作文提升 六脉神剑【 知识梳理+精讲专练 】 中考英语能力提升必备 （牛津上海版）

专题五：作文提升六脉神剑六脉神剑之速成精彩开头第1句：惊爆眼球，陈述事实。There’snodoubtthatbeoneofthe+a.最高级+n.复数+状语（毫无疑问…）e.g.There’snodoubtthatShanghaiisoneofthebiggestcitiesinChina.Thereisnodenyingthat+S.+V.(不可否认....

)e.g.Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.Itiswellknownthat+S.+V.(全世界都知道....)Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.第2句：低调奢华，表明观点。AsfarasIamconcerned,itisso+adj.+forsb.+thatsb.+v.+todosth.+adv.（就我看来，...）e.g.AsfarasIamconcerned,itissonecessaryforusthatweshouldprotecttheenvironmentimmediately.漂亮收尾第1句：前后照应第2句：大声呼吁Ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,ourlifewillbetterandbetter.Ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.六脉神剑之全方位技巧1：形容词高级化勤奋的hard-working—diligent聪明的clever—intelligent重要的important—essential美丽的beautiful—attractive开心的happy—delightful有害的bad—beharmfulto有意义的meaningful独立的independent有责任的responsible

方便的convenient有必要的necessary技巧2：动词短语化 认为think—holdtheviewpointthat 阻止stop—preventfromdoingsth 解决solve—dealwith 给give—providewith 提高improve—makeprogress 期待expect—lookforwardtodoingsth. 尽力try—tryone’sbesttodo 能够can—beabletodosth 满意satisfy—besatisfiedwith 使用use—makefulluseof 扮演act—playanimportantpartin 注意focus—payattentiontodoingsth技巧3：名词具体化 好处advantage 知识knowledge 幸福happiness 影响influence 信心self-confidence

建议suggestion技巧4：两句2合1both...and...;neither...nor...;either...or...;not...until..;thanksto;neither...nor...;aslongas;so...that..;notonly...butalso...NotonlyIbutalsoTomandMaryarefondofwatchingtelevision.Thankstohisencouragement,Ifinallyrealizedmydream.Aslongasyoudoyourbest,youwillmakeitrealintheend.技巧5：状语从句化when、if引导条件状语从句Whenitisconvenientforyou,Ihopetomakeacallwithyou.Ifmychildrenwereinthrouble,Iwouldgiveahandtothemallthetime.技巧6：名言警句健康：Oneappleaday,keepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹果，医生远离我。友情：Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。学习：Nevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老。毅力：Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。方法：AllroadsleadtoRome.条条道路通罗马。Asanoldsayinggoes,“Oneappleaday,keepsthedoctoraway.”Successbelongstopreserving.坚持就是胜利。

Doingisbetterthansaying.与其挂在嘴上不如落实在行动上。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者，事竟成。Nothingintheworldisdifficultforonewhosetshismindtoit.世上无难事，只怕有心人。温馨提示：1.拼写正确2.动词时态3.名词单复4.标点无误5.书写美观议论文口诀：朋友健康快乐学习好家庭社会环境好学习进步study笑口常开happiness友谊长存friendship身体健康health家庭幸福family环境优美environment社会祥和society1.Thereasonwhy+S.+V.isthat…（..的原因是…）e.g.Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.2.the+adj.er….the+adj.er…（越…越…）e.g.Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake.

Themorebooksweread,themorelearnedwebecome.

3.Itistimetodosth.(是…的时候)Itistimetotakeproperstepstosolvethetrafficproblems.4.S+haveagreatinfluenceon…(…对....有很大的影响)

