-人教版整理书面表达指导教学课件

-人教版[整理]书面表达指导46、法律有权打破平静。——马·格林47、在一千磅法律里，没有一盎司仁爱。——英国48、法律一多，公正就少。——托·富勒49、犯罪总是以惩罚相补偿；只有处罚才能使犯罪得到偿还。——达雷尔50、弱者比强者更能得到法律的保护。——威·厄尔-人教版[整理]书面表达指导-人教版[整理]书面表达指导46、法律有权打破平静。——马·格林47、在一千磅法律里，没有一盎司仁爱。——英国48、法律一多，公正就少。——托·富勒49、犯罪总是以惩罚相补偿；只有处罚才能使犯罪得到偿还。——达雷尔50、弱者比强者更能得到法律的保护。——威·厄尔高考英语书面表达讲座

2009.3高考英语书面表达讲座专家指出:1999年到2003年,英语试卷的信度和效度在各门学科中都是最高的。但2003年高考英语（全国卷）的书面表达试题偏容易，区分度也不太明显，今年高考英语书面表达方面的难度将有所增加。英语书面表达的解题要领（二）把握时态语言得当正确使用动词的时态、语态是书面表达的重点。在高考阅卷中，对时态、语态的错误扣分是很重的！尽量多用习语忌用中式英语常见错误举例分析一、动词错误Therewerehundredsofstudentscouldn’tgotoschoolbecausetheywerepoor.Hewouldn’tabletoworkouttheproblem.Hemanagedtoswimacrosstheriver,butfailed.WeiFangfellfromthetreeandherleghurt.Hewasputintoprisonforthreeyearsinhisthirtiesthoughhehasn’tdoneanythingwrong.I’vedelayedtoreturnyouthebook《EnglishUsage》,whichyouborrowedmetwodaysbefore.常见错误举例分析(续)二、中式英语Hecostfiveyuantobuyanewdictionary.Recentlyourvillagehastakenplacegreatchanges.ThefactorybrokeoutabigfirelastSunday.MrLipraisedLiPing’srapidprogressinEnglishstudy.Chinesepopulationismany,butyourfriendsarefew.Iwasverydifficulttorefuseandhadtoreceiveherinvitation.常见错误举例分析（续）三、结构错误Beingayoungman,heworkedinabankandanewspaper.Hewroteabout300stories,someofthemhadbeentranslatedintoChinese.We’llorganizetovisitDafengMiluDeerCentrethisSaturdaymorning,November27.We’llinviteAmericanstudents,ourEnglishteachersandstudentsfromotherclassestotakepartinourparty.Eachyearmanypeopledieandarehurtonroadaccidents.Weshouldteachchildrendon’tplayandridebikesontheroad.Whileridingabike,keeptherightoftheroad.英语书面表达的解题要领（三）

紧扣要点条理清楚可先在认真审题的基础上尽量用英语列出提纲。这样就不容易遗漏要点。叙述时，我们一般地可按照揭示语的先后，参照时间、事件、图画逐一叙述(如句式需要，也可适当调整语序)，就比较容易地达到“条理清楚”的要求。英语书面表达的解题要领（四）连贯流畅书写规范确当地使用关联词语，使句子间的逻辑关系更加明确，使整篇文章条理清楚，连贯流畅，例如：

句子连贯的相互关系举例

HewasinterestedinEnglish

andinmathsaswell.(递进)Hurryup,orelseyou’llmissthelastbusfortheschool.(转折)We’dlikeasinglesmallhouse,whereastheywouldratherliveinaflat.(对比)Eitheryoumustimproveyourwork,orI’llfireyou.(选择)Itmusthavebeenrainingallnight,foralltheroadsarewet.(解释)Thereseemedtobenochancesofsuccess,therefore,allofthemwentaway.(结果)Tosumup,allyoureffortswillbehighlypaid.(总结)Firstofall,youshoulddigahole;secondly,putayoungtreeinit;then,coverthetreewithsomeearthandpressit;andfourthlyandlastly,poursomewaterinit.(顺序)常用关联词语举例1.表示并列或递进:and,aswell,aswellas,both…and,notonly…butalso,neither…nor;2.表示选择:or,either…or;3.表示转折:but,however,nevertheless（然而）,although,though,orelse,otherwise,afterall,bytheway,incidentally（换言之）;4.表示因果:because,as,since,for,forthisreason,so,asaresult,thus,hence,therefore,accordingly(因此);5.表示条件:ifso,unless,providedthat（假如）onconditionthat（如若）;6.表示对比:while,whereas,instead,not…but,onthecontrary,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand;7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,e.g.,thatis,thatistosay,namely,viz,ie,inotherwords;8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,foronething,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,soonafterwards,sincethen,fromthenon,lastly,finally,intheend;9.表示强调:also,besides,furthermore,moreover,what’smore,certainly,actually,infact,asamatteroffact;10.表示结论:tosumup,inall,altogether,inaword,inshort,generallyspeaking,asisknowntoall.英语书面表达的解题要领（五）

