高三英语二轮复习读后续写之弹钢琴的妈妈讲义

高三杭州英语二模读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ASpecialRecitalWewereinourlate20swithachildwhenmyhusband,Ralph,finallygraduatedfromcollege."OK,nowIdeserveapiano,"Iblurtedoutwhenhesatdownforlunchjustbeforethegraduationceremony.Alookofsurprisecrossedhisface."Wecouldneveraffordapiano.Aftersomanyyearsofhardwork,wegotyouthroughschool.NowIdeserveapiano,"Irepeated.Severalmonthslater,Ralph,withhelp,movedtheuprightpianoweboughtfor$100intoourcottage'stinyarcheddiningroom.Itsmelledalittlemusty,buthadgreattone.Ralphstartedgraduateschool,leavingnomoneyforprivatepianolessons.ThefirstthingthatcametomymindwasSantaMonicaCityCollege-maybeitofferedpianolessons.Skimmingthecatalog,IdancedaroundtheroomwhenIfoundaclassatthesametimetheboyswereatpreschool.Practicing,however,wasnotsoeasy.Four-yearoldredheadedDennycrawledoutofbedintheeveningonaregularbasis.Thatwasmytimetopractice.He’dpadoutofthebedroominhissleeperandclimbuponthebenchwithme,Soonhebeganplinking(发出叮铃声)onthehighkeys.Itriedtoignorehim.Helistenedtotheechoesofthekeysandplinkedsomemore.DoingallIcoulddotokeepfocusedonmyownpracticing,Icontinuedtoignorehim.Thispracticepatternbecameaneveningroutine.Afterawhile,Ididn'tevenhearhimanymore.Ralphstudied.Dennyplinkedonthehighkeys,andIfocusedonmypiecefortheend-of-the-termrecital(独奏会).

Thateveningcame.However,Ralphsaidhewasbusypreparingforthemidtermsandcouldn'twatchDenny.Pacingbackandforth,Ishookmyheadtryingtofigureoutwhattodo.Timewasrunningout.IbundledupDenny-withhissleeperonanddroveofftotherecitalwithhim.“We’llsitinthefrontrowDenny,”Iwhispered.”YouhavetobeveryquietandlistenwhenIamplaying.”Henodded,said“Uh-huh,”andwesatdown.Paragraph1:Dennyheldmyhand,butthenmyturncame.

Paragraph2:Asmallbodyclimbedontothepianobenchnexttome.

Step1

思考问题Para1：1.我是如何安抚Denny的？2.

我在舞台上的心理以及表现？3.我是如何注意到Denny的？Para2：1.这时我的反应？2.这场独特演奏的结果是什么？3.我的感悟？

Step2构思词块和句式，连词成句(文章协同表达也很重要）Para1：1.当我上台表演前，叮嘱儿子安静、乖一点：松手+蹲下+示意他+转身走向舞台Lettinggoof

hishand,I

croucheddown

besidehim,

strokinghisheadgently

andwhispering“It’sMom’sturntoplay.StayhereandI’llbebacksoon”.ThenI

mademywayfor

thestage.2.当我在台上表演时：忐忑+激动+深呼吸+坐下开始演奏+给自己加油鼓劲(心理活动)+演奏很顺利Restlessnessmingledwithexcitement,I

seatedmyself

onthebench,

murmuringtomyself“Youarejustgoingto

shine”,andstartedtoplay.Myfingers

danced

overblackandwhitekeys

asif

theyhadamindof

theirown.沉浸在演奏中，但是台下观众突然有点骚动SoimmersedwasI

intheplayingthatI

gotcarriedaway---until

gaspsofsurprisedrewmebacktoreality.Para2：

1.Denny坐在我身边，我的复杂情绪：从未演练过这样的画面+震惊+努力保持镇定+把演出当成eveningroutine。NeverhadI

rehearsed

anythinglikethishappening.

Imissedseveralnotes,

completelythunderstruck.

Thoughnumbwithshock,Isoon

regainedmycomposure,takingthisasoureveningroutine.

2.我沉着地和Denny一起完成演出

投去让人安心的笑容+继续演奏(withDennyplinkingonthehighkeys)+结束演出+鞠躬+观众鼓掌CastingDennyareassuringsmile,Icontinuedmyperformance,

focusingonmyownpiece

withDennyplinkingonthehighkeys

asusual.Everyting

turnedoutsmooth.

Theinstant

wefinishedthelastnote,theaudience

eruptedintorapturousapplauseandwildcheers.

3.我的思考Flawedas

myrecitalwas,

itwas

thePerfectimperfection-Denny’sjoin

that

madetherecital

one-in-a-million.

Step3连句成篇，书写优美

Dennyheldmyhand,butthenmyturncame.

Lettinggoof

hishand,I

croucheddown

besidehim,

strokinghisheadgently

and

whispering“It’sMom’sturntoplay.StayhereandI’llbebacksoon”.ThenI

mademywayforthestage.Restlessnessmingledwithexcitement,I

seatedmyself

onthebench,

murmuringtomyself

“Youarejustgoingtoshine”,

andstartedtoplay.Myfingers

danced

overblackandwhitekeys

asif

theyhadamindoftheirown.

SoimmersedwasI

intheplayingthatI

gotcarriedaway---until

gaspsofsurprisedrewmebacktoreality.

Asmallbodyclimbedontothepianobenchnexttome.It'sDenny!NeverhadIrehearsedanything

likethishappening.Imissedseveralnotes,

completelythunderstruck.

Thoughnumbwithshock,Isoon

regainedmycomposure,takingthisasoureveningroutine.

CastingDennyareassuringsmile,

Icontinuedmyperformance,focusingonmypiece

withDennyplinkingonthehighkeysasusual.Everything

turnedoutsmooth.

Theinstant

wefinishedthelastnote,

theaudienceeruptedintorapturousapplauseandwildcheers.Flawedas

myrecitalwas,

itwas

thePerfectimperfection-Denny’sjoin

that

madetherecital

one-in-a-million.参考范文：Paragraph1:Dennyheldmyhand,butthenmyturncame.

KissingmylittleDenny,Istrodetothestageasawarriortofinishmyinbornmission.Itisthetimetoechothecallhoveringinmymind.Itismystage!Itismyday!However,theglancefromtheaudiencesuffocatedme,aftersomanyyears,couldImanagetoperformhere?Asthelightcastingashadowonme,Ibeganmyjourney.Stepbystep,thenervousnessfadedaway,tunesplinkedfrommyfingersfinallydrownedmyintheworldofmusic.Stealingovermyshoulder,Icouldseemylittleboydancingwiththemelody.Paragraph2:Asmallbodyclimbedontothepianobenchnexttome.

ItwasmyDenny!Whoseappearanceonlyintensifiedmyterrorandpanic.However,mylittleboy,eyeswide

open

withwonderandexcitement,

seemedunawareofthesurroundingsbut

beganpli