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2018高考全国卷写作阅卷标准第一页第二页，共29页。给出的要点信息量少过多的使用简单句AddproperinformationUsevariedexpressions第二页第三页，共29页。LearningaimsTobeclearaboutthestepsofwritingacompositionTomasterthewaysofaddinginformation(importantpoint)Tobeabletousethevariedexpressions(difficultpoint)第三页第四页，共29页。PapercuttingPapercuttingisoneofChina’smostpopulartraditionalfolkarts(民间艺术).Chinesepapercuttinghasahistoryofmorethan1,500years.DuringtheSpringFestivalandWeddings,peopleoftendecorate

(装饰)theirhomeswithpapercuttinginordertoenhancethejoyousatmosphere.exhibitionn.展览beonshow第四页第五页，共29页。2017，全国II假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸艺术展。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.展览的时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100词左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯第五页第六页，共29页。Followthesixsteps:1.认真审题，把握主题2.抓准要点，勾勒题纲3.紧扣要点，扩写成句5.添加过渡，确保连贯4.修饰文章，提升层次6.查错补漏，工整抄写第六页第七页，共29页。假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸艺术展。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.展览的时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100词左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯1.认真审题，把握主题邀请信体裁：人称：时态：第一、二人称一般现在时第七页第八页，共29页。Structure文章结构Ending（结尾）Beginning(开头)Body（文章主体）问候、自我介绍、写信目的告知展览的时间、地点和内容期盼回信2.抓准要点，勾勒题纲第八页第九页，共29页。Structure文章结构Ending（结尾）Beginning(开头)Body（文章主体）问候、自我介绍、写信目的告知展览的时间、地点和内容期盼回信How’severythinggoing?I’mLihua.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheexhibitionofthepaper-cutting.I’mastudentfromyourclass.ItisaChinesefolkartandhasalonghistory.Place：CitymuseumTime：atweekendsContent：Alargenumberofpaper-cutworkswillbeonshow.

Whoseworks?What?Benefits?Location！fromJune16thandlastformorethanaweekfrom8a.m.to5p.m.everyweekendinJulyIfyouareinterested,pleasee-mailme.Somearemadebyfamousartists.Theworksareaboutanimals,peopleandotherthings.Wecanenjoythefolkartandlearnalot.3.紧扣要点，扩写成句Howtoaddproperinformationtothekeypoints?Tip2：时间地点写详细Tip3:加上原因、条件、结果Tip1：进一步解释名词第九页第十页，共29页。DearHenry, How’severythinggoing?I’mLihua.I’mastudentfromyourclass.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheexhibitionofthepaper-cutting.ItisaChinesefolkartandhasalonghistory. TheexhibitionwillbeheldinCitymuseum.Itislocatedinthenorthofourcity.ItwillstartfromJune16thandlastformorethanaweek.Alargenumberofpaper-cutworkswillbeonshow.Someofthemaremadebyfamousartists.Theworksareaboutanimals,peopleandotherthings.Whenwevisitthisexhibition,wewillenjoythefolkartandlearnalot. Ifyouareinterested,pleasee-mailme.Wecanmakeitanydaytovisittheexhibition.Lookingforwardtoyouearlyreply.Yours,Lihua165.修饰文章，提升层次第十页第十一页，共29页。1)借助名词短语做同位语李立，男，19岁，1999年生；籍贯：广东。

LiLi,a19-year-oldboy,wasborninGuangdongin1999.---G3Shortandclear！HomeworkevaluationNothingisimpossibletoawillingheart!第十一页第十二页，共29页。2)借助介词做定语李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。LiFeiisaten-year-oldboywithshortbrownhairandawhitejacket.---G1Shortandclear！第十二页第十三页，共29页。有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。

WiththehelpofTom,wesoonfoundtheirvillage.----G73)借助介词短语做状语第十三页第十四页，共29页。4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。

Standingunderthebigtree,theyarewaitingforthepresident.---G4第十四页第十五页，共29页。中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。China,whichliesintheeastofAsia,isagreatcountrywithalargeareaandpopulationaswellasrichnaturalresources.5)用好定语从句China,locatedintheeastofAsia,hasavastareaandrichnaturalresourcesaswellas

alargepopulation.----G6第十五页第十六页，共29页。

①Kateisanewstudent.②Shecomesfromanorthernprovince.③Shespeaksadialect.④Wefindithardtounderstandherdialect.Kate,anewstudent

fromanorthernprovince,speaksadialectwhichwefindhardtounderstand.--G9用一句话表达第十六页第十七页，共29页。①

NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.②

ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.③

ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.合并句子 NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish,but

childrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime,whichwillaffecttheirChinesestudy.----G6

方法1：Linkingwordsmakesthesentencelogical逻辑连词第十七页第十八页，共29页。同位语介词和介词短语定语从句非谓语动词逻辑连词Q:Whatvariedexpressionscanbeusedtoimproveyoursentence?第十八页第十九页，共29页。DearHenry, How’severythinggoing?I’mLihua.I’mastudentfromyourclass.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheexhibitionofthepaper-cutting.ItisaChinesefolkartandhasalonghistory. TheexhibitionwillbeheldinCitymuseum.Itislocatedinthenorthofourcity.ItwillstartfromJune16thandlastformorethanaweek.Alargenumberofpaper-cutworkswillbeonshow.Someofthemaremadebyfamousartists.Theworksareaboutanimals,peopleandotherthings.Whenwevisitthisexhibition,wewillenjoythefolkartandlearnalot. Ifyouareinterested,pleasee-mailme.Wecanmakeitanydaytovisittheexhibition.Lookingforwardtoyouearlyreply.Yours,LihuaGroupwork!Twoheadsarebetterthanone！第十九页第二十页，共29页。requirements:(1~10’)1.variedexpressionsareused1’each2.logicalandcoherent1’3.goodhandwriting1’Presentation!第二十页第二十一页，共29页。DearHenry, How’severythinggoing?I’mLihua.I’mastudentfromyourclass.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheexhibitionofthepaper-cutting.ItisaChinesefolkartandhasalonghistory. TheexhibitionwillbeheldinCitymuseum.Itislocatedinthenorthofourcity.ItwillstartfromJune16thandlastformorethanaweek.Alargenumberofpaper-cutworkswillbeonshow.Someofthemaremadebyfamousartists.Theworksareaboutanimals,peopleandotherthings.Whenwevisitthisexhibition,wewillenjoythefolkartandlearnalot. Ifyouareinterested,pleasee-mailme.Wecanmakeitanydaytovisittheexhibition.Lookingforwardtoyouearlyreply.Yours,LihuaTwoheadsarebetterthanone.Groupwork!I’mLihua,astudentfromyourclass.whichisaChinesefolkartwithalonghistory.,located,someofwhichvisitingtheexhibition5.添加过渡，确保连贯①②①Besides,②Itissaidthat同位语限制性定语从句非谓语动词非限制性定语从句非谓语动词介词第二十一页第二十二页，共29页。DearHenry,

How’severythinggoing?I’mLihua,astudentfromyourclass.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheexhibitionofthepaper-cuttingwhichisaChinesefolkartwithalonghistory. TheexhibitionwillbeheldinCitymuseum,locatedinthenorthofourcity.Besides,itwillstartfromJune16thandlastformorethanaweek.Itissaidthatalargenumberofpaper-cutworkswillbeonshow,someofwhicharemadebyfamousartists.Theworksareaboutanimals,peopleandotherthings.Visitingthisexhibition,wewillenjoythefolkartandlearnalot. Ifyouareinterested,pleasee-mailme.Wecanmakeitanydaytovisittheexhibition.Lookingforwardtoyouearlyreply.Yours,Lihua第二十二页第二十三页，共29页。DearHenry, How’severythinggoing?I’mLihua,________________________(你班上的一名学生).

I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheexhibitionofthepaper-cutting,___________________________________(拥有悠久历史的中国民俗艺术).

astudentfromyourclasswhichisaChinesefolkartwithalonghistory第二十三页第二十四页，共29页。 TheexhibitionwillbeheldinCityMuseum,

_______________________(位于我们城市的北边).Besides,itwillstartfromJune16thandlastformorethanaweek.(据说)___________alargenumberofpaper-cutworkswillbeonshow,____________(其中一些)aremadebyfamousartists.Theworksareaboutanimals,peopleandotherthings.______________________(当我们参观展览的时候),wewillnotonlyenjoythefolkartbutalsolearnalot. Ifyouareinterested,pleasee-mailme.Wecanmakeitanydaytovisittheexhibition. Lo