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五行诗Part1ReviewandShowStudentsEnergetic,lovelyLearning,complaining,progressingPassionandcreationtooVida’sARed,RedRoseARed,RedRoseByRobertBurnsPart2AppreciateandImitateRobertBurns25January1759–21July1796ScottishpoetNationalpoetofScotland----WhenScotlandforgetsBurns,thenhistorywillforgetScotlandARed,RedRoseOmyluve'slikeared,redrose,That‘snewlysprunginJune.O,myluve'slikethemelodie,That‘ssweetlyplay’dintune!Asfairartthou,mybonnielass,SodeepinluveamI;AndIwillluvetheestill,mydear,Tilla’theseasgangdryTilla’theseasgangdry,mydear,Andtherocksmeltwi’thesun;Iwillluvetheestill,mydear,Whilethesandso’lifeshallrun.Andfaretheeweel,myonlyluveAndfaretheeweelawhile!AndIwillcomeagain,myluve,Tho’itweretenthousandmile.

Appreciation

1.Theme2.Image（意象）3.Rhetoric（修辞）

simile（明喻）

hyperbole（夸张）rhyme

（押韵）落霞与孤鹜齐飞秋水共长天一色Omyluve'slikeared,redroseThat‘snewlysprunginJune:O,myluve'slikethemelodie.That‘ssweetlyplay’dintune!Asfairartthou,mybonnielass,SodeepinluveamI;AndIwillluvetheestill,mydear,Tilla’theseasgangdryTilla’theseasgangdry,mydear,Andtherocksmeltwi’thesun;Iwillluvetheestill,mydear,Whilethesandso’lifeshallrun.Andfaretheeweel,myonlyluveAndfaretheeweelawhile!AndIwillcomeagain,myluve,Tho’itweretenthousandmile.

ThemeWhatimagesareusedinthepoem?

Image（意象）rosemelodyrocksandsseaspassionate

firmeternaldeeplovepleasantRhetoric

Simile(明喻)Omyluve'slikeared,redroseO,myluve'slikethemelodieappearanceinnerbeautyWhydidthepoetcomparehissweethearttoaredrose?

Simile/metaphor（暗喻）

Hertearsfelllikerain.Carsontheroadfarawaylooklikeantshurryinghome.Hiswordsbecameacompassforhislife.Lifeisashipontheoceanmeetingbothsunnyandstormydays.

Tilla’theseasgangdry,mydear,Andtherocksmeltwi’thesun;Iwillluvetheestill,mydear,Whilethesandso’lifeshallrun.山无棱，江水为竭，冬雷震震，夏雨雪，天地合，乃敢与君绝。

——《先秦汉魏晋南北朝诗·汉鼓吹曲辞·上邪》

Hyperbole(夸张)

Rhyme（押韵）

Omyluve'slikeared,redroseThat‘snewlysprunginJune:

O,myluve'slikethemelodie.That‘ssweetlyplay’dintuneAlliteration（头韵）Asfairartthou,mybonnielass,SodeepinluveamI;AndIwillluvetheestill,mydear,Tilla’theseasgangdryEndrhyme(尾韵)Whilethesandso’lifeshallrun.Assonance(腹韵)ARed,RedRoseOmyluve'slikeared,redrose,That‘snewlysprunginJune.O,myluve'slikethemelodie,That‘ssweetlyplay’dintune!Asfairartthou,mybonnielass,SodeepinluveamI;AndIwillluvetheestill,mydear,Tilla’theseasgangdryTilla’theseasgangdry,mydear,Andtherocksmeltwi’thesun;Iwillluvetheestill,mydear,Whilethesandso’lifeshallrun.Andfaretheeweel,myonlyluveAndfaretheeweelawhile!AndIwillcomeagain,myluve,Tho’itweretenthousandmile.

Chooseyourtopicandimitatethepoem

ARED,REDROSEtowriteyourownpoemandshareitwithyourpartners.TimetobeapoetO,my______islike_____________;_____________________________.O,my______islike_________________;______________________________________.