e.g.Smokinghasagreatinfluenceonourhealth.范文参考Thereisnodoubtthatnowadaysmanystudentsarebusywiththeirstudy.Theyalmosthavenotimewithhousework.Butinmyopinion,studentsshoulddosomehouseworkwhentheyarefree.Thereasonsareasfollows:First,asweallknowthathouseworkisakindofphysicalexercisewhichisnecessaryforourmentaldevelopment.Second,doingsomehouseworkcanenablestudentstoimproveoursenseofresponsibility.Third,bydoinghousework,wewillknowhowharditistoraiseafamilyforourparents.Thus,wewillstudyharderinourstudy.Lastbutnottheleast,asstudentshavetositforlongtime,doingsomehouseworkiscertainlybeneficialtoourhealth.IalwayshelpmyparentsdosomecleaningorwashingwhenIfinishmyhomework,becauseIwanttoseethebeautifulsmileinmyparents’faces.Inaword,Ithinkitisnecessarytodosomehouseworkinsteadofspendingallourtimestudying.【沙场点兵】1.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"ATen-minuteBreak",以“十分钟的休息时间”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：进入初三以来，同学们倍感学习任务重，压力大。许多同学争分夺秒甚至连课件十分钟的休息时间也在看书做题。请以ATen-minuteBreak为题，描写这一现象（包括你自己的看法）并针对这一现象谈谈你的看法。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）【题材分析】本篇写作话题是关于学生课间十分钟如何利用的问题，属于表述观点类的议论文题材。此类文章需注意在开头部分简要描述这个现象（只需将题目的前两句提示翻译出来即可），然后表达自己的看法（此点不容忽视，否则易被看做内容不完整或遗漏要点），最后结合这个问题谈谈自己的看法，建议写2-3点比较合适。可以转化为往届考试中“放松休闲”类的话题，以减小写作难度。【范例1】ATen-minuteBreakAsJuniorThreestudents,wearebearingaheavyburdenofstudyandwefeelsostressful.Manystudentsevengraspthetenminutestodoexerciseandreadwithoutrest,whichishelplesstorelaxourselves.Andmysuggestionsareasfollowing.Tobeginwith,listeningtolightmusicisagoodwaytorefreshourmind,whichcanreleaseusfromthestress.Furthermore,doeyeexerciseduringthebreakanditwillhelptoreleasethetirednessofoureyes.Besides,it’salsowisetotalkwithclassmatesbecauseitnotonlyreducespressurebutalsoenablesustofocusonthefollowinglessons.Asafamoussayinggoes:AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy.Onlyinthiswaycanweregainenergyandimprovestudyefficiency.【范例2】ATen-minuteBreakMoststudentsareshoulderingaheavytaskandgreatpressureafterbeinggraduates.Therefore,manyofthemmakefulluseoftimetodoexerciseandreviewthelessons,includingthetenminutesbetweenclasses.Idon’tthinkit’swise.Oneofthebasicwaystorelaxourselvesistotakeanapforawhile,becauseitiseffectiveforustogetridofthetiredness.Inaddition,listeningtosomemusicenablesustoescapefromthestressanditoftenbringsusahappymood.Apartfromthat,walkoutsidetohaveaviewinthedistanceanddoeyeexercise,thenwewillrefreshourmindalot.Onlywhenwecombinestudyandrestwiselycanwestayhealthyandachieveabetterlife.2.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“WhenIseeanoldpersonfalldowninthestreet,I….以《当我看到老人在街上摔倒，我......》为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。Referencewords(Useatleasttwoofthem):atraditionalvirtue(美德)；infavorof/against;calm;getalongwith;carefor;(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________60____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________80____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________100学生范文一：.Whetherornottohelpanoldpeoplewhenyouseehimfalldowninthestreethasledtoagreatargument.Asateenager,IthinkIwillcareforhimandhelphiminhissituationbecauseitisatraditionalvirtue.Butknowingthatsomewarm-heartedyoungpeoplehavesufferedagreatlossbecauseoftheirbehaviors.I’llsaysomeonetotakesomephotosformybehaviorsorasksomeonetoprovethatI’mreallyinnocent.Whilehelpingothersisabsolutelyworthpraising,protectingourselvesisalsoimportant.Allinall,I‘llcarefullyandbravelygivetheoldpersonahand.范文修改：Whetherornottohelpanoldpeoplewhenyouseehimfalldowninthestreethasledtoagreatargument.Asateenager,IthinkIwillcareforhimandhelphiminhissituationbecauseitisatraditionalvirtue.Butknowingthatsomewarm-heartedyoungpeoplehavesufferedagreatlossbecauseoftheirmisunderstood(加一个词进去意思表达会更明确）behaviors.(，）I’llsay（ask)someonetotakesomephotosformybehaviorsorasksomeonetoprovethatI’mreallyinnocent（thehelpernotthetrouble-maker).Whilehelpingothersisabsolutelyworthpraising,protectingourselvesisalsoimportant.Allinall,I‘llcarefullyandbravelygivetheoldpersonahand.（7.5+7+2.5=17）整体评析：内容完整，语意连贯。语法功底比较功底比较不错，非谓语的用法、从句的用法都很熟练。词汇量也不错，个别词汇使用不是很得当。好词好句比较多。学生范文二：Althoughitcanoftenbeheardthatanoldpersonfelldownhimselfandinsistedthatitwasinnocentpasser-bywhohelpedhimthatcausedtheaccident,Iwillhelptheoldpeoplewhofalldowninthestreetwithouthesitation.Itisatraditionalvirtueforteenagerstorespecttheoldandweshouldkeepcalmifwebecomethos