高考英语二轮复习易错题专练18 书面表达-应用文（含解析）

专题18书面表达应用文备战2023高考英语考试易错题（新高考专用）（解析版）一易错题类型一易错题类型【易错题01】不一致１．主谓不一致Whenhehavemoney,heoftenbuyswhathewantto.【答案】have改为has;want改为wants【错误分析】没有注重英语中谓语动词需要和主语保持时态，语态，人称和数的一致。单纯的按汉语意思来翻译。【写作思路】句子的核心谓语动词时刻保持人称一致，时态，语态合理运用，不可按汉语直译。前后指代不一致Wecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingyourself.【答案】we改为you;或yourself改为ourselves【错误分析】句中人称代词we和反身代词yourself指代不一致。【写作思路】保持前后指代一致。Wecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingitourselves./Youcanalsoknowthesocietybyservingityourself。３．句子不完整或者多词Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.【答案】将for改为小写，前面句号改为逗号。【错误分析】“ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清。【写作思路】Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety，forexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.在句子写完以后，想加些补充说明时需要考虑句子结构和成分是否完整。Notonlythisactivityenrichyourschoollifebutalsoitcanbroadenyourhorizons.【答案】在only后面加can。【错误分析】本句属于特殊句式中的倒装句。助动词漏用，，没有倒装。【写作思路】Notonly用于句子开头时，句子使用部分倒装句型。助动词用于主语之前。故Notonlycanthisactivityenrichyourschoollifebutalsoitcanbroadenyourhorizons.Forthepeoplewhotheyarediligentandkind,theyusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.【答案】去掉they【错误分析】定语从句中关系代词充当成分，重复使用句子成分。【写作思路】关系代词who充当定语从句中的主语，定语从句中多了人称代词。故Forthepeoplewhoarediligentandkind,theyusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.4．词性误用Sincere,Ihopethisactivitywillbeofgreatbenefittoyou.【答案】在only后面加can。【错误分析】词性误用一般表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等【写作思路】遣词造句时，需要考虑词性与修饰的关系。故Sincerely,Ihopethisactivitywillbeofgreatbenefittoyou.Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenheacrossthestreet.【答案】将across改为wascrossing【错误分析】across是介词，不能误用作动词。【写作思路】Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenhewascrossingthestreet.5．指代不清Lilywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedhertobeherbridesmaid.【答案】将her改为mysister【错误分析】本句话没有明确两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。代词与被指代的人或物关系不清或者先后所用的代词不一致。【写作思路】写作是逻辑意思以及句子前后指代应当清晰一致。故Lilywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedmysistertobeherbridesmaid.【易错题02】低级词汇集中动词类简单词汇attend，cause,help,consider,consider,happen,have,improve,master,realize,remember,should,thank,use,tend,understand,can’t,decide,liein,thinkof,tryone’sbest,高级词汇takepartin/beinvolvedin/participatein;leadto/resultin/contributeto/giveriseto;dosb.afavor/lendsbahelpinghand;take...intoconsideration/account;occur/comeabout;possess/improve;promote;haveagoodcommandof;beawareof;bear/keepinmind;besupposedto;appreciate/begratefultosb.;makeuseof/takeadvantageof;haveatendencytodosth.;makesenseof/figureout;havetrouble/difficultyindoingsth;determinetodosth;bedeterminedtodosth.;belocatedin/besituatedin;sthoccurstosb.;sparenoefforttodosth.;【动词分析】选词简单，不够高级，汉语意思直白翻译。【选词思路】注重积累，短语优先选择。名词类简单词汇chance;choice;people;result;shortcoming;moreandmorepeople;allkindsof高级词汇opportunity;alternative;individuals;consequence;drawback;anincreasingnumberofpeople;awiderangeof;awidevarietyof典例剖析(2022全国高考乙卷满分作文)Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.【高级词汇】anincreasingnumber代替many【选词思路】注重积累，选词应当使用能够吸引阅卷老师目光的高级词汇和短语，使句子出类拔萃。形容词类简单词汇good;difficult;enough;free;important;lucky;popular;proper;rich;tired;beangrywith;bebusywith;beboredwith;beveryhappy;beinterestedin高级词汇outstanding/distinguished/brilliant;challenging;adequate;available;essential/vital/significant;fortunate;enjoygreatpopularity;appropriate;abundant;exhausted/wornout;beannoyedwith;beoccupiedwith/buryoneselfin;befedupwith;bewildwithjoy;haveagreatpassionfor;becrazyabout;sthappealtosb;befascinatedby副词类简单词汇finally;hardly;immediately;nowadays;so;suddenly;very高级词汇eventually/ultimately;barely;withouthesitation/delay;currently;consequently/therefore;allofasudden;extremely介词类简单词汇considering;during;infact;inaword高级词汇inviewof;inthecourseof;asamatteroffact;tosummarize/inconclusion/tosumup【易错题02】句子呆板不生动1.运用介词（短语）Becausehehelpedme,Ifinishedthetaskontime.