口语技巧预测art2补充课件

WHATTOSAY(五官法/八词/人物性格表/心情三段式)；SimonP2同样可以用于P1n （wordsandKeeptalkingatlengthwithstrongUsearangeofconnectivesanddiscoursemarkers wordformation 1intonation(flattoneandfastandStrongandweakLimitedrangeofNo 1wordClassonecheck反素材：4W 表格解释或者议论Asea whenwwherewhat你去过的一个城市costalcityAcityyouhavebeentobeforeAnenjoyableexperiencewhenyouwereachild一个远途的开车旅行wherewhenhowlong addspicetoA(long)carjourneyyouwenton(Apublicparkorgarden（自然地点类题目最直接解决的题目SomethingoractivityyoudotostayhealthyAplacewhereyoucanlistentomusic(white-sandmusicAdreamhouseorapartmentyouwanttoliveinAleisurefacilityyouwouldliketohaveinyourhometown（直接准备公园，烧烤野餐公园或者游泳馆咖啡厅）forestpark;Aninterestingplacethatonlyfewpeoplemulti-sensoryfeeling;Ilikethisplacefrommulti-sensoryThisplaceisrecommendableforsomeIfeelthat…Icanrefreshmymindbygettingclosetonature;Inadditiontothat/additionally/plus/besides,itisalsomyunderstanding/beliefthat…/Iamalsoconvincedthat…itisidealfor…;otherwise,Iwouldstayathomealldaylong;wewilldo…fromtimetotimeatsuchaplace,sothatmyfriendsandIcanspendfunmomentstogether,toescapefromstressfullife;Oh,onemoretoadd/mention/theotherpointIstillwanttoadd/coveristhatGenerally,that’swhyitisworthsharing; healingtripawesometerrific太棒了；likecloud,flowers,stunningoceanview,seagulls,主观：theviewthereisratherpicturesqueandIfeelThispark/gardenisleafy/lush/exuberant郁郁葱葱的,whichispackedwith/fullofnaturalelements,trees,flowers,plants,whichistotallydifferentfromcityScenic,likewave,beach,coconuttrees,palmtree,crystalblueIdyllic田园风光的;Picturesque风景如画的；Simon’scode;Seasideresort’sAnditofferedmechancestogetescapefromcity’shustleandbustle/getawayfromconcretejunglesincity;Takeatime-out/breakfromcity’shustleandbustleIcanhaveanexposuretoItislikeanoasisinthemiddleofconcretejungles;IsidealforPark:peaceful/tranquil/serene Icanhearnothingbutnaturalsounds,likebird’schirpingorwind’swhistlingWhenIfeelxxx,I’dliketoxxx,anditallowsmetodoxxx;refreshing,Iconsiderthat/reckon/viewthatplacetobeaxxx,Especiallyduringthattime,Ifeltsostressfulandanxious,itofferedmeachancetorefreshmymind.I’dliketoItallowsmetohaveapeaceofmindbybumming/gettingaround,whichismeaningfulwhenIfeelfidgety浮躁/Ican’tsitstill/grumpy臭脾气/anxious焦虑;harvestapeacefulmindset心态;ThattripisTravelingPark:itoffersmeachancetobreathefreshair,soIcangetawayfromairFragranceofflowers,whichisCleansemylung;thatplaceislikeanoxygenbar;Weusedtotakefreshairforgranted,butnowfreshairisa rewardingoutandstretchout;doingthings SothatIcanavoidliving/leading ithelpsusworkout/buildourbody;Thisplaceisidealforoutdooractivities,bodymovement/aerobics/cardio有氧运动/stretchoutmybody;Weareusedtostuckathome;stepoutandstretchout;Grassland:ridingahorse,flyingkite,feedinggoats,havingbarbeque,watchingtheskyfullofstars;skating,linedancing,playingfrisbee,speedwalking;Swimming&gym:swimming,Burncalories;hulahoop;flyingaOtherwise,wewillbestuckathomeandbecomeobese长肉的，whichisnotgoodforourhealth;Wecanavoidbeingstuckathome/beinghomebodyallday itisanidealplacetohavea roastwholelambAsabigfanofseafood/foodie吃货IcanspoilmyselfsinceitisratherfreshandcheapdelishMytastebudcanbesatisfied