观点对比类作文写作技巧课件

观点对比类作文写作技巧观点对比类作文1第四次周练作文假设你校英语社团举办以“批评还是表扬?”为主题的征文活动,请你以“ToCriticizeortoPraise”为题,写一篇英语短文内容主要包括:1.有些人认为:批评让人进步2.还有些人认为:表扬让人进步3.你更倾向于哪一种观点ToCriticizeortoPraise?第四次周练作文2Mainerrors:1审题不清本次作文是属于典型的正反观点型作文,文章的构思应)提出问题2)不同观点的对比3)说明自己的观点在表明自己观点部分,考生应旗帜鲜明的表明自己支持其中的一种观点,而不能持中立态度,模棱两可的说两种观点都有利弊。如Mainerrors:31)Inmyopinion,bothcriticismandpraiseareImportant2)Inmyview,bothpraiseandcriticismshouldbecombinedproperly.3)AsfarasI'mconcerned,itdependsondifferentstudents4)Inmyopinion,tocriticizeandtopraisebotharegoodPeopleshouldbecriticizedwhenmakingmistakes,whileheshouldbepraisedwhenmakingprogress1)Inmyopinion,bothcriticis4Betterversion1)AsfarasImconcernedStudentsalwayshavemuchpressureinstudy.Inthatcase,praisecangiveusconfidence.2)AsfarasI'mconcerned,thatistosay,beingcriticizedcanhelpusrealizeourmistakesandcorrectthemeasily3)Inmyopinion,SoIfinallythinkpraisingisthebestwaytomakepeoplegetgoodgrades.Betterversion52.表达错误1.Somestudentsthinkcriticizecanhelpthemimprovetheirstudy.Ibelievethatpraisegetprogress3.Theythinkpeoplelikeotherspraisethem4.Becausesomepeoplecan'tstandcriticize5.Somestudentsthinkthatitiscriticismthatletonehaveaprogress6.Praiseletusgainmoreinterestedinworkingandstudying.2.表达错误6Correction1.Somestudentsthinkcanhelpthemimprovetheirstudy2.Ibelievethatpraiseprogress.3.Theythinkpeoplelikeothersthem/like4.Becausesomepeoplecantstand5.Somestudentsthinkthatitiscriticismthatletone6.Praiseletusworkingandstudying.Correction7审题谋篇1.对同一件事情,人们常有不同的看法,即正反两种观点。在写作时,常使用般现在时。人称可以是第三人称和第一人称2.写作格式一般是1)提出问题(批评和表扬,哪种方法更易让人进步?)2)两种不同观点→对两种不同观点的论据(理由)一些人认为批评能使人进步。→理由(帮助其认识错误,并加以改正;能更好的从错误中汲取经验,避免再犯)些人认为表扬能使人进步。→理由(努力得到了认可,能激励人更加努力;能帮人建立自信,激励人的潜能)3)→发表自己的观点(理由)我认为表扬更能让人进步和成长。表扬不仅能让人获得自信,还能激发人们的创造力和潜能审题谋篇8参考词汇批评:tocriticize/criticizing/beingcriticized/criticism表扬:praise/praising/beingpraised取得进步/成长:makeprogress/getpromoted/gaingrowth/makesbimprove/getadvance/getimprovement激励:encouragesbtodo/inspiresbtodo/motivatesbtodo/beinspiredtodo.更易取得成功:bemorelikelytoachievesuccess认识到错误:realizeone’smistakes改正错误:correctmistakes汲取经验:1earnlessons/experiencefrom记住:keep/bearinmind参考词汇9Howtoorganizethewholepassage?Nexthaveatry.Howtoorganizethe10观点对比类作文写作技巧课件11观点对比类作文写作技巧课件12观点对比类作文写作技巧课件13观点对比类作文写作技巧课件14观点对比类作文写作技巧课件15观点对比类作文写作技巧课件16观点对比类作文写作技巧课件1