高三英语提纲作文

兰溪第一中学周巧玲Tel:83886819HowtoImproveOurWriting

兰溪第一中学周巧玲Tel:83886819HowtoImproveOurWriting

书面表达一：（改编自06年全国卷III）假定你是李华,北京人，2008年奥运会将在北京举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信.内容应包括:个人情况：年龄、性别、学历个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况承诺：提供最佳服务注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯生词：申请–---apply(v.),application(n.)；志愿者–volunteer书面表达一：（改编自06年全国卷III）假定你是李华,北京人，2008年奥运会将在北京举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信.内容应包括:个人情况：年龄、性别、学历个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况承诺：提供最佳服务注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯生词：申请–---apply(v.),application(n.)；志愿者–volunteerDearSirorMadam,MynameisLiHua.Iwouldliketoworkasavolunteerforthe2008Olympics.I’maboyandI’m18.IwasborninBeijing.I’mamiddleschoolstudent.Iwanttodosomethingforthe2008Olympics.First,I’mgoodatEnglish.Second,Ilikesports.Third,I’mgoodatcommunicatingwithothers.Fourth,Ilikehelpingothers.Last,I’mfamiliarwithBeijing.Itisimportantforthework.Ifyougivemethechance,I’lltrymybesttoofferthebestservicetoothers.Pleaseacceptmyapplication.Iwon’tdisappointyou!Lookingforwardtoyourreplay.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,MynameisLiHua.Iwouldliketoworkasavolunteerforthe2008Olympics.I’maboyandI’m18.IwasborninBeijing.I’mamiddleschoolstudent.Iwanttodosomethingforthe2008Olympics.First,I’mgoodatEnglish.Second,Ilikesports.Third,I’mgoodatcommunicatingwithothers.Fourth,Ilikehelpingothers.Last,I’mfamiliarwithBeijing.Itisimportantforthework.Ifyougivemethechance,I’lltrymybesttoofferthebestservicetoothers.Pleaseacceptmyapplication.Iwon’tdisappointyou!Lookingforwardtoyourreplay.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,MynameisLiHua.Iwouldliketoworkasavolunteerforthe2008Olympics.I’maboyandI’m18.IwasborninBeijing.I’mamiddleschoolstudent.Iwanttodosomethingforthe2008Olympics.First,I’mgoodatEnglish.Second,Ilikesports.Third,I’mgoodatcommunicatingwithothers.Fourth,Ilikehelpingothers.Last,I’mfamiliarwithBeijing.Itisimportantforthework.Ifyougivemethechance,I’lltrymybesttoofferthebestservicetoothers.Pleaseacceptmyapplication.Iwon’tdisappointyou!Lookingforwardtoyourreplay.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuathesamesubject“I”simplewordssimpletransitions（过渡词）

simplesentencesProblems&waysofimprovingthem:Usedifferentsentences(使用多样句型)

Changethesubject(改变主语)Usegoodtransitions(使用过渡连接)Chooseadvancedphrases(选取高级词汇)Ⅰ.Changethesubject(改变主语)：1.I’llofferthebestservicetoothers.→________________________________ismygoal.

(-ing分词作主语)→Itismygoalto______________________________.(

(用it形式主语)2.Ilikehelpingothers.→__________________________________________.

(-ing分词作主语等)→__________________________________________.

(用it形式主语或宾语)Offeringthebestservicetoothersofferthebestservicetoothers.Helpingothersismyfavorite/whatIlikemost/….Itismyfavoritetohelpothers.Ⅱ.Chooseadvancedphrases(选取高级词汇)be

ofgreatimportancebereadyto/bewillingto…Word

PhraseIlikehelpingothers.2.Ilikesports.3.Thisisimportantforthework.befondof/beinterestedin/havegreatinterestin…Ⅱ.Chooseadvancedphrases(选取高级词汇)Simplephrase