original/authentic正宗的；Whileweenjoydelicaciesonthelawn,wecanstillSpendFunmomentwithfriendstotakeabreak/timeoutfromstressfullife/toescapefromcity’shustlenbustle;Asfoodie吃货SowecanboostbondswitheachWhilewesavorthedelicacies,canchitchatwith人的因素Persontoperson:thisparkoffersmeachance/providesmewithachancetoboostbonds/expandmysocialcircle. withmyfriends/parents,forexample,we’dliketosharewhathappenedinthedaytime,whichcanbesoItisourfamily’stradition/routinetotakeawalkinthisgardenforawhileafterdinner,toexchangeideasorsharewhathappenedinthedaytime.Boostbondswith… IcandoItoffersmeachanceto…;providesmewitha….toItallowsmetodo…/ithelpsmedo…Bydoing,Iamableto…makemystressandanxietygokeeptalkingfor1-2mins，就是一个好答案；我们首先利用以上ADescribealeisureactivitynearWhereisWhomdidyouspendtimewith?Whatdidyoudo?Therebe+listingWhydoyoulikeit? takenotes;1-2 Don’thavetoanswerallquestions/byorders;tohelpyouorganizeyouranswers;Stayonthetopic,itisok!!!!每个题目讲到4-5句话即可；How aslongasIaminthemoodforsteppingoutandworkingout,itismyfirstWhatdopeopledo?/whatcanyouseeinthisplace?Therepicnickinginaseasideresortwithfamilymembersduringspring时态-eddidwas -s-2-3Memorableandwhile我和家人在一个海边的度假胜地一起度过春节；TheseasideactivityI’dliketosharewithyouhappenedoneyearago,whileIwasspendingspringfestivalwithmyxxxxinacoastalresort,whichislocatedinatownnamedxxx.Well,theseasidetripI’dliketodescriberoughlyhappenedseveralmonthsago,whileItookanexcursiontriptoabeachtownwithmyfriends,wherewetriedavarietyofactivities.当我在哪的时候，我们做了很多事情，比如说xxxyears’ago;afterthat,wewererecommendedtoexplore/visitafarmthatwasalongthecoastline,wherewerodeonhorsesandfedthesheep;mostofall,itwasthrilling/excitingforustogoonacyclingtripforacoupleofhours.IlovethisexcursionforsomexxxxToillustrate/tobemorespecific,theplacewewenttoisfullofnaturalelements,likexxxx,sowecanhaveachancetohaveanexposurewithnatureandescapefromcity’shustleandbustle.giventhat/consideringthatbackthen,IwasBesides/plus/additionally/inadditiontothat/apartfromthat,giventhat/consideringthatIwasprettyanxiousandfidgetyaboutmyfuturepathbackthen,Iwasn’tinthemoodfordoinganything;butthatplaceblewmymind;(mind-blowing),sinceIcanhearnothingbutnaturalsounds,likexxx,soIharvestedapeacefulmindset.更重要的是，我们能够做一些户外远动，否则就只能卡在家里面长肉；whileweenjoyedthestunningsea-view美丽的海景，我和朋友聊天和喝酒唱歌，彼此促进情感ThistripisworthsinceIhadbeenlivingastressfullifebackthenItalwaysfeelsawesomeforustoescapefromcity’shustleandbustleandhaveanexposuretonature.Itisworthtryingtofeedfarmpetsandcyclealongthepathinwoods;thescenerywassopicturesquewhenitcomestoendlessviewsandcolorfulsunsets.That’swhythistripisWheredidyougoWhendidyougothereWhatdidyoudoWhydoyouwanttotalkabout这个地方是三亚：well,theexperienceI’dliketosharewithyouroughlyhappenedoneweekago,whileItookatriptoacoastalcitynamedxxxwithmyfamilymembers,whichislocatedinthesoutheastofChina.Whilewewerethere,wedidarangeofactivities,includingcitytouring/sightseeing,swimming,barbeque,snorkeling浮潜/scubadiving深潜andshopping.Thatcityishighlyrecommendedforsome首先是美景：Forexample,theviewthereissoscenic,sincethecityisfullofviewsandnaturalelementslikeblueskycotton-likecloud,white-sandbeach,lushforestandcrystal-blueocean.Itofferedusgreatchancetoescapefromcity’shustleandbustle.triedactivities,likesurfing,swimmingandevensnorkelingwithaschooloffishesandturtles.toenjoyseafoodthatwasreallydelish,freshandcheap.That'swhythatcityleftmealasting补充素材：adreamhouseorWhereisitwhichissupposedtobelocatedonawhitesandbeach/nearforest.Whomdoyouwanttolivewith;thereisnodoubtthatIprefertolivewithxxx.Whatwillitlooklike;basically,itshouldbeamodernhousewitharangeoffacilitiesandayard,likexxxswimmingpoolplaygroundseesaw跷跷板，swing秋千，slide滑梯andasmallgardenoraveggiegarden.Insideofit,Iamfondofglass-wrappeddesign,soIcanhaveastunningviewfromallrooms,besidesbedroom,itismydreamtohaveotherrooms,likegym,cloakroom,study,sunroom,playroom;ahometheatre.WhyisthisyourdreamplaceBeachresortvilla,-es Besurroundedbyxxx,Thisplaceislikeahavenforourfamily,whichiscomfy/cozy/homey,itoffersusall-in-onelifeexperience,sincefacilitiesarereallyinclusive.Withoutsteppingoutside,wecouldleadconvenientandabundantlife.WhataharmoniousWell,thedreamhouseI’dliketosharewithyouisabeachhouse,whichissupposedtobelocatedinaseasidecity.Basically,itisavillawithacourtyardwherewecanplantveggiesandplayground;apartfrombedroom,sunroomandlivingroom,itshouldalsohaveotherfacilities,likehometheatre,gym,andswimmingpool.Firstly,itswindowviewispicturesque,forexample,everymorningwhenIopenmywindow,Icanseenaturalelementsofallkinds,includingbluesky,crystalblueocean,whitecloudsandwhitesandbeach,thenIwillfeelsocheerfulandrefreshed.Besides,Iwanttohaveaspacey/spacioushousewherewehaveplentyofroomdoingactivitieslikeplayinggames,doingsportsandswimming,otherthanbeingstuckathomealldaylongifweliveincity.Ontopofthat,givenitspeacefulambiance,inthemorning,Icanhearnothingbutnaturalsounds,likebird’schirpingandwind’swhistling,sothatIwillhaveapeacefulmindseteveryday.Ican’twaittoseethatdayAerialcablecar空中缆车；safari狩猎旅行；breed繁殖；epitomize=summarized;wildlifeconservationandbreedingbases动物保护区和繁殖基地。FreerangeThisparkfeaturesahugecollectionofroamingwildlifewhichcanbeobservedinthecomfortself-drivenvehicles.可以在舒适的无人驾驶车辆里近距离观察各种走地动物。Itisanintegratedparkforconservation,research,educationandtourism包括了保护，研究，教Well,theexperienceI’dliketosharewithyouroughlyhappenedmanyyearsagoinmyprimaryschool,whilemyparentstookmetoawildlifeparknamedChanglonginGuangdongprovince,whichisclaimedasthelargestsafarithemeparkintheworld.Whilewewerethere,wedidavarietyofengagingthings,likeridinginaerialcablecar,havingasafarionwheelsfeedingcubsandwalkingintherainforestThattripwasreallyfunandleftmealastingimpression.Forexample,changlongwildlifeparkisthehometomorethan500rareanimalsincludingworld’stoptenrarestanimals,likepandasfromChina,koalasfromAustralia,meerkatsfromsouthAfricaandelephantsfromThailand.Morethanthat,wewereallowedtointeractwiththemandevenfeedtheirchildren,whichwasreallyanonce-in-a-life-timeopportunity.此外我们可以在safariBesidesIcanalsorememberoursafarionwheelsintotherainforestwhilewecouldobservethosefierceanimalsupfrontinaself-drivenvehicleliketigerlionandbearactuallyafterthattrip,Irealizedthatthoseanimalsdeservedprotectionandwildenvironment,otherwisetheywouldbe最后我们还参加了sciencestationanimalclass,更多地了解了他们的习性，也让我开始对Attheendofthetrip,wealsohadchancesofwalkingintoanimals’worldtolearnabouttheirnature,habitanduncovertheirsecrets;anyway,IfeltIbecameinterestedinanimalsandenvironmentalprotectionsincethen.Justlikeasayinggoes,readingathousandbooksisnotasgoodastravelingathousandmiles.That’swhythetripisreallyworthtomusicWhereitWhendiditWhatkindsofmusicitWhydoyouwanttotalkaboutWell,theexperienceI’dliketosharewithyouroughlyhappenedthreeweeksago,whileIattendedabeachmusicfestivalwithmybestfriends.