2024届高考英语复习读后续写练习：环保主题

高考英语读后续写语篇练习绿色环保主题1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ididn’tseethethinplastictaperunningacrossthebreadbagwhenIputthebreadinmyshoppingcartorwhenIcheckedout.Itwasn’tuntilIunpackedthebreadathomethatIrealizedthatI’dbrokentherulesagain.ThatstupidplastictapejoinedthelonglistofmistakesImadeinjustoneweekoftryingtoeatplastic-free.Lastmonth,Ichallengedmyselftopurchaseaweek’sworthoffoodwithoutbringinghomeanyplastic.Thatmeantnoyogurtcontainersorplasticpackages.Ichoseabudgetof$115(roughlyhalf-waybetweentheaverageweeklygrocerybillforafamilyoftwoinMassachusetts).OnSaturdayafternoon,Ipulledintotheparkinglotofawell-knownzero-wasteshoppingcenter.Istartedintheproducesection,whereItypicallygotaplasticbagoforganicbabycarrots.Thistime,Icouldnotgotherebecauseeveryvegetableintheorganicsectionwaspackedinplasticcontainers.ButIfoundsomebeautifulcarrotsamongthenon-organicproduce.ThenIsawtheplasticpricelabelshangingofftheirrubberbands.Irolledmycartpastthegreenbeansandgrapes,allinsidetheplastic.Iweighedlooseapples,onionsandsweetpotatoes.Myanxietykickedin—afeelingthatIwouldn’thaveenough.So,Iboughtaheadofcabbage.4续写原文Itappedpricesintothecalculatoronmyphone.Leavingtheproducesection,Iwasingoodshape,at$32.Itwastimetosearchforprotein.Iheadedtothemeatcounter.Again,everythingwasprepackagedinplastic.Butthemanbehindtheglasskindlyagreedtoputsomechickenandmeat,separately,inpaperbags.Togethertheywere$21.Tofu,cheese,yogurtandprettymucheverythinginthedairysectionwereprepackagedinplastic.Eventhebottledmilkhadaplasticcap.Buttherewerelotsofeggsinthosepaperbags.5段首句Para1：Atcheckout,Istillhad$62leftbutIcouldnotfindanythingelsewithoutplastic.

Para2：Atthemoment,IrealizedthatperhapsIshouldn’thavehadaimedtoohigh.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以购物为线索展开，讲述的是作者一开始想要尽量避免使用塑料，购物之后，最终明白不必苛求自己，量力而行就好。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Atcheckout,Istillhad$62leftbutIcouldnotfindanythingelsewithoutplastic.由第一段首句“结账时我还剩下62美元，但是我找不到其他没有用到塑料的东西。”可知，续写可以围绕作者面对这一情况的反应展开，包括描述作者的情绪，作者向购物中心的经理投诉的具体内容，以及经理的解释。10续写思路分析Para2：Atthemoment,IrealizedthatperhapsIshouldn’thavehadaimedtoohigh.由第二段首句“那一刻我意识到，也许我不应该把限塑目标定得太高。”可知，续写内容可包括作者对许多商品都使用塑料包装这一情况表示理解，以及调整自己的限塑目标。11续写思路分析续写线索因塑料包装过多而向经理投诉——经理解释——理解缘由——调整个人限塑目标12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①停业：closedown/shutdown②决定做某事：decidetodosth./determinetodosth.③减少：reduce/cutdown情绪类①生气的：angry/mad②快乐的：happy/pleased13续写素材可用句型：【高分句型1】Healsotoldmethatit’shardtoaddthatcosttothepriceoffood,andthatpaperbagsfornuts,beansorsnacksweren’tasattractiveonshelvesasplasticbags.（运用了that引导宾语从句）【高分句型2】Thus,IdecidedtojustreducetheplasticthatIusedonceandthrewaway.（运用了that引导的定语从句）【高分句型3】Anyway,IwashappythatIavoidedusing27plasticcontainersintheweek.（系表结构后接宾语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Atcheckout,Istillhad$62leftbutIcouldnotfindanythingelsewithoutplastic.SoIbecamealittlebitangryandcomplainedtothemanagerthatthereweretoomanythingsIcouldn’tbuyplastic-free.Therewasnodairyorjuice.Hesaidhe’sinterestedinusingmorerecyclablecontainers,buttheyweremuchmoreexpensive.Healsotoldmethatit’shardtoaddthatcosttothepriceoffood,andthatpaperbagsfornuts,beansorsnacksweren’tasattractiveonshelvesasplasticbags.16范文呈现Atthemoment,IrealizedthatperhapsIshouldn’thavehadaimedtoohigh.Afterall,mostcustomershadtoshopwiththeireyesontheirwallets.Themajorplasticproducerscouldnotbecloseddownimmediately.Thus,IdecidedtojustreducetheplasticthatIusedonceandthrewaway.Anyway,IwashappythatIavoidedusing27plasticcontainersintheweek.MaybeIcoulddobetter.17范文译文他对2017年6月的一次例行检查中的一次雪崩记忆犹新。“我们正要爬上一个400米长、海拔约5500米的山口，这对我们来说是最危险的地方，地面积雪深度高达两米，风很大，”施说。突然，石听到雷鸣般的声音，一团雪从山上滚落下来。施某迅速扑向岩石并抓住岩石，幸免于难，但受伤了。18范文译文在保护野生动物方面有很多艰苦的工作，但也有一些惊喜。施对大熊猫情有独钟。尽管他在保护区巡逻了三十年，但他只见过熊猫两次。为了录制保