高考英语之建议信名师优质课获奖市赛课一等奖课件

提议信第1页

假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语过程中碰到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请依据以上提醒，写一篇回给李华提议信，帮他处理困难，促进学习。提议内容：

1.不要气馁，保持良好心态；

2.掌握学习方法；

3.培养对英语兴趣兴趣。

第2页第一步：审题养成重视审题习惯。即使基础写作题是半封闭性，但审题依然十分主要。现以样题为例，谈谈怎样审题：思索问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章题材是什么？要写文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点次序？(order)动作是什么时候发生？(时态)(when)第一人称一封信对英语学习给出提议说理逻辑性普通现在时第3页提议信三段式：第一段：点明主题第二段：陈说事实，提出提议，给出理由

（是什么，为何，怎么样）第三段：总结全文，表明希望第4页提议信重点第二段：⑴说明提议内容；（是什么）⑵提出详细提议原因；（为何）⑶指出采纳提议益处。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。第5页适当利用模板第6页DearLiHua,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaid+你碰到问题.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.

Firstly,____________,because________.Secondly,youshould________________,because_________.Thirdly,you’dbetter___________________.Onlyinthiswaycanyou__________.What’smore,_____.

Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.

Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

第7页

假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华一封来信。信中李华提到自己是高一学生，在学习英语过程中碰到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请依据以上提醒，写一篇回给李华提议信，帮他处理困难，促进学习。提议：1.保持良好心态；

2.掌握学习方法：如坚持天天记单词，读英语课文；多练、多问等。

3.培养对英语学习兴趣兴趣。

第8页DearLiHua,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaidyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.

IthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.

Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.What’smore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.

Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

第9页提议：3.培养对英语学习兴趣兴趣。developaninterestinlearningEnglish

坚持天天记单词：insiston/persistindoinginsiston/persistinrememberingwordseveryday

第10页

假定你是李华，你英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询怎样才能学好汉字。请你依据以下关键点写回信。关键点：⑴参加汉字学习班；

⑵看汉字书刊、电视；

⑶学唱汉字歌曲；

⑷交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。DearPeter,

I'mgladtohearthatyoucanaskformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHuaHomework:第11页DearPeter,

I'msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsonhowtolearnChinesewell.IthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.

Mysuggestionsareasfollows.

First,itisimportantto

takeaChinesecourse,becauseyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourclassmates.Second,

italsohelps

towatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersinChinese.Third,

itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingit,you'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,

Youcan

makemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese. TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.

Bestwishes.LiHua第12页DearWangNan,

I’msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingannoyedthesedaysbecauseyouarenotabletocommunicatewithotherseffectively.Iwillgiveyousomeusefuladvice.

Myadviceareasfollows.First,asasayinggoes,everymanhashisfaults,Inoticesomepeoplearoundusarenotgoodatcommunication.Soyoudon’thavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.

Second,goodcommunicationisnotonlyhelpfultoourstudybutalsogoodforoursuccess.Third,behonestandfranktothosewhomyoutalkto,soyoucouldbeunderstoodbyotherseasily.What’smore,you’dbettertrytounderstandotherswhentheytalkssothatyoucanexchangeideaswiththemfreely.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,Lihua第13页Openingsentences

开头句Iamverygladtohearfromyou.Thankyouforyourletter.3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.4.Iamwritinginreplyto…5.Iamsorrytohearthat…第14页惯用关联词表示并列过渡词或短语

aswell;or;too;also;aswellas;and;notonly…butalso….;both…and….either…or…;neither…nor…First……；Second……;Third……Foronething;Foranother(thing)2.表示递进过渡词或短语Moreover;What’smore;Besides;What’sworse,第15页3.表转折对比过渡词:but,however,insteadof,onthecontrary,although,differentfrom,despite,inspiteof,Ontheonehand,…;Ontheotherhand,…Some…;Others…4.表原因过渡词:because,becauseof,since,as,for,nowthat,thanksto,dueto（因为）

第16页5.表结果过渡词:so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat,then,

6.表条件过渡词:if,unless,aslongas

7.表时间过渡词:recently,atthesametime,finally,atlast,fromnowon,8.表特定次序关系过渡词:first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,aboveall,firstofall,then,next,finally,intheend,atlast第17页9.表换一个方式表示过渡词:inotherwords,thatistosay

10.表进行举例说明过渡词:forinstance,forexample,suchas

11.表陈说事实过渡词:Infact,Totellyouthetruth

12.表目标过渡词：forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto

13.表总结过渡词:inaword(总之，简言之),inshort(总之),generallyspeaking,finally,inconclusion,atlast,insummary

第18页惯用句型对于某人来说，做某事很…Itisadj/adv(forsbtodosth)…

学英语对于我们来说不简单ItisnoteasyforustolearnEnglish2.不明白/想知道Iwonder+疑问词/if我想知道怎么能减肥Iwonderhowtoloseweight.第19页3.做某事最好方法就是Thebestwaytodosthistodo…Thereisnobetterwaytodosththantodosth学好英语最正确路径就是阅读浅显英语书籍ThebestwaytolearnEnglishwellistoreadmanyeasyEnglishbook.ThereisnobetterwaytolearnEnglishthantoreadmanyeasyEnglishbook.第20页4.学会用定语从句拓展句意教材当中有许多好看图片，这些图片能够帮助我们更加好了解英语。

Therearemanybeautifulandcolorfulpictures,whichcanhelpusunderstandEnglishbetter.一些教材当中有些生词或表示、表情（expressions），这些对于我们来说极难。Someofthetextshavetoomanynewwordsandexpressionswhicharehardforus.第21页5.用举例子方式拓宽句意这些书有许多优点，其中之一就是我们能够发觉大量话题，比如说科学，文化和历史。Thesebookshavemanyadvantages,oneofthemisthat