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第二组：记叙文(一)DearLucy,IwouldliketoinviteyoutojoinusforavisittothenearbynursinghomenextSaturdayforDoubleNinthFestival.Itwasthedayfortheelderpeopleinourculture.Wewillgoandmakedumplingsandcakewiththeelderlypeoplehere.Wewillalsospendsomefuntimetogetherplaygames,whichwehopewillmaketheyhappy.Weshouldbebackaround4:00ontheafternoon.Ifyouareabletocometowithus,pleaseletusknowsowewillwaitforyouattheschoolgateat9:00inthemorning.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua(一)DearLucy,IwouldliketoinviteyoutojoinusforavisittothenearbynursinghomenextSaturdayforDoubleNinthFestival.Itwasthedayfortheelderpeopleinourculture.

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(一)本文是李华写给露西的邀请信，邀请她一同前往敬老院陪老人们过重阳节。1.在DoubleNinthFestival前加the

专有名词前须加定冠词the，特指重阳节(theDoubleNinthFestival)。2.was→is

客观陈述规律性或习惯性的事情用一般现在时。3.elder→elderly

修饰名词people要用形容词，elderly意为“上了年纪的”，符合文意；而elder意为“年纪较大的”，不符合文意；下文也有相同的表达。4.cake→cakes

因cake是可数名词，要与dumplings并列，故要用复数。5.here→there

根据上下文语境，此处应该是指“敬老院那儿”，而不是“这儿”。6.play→playing

由固定结构spendtime(in)doingsth.意为“花费时间做某事”可知。7.they→them

作宾语要用宾格。8.on→in

表“在下午/上午”用intheafternoon/morning；而表“在具体的某天上/下午”用介词on。9.去掉come后的to

此处come后并无宾语，故不需要介词to。10.so→and

表顺承关系用并列连词and。aroundadj.大约replyn.答复nursinghome敬老院invitesb.todosth.邀请某人做某事(二)I’llspendthissummerholidayinthecountryside.Althoughthecityismodernandconvenience,there’restillsomeproblems,suchasairspollution,crowdednessandnoise.InthecountrysideIcanenjoycomfortableandquietlife.There,theairisfreshbutthewaterisclean.Treesaregreenandbirdsissinging.Icangotoboating,fishingandswimminginthelake.What’sworse,Icanclimbthehills.Allthiswillbeinterestingandgoodforyourhealth.Aboveall,Icanlearnmoreaboutnature.SoIwantedtogotothecountrysideforachange.I’mlookingforwardtothecomeofmysummerholiday.(二)I’llspendthissummerholidayinthecountryside.Althoughthecityismodernandconvenience,there’restillsomeproblems,suchasairspollution,crowdednessandnoise.InthecountrysideIcanenjoycomfortableandquietlife.aair

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(二)本文讲述作者想去乡村度假的原因。1.convenience→convenient

作表语要用形容词形式。2.airs→air

因air是不可数名词。3.在enjoy后加a

由固定结构enjoy/live/leada…life意为“享受/过着……的生活”可知。4.but→and

表顺承关系用并列连词and。5.is→are

因主语birds是复数，故谓语也要用复数形式。6.去掉go后的to

由固定搭配goboating意为“(去)划船”可知。7.worse→more

根据上下文语境可知，此处理应表“此外”，故要用what’more。(注意：what’sworse意为“更糟糕的是”)8.your→my

根据上下文语境可知，应当是对作者的健康有利，应用第一人称物主代词my。9.wanted→want

因全文主体时态是一般现在时。10.come→coming

固定短语lookforwardto的to为介词，其后要接名词或动名词。crowdednessn.拥挤aboveall尤其重要的是learnmoreabout更多地了解forachange换换环境(三)Whatshouldyoudowhenyourparentsbecomeangrily?Ifyourparentsgotmad,trytohaveaconversationwiththemaboutit.Rememberingnottoshoutatthem.Theyusuallywilltrytochange.Buttheywilltakesometimestochangebecausetheyalwaysgetangry,andthatisalltheyknow.Youmighthavetochangeforyourmethodacoupleoftimes.Doanynicethingsforyourparentsthattheydon’texpect—likecooking,doingthedishes,washingclothes,orcleanthefloors.Ifthisdoesn’twork,bringinfriendthatyoufeelcomfortablewith,orhavehimorherhelpyou.(三)Whatshouldyoudowhenyourparentsbecomeangrily?Ifyourparentsgotmad,trytohaveaconversationwiththemaboutit.Rememberingnottoshoutatthem.