在一个叫做coconutBasically,themusicfestivalwasheldinagorgeouscoastalcitynamedcoconutisland,whereisfamousforexoticnaturalviewandwhitesandbeach.Giventhemainthemeofthefestivalisdigitalmusic,theyplayedmusicofallkinds,liketechnoandpopmusic;theyinvitedservalbandstocomeoverforliveperformances,andoneofthemwasreallymyfavorite.Thatfestivalleftmealastingbeersandchatwitheachother,itofferedusagreatgatewaytoimmerseintocoolbeatsandlivelyBesides,thewhite-sandbeachandcrystalblueoceanprovidedterrificbackgroundforsuchanevent,weregardeditasawayofhavinganexposuretonatureandescapefromcity’shustleandSothatwhyitattractedmanytoDescribeaplaceyouknowwherepeoplegotolistentomusicWell,thevenueI’dliketosharewithyouisnamedrooftop,whichislocatedindowntownofmyBasicallyspeaking,rooftopisfamousforitsmusicoftechnoandvibrant/lively/dynamicambiance/vibe,itattractspeopleofallkindsfromdifferentplaces,andwhenDJstartsscratching,thepoolinthemiddlewillbepackedwithnoobsandpro-dancers.ItisquitepopularforsomeThebiggestreasonisthatthisbarhasanamazingviewoftheskyline,especiallyatnight;whilepeopleenjoythefoodanddrinks,theycandancealongwithDJ’scoolbeats,whichcanbereallyrelaxingandamusing.Besides,rooftopisabrilliantlysocialplace,sinceunlikeotherbars,thetableshavemorebetween,sotheoverallnoiseismaintainedtoanicesocialbuzz.ItisperfectforsocializingwithSothat’swhythisplaceissuchagetawayforlisteningtomusicandtakingatime-outfromcity’shustleandbustle.NewgreatinventionsinChina,cashlesspayment;sharedbike,high-speedtrain,onlineshopping;Somethingyoutaughtothers whomwhenhowwhy场景B支付宝 abig一个伟大的发明agreatinventionAbusinessmanI场景B支付宝Describeawebsite/greatinvention/bigVirtualcreditcard;financialplanning;bookahotelroom,buyair/trainticketWhat/howoften/what/whyWell,thewebsiteI’dliketodescribe/sharewithyou/talkaboutisnamedAlipay,whichisthebiggestfinancialplanningwebsiteinChina./WhichisregardedasthebigfournewinventionsinChina.Basically,Iwillbrowsethiswebsiteorusetheirapponadaily/regularbasis,sinceitisinclusiveandpracticalinmanyaspects,Icandomanythingslikexxx,bookingaflight,planningmytrip,shoppingonline,andevengettingaloanfromthem.Managingmywealth;GSTgoodsandservicestax;多快好省；Iamabletofindproductsandserviceswiththebestppratio;pricetoperformanceratio性价比;theyguaranteetobeatanypricewhilethequalityisassuring令人放心的;qualitycanbeguaranteed,sinceIcangetarefundifIamnotsatisfied.Researchresearch;transfertransferdeliveryisspeedy,sincemypackagecanarrivewithin2-3days/overnight;beByusingtheirwealthmanagementtools,Iamabletohavepersonalsavingstobuysomemonetaryfunds货币基金；sothatIcanearnmoneyofthreemealsinaday; putmypocketmoneyintotheirsavingaccount,myawarenessofinvestmentcanberaised;Morethanthat,itsavestroubleofcarryingwalletaroundandavoidsreceivingfakenotes.Fromtimetotime,wecangetdiscountorcoupon/vouchertosavemoney;Wecantakeadvantageoftheirfreeservices,forexample,thereisnofeefortransferringmoneyorgettinganinterest-freeloan; carefree无忧无虑的;smokingfreearea;alcoholfreexxx;Well,thewebsiteI’dliketosharewithyouisnamedAlipaybyabigcompanycalledAlibaba,whichisveryhelpfulwithregardstofinancialplanninganddailylifeissues.Regardingtothefrequency,actually,Iuseitonadailybasis,sinceavarietyofmyneedscanbedealtwith,includingtoppingup,payingbills,transferringfunds,investmentandsoforth.IguessthereasonsaremultipleformetorecommendInthefirstplace,bymakingacomparisonamongdifferentproducts,Icanalwaysfindtheproductswiththebestpricetoperformanceratio,whichcanbemoney-saving.Plus,byusingtheirfinancialplanningservice,Iamabletomakeextramoneybyinvestingontheirfinancialproducts,whichisawaytoearnmoneyfordailymeals.Moreimportantly,theywillprovidemewithfreeservices,liketransferringmoneyforfreeorapplyingforshort-termpersonalloanwithlowinterests.That’swhyitisAnoccasionyouhelpedothers/taughtothersWhenwhomwhatwhytransferfundelectronicallyWell，theexperienceI’dliketosharewithyouroughlyhappenedoneyearago,whileIwasteachingmyparentsabouthowtoshoponlineandtransferfundonAlipay.whichwasverytroublesome,app去做很多的事Fromthebeginning,Irealizedthatmyparentsneededtogotobanktosendmemoneyorstandinalinetobuytraintickets,whichwasgreatlylabor/time-consumingandtroublesome,so,Idecidedtoinstruct/teachthem/givethemalessonabouthowtodealwithdailyissuesonApps,includingxxx.handinhand/stepbystep为我的父母演示了如何绑定银行卡和完成Afterwards,Idemonstratedtomyparentsstepbystepabouthowtocreateanaccountandhowtolink/attachbankcards,andtheprocessofshoppingonline.Theywerequicklearners,andtheygotthehangofusingTaobaoandAlipayinashortestAndnowadaystheirlifeefficiencyisgreatlyimproved,bytouchingthescreenwithfingertipstheycandomanythingswithoutsteppingout,itallowseveryonetoleadaconvenientandefficientlife.steppingout，sinceweareonthesamepage,sinceIcangetmoneyfromparentsinstantly,Iamveryproudofsuchanexperience.大公司BigcompanyWhatwhen/howlonghowbigitisWell,thecompanyI’dlikesharewithyouisnamedAlibaba,whichisoneofthebiggestcompaniesandmostvaluablecompaniesinChinanowadays.Basically,thiscompanywasfoundedbyJackMaalmost18yearsago,aimingtocreateafairandinclusiveonlineplatformfordoingbusinessandtrading.Tilltoday,theiremployeesareasmanyas70thousandanditisrankedasoneofthebiggest500companiesbyfortune.Alibabahasrunmanycompanieswithfamousbrands,likeAlipay,Alitrip,TaobaoandTmall.I’dliketotalkaboutitforsomeFirstly,itisAlibabathatpioneeredtocreateacashlesspaymentnamedAlipayinChina,whichgreatlyimprovesourlifeefficiencyandproductivitywithall-in-onesolutionpackage,liketransferringmoney,toppingup,buyingtickets,planningouritineraryandmanagingwealth;onlybytouchingthescreenwithfingertips,wecandealwithdailyissueswithoutsteppingoutside.Besides,byattractingconsumersfromallovertheworld,theyofferopportunitiesforsmallbusinessestoprosper;sincedoingbusinessonTaobaocanbecost-efficientandconvenient,forexample,theydon’thavetohiremorestafforrentaphysicalshop.Morethanthat,JackMa,astheleader,isregardedasagoodexampleforyounggenerationtolookupto,sinceheisrathertenaciousandintelligent,andmanyareinspiredbyhimtobecreativeandambitiousaswell.That’swhythiscompanyisquite补充素材：共享单车Agreatinvention/abigcompanyorWhatisHowdidyouknowWhatkindofthingitWhydoyouthinkitisDailycommutingandfavoredwayofdailycommutingnowadaysincites.