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读后续写原文

中文“Wow,

thesetreesaresotall!"William

shoutedexcitedly,whilewalkingwithhisclassmatesinaforestnearhisschool.Theywereonafieldtriptotheforestaspartofasciencelesson.William和他的同学们在学校附近的森林里一边走着一边大喊：“哇，这些树好高啊”。他们正在进行一次科学课的实地考察。Overthere,theymet

theforester,Victor.（护林员后面还会出现的呦）WhenWilliamlearnedVictorlivedinasimplewoodenhousethere

foryears,he

laughedat

himwithhisfriends（现在笑得开心，待会必哭...."真香定律"）.在那里，他们遇到了护林员Victor。当William得知Vitor在那里的一座简单的木屋里住了多年时，他和朋友们一起嘲笑他。Then,theypassedbyanentrancetoacave.Williamwantedtoexploreinsidethecave,buthisteacherdidn'tallowit.

“I'llcomebackhere,(这不是灰太狼的台词么？？？)"hethought.Onthewaybacktoschool,he

rememberedtheexactlocationofthecave.（记住路线可能有帮助）然后，他们经过一个洞穴的入口。William想要探索洞穴的内部，但他的老师不允许。“我会回来的，”他想。在回学校的路上，他记住了洞穴的确切位置。Thenextday,Williamaskedhisfourfriendstothecavetogether.Theytoldtheirparentstheywouldgotothelibraryandreturnhomeintheevening.

Noneoftheteenagerstoldtheirparentsabouttheirplantovisitthecave.（以后要学会，出门要和家人说一声去哪？）第二天，William邀请他的四个朋友一起去洞穴。他们告诉父母他们要去图书馆，晚上回家。没有一个青少年告诉他们的父母他们打算去访问洞穴。Whentheteenagersreachedthecave,they

lefttheirschoolbagsoutside

toreducetheburden(救援装备，物资食物水源会不会也留在包里了？).Onebyone,theyenteredthecave.Justwhentheytookafewstepsinside,somerocksfromthecavewallfelland

blockedtheentrance.（电影里古墓探险也是这样的，进去入口就封住了）当青少年们到达洞穴时，他们把书包留在外面以减轻负担。他们一个接一个地进入洞穴。就在他们走进去几步的时候，洞壁上的一些岩石掉下来，堵住了入口。“Howarewegoingtogetoutnow?”oneoftheteenagersSarahshouted.Williamhadanideaandsaid,“Maybewecantrydiggingthroughthefallenrockswithourhandstoreachtheentrance.”Butrealizinggettingoutofthecaveonlybytheirhandswasimpossible,theyhadgreatfear.Thesunwasabouttogodown.Theteenagersstartedcallingforhelp,butnobodycouldhearthem.Theteenagerswerelosinghope.“我们现在怎么出去？”一个叫Sarah的青少年大喊。William有个想法，他说：“也许我们可以试着用手挖掉那些落下的岩石，扒开入口。”但是，他们发现徒手是无法出洞，他们非常害怕。太阳快要下山了。青少年们开始呼救，但是没有人能听到他们。青少年们开始失去希望。Victorhappenedtopassby

theentrancetothecave,and

fiveschoolbagscaughthisattention.

Healsoheardsomesoundscomingfrominsidethecave.“Who'sinthere?”Victorshouted.Victor恰好经过洞穴的入口，五个书包引起了他的注意。他还听到了洞穴内部传来的一些声音。“谁在那里？”Victor大喊。“I'mWilliam!Wecamehereyesterdaywithourteacher!"Williamrepliedinstantly.“Helpus,please!Wearestuck!Sarahcan'tbreatheherebecauseoffear.”“我是William！我们昨天和老师一起来到这里的！"WIlliam立刻回答。“请帮帮我们！我们被困住了！Sarah因为恐惧都快无法呼吸了。”续写第一段：“Okay,calmdown,children!”Victorsaid.“I'llhelpyougetout!”Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.“好的，冷静下来，孩子们！”Victor说。“我会帮你们出去的！”Victory立即拨打了急救中心的电话，然后匆忙赶回家。续写第二段：Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.不久，青少年们走出了洞穴，深深地吸了一口新鲜空气。故事梗概：William和他的同学们在一次科学课的实地考察中，遇到了护林员Victor并嘲笑了他。在森林中，他们发现了一个洞穴，但被老师禁止探索。William记住了洞穴的位置，并在第二天与他的四个朋友偷偷返回。他们进入洞穴后，一些岩石从洞壁上落下，封闭了入口，困住了他们。Victor恰好经过并注意到了他们的书包，听到了他们的求救声。Victor成功地将他们从洞穴中救出。故事发展线：William和同学们的森林之旅，遇见维克托并嘲笑他→William记住洞穴位置→William和朋友们偷偷进入洞穴并被困→Victor发现并救援可展开的点：1.在此次经历后，William和他的朋友们可能会对Victor生活方式有新的认识和尊重,并向他道歉，并向他学习关于森林和生存技能的知识。(理解与尊重)2.William等也会对自己的行为负责，并接受他们对父母和老师的欺骗的后果。(诚实)3.这个经历可能会让William等学会更加尊重大自然，并理解到冒险行为可能带来的危险。(人与自然/自我)试水作文续写第一段：Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.Hegatheredsomeflashlights,ashovel

andafirst-aidkit,knowingSarah

mightbeinjured.

Racingbacktothecave,hereassuredthepanickedteens:

"Staystrong.

I'vebroughtsomesuppliestohelpgetyouout."

Usingtheshovel,Victorworkedarduouslyto

removetheweighty,fallenrocks.

With

repeatedscoops

oftheshovel(

这里repeated是想和原文Victor住了木屋很多年做出对应),

Williamandotherteenagerscould

feel

apoundingintheir

heads(脑中开始感悟)yetalsoaslightsenseofreliefastheygotclosertofreedom.

Thefirst-aidteamarrivedandhelpedVictor.

Finally,afterwhatfeltlikeaneternity,thelastrockwasmoved.

续写第二段：Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.

Theirfaceswerestreakedwithdirtandreliefastheysawtheeveningsky.

Thegroupthankedthefirst-aidteam,andturnedtoVictor,lookingathimwithfacesfilledwithgratitude."Vitor,Weapologizeforthe

mockeryyesterday.Andwedowanttothankyou.

Yourlifestyleandexperiencereallymattered"their

voicechokedwith

newfoundrespect.

Therewasmoretolearnfromthishumbleforesterthantheyhadinitiallythought.

Underthesoft

illumination

ofthemoon,theymadetheirwayhome,recognizingthat

theiradventurehadturnedintoalessontheywouldcarrythroughlife.附：官方参考范文Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.

Afteralittlewhile,Victorgotbacktotheentrancewithashovelandaflashlight."Hey!I'mback!"heshouted,assuringthekidsthathewouldrescuethem.Then,hebegandiggingthroughtherocksattheentrance.Itwasn'teasyforonemantodigthroughtherocks,buthewastryinghisbest.Meanwhile,WilliamandhisfriendstriedtostaycalmandtoldSarahnottoworry.Afewminuteslater,Williamandhisfriendscouldseetheflashlightshinethroughthecave'sentrance,whichmadethemexcited.Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.

Fortunately,Sarahfeltbetter.Justthen,medicalworkersarrivedandexaminedthechildrencarefullytomakesuretheywereOK.WilliamlookedatVictorwhowaswornoutandregrettedmakingfunofhimwhenthey