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ContinuationWritingContinuationWriting1ThecostofasmileReflection1.Haveyougotahighscoreinthiswriting?2.Whatproblemsdoyouhave?OrWhydoyoufailtogetagoodresult?ThecostofasmileReflection12Doyouthinksuchkindofendingacceptable?1.Charliemovedtoanothercitywithhissonordaughter.2.Charliewasthebossofabigcompany,soheaskedKathytoworkwithhiminhiscompany.3.TowinKathy'ssmile,CharliegavelotsoftipstoKathy.Thentheywereinlovewitheachother.ButCharliewasseriouslyill.thefuneralMakesurethestorydevelopslogicallyandreasonably.Doyouthinksuchkindofendi3Whendoingcontinuationwriting,whatshouldwepayattentionto?thegivenpassage:Howmanywordsshouldwewrite?Howmanygivenunderlinedwordsshouldbeused?Howmanyparagraphsshouldwewrite?thecontinuationwritingpart:Ingeneral,howmanywordsarethere?Whendoingcontinuationwritin41.续写材料是一段350词以内的材料(一般为记叙文)。2.所续写短文的词数应为150左右。词数少于130词,从总分中减去2分;3.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。4.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。5.续写完成后,请用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。注意事项1.续写材料是一段350词以内的材料(一般为记叙文)。注意事5
Onedayhedidn'tcometotherestaurant.Shecalledhishome,onlytohearanansweringmachine.Withnervousnesswrappedintoanxiety,Kathywenttohishouseandfoundoutfromhisneighborthathehaddiedthepreviousnight.Onhearingthebadnewsshefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.BecauseCharliehadnofamilyorclosefriends,Kathyputherselfinchargeofhisfuneralarrangements.Sheandtheneighborweretheonlypeopletoattend.范文欣赏:Usevivid
detaileddescriptiontoshowcharacters.Onedayhedidn'tcomet6
Severaldaysafterthefuneral,Kathyreceivedaveryimportant-lookingletterinthemail.ItwassenttoherfromCharlie’slawyer.Enclosedwasacheckforalmost$600,000!Kathynearlyfainted(晕倒),butthenshenoticedahandwrittennotewhichread,“DearKathy,bythetimeyoureadthis,Iwillbegone.HereIhaveleftformybestfriendasmalltoken(表示)ofmygratitudeIcanneverrepayyouforwhatyou'vegivenme,foryousee,Kathy,asmileisworthmuchmorethan$20.Indeed,asmileispriceless.Conveypositivemessage.Asmilecostsnothing,butitiswortheverything.Severaldaysafterthe7message(positive)development(logical/reasonable)language(vivid)AsuccessfulstorymessagedevelopmentlanguageAsu8ChildrenofHeavenContinuationWriting电影:天堂的孩子ChildrenofHeavenContinuation9ReadforinformationWhatisthetypeofwriting?A.narrative(记叙文)B.exposition(说明文)C.argumentation(议论文)
Howmanycharactersarethereinthepassage?Whoarethemaincharacters?Many.ThemaincharactersareAliandhisyoungersister,Zahra.CharacterReadforinformationWhat10Backgroundinformation1.WheredidAliandhisfamilylive?2.Howwasthefamilycondition?HowAliandhisyoungersister,Zahra,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlord
wasbreathingdowntheirnecks.AliandZahralivedina_______neighborhoodwiththeirparents.Thefamily___________tomakeendsmeet.poorstruggled对某人盯得特别紧Backgroundinformation1.Where11AlilostZahra'sshoes.ThemainstoryAliandZahrakeptitsecretby---.OnedayThedayofraceApieceofnewsAlongdistanceracewouldbeheld.Thethirdprizewasapairofnewshoes..StartHalfwayNearthefinishlineHehadastrongstart.Hegotexhaustedbutpersisted.Hecrashedtotheground.Itseemedthat---.AlilostZahra'sshoes.Thema12Para.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Readforstructure___________information_________ofthestory___________ofthestory__________ofthestoryThefamilystruggledtomakeendsmeet.AlilostZahra'sshoesandsharedhisshoeswithZahratogotoschool.AlidecidedtotakepartinalongdistanceracetowinanewpairofshoesforZahra.Aliwasknockeddownanditseemedunlikelyforhimtofinishthird.BackgroundBeginningDevelopmentClimax(高潮)Para.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Readf13Paragraph1:
Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Paragrap2:
Filledwithdelight,Aliwalkedhomequickly.ContinuationWritingAli,Zahra,shoes,race,prize,excitedly,promise,runners,third,collided.DidAliwintheprize?Yes?OrNo?Paragraph1:Paragrap2:Contin14possibilitiesHewonthethirdprize.Hewasawardedforhisbravery.TherunnerwhocollidedhimgavetheshoestoAli.Hedidn’tfinishtherace.Hefinishedfirst.------DidAliwintheprize?Whatevertheresultwas,AlieventuallywenthomewithapairofnewshoesforZahra.possibilitiesHewonthethird15Paragraph1:
Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Paragrap2:
Filledwithdelight,Aliwalkedhomequickly.ContinuationWritingWhatwouldyouwrite?Describetheactionandfeelingafterthecrash.ActionWhatwouldyouwrite?DescribethejoywhenAlibroughtshoesbackhome.DescribeZahra'sreactiontoAli.Feelings站起来往前冲咬紧牙关挥汗如雨------nervoushappyexcitedmovedgrateful------Ali,Zahra,shoes,race,prize,excitedly,promise,runners,third,collided.Paragraph1:Paragrap2:Contin16DescribeAli'sactionafterthecrash.struggletohisfeet;grithisteeth;runasfastashislegscouldcarryhim;gatherallhisstrength;dripwithsweat/withsweatdripping;dashforwardDescribethejoywhenAlibroughtshoesbackhome.DescribeZahra'sreactiontoAli.can’tconcealhisexcitement;Happytearswelledupinhereyes;beoverwhelmedbyenormousjoy;throwherselfintohisarms;Withtearyeyes,theyhuggedtogether.DescribeAli'sactionaftert17Whatisthethemeforthewriting?Alikepthispromisebecauseofhis
braveryperseveranceloveforhissisterWhatisthethemeforthewrit18AssignmentWritethepassage.AssignmentWritethepassage.19Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Refusingtogiveupatthispoint,hejumpedtohisfeetandranasfastashecould.Hedashedacrossthefinishlineandwonthefourthprize.Thinkinghewouldlethersisterdown,Alicouldn’thelpsobbing.Justthenhesuddenlyheardtheannouncementfromthebroadcastthathewonthethird
prizeastherunnerwhocollidedwithAliwasdisqualifiedforbreakingtherule.Holdingtheshoes
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