我怎么知道的：Istartedtousesharedbikesofallkindsseveralmonthsago,sinceallofasudden,Inoticedthatthosemulticoloredbikeswerecommonlyfoundeverywhereonstreets.具体是什么：Basically,itisaninternet-connectedbicycle,whichcanbeborrowedandreturnedwithjustasmartphoneWhatweneedistoscanbike’sQRcodeandunlockit,wecanridearoundforjust1kuaianhour.Ilikethisideaforsomeactuallyithelpsussavemoneyandtroubleofusingothermeansoftransport;that'swhyagrowingnumberofpeoplenowusesharedbikestoworkorjustforfun,otherthandrivingcars.解决城市问题：Inaddition,itisaperfectsolutiontotackleurbancongestionandpollutionwithfleetsofbrightlycoloredtwowheelers;sincetherewillbefewercarsonstreetsifsharedbikeshavegonemainstream.APP很好用：theirappisquiteresponsiveanduser-friendly;multifunctional;weevencandetecthowmanycalorieswehaveburnt;Mostofall,theirAPPishandytouse,bytouchingthescreen,wecanfindoutourlocation,route,feesandidlebikes,IbelievethesedatacanbeefficientlyusedintermsofpromotingtrafficThat'swhyitissuchagreatMobikeisaninnovativecompanythataimstopromoteabetterurbancommutingwithsharedbikes.Theirbikesharingconcepthasattractedhugeusers,venturecapitalandmarketshare.citytostarttoreusebikeseveryday,theycancreatesocialimpactgreatly;Inmanyways,theirefforthasreignitedthenation’spassionforcycling,andtheyareevenhatchingplanstoexporttheideaworldwide.BenefitsofstudyingorworkingImprovelanguageskill;enrichknowledge/experience;becomeopen-minded;expandhorizons;Deepenyourunderstandingithelpsyouhoneabilitieslikexxxindependence,survivalskilllikecooking,communication;socialskill. enlightened;Ipickedupmypassionagain.Overseasinternship;studyexchange;shorttermstudytour.Sincefirstly,Bygoingonagapyear/overseasstudytour,Ican;itoffersmeachanceto;itallowsmetodo;itisbeneficial/rewardingformetodoDoingsthcanberegardedasachancetodoxxx.Mainly/simplybecausexxx;Ibelieve/reckon/suppose/itismybeliefthatItisbelievedthatxxxTobemorespecific,itisalwaysexcitingtodoxxxespeciallygiventhat/consideringthatcurrentlyIexperiencedbottleneckofmycareer,Iwouldliketo休息一下，and一两年之后，我可以满血归来，重新聚焦在我想要的东Moreimportantly,ithelpsmedo/allowsmetodo,andifeverythinggoeswell,IcanIfeltratherconfused/lost/frustrated/struggled;steppingoutsideyourcomfortisthebeginningofpersonalprogress;changemylifepathandtakeabreakandreturnrefreshed满血归来；Icangetawell-paidjobwithdecentsalary;Ilikeskiingsinceitis EnjoyanOnce-in-a-lifetimeexperience一生只有一次的机会；discovernewcountriesandcultures探索burnout遇到瓶颈，丧失目标Stepoutsideyourcomfortzonereturnrefreshedandre-focusedonwhatyouwannadoadduniqueexperiencetoyourCV/enrichyourexperience/outlook/CV;丰满你的简历paveyourwayforfuturepath/career;GetabettersenseofwhoIamasapersonBetterunderstandingofxxxlifevalue/wayofthinking/lifestyle/waysoflivingContributetomycareeroracademicmajor为职业和学业做贡献/abilitycapabilityskillAboveall/ontopofthat/onemoretomentionSocialskills:Survivalskill,independence,problem-solving,communication,teamworkspirit,hands-on/manualskill动手能力;Burnoutfromcompetitivepressure压力带来的瓶颈；IhavebeenburntoutMorematuremoreself-reliantandindependentRenewmotivationsinceIhavebeeninsidemycomfortzoneforalongtime,doingsthcanbetakenasawayofknowingmoreaboutmyselfandrenewingmymotivationxxxAddtotheiremployability增强就业价值beenhanced素材C：想做还没做的事情Describesomethingyouplanedbuthasn’tdoneyet