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短文改错专题泉州实验中学高二(1)班王秋怡Haveyoufoundanythingwrong?Haveyoufoundanythingwrongwiththesigns?Haveyoufoundanythingwrongwiththecompositions?高考短文改错体裁和话题年份卷别体裁话题2017年全国卷Ⅰ记叙文我在暑期考驾照全国卷Ⅱ记叙文张先生夫妇的日常工作和生活全国卷Ⅲ记叙文回忆我的高中往事2016年全国卷Ⅰ记叙文我的叔叔全国卷Ⅱ记叙文我和同学讨论暑期计划2015年全国卷Ⅰ议论文环境保护全国卷Ⅱ记叙文孩子和父母走散后重聚2014年全国卷Ⅰ记叙文我和姐姐种圣女果全国卷Ⅱ说明文我梦想中的学校以记叙文为主，词数：100词左右

题目要求：假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。四不改:

①标点符号不改。

②大小写不改。

③词序错误不改。

④单词拼写不改。四原则：1.以保持原意不变为原则2.以单词形式变化最小为原则3.以多“改正”少“添删”为原则4.一对一原则短文改错主要考察：___________________词法：1______词2______词3______词4______词5______词6______词7______词8______词

9______词10________词法、句法、行文逻辑

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动谓语非谓语构词法句法：1______________2______________3______________4______________5______________6______________7______________并列句名词性从句定语从句状语从句特殊句式虚拟语气

主谓一致主语从句宾语从句表语从句同位语从句倒装句强调句1-1Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastaken,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.1-2Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningtomusic.1-3Sincethenforalltheseyearswehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.1-4Suddenlythearrowswereflyingdownatusfromthesky--theywerelookedlikerain!1-5Theinstructorkeptrepeatingthewords,“Speedup!”“Slowdown!”“Turningleft!”1-6Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.becamesithaveTurnlooks1-7Wecanchoosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.1-8Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesandhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.1-9Oneeveningatsunset,wesatbythefire,

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ourbarbecue.1-10Whensummercomes,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables.1-11Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.

动词考点：时态、语态、非谓语动词、情态动词、助动词、主谓一致等takingusedhaving在pick前面加to把can去掉或者把can改为should2-1Besides,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.2-2Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.2-3Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourand...2-4WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslater.2-5Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.名词考点：常见的不可数名词：money,air,homework,housework,information,news,advice,help,progress,equipment,furniture,traffic,fun,attention,knowledge,rubbish/garbage/junk可数/不可数：exercise,experience,success,failure,change,word,time可数名词（单复数）和不可数名词、词性转换informationstepshourschildhonesty3-1ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleoftheroad.3-2Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.3-3Momwasgratefulandmoving.3-4Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.3-5Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.3-6Ienjoyedstudyingdifferentkindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusicandcollectingthelatemusicalbums.形容词、副词考点：词性转换、比较级与最高级、现在分词与过去分词作为形容词的区别suddensteadilymovedManylaterlatest4-1Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.4-2Twothirdoftheearthiscoveredwithwater.数词考点：5-1Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyouviewand...5-2Atfirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.5-3Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.5-4Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.5-5Now,Ifullyunderstandhowhardistoearnmoney.代词考点：基数词、序数词、分数等代词的格和数、不定代词及it作形式主语的用法eighteenththirdsourmyselfsomethingNoneis前面加it6-1Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.6-2Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.6-3Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere. 冠词考点：7-1Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.7-2Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichinashortperiodoftime.7-3Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.介词考点：a,an,the的用法,固定搭配介词短语以及介词和其他词的搭配

first前面加thean在result前面加awithbecoming前面加of8-1Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusedforcooking.8-2Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.8-3Momhasafull-timejob,soshehastodomostofthehousework.8-4Ihavegrownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.8-5Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.连词考点：并列连词，从属连词，固定搭配，行文逻辑；although和but不共存,because和so不共存andandbutbut去掉but或者把but改为yet9-1Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestedinplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.9-2MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.9-3MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsome(biscuits)onthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.9-4Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneismissingorhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.主从复合句考点：三大类从句及其引导词，主谓一致,行文逻辑等whichwhereafter改为while或者when10-1Itwasnotuntilhearrivedhomewhenherealizedheforgottoposttheletters.10-2Notonlyhetreathisstudentsequally,butalsohewaswillingtobetheirfriend.特殊句型考点：that在he前面加did强调句、倒装句、主谓一致解题策略1.通读全文,理解文章。

2.先易后难,找出明错。3.对照考点,逐词排除。4.认真复查，规范答题。Findthemistakesinthecompositionsandcorrectthem走进真题

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“Turningleft!”IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.eighteenth,数词the，冠词but，连词went,谓语动词Turn，谓语动词later，形容词/副词比较级sudden，形容词/副词of，介词words，名词复数形容词/副词，固定句型实战演练Boysandgirls,OurclubaimstohelpingtheSenior2studentslearntotakea

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