话题-过去的经历写作课件

Pasteventsandexperiences学习目标1、能用不同时态描述过去的经历；2、能正确使用用一般过去时、过去进行时、现在完成时、过去完成时。3、写作策略:复合句在写作中的运用Pasteventsandexperiences学习目1Pasteventsandexperiences1.Placesyouhaveever(never)beento2.Unforgettableevents3.UnexpectedeventsPasteventsandexperiences12佳句欣赏与模仿佳句欣赏与模仿3ThemostinterestingmuseumI’veeverbeentoistheAmericanComputerMuseum!我去过最好玩的地方是西藏。它给我很多难忘的体验。2.Wellsmadeitsoundsorealthat

hundredsofpeoplebelievedthestory,andfearspreadacrossthewholecountry.Molly被帐篷外的蛇吓坏了。她太害怕了以至于发不出一点声音。ThemostfunplaceI’veeverbeentoisTibet.Itgavemesomuchunforgettableexperience.Mollywasfrightenedbythesnakeoutsidethetent.Shewassoafraidthatshecouldn’tsayaword.ThemostinterestingmuseumI’43.Manypeoplerantotheirlocalsupermarketstobuyasmuchspaghettiastheycould.当我意识到自己可能错过火车时，我尽可能让自己快点赶到车站。__________________________________________4.That’swhyit’simportanttolearnasecondlanguage.他乐于助人，那是我把他当成最好朋友的原因。__________________________________________WhenIrealizedthatImaymissthetrain,Igottothestationasquickly/fastasIcould.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.That’swhyIregardhimasmybestfriend.3.Manypeoplerantotheirlo55.Althoughthestormbrokemanythingsapart,itbroughtfamiliesandneighborsclosertogether.尽管这是一次可怕的经历，我们仍然学到了有用的教训。__________________________________________6.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyeswhenIsawsomanydifferentkindsoftoiletsthere.在回家的路上看到如此拥挤的交通时，我感到难以置信。__________________________________________Althoughitwasaterribleexperience,westilllearnedausefullesson.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyeswhenIsawsoheavytrafficonthewayhome.5.Althoughthestormbrokema6Placesyouhaveever(never)beentoWherehaveyouvisitedforyoulastsummervacation?IhaveeverbeentoQingdao.Iwenttherewithmyparents.Itwasabeautifulandcleancity.Wehavebeentothebeachandswuminthesea.Wehavevisitedthefamousaquarium.Therewereallkindsoffishes.Wewatchedadolphinshow.Itwasverylovely.Howunforgettabletripitwas!havebeento,thingshavedone,feelings...Placesyouhaveever(never)b7Unforgettableeventswhat,when,where,who…Onacoldafternoon,Iwenttoworkasusual.WhileIwaswalkingoutofthegate,afireworkwasthrownatme.Icriedandfelldownontheground.WhenIwokeup,athiefwasstealingsomethingfrommycoat.Howscaryitwas!BythetimeIgotoutside,thebushadalreadyleft.Howunluckyitwas!Unforgettableeventswhat,wh8Youcanimaginehowstrangeitis!感叹句归纳：_______amazingitwas!_______wonderfullyLiuQianperformaned!

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schooltripitwas!_______happilywesanganddanced!______embarrassingIfeltwhenIwaslateforschool!_______meaningfulvolunteerworkwedid!_______interestingteachersheis!HowHowWhatWhataHowHowWhatWhatan感叹句表达经历！Youcanimaginehowstrangeit9MorepracticeFillwith“while”or“when”1.____Maywastalkingonthephone,hersongotlost.2._____Ritaboughthernewdog,itwaswearingapinkcoat.3._____IsawBill,hewasshoutingathiswife.4._____Iwasdancing,hewassingingloudly.5._____LindafinallysawDavy,hewasjumpingwithadog.6.Iwascleaningmyroom______thefirebrokeout.WhenWhileWhileWhenWhenwhenMorepracticeFillwith“while”10Let’sreadandwrite.(读写综合)A．信息归纳：请阅读下面短文，完成表格。