wechatbusiness;Fluency/coherence;lexicalresources;grammar;pronunciation; Taskresponse;回答任务Whatpreparationsdoyouhavetodotorealizethisplan.Inordertomakeithappen,Ineeddoarangeofpreparations,likepassingmyielts,betteringmylanguageskill,applyingforuniversitiesandsurelygettingafinancialsupport. signupforduty参军sign 注册signin登Well,theplanI’dliketoxxxistosignupforanexchangeprogram/overseasstudyprograminxxx,holidayvisa,Ifeverythinggoeswell,Iwishthatmydreamcancometruewithinayear.visitingxxx,enjoyingxxx,tastingxxx,doingxxxandfindingxxxlocaldelicacies美食Besides/apartfromstudying,Iwilltrysomethingelse,WhileIamthereifIamluckyenough,Iwilldoarangeofthingsbesidesstudying,likevisitinglandmarks/museum/artgalleries,enjoyingnaturalview/beauty,savoringtheirdelicacies,makingfriends,betteringmyEnglishandmaybedoingapart-timejob.Itismygoalforsomereasons其中最重要的事情就是我能够享受这个一生一次的机会和拥有一次真正的个人冒险,例Amongthem,theprimaryreasonistoenjoythisonce-in-a-lifetimeopportunityandstartarealpersonaladventure,likediscoveringnewcultures,orhavingbetterunderstandingabouttheirlifestyle,theirlifevalueorlifeperspectives.So,Icanimmersemyselfdeeplyintotheirculture.FitinGiventhatIplantostudytheresoon,itisbetterformetohaveatasteinadvance,sothatIcanfitin/blendinsmoothlyinthefuture.pavemywayforfuture’scareerpath/layasolidfoundationforhuntingforawell-paidjob；我相信我Lastbutnotleast,itisthechancethatIcanhaveabettersenseofwhoIamasaperson,anditpavesthewayformyfuture’scareerpathandemployability;IbelieveIwillbecomemoremature,self-reliantandindependent.That’swhyitisthedreamthatisworthfightingfor/sharing.TEDideasworthDecisionothersmade心情流程图experienceoroccasioneddidWhenwasthat时态-eddidwasstruggledFrustrated/lost–theythoughtlivinginChinawasabetteroptionMadeupmymindtotrydifferent–itwasmybeliefthatbydoingxxx,Imadeit–proudandexcited点题：supportmexxxencouragedandTheexperienceI’dliketosharewithyouroughlyhappenedxxxago,whileIwasstruggledbetweendoingxxanddoingxxxaftermygraduation.Fromthebeginning,Iwassofrustratednevenlost,mainlybecausemyparentsdidn’tsupportmyideaofstudyingabroad,theythoughtbyfindingajobinChina,Icouldleadastablelife,andduetoissues,theywould担心我在国外的生活的学习；duetosafetyissues,theywouldbeworriedaboutmyoverseasstudyorlifeAndIoncehadnodirection/guidance/passion.我没有了方向和目标；,aheadis,IwillalwayshanginthereuntilInailit;赴，什么都可以做到;aslongasIputallmymindintoonething,Icanachieveanything.我的家changeonme,so，他们做了一个决定（点题）tosupportmydreamfinanciallyandThat’stheexperienceworth一个在澳洲间隔年回来的师哥做的。IattendedaseminarWell,theinterestingclassisnamedhowtogoonagapyear,whichwasheldinmycollegelastweek,anditwasgivenbyaseniorgraduate/travelguruwhospentayearinAustraliatoworkandlivewithworkingholidayvisa.他分享了很多一年里发生的有趣的故事和个人的感悟reflection.Basically,thisspeech(book)isinteresting/stimulating/eye-opening/mind-blowing,helpfulandcomprehensive;sincehegaveusanoverallintroductionaboutgoingforagapyearoverseas.Includingvisaapplication,trippreparationandplanning,howtohuntforjobsinlocalplacesandtipsaboutaccommodationandtransportationandheads-up注意事项.Besides,healsomentionedabouthisfunexperienceoflivingalifeandhisownreflectionsaboutmeaningsofdoinggapyear.GiventhatIplantostudyabroadinthefutu