→Thanktohishelp,Iaccomplishedthetaskontime.【原句分析】句型呆板，缺乏灵动性。【写作思路】注重积累，短语优先选择。可以运用介词短语对句子进行转化，可以使句子简洁有新意。【知识拓展】常用介词短语有becauseof,aswellas,bydoing;through,butfor,despite,inspiteof,on/uponthanksto等。典例剖析(2022年全国高考新高考I卷应用文写作)Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturedifferences”isintendedtoarousestudents’interestindifferentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine.【选词思路】介词with短语作后置定语，增加句子的变化性，彰显出灵活的句子结构运用能力。2.运用定语从句和名词性从句Hehastwosonsandbothofthemaredoctors.→Hehastwosons,bothofwhomaredoctors.Weallknowthatheisawarm-heartedman.→Whatisknowntousallisthatheisawarmheartedman.【原句分析】句型较为简单，只运用了比较容易的并列句和宾语从句。【写作思路】不改变句意，运用定语从句和名词性从句可以对并列句进行升华，可以使句子脱颖而出。3.运用非谓语短语对祈使句和从句进行转化Hewastoldmanytimes,buthedidn’tmemorizetherule.→Toldmanytimes,hedidn’tmemorizetherule.Theyenteredtheforestinsearchofthemissingboy.→Theyenteredtheforesttosearchforthemissingboy.AsIwaslyingonthegrass,Ithoughtofmybrotherwhowasstudyingabroad.→Lyingonthegrass,Ithoughtofmybrotherstudyingabroad.【原句分析】句型运用了比较容易的并列句和介词短语，比较单一。【写作思路】一篇高分文章应当多种句型运用丰富，非谓语的熟练运用是能体现高水准的表达方式之一，可以转化祈使句，并列句和从句。二举一反三二举一反三（2022年全国乙卷书面表达）......ItturnsoutthatstudentsattachgreaterimportancetointerestandentertainmentinsteadoftraditionalapproachessuchasreadingbookswhenlearningEnglish.However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritisoneofthebestwaystoincreasevocabularyandtostrengthentheunderstandingofgrammar.【佳句赏析】句意：事实证明，学生在学习英语时更重视兴趣和娱乐，而不是像阅读书籍等传统方法。然而，在我看来，对学生最有利的是阅读英语书籍，因为这是增加词汇量和加强对语法理解的最好方法之一。句型运用Itturnsoutthat灵活生动。动词短语attachgreaterimportanceto代替payattentionto高级不单调，实为背诵佳句。下段运用介词短语frommypointofview于主语之前，句子显得很有新意。使用名词性从句作主语，写作中实为加分项。(2022年全国高考新高考I卷读后续写)...Iquietlysaid,“David,ifyou’renotrunningbecauseyou’reafraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,that’snotagoodenoughreason.【选词思路】熟练使用形容词enough;副词quietly;连词if,because等引导从句，句子生动不简单。【佳句赏析】句意：我平静地说：“大卫，如果你因为害怕有人会笑而不跑步，那是一个足够好的理由。”if引导条件状语从句，because引导原因状语从句，以及句子中形容词和副词的运用都显示出作者很扎实的基本功，适合背诵模仿。(2022年全国高考新高考II卷)Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.【选词思路】句子中高级词汇和短语熟练运用，amazing,share...with;havetroubleindoing;plentyof;dealwith。【佳句赏析】句意：这是一个很棒的项目，你可以与学生们分享你的想法。现在，当他们在学习英语方面遇到困难时，很多学生都很想知道如何处理它。where引导的定语从句先行词表示抽象地点的program,这是高考中语法填空的常考知识点，作者能将其运用于写作中，实乃妙句。When后运用了省略句，以及句子中大量的短语，都为作文加分亮点。模拟题通关模拟题通关应用文(2022年全国高考新高考I卷写作)假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1.节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearCaroline,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【满分范文】Onepossibleversion:DearCaroline, Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoattendourprogram“TalkandTalk”inourschoolbroadcastingstationat7:00p.m.nextFriday.Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturedifferences”isintendedtoarousestudents’interestindifferentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine. Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youropinionwillbeofimportance.Intheprogram,youcancommunicatewithourschoolstudents,whichnotonlyprovidesaplatformforstudentstorelievetheirpressureandaddspicetotheirdullroutine,butalsoinspirestheirinterestinwesternculture. I’dappreciateitifyoucouldspareyourtimetojoinus.Anearlyreplyaboutyourfinaldecisionwillbehighlyappreciated.Yours,【佳作赏析】第一段开门见山表达写信目的Iamwritingtoinviteyouto...。紧接着便是节目话题介绍Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturedifferences”isintendedtoarousestudents’interestindifferentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine. 第二段第一句表明邀请参加的目的Asourdistinguishedfore....接着展开描写参加活动的意义Intheprogram,youcancommunicate...。其中倒装句notonly...butalso是一大亮点。 最后一段再次邀请.I’dappreciateitifyou...。2.(2022年全国高考新高考II卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1.节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearCaroline,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【满分范文】DearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】1.句型“自从......以来多久了”ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.省略句whenhavingtrouble的运用。短语搭配运用灵活share...with;havetroubleindoingsth;urgetodosth;beavailable;虚拟语气句式运用I’dappreciateitifyou...3.（2022年1月浙江卷）假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.回忆活动经历；2.分享个人收获；3.希望保持联系。注意：1.词数80左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearChris,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【满分范文】DearChris,Howareyoudoingthesedays?IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIreland.Imissyousomuch.IstillremembertheverydaywhenwemetatChina-IrelandCulturalFestivaltwoyearsago.Itwasatthatfestivalthatyousharedsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.Wereallyenjoyedourselvesthere.What’sfarmoreimportantisthatwebecamegoodfriendsthen.ThoughIfeltalittlesorrythatyouleftChinalastyear,Iampleasedtoknowyouareleadingahappylifeinyourhometown.Ihopewecankeepintouchoften.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】句型表示“自从......以来多久了”IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIreland.定语从句whenwemetatChina-IrelandCulturalFestivaltwoyearsago.强调句型Itwasatthatfestivalthatyousharedsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,非限制性定语从句throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.名词性从句中主语从句和表语从句What’sfarmoreimportantisthatwebecamegoodfriendsthen.让步状语从句ThoughIfeltalittlesorrythatyouleftChinalastyear,短语灵活运用如：share...with;ampleasedto；areleadingahappylife；keepintouch.(2022湖南雅礼中学测试卷）假如你是李华，你的巴基斯坦笔友Muhammad准备明年来你校做交换生，写信向你咨询如何学习中文。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。要点：1.表示欢迎；2.提出学习中文建议；3.期待与祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMuhammad,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【满分范文】DearMuhammad,Welcometobeanexchangestudentatourschoolnextyear.AstohowtolearnChinese,herecomemytips.First,youmightaswelltakeaChinesecoursetolayasolidfoundation.What’smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms,whichwillenableyoutoaccessstandardandauthenticChinese.Plus,befriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyouissuretobetteryouroralChinese.Meanwhile,itcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.Finally,Isuggestyoutrye-mailingmeinChinese.Ihopemysuggestionsabovemaybenefityou.HopeyouwillmakesufficientprogressinChinesesoon.Iamlookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】Plus,notonlyisbefriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyousuretobetteryouroralChinese,butalsoitcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.2.What’smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms,whichwillenableyoutoaccessstandardandauthenticChinese.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)3.Finally,Isuggestyoutrye-mailingmeinChinese.(运用了省略that的宾语从句和虚拟语气)4.词汇积累：至于：asto→asfor；建议：tip/suggestion→advice；明智的：wise→advisable；此外：what’smore→besides6.（2022年全国甲卷书面表达）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【onepossibleversion】OurOceans，OurResponsibilityDoyouknowJune8,whichisnotonlyadayforthecollegeentranceexaminationtoChineseyoungsters,butalsoWorldOceansDay,designatedbytheUNtoarousepeople’sawarenesstoprotecttheoceans?Theoceanisthehometoalllifeonearth,richinnaturalresources,andalsoourbluehomeforahappylifeandhappygrowth.Tocarefortheoceanistocareforourfuture.Soweshouldshoulderresponsibilitytoprotectit.Tobeginwith,protecttheMarineecologicalenvironmentandadvocategreenenvironmentalprotectionactions.What’smore,tostrengthentheconsciousnessoftheseainaccordancewiththelaw,consciouslyprotectthebluelandandresourcesenvironment,startfromme,startfromnow,startfromaroundthings,takeanactivepartingreenvolunteeractivities,andadvocategreenenvironmentalprotection.Doyouagreewithme?Ifso,let’shandinhandtoprotecttheMarineenvironment,andinherittheMarinecivilizationfromhearttoheart.（165）【佳作赏析】运用定语从句whichisnotonlyadayforthecollegeentranceexaminationtoChineseyoungsters,butalso...，并在其中穿插关联词组notonly...butalso...。目的状语Tocarefortheoceanistocareforourfuture.中todo不定式的运用。