Lastweekend,Iwentshoppingwithmyfriends.Onmywayhome,Isawanoldladylyingontheground,crying.Thereweremanypeoplearoundher.Iwenttoherandfoundthatshewasbleeding,Iwassurethatshewasverydangerousatthattime,butnobodygaveherahand.Ihadtomakeadecision:shouldIgohomeorhelpthewomaninneed?Infact,itwashardformetodecidewhattodo.IfIhelpedthelady,herfamilymaythinkitwasmewhohurther.Ididn’twantanytrouble.Ontheotherhand,ifIdidnothing,thewomanwoulddieifnobodyhelpedher.Atlast,Idecidedtohelpher.Isenthertothehospitalandtriedtofindherfamilymembers.Thewomanwassavedintimeandtheyallthankedme.Afewdayslater,thefamilyofthewomancalledmyteacherandtoldhimthestory.Ourteacherpraisedme.IwashappyIcouldhelpothers.Tobehonest,IalsohopedthatwhenIfelldownoneday,therewouldbesomeonewhocouldhelpmeout.Let’sreadandwrite.(读写综合)A11Whendidthewritergoshopping?1.Whatdidthewriterseeonthewayhome?2.Didthewriterhelptheladyatlast?3.Whatdidthefamilyofthewomandoafewdayslater?4.Whatwouldhappenifnobodyhelpthewoman?5.InformationCardLastweekend

Anoldladylyingontheground,cring

Yes,he/shedidCalledtheteacher.ShewoulddieWhendidthewritergoshoppin12B.Writing

人的一生中总会遇到这样那样的事情，会有各种各样的经历。请你以MyUnforgettableExperience为题。描述你曾经遇到过的一件刻骨铭心的事情。必须阐明事情发生的时间，地点，经过以及结局等。字数：80字左右。

MyUncfogettableExperience.

Iwillneverforgettheexperiencethathappened…..____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________B.Writing人的一生中总会遇到这样那样的事情，会有各13【写作指导】

1.审题：是写一篇叙事短文，体裁应该是记叙文。时态应该以一般过去时为主。人称应该是第一人称为主。2.抓点：要点一定要齐，批改作文时是按要点给分。这篇的作文的要点是4个，即：①时间②地点③经过④结局。这4个要点缺一不可。

3.斟酌词句：表达时间和地点可以用in

thestreetonMonday;表达经过、结果可以用到的句型：Firstly/next/then/afterthat/atlast…。适当运用从句，谚语可以加分。4.学会仿写。善于从给出材料中找出可以借鉴的句式。

5.书写规范，不涂鸦。在同等情况下书写工整的同学分数决会高于书写不工整的同学。千万不要在试卷上乱涂乱画，写一些与作文无关的话语：包括拼音、汉字以及涂鸦。

【写作指导】14My______experienceBeginning：IwillneverforgettheexperiencethathappenedinthestreetlastSunday.IhadaveryunusualexperienceonSunday.My______experienceBeginning：I15My______experienceBodyFirstly/next/then/afterthat/atlast…Whatwasworse/Whatwasmore…After/When/While…Atthesametime…Tomysurprise…Itwasso…thatBelieveitornot…Theprocessofevent(事件的进展)When,Where,When,What,Why…My______experienceBodyFirstl16Istillcan’tbelieveImetsuchashockingthinginmylife.ItwasoneofthemostinterestingthingsIhadeverseen.ItwasthefirsttimeIexperiencedsuchthings,isn’titamazing?Timeflies!Butthisexperienceisstillfreshinmymemory.My______experienceEnding：Istillcan’tbelieveImetsu17Iwillneverforgettheexperiencethathappenedonahotsummerafternoon,myfatherandIwenttothesw