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(三)本文讲述父母生气的时候，你应该怎么做。1.angrily→angry

作表语要用形容词形式。2.got→get

因本文的主体时态是一般现在时。3.Remembering→Remember

祈使句要用动词原形开头。4.they→it

因it在此作形式主语，后面的不定式才是真正的主语。5.times→time

因time作“时间”理解时，是不可数名词。6.去掉change后的for因change是及物动词，其后可直接接宾语。7.any→some

肯定句中用some，意为“一些”。8.clean→cleaning

和前面的doing,washing并列。9.在bringin后加a

因friend是可数名词，此处意为“一个朋友”，表泛指。10.or→and

表顺承关系用并列连词and。expectvt.预料shoutat…对……大喊acoupleoftimes好几次dothedishes洗碗bringin带来haveaconversationwith…和……谈一谈(四)Oneofmyfavoritehobbiesarebackcountryhiking.However,afterIgohiking,Imakesuretohaveallofthepropernecessities.First,Iworeproperclothingandhikingshoes.ThismayincludetakingwatershoesifIhaveplansforhikingthroughstreamsandriversorareliablejackettokeepwarmly.Next,IgetmyfamilyandfriendstoknowIwillbegoingandwhenIwouldreturn.Inadditiontotheseitem,Itakeplentyofthefoodandwater.Finally,Ialwayspackemergencysuppliesincludealighter.Youneverknowwhenyouwillbeinneedforthesethings.(四)Oneofmyfavoritehobbiesarebackcountryhiking.However,afterIgohiking,Imakesuretohaveallofthepropernecessities.First,Iworeproperclothingandhikingshoes.

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(四)本文讲述作者徒步旅行前要做的准备。1.are→is

因主语是one，故谓语动词用单数。2.after→before

根据上下文意思可知是“在我去徒步旅行前”。3.wore→wear

全文的主体时态是一般现在时。4.warmly→warm

作系动词keep的表语，用形容词。5.在toknow后加where

引导宾语从句。句意：让家人和朋友知道我去哪里。6.would→will

根据上下文语境和前面的Iwillbegoing可知此处是指“我将什么时候回来”，故用一般将来时。7.item→items

由前面的these可知要用复数。8.去掉plentyof后的the

此处并没有表特指，无需定冠词。9.include→including

因including是介词，介词并无形式变化。10.for→of

由固定短语inneedof意为“需要……”可知。backcountryn.边远地区streamn.小溪itemn.项目；条款lightern.打火机packvt.装；打包propernecessities适当的必需品inadditionto除了……之外emergencysupplies应急物资plentyof许多gohiking去远足；去徒步旅行(五)MyhometownisBrightonwhereisn’taverybigtown.It’sinthecoastabout50milesfromLondonandhasapopulationof300,000.Certainlyitisn’tasinterestedasLondon.Sotheairisalotofcleanerbecausethere’slittlepollutionhere.There’refewfactoriesinBrighton,butnotmany.So,itisn’teasytofindajobthere.Myfatherusedtoworkinginafactorywhichshutsdownayearagoandmyfatherlosthisjob.There’remanyhotelsandlanguagesschoolsinthetown.Insummerthetownisfulloftravelers.Myfatherhasdecidedtoopenasmallgiftshop.(五)MyhometownisBrightonwhereisn’taverybigtown.It’sinthecoastabout50milesfromLondonandhasapopulationof300,000.Certainlyitisn’tasinterestedasLondon.Sotheairisalotofcleanerbecausethere’slittlepollutionhere.

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(五)本文作者介绍了自己的家乡——Brighton。1.where→which/that

引导定语从句，并在从句中充当主语。2.in→on

由固定短语onthecoast意为“在海岸线上”可知。3.interested→interesting

主语是it，故用interesting。4.So→But

根据上下文逻辑关系可知此处显然存在转折关系，故用But。5.去掉alot后的of

此处并不是表“很多”，而alot放在比较级前表“……得多”的意思，故去掉of。6.在few前加a

根据后面的butnotmany可知此处应该是指“有一些”，而不是“few(几乎没有)”，故在few前加a。7.there→here

作者是介绍自己的家乡，要用here才符合逻辑。8.working→work

由固定词组usedtodo…意为“过去曾经……”可知。9.shuts→shut

由后面的ayearago可知要用过去时。10.languages→language

通常名词作定语不用复数形式。coastn.海岸usedto过去曾经shutdown倒闭giftshop礼品店loseone’sjob失业hasapopulationof…有……人口(六)Deardadandmum,Ihavebeenveryhappyintheschool.Iworkhardlyintheschooleveryday.Afterclass,Iplaywithmyclassmates.Ispendalottimedoingmyhomework.Afterlunch,Iplaytheping-pongwithmyfriends.Then,IspendsometimereadmyEnglishnote.Atsixo’clock,Ihavemyeveningclass.Afterthat,Ihadsomesparetime.Ateighto’clock,Igotobed.Thisisadayintheschool.Mum,youalwaystellus“Happinessisvitalofourlife.”AndIwanttobehappyeveryday.Ifyouarenothappy,callmepleaseorifIamnothappy,Iwillcallyoueither.Yours,Laura(六)Deardadandmum,Ihavebeenveryhappyintheschool.Iworkhardlyintheschooleveryday.Afterclass,Iplaywithmyclassmates.Ispendalottimedoingmyhomework.of

