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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。SandrowasbornandgrewupinMilan.Untilhewas13yearsold,heneverwantedtoleavehishometown.Butlastyear,Sandro’sfather’sinvestmentwentbad,wipingoutthefamilyandsendinghisparentstoprison.Asateenagerunder16yearsold,SandrowasforcedtogotoNewcastleinthenortheastofEnglandtostaywithhisuncleLawrence.Sandrohadalotofdifficultiesinthenewenvironment.Hedidn’tlikethefoodinEngland.NobodycouldforecasttheweatherinNewcastle.Hehadtostartlearningthesecondforeignlanguageinhisnewschool.Pocketmoneywasnotenoughasusual.Almosteverysubjectwasachallengeforhim.Mostimportantly,hehadnofriends.Itseemednobodyknewhimandheknewnobodyintheschool.Onanearlysummerevening,whenSandrowasgoinghomealonefromschoolasusual,amancalledhimfrombehind.SandroturnedaroundandsawEddie,hisPEteacher,standinginfrontofhim.“Youknow,theschoolwillhaveaswimmingcompetitionnextmonth.Therewillbeallkindsofraces.Willyouparticipate?”Eddieasked.SandrotookalookatEddiewithdoubtandanswered,“Yousure?Me?No.Iwon’t.Icanswim,butI’mslowerthanasnail.”Eddiesmiledandthensaid,“Yes.Indeed.Youare,inbreaststroke(蛙泳),inbackstroke,andinbutterfly,butnotinfreestyle.Sojointhefreestylerace!200-meterfreestyleisthegamesuitableforyou.”Sandrowasspeechlessatthatmoment.Hehadneverknownsomeoneintheschoolwasobservinghimandcaringforhim.“Idon’tthinkIcanwinanything.”Sandrowasstillalittlepuzzled.“Butyoumaygetmorerecognitionandconsequentlyyoucanmakesomefriends.Thatismoreimportantthanprizes.”Eddierespondedimmediately.Havinghesitatedforawhile,Sandroagreedtohaveatry.注意:1.
续写词数应为150
左右;2.
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Everyafternoonforthenextmonth,Sandrotrainedreallyhard.
Sandrodivedintothepoolconfidentlylikeothercompetitors.
比赛类续写素材库:01活动/比赛前努力准备1.Thesettingsunwitnessinghisunremittingefforts(不懈的努力),hekeptsharpeninghisskillregardlessofhisachingmuscle.2.Notuntilthedarknessswallowedeverythingonthehorizon(黑夜吞噬地平线上的一切)didhestoptraininganddraggedachinglegshome.(倒装:notuntil...didhe..直到...才)3.Thefollowingdayswitnessedhimpracticingfreestylehard.4.Hedraggedhisachinglegsdowntheroadtohome,armstremblingwithfatigue.(独立主格:疲惫的细节描写)遇到困难/挫折(曲折性原则)1.Hardashetrained,hestillmadelittleprogress,whichputhimonthevergeofcollapse.2.Thefactthathemadelittleprogressthrewhimintolowspirits.受到鼓舞(人物B互动)1.Wheneverhewasexhausted/fulloffatigue,Eddie’swordsechoed/flashedinto/poppedintohismind,andsuppliedenergytohim/whichinstillpowerintohim.2.Hewasabouttoquit/giveupwhenmyteachercastanencouragingglanceathim.(beabouttodo...when...正要做某事的时候,突然...)3.Agustofexcitementsurgedthroughhimashemadeananotherattempt.02比赛中(过程描写)1.Thencamethebigday.(倒装)2.Withthesoundofthestartinggunpiercing(穿透/刺破)throughtheair,theracebeganasexpected.3.Icouldfeelthatalltheeyeswerefixedonus.Astrongsenseofnervousnesssurgedthroughme.我能感觉到所有的眼睛都盯着我们。一种强烈的紧张感涌上我的全身。4.Thenthenextfewminuteswitnessedfiercecompetitionbetweenothercompetitors.5.Sodynamicwashethatheswamswifterthanever.Withhisarmwaving,hecutthroughthewatersmoothlylikeaflyingfish.(so+adj+谓+主+that...)他活力四射,游得比以前更快了。他挥动着手臂,像飞鱼一样平稳地划水。6.Sandrofoundhimselfflexiblelikeadolphininthewater,propelling(推动)himselfforwardswiftly.(比喻)7.Swiftlyadjustinghisbreath,heswamforwardlikeanarrowoffthebowstring.(像离弦的箭)8.150meterscovered,hewasleftbehindbytwocompetitors.Inthelast50meters,heswamtothefinishlinewithallhisstrength,withhisarmspushingforwardfastandhislegshittingthewaterhard.(游泳的过程)9.Myheartdropped,becauseIwasafraidallthetrainingthatIhaddonewasinvain.Yettherewassomethinginsidemepushingmetowinthecompetition.Myheartbeatingwildly,Itriedmybestandgotclosertotheotherrunners.03比赛后(名次+互动+感悟)1.WhentheresultwasannouncedthatSandrowonfirstplace,otherplayersrushedtohimandcongratulatedhim,theaudiencesinthestadiumburstingintothunderousapplauseandcheers.(获奖+祝贺)2.whentheracefinished,neverinhiswildestdream(做梦也没有想到)hadheexpectedthathewonthefirstprize(倒装)./hecamefirst/tookthefirstplace/clinched(赢得)thechampionintherace.(获得名次)3.Withbeadsofsweatrunningdownmyfaceandmyheartpoundinginmychest,Iknewthatthegrueling(艰辛的)hoursofpractice/painstakingeffortshadpaidoffasIclaimedthetopspotonthepodium(领奖台).汗珠顺着我的脸流下来,我的心在胸腔里怦怦直跳,我知道艰苦的练习时间得到了回报,因为我在领奖台上占据了头把交椅。4.Uponfinishingthetalk/competition,Itrotted(小跑)towardsMareyaandgaveherabearhug.Meanwhile,thunderous/astormofapplauserangthroughtheclassroom.5.Asthefinalwhistleblew,Thecheersfromthecrowdechoed/rangthroughthestadium,andIcouldn'thelpbutfeelarushofexcitementasIbasked/wasimmersedinthegloryofourvictory.(can'thelpbutdo不得不)人群的欢呼声回荡在体育场内,当我沉浸在胜利的荣耀中时,我不禁感到一阵兴奋。6.Despitethephysicalandmentalexhaustion,Icouldn'twipethesmileoffmyfaceasIreflectedontheincrediblememoriesandlessonslearnedfromthecompetition.7.Itishishardworkandpersistencethatwonhimrecognitionandmorefriends.(结尾强调句:回扣主题)8.Thisexperienceservedasareminderthatthebestwaytogainrecognition/fitintoanewenvironmentistodisplayyourselfandmakeyourselfknown.(结尾句)9.Itisnottheluckycharmbroughtbyice-creambuthisowndiligence,persistenceandconfidencethatcontributedtohissuccessinswimmeet(游泳比赛).参考范文:Everyafternoonforthenextmonth,Sandrotrainedreallyhard.
Startingposition,startingdive,turning,pushingoff,touchingthetimingpad,alldetails,hepracticedthemoverandover.Howeverhewasexhausted,Eddie'swordsechoedinhismindandsuppliedextraenergytohim.“MaybeIcan'tbethechampionofthegame,butIcanbethechampionformyself.”Hespokeinalowmumbletohimselfafterhefinishedthelasttraining.Finally,t
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