2024届高考英语二轮复习Sweet Valentine encounter 作文范文6篇

第第页2024届高考英语二轮复习SweetValentineencounter作文范文6篇读后续写原题目：

[1]Ilookedaroundattheotherpatientswaitingtoseethedoctor.MaybetheyallhadmoreromanticplansfortheeveningonthisValentine’sDay,butfornowthegroupseemedanti-social.Threepeoplehadtheirheadsdown,staringatcellphones.Anotherwasabsorbedinamagazine.Thereceptionisttappedathercomputer.Everyonewasintheirownlittleworld.

[2]ButIcouldn’tjudgethemforit.Iwouldprobablybeburiedinmycellphonetoo--ifIhadn’tforgottentochargeitbeforeIlefthome.Itwouldhavebeennicetostrikeupaconversationtopassthetimeonthisday,adayofloveandfriendship.InsteadIsatpatientlyinmyplasticchairasacoupleofnewpeopletookdistantseats.

[3]“RobertaThedoctor’sreadyforyou,”thenursecalled.AtleastI’llhavesomekindofhumanconnection,Ithought.

[4]Mycheckupwentwell,andIbreezedoutoftheofficetomylittleHondainaspacerightoutfront.Igotinandturnedthekey.Nothing.Oh,no.Notagain.I’dsentthecartothegarageseveraltimesalreadyforthisveryproblemandthoughtithadfinallybeenfixed.

[5]IreachedformycellphonetocallAAA--thenremembered.Itwasdead,likemycar.Iwouldhavetousethephoneinside.AfewpeopleglancedupwhenIcamebackintothewaitingroom,thenquicklywentbacktowhattheyweredoing.Iwentstraighttothereceptiondesk,butthereceptionistwasnotthere.SoIturnedbacktothepeopleinthewaitingroom.

[6]“Iwouldn’tnormallydothis,”Isaidtothegroup,hopingthatIsoundedapologetic.Severalpeopleturnedtowardmetolisten.“Butmycarwon’tstart...”

[7]Thenursepoppedherheadintotheroom.“Youintrouble,Roberta”shesaid.“I’llgoandtakealook.”Ifollowedthenurseoutside.AsIpassedthroughthedoor,Ifeltsomeonewasbehindme.

Para.1:Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.

Para.2:Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.

参考范文1

Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.Abitpuzzled,Iwenttomycarandslidintothedriver'sseat.(承接首句,推进情节)Oneofthemcalled“Popyourhood!”SoIpressedthebutton.(自然过渡,衔接人物)Severalothersbentatthehip,presumablyleaningintochecktheengine.(铺垫下文)“Thescrewisloose,”oneassuredme,“Trustme.Iusedtobeamechanic”.Havingfetchedthetoolfromhiscar,hebegantotwistit.Itwasnotlongbeforehestraighteneduptorest,rubbinghisback.Unexpectedly,theotherpatientsjustvolunteeredtotakehisturndespitetheirownhealthcondition.(细节描写,情节推进)Whenthe“mechanic”gaveathumbs-up,everyonecalledoutinunison,“Tryitnow!”(衔接下文)

Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.Theengineturnedoverimmediately.Acheerwentup.(承接首句,推进情节)Severalhandsshutthehood.“Don’tmakeanystopsonthewayhome,”the“mechanic”said.“Keepthecarrunningtillthebatterygetsagoodcharge.”(语言描写,丰满人物,铺垫主题)Ibackedmycaroutofthespace,thenpausedtowaveatthecrowdofpeoplewho’dsavedtheday.(完整故事)MyHondaneverstalledagain.Itturnsoutthatmywaitingroomteamhaddoneabetterjobthanmygarageeverdid.Iguessthat’sjustwhathappenswhenpeoplecometogether.Andthere’snobettervalentinethanthat.(引出主题,呼应前文)

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Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.BeforeIutteredmyconfusion,amalepatientsmiled,“Wemayalsolendahelpinghand.”Noddingathimappreciatively,Iturnedround,pacedforwardandunlockedthecar.AsIsettledontheseat,ayoungmandrovehiscartowardsunexpectedly,wavingaleadinhishandoutofthewindow.NosoonerhadIrespondedthanheboomedoutthatIprobablygotaflatbattery.Someotherpatientsaroundturningontheflashlightsoftheircellphonesspontaneously,theyoungmancheckedthepartsandconnectedtheleadshortly.Startlingandgratefully,Iwasaskedtogiveatry.

Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.Withthefamiliarhummingoftheenginecomingbacktomyears,thecheeringswelledfromtheassemblepatients.“Safedrive!”thenurseandthecoupleenjoinedme,whileothersallfannedout,biddingfarewellwithbriskwhistlesandwavingarms.TheirfiguresstoodoutstarklyagainsttheyellowheadlightsofmylittleHonda,likethegoldenstarsinthedarksky.Thoughwhatlayonmyfrontpassengerseatwassome“gifts”fromthedoctorratherthanchocolatesonthisValentine’sDay,myheartwasdefinitelycrammedfullofsweetnessandsatisfaction.

参考范文3

Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.Alittleconfused,Iwenttomycarandgotintothedriver'sseat.Oneofthemshouted,"Openyourenginecover!",soIpushedthebutton.Severalothersbentatthewaist,probablytoleaninandchecktheengine."Thethingisabitloose,"oneofthemassuredme,"trustme.Iusedtobeacarmechanic."Aftertakingthetoolfromhiscar,hebegantoturnit.Beforelong,hewassittingupandrubbinghisback.Unexpectedly,theotherpatients,despitetheirownhealthconditions,volunteeredtotakehisturn.Whenthe"mechanic"gavethethumbsup,theyallshoutedinagreement,"Tryitnow!

Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.Theenginestartedimmediately.Acheerwentup.Severalhandsclosedtheenginetop."Don'tstoponthewayhome,"saidthe"mechanic"."Keepthecarrunninguntilthebatteryiswellcharged."Ipulledmycaroutofthelot,thenstoppedtowavetothecrowdofpeoplewho'dsavedtheday.MyHondaneverbrokedownagain.Itturnedoutthatmywaitingroomteamhaddoneabetterjobthanmygarageeverdid.Iguessthat'swhathappenswhenpeoplegettogether.Andthere'snobetterValentinethanthat.

参考范文4

Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.Apuzzleflashedinmymindwhethertheyjustcametoseemyembarrassment.Butwhenseeingtheirworriedexpression,Iknewtheopposite.BeforeIarrivedatmydeadcar,someonehadbeenonefootaheadofme,checkingwhatwaswrongwithitonearth.Smilingathim,Ihandedhimthekey,waitingforagoodresult.Obviously,thepatientshowedgreattalentinfixingcars.Afterhavingcheckedallthepossibilitiesraisedbyotherpatients,helocatedwheretheproblemlayandtriedtofixit.Hisconfidencemeltedmyworries.Fewminuteslater,hesaidIcouldtryitnow.(105words)

Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.Tomypleasantsurprise,thecarcamebacktolife,itsengineworkingmerrily.Ithankedthegiftedpatients,bowingtothemagainandagain.Nobeautifulwordscoulddescribemyearnestgratitudetothegroupseeminganti-socialminutesbefore.Wavinggoodbyetothoselovelyandhelpfulpeople,Iheadedforhomewithgreatdelightandsatisfaction,fornothingwasbetterthanagroupofstrangerswhowouldbegladtooffertheirtimelyassistancetome.Indeed,itwasn’tanordinaryValentine’sDay,butadayfullofloveandfriendship,whichwouldinspiremetoprovidenecessaryhelptothoseinneed.(104words)

参考范文5

Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.“Igrewuponafarm,”oneofthemensaidasIslidintothedriver’sseat.“Somethingwasforeverontheblink.”“Popyourhood!”someonecalled.IpressedthefirstbuttonIsaw,butImistakenlyopenedthefueldoor,whichmadeeveryonelaugh.Eventually,severalpeoplecheckedtheengine,andoneformermechanicamongthemclaimedthatthebatteryterminalwasloose,offeringtofixitwithtoolshehadinhistrunk.However,duetohisneuropathy,heneededsomeonetotwisttheterminal.Aguyinavestandtievolunteered.“Idon’tknowdiddlyaboutcars,”hesaid.“ButIcantwistsomething!”Hedisappearedunderthehood.Whenthemechanicgaveathumbs-up,everyonecalledoutinunison,“Try’ernow!”

Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.Theengineturnedoverimmediately.Acheerwentup.Severalhandsshutthehood.“Don’tmakeanystopsonthewayhome,”thefarmersaid.“Keepthecarrunningtillthebatterygetsagoodcharge.”Ibackedmycaroutofthespace,thenpausedtowaveatthecrowdofpeoplewho’dsavedtheday.MyHondaneverstalledagain.Turnsout,mywaitingroomteamhaddoneabetterjobthanmygarageeverdid.Iguessthat’sjustwhathappenswhenpeoplecometogether.Andthere’snobettervalentinethanthat.

参考范文6

Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.Thoughwonderingwhethertheyweresimplycomingfortherideorreallymeanttohelpout,Iopenedthecardoor,insertedthekeyinthelockedandturnedthekey.Still,i