注意文采妙用结构一、变化开头Agroupofchildrenwithbeautifulflowersintheirhandsweremarchinginfrontoftheparade.Marchinginfrontoftheparadewereagroupofchildrenwithbeautifulflowersintheirhands.二、巧用构词法Hedrovethecarbackoutofthegarage,thendroveawaywithgreatspeed.Hebackedthecaroutofthegarageandspedaway.(转化法)Justlikeabirdinthesky,hecouldoverlookthewholecityfromtheTVtower,whichwas218metrestall.Fromthe218-metre-talltower,hecouldhaveabird’s-eyeviewofthewholecity.(合成法)英语书面表达的解题要领（五续）

注意文采妙用结构三、运用分词或介词结构Whensheheardthenews,shebegantocry.

Hearingthenews,sheburstoutcrying

Atthenews,sheburstintotears.

Thewomancarriedababyinherarmsandgotonthebus.

With/Carryingababyinherarms,thewomansteppedontothebus.MrSmithwasinvitedbyNanjingUniversity,MrSmithwenttomakeaspeechonDNA.InvitedbyNanjingUniversity,MrSmithwenttogivealectureonDNA.AttheinvitationofNanjingUniversity,MrSmithwenttodeliveralectureonDNA

英语书面表达的解题要领（五续）

注意文采妙用结构四、注意变化词语Whenhewasachild,Thomsonwasinterestedinmaths,andwhenhegrewup,hewasveryinterestedincomputers.

Asachild,Thomsonshowedhisstronginterestinmaths,andwhenhegrewup,computersarousedhisgreatcuriosity.英语书面表达的解题要领（五续）

注意文采妙用结构

五、注意变化结构

Therearegreatchangesthathavehappenedhere.Thereisanewclassroombuildingononesideoftheroad.Thereusedtobeaplaygroundontheothersideoftheroadbefore.Butthereisabiglibrarynow.Thereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinthelibrary.Thereisanewplaygroundinthefrontoftheschool.Therearemanytreesinandaroundtheschool….…Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplacehere.Ononesideoftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobe,nowstandsanothernewbuilding—ourlibrary.Initthereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazines.Theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandaroundtheschool.Ihopeyou’llcomeandseeitforyourselfsomeday.英语书面表达的解题要领（五续）

注意文采妙用结构

六、运用倒装、强调手法Theboywassobravethatheledtheenemyintoourringofencirclement(包围).

Sobravewastheboythatheledtheenemyintoourringofencirclement(包围).IdidnotrealizetheimportanceoflearningEnglishwelluntilthen.

NotuntilthendidIrealizetheimportanceoflearningEnglishwell.

ItwasnotuntilthenthatIrealizedtheimportanceoflearningEnglishwell.SuchisSunShuwei,ahardworkingandsuccessfuldivingstar.(NMET1991)Suchisourpresentlife,ahappyandcolorfulone!(NMET2001)注：最后两句常用来总结全文

看图写话的写作要领1.仔细审图(特别注意时间、地点、方位、物品、颜色、数字、性别等)2.提纲立目(一般用keywords列出要点)3.连词成篇4.检查润饰1)要点是否遗漏?2)动词是否用错?3)语言是否得当(有否拼写错误)?4)全文是否连贯?以2000年高考英语表达题为例2000年英语书面表达题提纲（Keywords）7:15onthemorningofFebruary8,2000.walkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastanelderlymancameoutoftheparksawayellowcardriveupThirdStreetthecarhitthemanfellwithacrythecardroveoffatgreatspeedheadingwestthedriverwasayoungwomantheplatenumberwasAC864OnepossibleversionItwas7:15

onthemorningofFebruary8,2000.IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhenanelderlymancameoutoftheparkontheothersideofthestreet.ThenIsawayellowcardriveupThirdStreetandmakearightturnintoParkRoad.Thenextmomentthecarhitthemanwhilehewascrossingtheroad.Hefellwithacry.Thecardidn’tstopbutdroveoffatgreatspeedheadingwest.InoticedthedriverwasayoungwomanandtheplatenumberwasAC864.

AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.2003年看图书面表达题

OnepossibleversionDearBob,I’mgladtolearnthatyou’recominginSeptember.I’vefoundaplaceforyou.It’sasmallflatof25squaremetres,withabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.Inthebedroomthereisabed,asofa,adeskandachair.Therentis500yuanpermonth.TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo11cantakeyoustraighttotheschool.Infact,it’sonlyonestop.Doyouthinkyou’dlikeit?Ifnot,Icantryandfindanotherplaceforyou.Justletmeknow.

Yours,LiHua。下面四幅图描述了你班同学上周的一次研究性活动。请你根据图画内容用英语写一篇短文,在某英语刊物上介绍这次活动情况Onepossibleversion

Lastweek,wedidresearchintohowlaid-offworkersgettheirnewjobs.Wehadadiscussioninthreegroupsandthenbeganourresearchseparately.GroupOnesurfedontheInternetandlearnedthatmostofthelaid-offworkershadalreadygottheirnewjobs.Inthevocationaltrainingcentre,thestudentsinGroupTwoweretoldthattherewerefivetrainingcoursesforlaid-offworkers.Aftertraining,theybeganworkingasrepairers,cooks,typists,householdworkersandsalespersons.Theotherstudentsinterviewedsomelaid-offworkerswhohadgotnewjobs.Awomansaid,“Withthehelpofthecitygovernment,I’vefoundmyjob.”

Whatagreatdealwe’velearnedthroughtheresearch!关于图表的英语书面表达的写作要领1.审读图表(一般用keywords列出要点)2.提纲立目3.连词成篇4.检查润饰1)要点是否遗漏?2)动词是否用错?3)语言是否得当(有否拼写错误)?4)全文是否连贯?请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语写一篇介绍中国第一个航天英雄杨利伟的短文。姓名杨利伟出生时间1965年出生地辽宁省飞行状况1.1987年加入中国空军,飞行时间为1350小时。2.2003年10月15日9时乘坐神舟五号飞船进入太空,绕地球飞行14圈,在太空中度过了21小时,于次日早上6时23分成功返回地面。3.进入太空前,他花了5年时间来训练.在太空中他记录下了他看到的一切,并向电视机前的观众展示了中国的国旗和联合国国旗。注意：1短文标题已给出；2词数：100左右

China’sfirstspaceman—YangLiwei优作欣赏

China’sfirstspaceman—YangLiweiYangLiweiwasborninLiaoningProvincein1965.In1987hejoinedthePLAAirForceandhadarecordof

/experienced1350hours’flightinthesky.OnOctober15,2003,heflewintospaceinShenzhou5Spaceshipat9o’clock,circlingtheearth14times,whichtookhim21hoursinspace.Hemanagedtoflybacktotheearthat6:23thefollowingmorning.Beforeenteringspace,hehadspent5yearstrainingforthatflight.Inspacehemadeavideorecordingofwhathehadseen,andpresentedtotheaudiencebothChina’snationalflagandtheUNflag.AllofusareproudofYangLiwei,China’sfirstspaceman!优作欣赏

《英语周报》书面表达题

OnepossibleversionI’maseniorthreestudent.Generallyspeaking,I’mforbringingthecellphonetoschool,forit’sveryconvenientforusto

getintouchwithourparentsandfriends,especiallywhenthere’ssomethingurgenttooccur.What’smore,wecanacquiremuchmorefunfromit.Ofcourse,there’resomeproblemsinusingit.First,itwillinterferewith/disturbourteachingwhenusedinclass.Second,itwillbeawasteofmoneyandtimetokeepchattingonthephoneandsendingshortmessageswithit.Accordingly,Isuggestthatcellphonesshouldbekeptfrombeingusedinclass.Asavaluablepossession,weshouldseetoitcarefully,andmakegooduseofit.YoursLiHua

优作欣赏2001年高考书面表达题

OnepossibleversionDearDick,Hownicetohearfromyouagain!YouwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina?Inshort,thingshavebeguntoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload.Idon’tknowaboutothers,butIusedtohavetoworkevenatweekends,doingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.NowIhavemorefreetime.Icanfollowmyowninterestssuchas

readingbooks,visitingmuseums,andtakingcomputerlessons.IntheeveningsIcanwatchnewsonTVorreadnewspapers.What’smore,Icangotobedearlier.AsfarasIknow,everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.Bestwishes.LiHua优作欣赏2002年高考书面表达题

OnepossibleversionDearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechsrgedforparks.

Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.What’smore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.

Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandother