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ContinuationWriting

ContinuationWriting1Ilovethreethingsintheworld，Sun,moonandyou.Sunformorning，Moonfornight，Andyouforever.Ilovethreethingsinthewor2Step1:Readandanalyzethegivenpassage(Mainidea,plot,feelings,coflict...).Step2:Infer

theplotdevelopmentandthe

endingbythegivensentences.Step3:

Writingandpolishing.ContinuationWriting

Steps：Step1:Readandanalyzetheg31.ReadingforthemainideaOnChristmasEve,Dellacriedfornothavingenoughmoneytobuyherhusband,Jima

.Then,she

heronlypossession-herlongbeautiful

tobuyherJima

-perfectforJim’sgold

.giftsoldhairchainwatch1.ReadingforthemainideaOn41.WhatdidDellado?

(actions)2.HowdidDellafeelatthebeginningofthestory?(feelings)3.Why？（Problem/conflict）1.Count,sob,howl.......2.Readingfortheplotandfeelings(Para1）

DellaJim2.Sad/Frustrated.3.Theylivedinextremepoverty.1.WhatdidDellado?(action5…,hercheeksburnedwiththesilentscoldofmeanness.Therewasclearlynothingtodobutsobontheshabbycouchandhowl….…agraycatwalkingalongagrayfenceinagrayyard.Howdidthewritervividlyshowthesefeelings?123…Imagery3.ReadingfortheLanguagevividuseoflanguagetoformanimage/apicture…,hercheeksburnedwiththe6Hereyeswereshiningbrilliantly,butherfacehadlostitscolorwithintwentyseconds.ItsuddenlyoccurredtoherthatshecouldsellthehairtobuyanexpensivegiftforJim.Shewassorrowfulbecauseshewouldbuythegiftattheexpenseofherbelovedhair.sacrifice3.Readingforthelanguage(Para2）

Hereyeswereshiningbrillian7ImageryPara3Staringintothemirror,shefoundherhairreachedbelowherknees,shininglikeabrownwaterfall.Shestoodstillwhileafewtearsfell/splashed/dripped/streameddownonthefloor.ImageryPara3Staringintothe8bodylanguage/expressionssurpriseeyeswideopen;mouthintheshapeofan“O”;jawdroppinglipscurvingintoasmile;facelightingup;grinfromeartoearhappinessbeingmovedred-rimmedeyes;hug/embracesb.tightly;tearssplashing/wellingImagerybodylanguage/expressionssur94.Infertheplotdevelopmentandendingbythegivensentences.Para1:ThedooropenedandJimsteppedin.Para2:InsideJim’spackageweretheexpensivecombs–somethingspecialtoholdherhairthatDellahadwantedeversinceshesawtheminashopwindow.4.Infertheplotdevelopme101.SupposeyouwereJim,seeingDella'sshorthair,howwouldyoufeel?.surprised.

.frustrated.2.SupposeyouwereDella,whatwouldyoudoandsay?

Jim3.Howtoconnectwiththesecondparagraph?Jimtookoutapackage.InteractionImagery.delightedlypresentedthegifttoJimandtoldthetruth.

Jimwasdeeplymovedandhuggedherinhisarms.1.SupposeyouwereJim,seeing11第七档（22-25分）1.创造了新颖，丰富，合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情景融洽度高。2.使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误少，且完全不影响理解。3.自然有效地使用了段落间，语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。ContinuationWriting

Criteria(评价标准):第七档（22-25分）ContinuationWritin12Use“interaction”todesignyourplot;Use“imagery”tomakeyourlanguagemorevivid.5.Writingvividly

Use“interaction”todesignyo13ShowTimeAppreciateyourclassmates’articles,learnfromeachotherandpolishyourwriting.6.Showingandpolishing

ShowTimeAppreciateyour14新人教版高中英语读后续写课件15新人教版高中英语读后续写课件16新人教版高中英语读后续写课件17ApossibleversionforreferencePara1：ThedooropenedandJimsteppedin.StaringatDella'seyesshiningwithanticipation,Jimwidenedhiseyesatthesightofhernewhaircutandsqueezedoutafaintsmiletohidehisinnersadness.//Delladancedtowardshimatabriskpaceandspreadoutherpalmwiththeshinychaininside,sayinggently"MerryChristmas,honey!".//RealizingDellaboughtthegiftattheexpenseofherbelovedhair,Jimwasreducedtotearswithred-rimmedeyesandembracedhertightlyinhisarms.//Whilemildlystrokinghershorthair,hemurmuredinachokedvoice,“I’vealsogotagiftforyou!”ashereachedforapackageandunwrappedit.Apossibleversionforreferen18Para2：InsideJim’spackageweretheexpensivecombs–somethingspecialtoholdherhairthatDellahadwantedeversinceshesawtheminashopwindow.…Para2：InsideJim’spackagewer19theme

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