熟练运用短语arouseone’sawareness...;berichin;carefor;tobeginwith;what’smore;inaccordancewith;takeanactivepartin;handinhand等。7.（2022年全国乙卷书面表达）学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1．学习活动状况描述：2．简单评论；3．你的建议。注意：1．词数100左右；2．短文的题目和首句已为你写好。LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.RecentlyasurveyabouthowtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroomhasbeenconducted.Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthestatistics,appreciatingEnglishsongsaccountsfor65percentcomparedwith50%whochoosetowatchmoviesasawayofEnglishlearning.ReadingEnglishbooksprovetobethelesspopularwaysmakingup18%,togetherwithvisitingEnglishlearningwebsites,takingup12%.ItturnsoutthatstudentsattachgreaterimportancetointerestandentertainmentinsteadoftraditionalapproachessuchasreadingbookswhenlearningEnglish.However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritisoneofthebestwaystoincreasevocabularyandtostrengthentheunderstandingofgrammar.Therefore,studentsbecomebestEnglishlearnersquickly.【佳作赏析】文中加分句型和短语都能运用自如。Therebe句型的运用TherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.As引导的定语从句Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthestatistics动名词短语作主语appreciatingEnglishsongsaccountsfor65percentcomparedwith50%定语从句whochoosetowatchmoviesasawayofEnglishlearning.动名词短语做主语ReadingEnglishbooksprovetobethelesspopularwaysmakingup18%...句型Itturnsoutthatstudents......的运用.名词性从句中主语从句的运用whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,8.（2022重庆一中模拟）假定你是李华，你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。请用英语写一封回信。内容包括：1.表示同意；2.计划拍摄的内容（1~2点）；3.邀请对方提建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当増加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJames,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【满分范文】DearJames,Howiseverythinggoing?It’smygreatprivilegetorecordashortvideoaboutmycampuslifeforyourclassmates.I’mwritingtotellyouwhatwillbeincludedinthevideo.Firstofall,asastudent,takingdifferentclassesismydailyroutine,soIwouldliketorecordascenefocusingononeofmyChineseclassestoshowmyacademiclifeandChineseculture．Inaddition,awidevarietyofextra-curricularactivitiesareheldeverydayinmyschoolandthereforeshowingmyafter-schoolactivitiesisalsoinmyplan,fromwhichyourclassmatescanlearnthediversityofChinesehighschoollife．Iwishsuchavideocouldliveuptoyourexpectations．Ifthereisanythingthatneedsimproving,pleasedon’thesitatetotellme.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是李华，你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。请用英语写一封回信。Firstofall,asastudent,takingdifferentclassesismydailyroutine,soIwouldliketorecordascenefocusingononeofmyChineseclassestoshowmyacademiclifeandChineseculture．(使用了动名词短语作主语和现在分词短语作定语)Inaddition,awidevarietyofextra-curricularactivitiesareheldeverydayinmyschoolandthereforeshowingmyafter-schoolactivitiesisalsoinmyplan,fromwhichyourclassmatescanlearnthediversityofChinesehighschoollife．(使用了动名词短语做主语和fromwhich引导的非限制性定语从句。)词汇积累：荣幸：privilege以……为中心：focuson此外：Inaddition需要：need9.（2022湖南周南中学测试）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Kim将于下周访问你校，你想邀请他参与下周学校组织的“劳动实践周”（LabourWeek）活动。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.邀请Kim参加活动；2.介绍活动目的和内容。注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearKim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearKim,It’sgreattoknowyouwillvisitourschoolnextweekandI’dliketoinviteyoutojoinintheactivity—LabourWeekinourschool.Theevent,whichwilllastaweekasscheduled,isintendedtoraiseourawarenessoflabourandremindusofhowvaluableandrespectablehardworkis.Variousactivitieswillbeorganized,rangingfromplantingvegetablesontheschoolfarmtosortinggarbageinaneco-friendlyway.Besides,eachclasswillholdameetingwiththethemeofadeeperreflectiononthisactivityattheendoftheweek.I’msurethatyouwillenjoythisunforgettableexperienceandbenefitalot.

Wishyouagoodjourneyandhopetoseeyousoon.Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】which引导的非限制性定语从句Theevent,whichwilllastaweekasschedule