AdvancedphraseI’mgoodatEnglish.2.IwanttodosomethingfortheOlympics.3.I’lltrymybesttoofferthebestservice.befluentin/haveagoodknowledgeof/haveagiftformakeacontributionto/contributeto/devote…to…sparenoeffort/makeeveryeffort…III.Usetransitions(使用过渡连接)1.Phrases:(选取高级连接词)表层次顺序，罗列增加：First,…second,…third,…fourth,…last…→__________________,__________________,__________________,_________________,_________________→__________________,___________________,__________________,__________________,___________________Tobegin/startwithfurthermoreinadditionfinallyFirstandforemostbesideswhat’smorelastbutnotleastinadditiontothatmoreoverIII.Usetransitions(使用过渡连接)2.Sentences:（加上常见句型开头）I’mfamiliarwithBeijing.→Anotherreason___________thefactthatI’mfamiliarwithBeijing.→Themost__________thingisthatI’mfamiliarwithBeijing.→Thereisno________thatI’mfamiliarwithBeijingbecauseIwasborninBeijing.→It’s_________tosaythatI’mfamiliarwithBeijingbecause

IwasborninBeijing.

liesinimportantdoubtneedlessⅣ.Usedifferentsentences(使用多样句型）1.I’mfamiliarwithBeijing.It’simportantforthework.

I’mfamiliarwithBeijing,___________________________________________________.(定语从句)2.I’maboyandI’m18.IwasborninBeijing.I’mamiddleschoolstudent._____________________________________________________________________________.(定语从句/分词作状语)whichisofgreatimportancefortheworkBorninBeijing,I’man18-year-oldboy,whoisstudyinginamiddleschool(studyinginamiddleschool)Ⅳ.Usedifferentsentences(使用多样句型）3.Iwon’tdisappointyou.

（句首否定词倒装）4.Ifyougivemethechance,I’llofferthebestservicetoothers.If________thechance,I’llofferthebestservicetoothers.(使用省略）Onnoaccount(决不)_____________________.willIdisappointyougiven６.I’llofferthebestservicetoothers.→Itis_____________that_________________.

(使用强调句）5.Ilikesportsverymuch.

I________likesportsverymuch.(使用强调）doⅣ.Usedifferentsentences(使用多样句型）thebestserviceI’lloffertoothers国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简历。假设你是王姗，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历。

注意：1、词数不少于60。2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

书面表达二：０６年北京卷thePeaceandFriendshipSummerCampphotographyStepsofwritingagoodarticleReadtheinstructions

carefullyanddecidethestyle.

Followtypicalpatterns

Listthekeypoints.

Putthekeypointsintosentences.

（列提纲）（明审题）（选句型）（妙联句）(细复查)Developthesentencesintopassage.Checkyourwork.书面表达二：０６年北京卷Theoutlineofthepassage（提纲）：Para1.:

IntroduceyourselfPara2.:

ReasonsofjoiningthePeaceandFriendshipSummerCamp

Onepossibleversion（参考范文）MynameisWangShan,andI’ma16-year-oldgirl(whois)studyinginBeijingYangguangMiddleSchool.Ihavevarietiesofinterests.Firstofall,enjoyingmusicismyfavorite/whatIlikemost.Inadditiontothat,I’minterestedinphotographybecauseitallowsmetorecordthebeautifulmomentsinmylife.Beinggoodatcommunicatingwithothers,Imakemanyfriends.What’smore,I’malwaysreadytohelpothers.

Onepossibleversion（参考范文）IwouldliketojointhePeaceandFriendshipSummerCampformanyreasons.ThefirstreasonliesinthefactthatIIlovelife;Ilovenature;andIlovepeace.Butthemostimportantreasonisthat

Ithinkit

agreatopportunitytomakefriendswithpeoplefromdifferentcountriesandlearnabouttheircultures.HomeworkPleaseperfectthecompositionafterclass.FinishthethirdwritingGoodbyeHopeeveryoneofyoucangetahighermarkinwriting!；/德力西德力西电气德力西官方旗舰店hwh08jyc手脚。这次石子事件，已经是个很严肃的警告了。明秀不得不决定，从今起，对宝音不再作小儿科的欺侮。下次出手，就一定得是蕴足力道的一击，可别怪明秀下狠心了！福珞，是明秀一定要捧去宫里的人，老太太主意未定，宝音休想在此时盖过福珞风头去！宝音低