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Afterlunch,Iplaytheping-pongwithmyfriends.Then,IspendsometimereadmyEnglishnote.Atsixo’clock,Ihavemyeveningclass.Afterthat,Ihadsomesparetime.Ateighto’clock,Igotobed.

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Thisisadayintheschool.Mum,youalwaystellus“Happinessisvitalofourlife.”AndIwanttobehappyeveryday.Ifyouarenothappy,callmepleaseorifIamnothappy,Iwillcallyoueither.Yours,Laura

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(六)Laura给自己的父母写信，谈到在学校的学习和生活情况。1.hardly→hard

根据语境可知，此处理应是指“努力学习”，hard本身就是副词，意为“努力地”，而hardly意为“几乎不”，显然不符合上下文逻辑。2.在alot后加of

由固定短语alotof意为“很多”可知。3.去掉ping-pong前的the

在表示“打球”时，在球类名词前不加任何冠词。4.read→reading

由固定结构spendtime(in)doingsth.意为“花费时间做某事”可知。5.note→notes

因note是可数名词，此处应用复数，意为“笔记”。6.had→have

因此处讲的是“规律性的动作”，故用一般现在时。7.us→me

根据上下文逻辑可知，此处应该是指“你经常告诉我”，故用me。8.of→in

因表“在生活当中”常用介词in。9.And→So

根据两句间的逻辑关系可知，此处显然存在因果关系，故用So。10.either→too

在肯定句中用too，表“我也……”。vitaladj.至关重要的

afterthat之后sparetime空闲时间

spendtime(in)doingsth.花费时间做某事(七)Tommyhasalittledog.HernameisGoldier.Sheisprettyandinterested.Tommylovedherverymuch.Theotherday,GoldierwasoutwalkingwithTommy.Shecutherpawonapieceofglasses.Whentheyarrivedathome,Tommy’smotherthoughtthatthecutwasdeeply.HeaskedTommytotakeGoldierthevet.Thevetwasverykind,buthegaveherainjection.Thenhestitchedup(缝合)thecutandputonabandage.Goldierlookssofunnyasshewalksonthreelegs,holdsherpawasifshehasbeentowar!(七)Tommyhasalittledog.HernameisGoldier.Sheisprettyandinterested.Tommylovedherverymuch.Theotherday,GoldierwasoutwalkingwithTommy.

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Thevetwasverykind,buthegaveherainjection.Thenhestitchedup(缝合)thecutandputonabandage.Goldierlookssofunnyasshewalksonthreelegs,holdsherpawasifshehasbeentowar!holding

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(七)本文介绍了Tommy的一只可爱的小狗(Goldier)。1.interested→interesting

形容小狗(是物)有趣，用interesting。2.loved→loves

主语是Tommy，谓语要用第三人称单数。3.glasses→glass

因glass作“玻璃”理解时是不可数名词。4.去掉arrived后的at

此处home是副词，arrived后面不加at。5.deeply→deep

作表语要用形容词。6.He→She

此处指Tommy’smother，故要用she。7.在thevet前加to

由固定搭配take…to…意为“把……带去……”可知。8.but→and

表顺承关系用并列连词and。9.a→an

句中injection以元音音素开头，前面的不定冠词要用an。10.holds→holding

分析句子成分可知，此处hold是非谓语，与逻辑主语Goldier存在主动关系，故要用现在分词，作伴随状语。pawn.爪子cutn.伤口vetn.兽医injectionn.注射；打针putonabandage绑上绷带hasbeentowar参加过战争(八)Longagopeopleusedbellsmorethantheydidtoday.Thepostmenwasusedtoringahandbellwhentheydeliveredletters.Fireengineshadbellsinsteadsirens(警笛).Peoplewhichsoldthingscamepasthouses,rangabellandshoutingwhatwasforsale.Inmanycountry,bellswerehungaroundthenecksofanimals.Thebellshelpedownersfindlostcowsorsheep.Today,atIndia,animalsstillwearbells.Nowbellsareusedlessbecausevariousmodernsound-makershavetakenitsp