活动、保护环境的重要性、保护环境的措施或建议和号召大家一起行动保护环境四个方面进行设题。分析近3年60套真题可知，很多话题的书面表达是以保护环境为主，下面以（2014广安）为例：写作导图ProtectEnvironmentStepsPlaceDon’tthrowrubbishObeytherulesPickuptherubbishGuang’an—LotsofChineseandforeigntouristscomeheretovisitSweepthegroundFeelingsTravelecologicallyandpolitely亮点句型速成（从九英Unit13中寻找）常用句型：Everyoneshouldprotecttheenvironment.Andtheworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.推荐句型：→Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment，theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.常用句型：Weshouldplantmanytrees，andwecanlivebetterandhealthier.推荐句型：→①Wearesupposedtoplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmuchhealthierinthefuture.→②Ifweplantmoreandmoretrees，wewilllivebetterandmuchhealthierinthefuture.开头句：1.LotsofChineseandforeigntouristscomeheretovisit.2.It’severyone’sdutytoloveandprotecttheenvironment.3.Toimprovetheenvironmentmeanstoimproveourlife.正文句：1.Asavolunteer，I’dliketotellyousomeconsiderationsaboutvisitingGuang’an.4.Theenvironmentisbecomingworseandworseandwemustdosomethingtopreventpeoplefrompollutingtheenvironment.2.Becausetreesareveryhelpfulandimportantforus，wearesupposedtoplantmoreflowersandtrees.3.Wemustpickupsomerubbishandthrowitintoadustbin.4.Notonlydoesitaffectourlivesandhealth，italsohasagreataffectioninthefuture.5.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.6.Wheneverweseelitterontheground，weshouldpickitupandthrowitintodustbins.7.Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletodrinkislessandless.8.SoIhopeallthestudentsinourclassstopusingtheplasticbags,anduseourownclothbags.9.People’shealthhasbeengreatlyaffectedbyair，noiseandwaterpollution.结尾句：1.Ifweremembertheserules，wewilltravelecologicallyandpolitely.2.Lowercarbon，happierlife.Let’stakeactions.3.Ibelieveourlifewillbecomebetterandbetterifwecandothesethings.4.Ifeveryonemakescontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.写作模板On具体的时间

morning，人物

andIdecidedtodosomethingto目的.First，we具体的行为

andthenwe具体的活动

andadvisedothersnotto建议别人不要做一些破坏环境的事情.Wefeelalittle作者的感受

buthappybecause作者为自己所做的事情感到自豪.Everyoneshould做贡献

toprotectingourenvironment.典例剖析随着近几年的快速发展，广安变得越来越美丽，大批的中外游客前来观光旅游。假设你是广安某旅游景点的一名志愿者，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，倡导游客文明旅游，生态旅游。内容提示：1.保护环境，不乱扔垃圾；

2.遵守规章制度；

3.积极主动帮助他人；

4.尽可能用英语和外宾交流。参考词汇：throwrubbish(扔垃圾) communicate

with(与……交流)要求：1.短文应包括所给要点，适当发挥；2.词数：80词左右；文章的开头已给出，不 计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关 信息。Mydearfriends,WelcometoGuang’an，DengXiaoping’shometown.Withthedevelopmentinrecentyears,_____________________________________细读所给文字提示，提取信息：1.本文要求以一名本市景点志愿者的身份写一篇倡导书，号召游客文明旅游，生态旅游。体裁为应用文；时态为一般现在时；人称为第一人称。2.根据内容提示，文章首先要引出话题:一些游客旅游时的注意事项;然后依次写出文明旅游的具体行为;最后呼吁大家文明旅游，生态旅游。【审题指导】【高分范文】Mydearfriends，

WelcometoGuang’an，DengXiaoping’shometown.Withthedevelopmentinrecentyears，Guang’anismorea