0411顾家北作文第四讲助教笔记

Theoreticalknowledgecanimprovestudents’in lectualskillsandbooststudents’confidence.(c)Theoreticalknowledgecanimprovestudents’in lectualskillsandboosttheirconfidence.(c)Academicknowledgecanimprovestudents’ lectualskillsandhelpthemdeveloptheircriticalTheclimatechangeposesathreattoanimals’survival,andasaresultalargenumberofanimalsgoTheclimatechangepresentsachallengetothesurvivalofwildanimalsanddisruptstheecologicalbalance.(c)cityexpansionwillruinthescenesofcountrysideandpollutetheenvironmentthere.(c)Urbanexpansionwillruintherurallandscapeanddisturbthelocaldewellers'lives(c)theexpansionofcitieswillspoilruallandscapeanddestorywildanimals'habitats.(c)somepeoplethinkthatpetroltaxcancurbprivatecaruseandimproveairquality.(c)somepeopleconsiderthatthefueltaxcanrestricttheprivatecaruseandreduceairpollution.Somepeoplebelievethatthefuletaxisabletorestricttheusageofprivatecarsandslowenvironmentaldegradation.(c)Ambitionisbeingemphasizedintoday’ssociety.Howimportantdoyouthinkitisforpeoplewhowanttosucceedinlife?Isitpositiveornegativecharacteristic?Manysocietiestodayhavegivenimportancetoambitionandthewidely-heldnotionisthatitisessentialtoone'sachievement.(c)Inmyopinion,ambitioncanhaveabeneficialeffectonwhatpeoplecanachieveinlives,butthiscanalsobedetrimentaltoussometimes.(c)的A追求会给人带来成就感B有指向人充满正能量,积极向上C遇到，正面的情绪让人不轻言放弃，A（well-definedB为此设定计划（actionablens），提高技C从而达到目标,设定出固定的职途（thedefinedcareerPeoplehavewell-definedtargetsTheyformulateactionablens(c)Theyacquireskills.Theyattaintheirobjectives. Thisisparticularlythecaseforthosewhohaveadefinedcareerpath.Ambitionholdsthekeytoone'scareersuccess,becausepeoplehavewell-definedtargetsAmbitionholdsthekeytopeople'scareersuccess,becausetheycanattaintheirobjectivesmoreeasilyA+Bpeoplehavewell-definedtargets(c)Theyformulateactionablens(c)Theyacquireskills.peoplewhohavewell-definedtargetswillformulateactionablensandacquireskillsaccordingly.(c)C句Theyaremorelikelytodevelopexpertiseandleadafulfillingcareerthanthosewhodonothaveambitiousgoals.(c)Thisisparticularlythecaseforthosewhohaveadefinedcareerpath.段落的逻辑顺序是ABCCABCcareeraspirationsThiscanbeillustratedbythesuccessofthosewhohaveadefinedcareerpath.Ifwehavewell-definedtargetsanddeviseactionablens,wecanimproveourskills.Thosepeoplewhoaremotivatedbythesetargetscanshowgreatenthusiasmfortheirfutureandformulateactionablens;otherwise,theycouldbeaimlessandsquandertheirtalent.(c)A.BC.Somepeopleachievetheirambitionsregardlessofconsequences.(c)Theyarelikelytoengageinunethicalorevenillegalpractices.(c)Thiscandoharmtoothers.(c)中心句Ambitionissometimesdestructive,inviewofthefactthatsomepeopleachievetheirambitionsregardlessofconsequences.(c)B+CThismeansthattheyarelikelytoengageinunethicalorevenillegalpractices,whichcandoharmtoothers.Forexample,cybercrimesarerampantwhenmoreandmoreyoungpeopleusesoftwaretostealidentityandmoney,becausetheybelievethatthisistheapproachtoaccumulatewealth.A（moveuptheB不知道生活中最重要是什么（giveimportancetotherightaspectsofC很少花时间（qualitytime）和家人/Peoplearenowobsessedwithhowtoclimbupthecorporateladder.(c)Theyfailtogiveimportancetotherightaspectsoflife(c)TheyhardlyspendqualitytimewithfriendsandfamilyAnotherproblemisthatambitioncanhaveadamagingeffectonsocialrelationshipsc)A句Peoplewhohavestrongcareeraspirationsarenowobsessedwithhowtoclimbupthecorporateladder.(c)B句TheyfailtogiveimportancetotherightaspectsoflifeandspendqualitytimewithfriendsandfamilyThatiswhypeoplearelessresponsivetoeachother'semotional whoisambitioussimplypaysattentiontohisorherownachievementandlooksforwaystomoveuptheladder(c) whoispreoccupiedwithhisorhergoalfailstogiveimportancetotherightaspectsoflife.(c)(preoccupied=thinkingaboutsomethingalot,withtheresultthatyoudonotpayattentiontootherthings)Whatconcernspeopletodayishowtomoveuptheladder,butthisattitudecankeepthemapart.(c)WhatmattersmostformanypeopletodayInconclusion,ambitioncanleadtosuccess,butmeanwhile,hasadetrimentaleffectontraditionalvaluesandalsocommongood.Charitiesandorganizationsalwaysgivespecialnamestoparticulardayssuchas'NationalChildren'sDay'and'NationalNon-smokingDay'.Whatarethecausesoftheseparticulardays?Howeffectivearethey?修改学生AB知道某些东西的C影响人们行为(戒烟，更关心孩子..)A（inmemoryofB推广宣传，提高公众关于..（publicC树立榜样，鼓励的人去做这些A提高率增加知名度B筹金更方便C立于慈善运作和帮助他ornon-ernmentorganizationslayemphasisonawarenessdays,becausetheybelievethatthesespecialoccasionscanpromptpeopletochangetheirbehaviour.Thispracticemaynotachieveitseinsomecases.ABraiseawarenessinthegeneralpublicremindpeopletheconsequencesoftheirbehaviourremindpeoplewhatentails/whatinvolvesmodifyone'sbehaviour，improvewell-(entail=toinvolvesomethingasanecessarypartorresultAnewcomputersystementailsalotofre-training.Someforeigntravelisentailedinthejob.)AwarenessdayscanraiseawarenessinthegeneralpublicPublicitynscanbelaunchedtoremindpeoplewhatentailsifsomeproblemspersist.(c)Publicitynscanbelaunchedtoremindpeopletheconsequencesifsomeproblemspersist.(c)Thiscanencouragepeopletomodifybehaviour,therebyimprovingpublicwell-being.(c)中心句Awarenessdayshavegainedinpopularityasthesedayscanraiseraiseawarenessinthegeneralpublicc)B句Publicitynscanbelaunchedtoremindpeoplewhatentailsifsomeproblemspersist.(c)C句Thiscanencouragepeopletomodifybehaviourandtotakestepstosolvesomeproblems,therebyimprovingpublicwell-being.(c)Thisisparticularlyeffectivewhenpeoplewerenotawareofhowserioustheseproblemscouldbe.当以前没有A提高率增加知名B筹金更方CincreasetheexposureofNGOs提高enhancethereputationoftheseorganizationsTheycanoperateeffectively plishtheirmissionsandhelpneedy中心句AnotherreasonisthatthesespecialdayscanincreasetheexposureofNGOsinthemediaandenhancethereputationoftheseorganisations.(c)B+CItiseasierforthemtoraisefundsandtorecruitvolunteers,sotheycanoperateeffectivel