ShowTimeO,my______islike_____________;_____________________________.O,my______islike_________________;______________________________________.

Assignment

Thinkabout:Asaproductofwesternculture,arosecanbeworldwiderecognizedasasymboloflove.HowcanwecirculateourownChinesecultureworldwide?Thankyouforjoiningus!ShowtimeContentStandardEvaluationThemeDoseyourpoemhaveacleartheme?RhymeHaveyouusedsomerhymingwords?ImageDoseyourpoemincludesomeclearimages?RhetoricHaveyouusedsimile?Haveyouusedhyperbole?Tastethepoem!

Feelthelove!

Purifyyourheart!

O,myLuve'slikeared,redrose,

That'snewlysprunginJune.

O,myLuve'slikethemelodie,

That'ssweetlyplay'dintune.

Asfairartthou,mybonielass,

SodeepinLuveamI,

AndIwillLuvetheestill,mydear,

Tilla'theseasgangdry.

Tilla'theseasgangdry,mydear,

Andtherocksmeltwi'thesun,

O,IwillLuvetheestill,mydear,

Whilethesandso'lifeshallrun.

Andfaretheeweel,myonlyLuve,

Andfaretheeweelawhile

AndIwillcomeagain,myLuve,

Tho'itweretenthousandmile!aredredrosemelodieSeasgangdryandrocksmeltwi’thesun一朵红红的玫瑰

王守仁译啊，我的爱人像一朵红红的玫瑰在六月里含苞绽开；啊，我的爱人像一支乐曲演奏得甜美而合拍！你是那么美丽，我的好姑娘，我爱你那么深切：我会永远爱你，亲爱的，直到四海枯竭：直到四海枯竭，亲爱的，岩石被太阳熔解；亲爱的，我会永远爱你，只要生命永不停歇。再见吧，我惟一的爱人，我和你暂时别离！我会回来的，我的爱人，即使相隔万里。ARed,RedRoseOmyLuve'slikeared,redroseThat‘snewlysprunginJune:O,myLuve'slikethemelodie.That‘ssweetlyplay’dintune!Asfairartthou,mybonnielass,SodeepinluveamI;AndIwillluvetheestill,mydear,Tilla’theseasgangdryTilla’theseasgangdry,mydear,Andtherocksmeltwi’thesun;Iwillluvetheestill,mydear,Whilethesandso’lifeshallrun.Andfaretheeweel,myonlyluveAndfaretheeweelawhile!AndIwillcomeagain,myluve,Tho’itweretenthousandmile.

eternalloveRosea.eternalloveRockb.deeploveSandsc.staunch（坚定的）loveSeasd.passionate(热情的)loveSymbolFindAlltheOldEnglishStanza1Omyluve'slikeared,redroseThat’snewlysprunginJune:O,myluve'slikethemelodie.That‘ssweetlyplay’dintune!Stanza2Asfairartthou,mybonnielass,SodeepinluveamI;AndIwillluvetheestill,mydear,Tilla’theseasgangdry.Stanza3Tilla’theseasgangdry,mydear,Andtherocksmeltwi’thesun;Iwillluvetheestill,mydear,Whilethesandso’lifeshallrun.A’:all,wi’:with,o’:ofStanza4Andfaretheeweel,myonlyluveAndfaretheeweelawhile!AndIwillcomeagain,myluve,Tho’itweretenthousandmile.

Weel:well,Tho:thoughARed,RedRoseOmyluve'slikeared,redroseThat‘snewlysprunginJune:O,myluve'slikethemelodie.That‘ssweetlyplay’dintune!Asfairartthou,mybonnielass,SodeepinluveamI;AndIwillluvetheestill,mydear,Tilla’theseasgangdryTilla’theseasgangdry,mydear,Andtherocksmeltwi’thesun;Iwillluvetheestill,mydear,Whilethesands