读后续写课件

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读后续写10月考

读后续写1Steps步骤：

AReadingBPredictingCWritingcharactersplotthemesortoutkeyinformationproperlanguageSteps步骤：AReadingBPredictingCW2CharactersJack------Linda----Jack'swifeneedmoneyforoperationaclerkatthelocalbankplanatheft(n偷盗)CharactersJack------Jack'swi3PlotHowdidJacksteal?Didhesucceed?Thenextday,hewenttoworkasusual.Everythingseemednormal:hejokedwithhisworkmatesandhelpedhisclientsashealwaysdid.Butnoonenoticedthathehadbroughtabiggersuitcasetowork,insteadofthesmallonehealwayscarried.At5:00pm,thebankclosed,andtheclerksandtheguardshadallgonehome.However,atthatmoment,Jackwasinthebathroom,andtheguardsdidn'tnoticehim,ofcourse.Whenthenoisescomingfromthestreetwerereplacedbysilenceandeverythingturneddark,Jackcameoutfromthebathroom.Hefirstcutthelinesofthealarmsandmonitorswithtoolsfromhisnewsuitcase.Hewasalltoofamiliarwiththeequipmentsincehehadbeenworkingtherefor8yearsandhadbeenstudyingthesecuritysystemforthepast30days.Usingaspecialkeyandsomeothertools,hetheneasilyopenedthedoorsofthesafes.Thebank'ssecuritysystemwasn'tverygood,whichallowedJacktotakealotofmoney.Severalminuteslater,Jackleftthebankwithaheavybagfilledwithmoney.PlotHowdidJacksteal?Didhe4PlotHowdidJacksteal?Didhesucceed?Thenextday,hewenttoworkasusual.Everythingseemednormal:hejokedwithhisworkmatesandhelpedhisclientsashealwaysdid.Butnoonenoticedthat

hehadbroughtabiggersuitcasetowork,insteadofthesmallonehealwayscarried.At5:00pm,thebankclosed,andtheclerksandtheguardshadallgonehome.However,atthatmoment,Jackwasinthebathroom,andtheguardsdidn'tnoticehim,ofcourse.Whenthenoisescomingfromthestreetwerereplacedbysilenceandeverythingturneddark,Jackcameoutfromthebathroom.Hefirstcutthelinesofthealarmsandmonitorswithtoolsfromhisnewsuitcase.Hewasalltoofamiliarwiththeequipmentsincehehadbeenworkingtherefor8yearsandhadbeenstudyingthesecuritysystemforthepast30days.Usingaspecialkeyandsomeothertools,hetheneasilyopenedthedoorsofthesafes.Thebank'ssecuritysystemwasn'tverygood,whichallowedJacktotakealotofmoney.Severalminuteslater,Jackleftthebankwithaheavybagfilledwithmoney.Withfullpreparation,Jackmanagedtostealalotofmoneywithoutbeingnoticed.PlotHowdidJacksteal?Didhe5underlinedwordswife;money;operation;suffering;thebank;theft;suitcase;theclerks;theguards;thesecuritysystemsortoutcharacters:place:others:wifethebank;money;operation;sufferingtheclerks;theguards;thesecuritysystem;

theft;suitcase

underlinedwordswife;money;o6KeyinformationParagraph1:AfterJackhadbeengonefromthebankforawhile,thealarms(警报器)begantoring.WasJackcaughtimmediately?notverylikelyWhatwouldhappenafterthealarmsrang?Thetheftcausedgreatattentionfrompeople.WhatwouldJackdo?KeyinformationParagraph1:Was7Paragraph2:Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman.Whywashethemostunluckyman?Asamanagerofthebank,whatwouldhappentohim?betoblame;beremovedfromthepositionHowdidJackfeel?ashamed;guiltyWhat'stheresult?Jack——tellthetruth;bepunishedLinda?Paragraph2:Whywashethemos8Jack:workasusual——feltguilty——tellthetruth——bepunishedmanager:betoblame——beremovedfrom/befiredLinda:besaved/dieJack:9存在问题逻辑混乱，与上文不符脑洞乱开--Para.2，无视首句话信息人物关系不明，节外生枝缺乏常识——无视法制个别关键词理解不到位--alarm,manager,unlucky语言表达不清——几句话说不到重点；情节主线不清，

顺序混乱；语言错误影响整体表达存在问题逻辑混乱，与上文不符10未明确说明manager的不幸结果Jack心安理得逃脱法网，不符合价值观未明确说明manager的不幸结果11Jack按理已经离开一段时间了，与上文不符Jack按理已经离开一段时间了，与上文不符12读后续写课件13

情节基本清楚，符合基本逻辑，语言虽有错误，尚不影响整体表达。情节基本清楚，符合基本逻辑，语言虽有错误，尚不影响整体表达14Paragraph1:AfterJackhadbeengonefromthebankforawhile,thealarmsbegantoring.Thepolicearrivedatthebankveryquickly,onlytofindnoonethere.Thenextdaywasareallyspecialdayforthetown,which

wasfilledwithnewspaperandTVreporterscoveringthestrangetheft.Theclerksatthebankwerebusydiscussingthecase,ofcourse,includingJack.Thepolicecouldonlypromisetocatchthethievesassoonaspossible,eventhoughnoclueshadbeenfoundyet.Paragraph1:15Paragraph2:Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman.Heseemedtobetheonlypersontoblameandwasremovedfromhisposition.Atlast,withenoughmoneyforheroperation,Jack'swife