2013年6月英语四级作文真题答案解析

第一套23年6月英语文学练的“话”、阐明观点、给出建议。第一段重点是一定要描述图画内容，这点在题干中也有强调(withabrefdsrtonofet挖意你中的物”，，。第二段阐点，而观：teipoaceofdigsalltnsbfeunrkgsoeigbg.这步审看中话重观如可以先举例说明现象、然后再探讨导致现象的原因以及该现象可能导致的等数究行。末段除了总结观点外，一般还可以提出建议。这段纲型。次级也题不再拘泥于传统的提纲写作哪贯干包少，我们要融通犯不。是203年6语文家。第1页共7页Tlknginthecatonaretwoman,whoareaadhisfate.Theisworidaottheipatstedipoaloftenucerwasecue,whehisrsgmttswdeenntf.tsefdpnnheuefspedrcigtatogttobetaenitoacut:oewhocancpewihsallaksfrtcantenudraesomehgbg.Tkigalokarud,wecanfdsomestdnsdemigofteirbilntfuuebutunwligtoattndclsesortodohoewok,smeworedabuttefateofornatnbutreuigtobetertesevsfis,soeofclscliigthirdtriatnsinmakngorabetrplcebutrlcattogveupprsofterownitet.Suhphnmnaelcthefcttatsmemodenanuberofpepe,lakthespiitof"tikbig,dwntoearh".Tiscanbedetothefacttatthsepepleaesoandbldtataenwatofafuflotoebutneerakeeot.Asafamusgos,rapwhtso.Thoewhowanstobtfogtthepoerofteillbesuretofalldononthegroudandhutasaresut.Acodn,Isupoeitisipeaieforuspepletounesandtatalltatmatrstousnwshudbetobeterousles.Notaewesupoedtoleankowldeandtoenhnceourablte,wealonedtotaeheassgmensg.Ierhfssonfrflteprolmsusnowbesetldinthetocoe.范文二Inthispictre,wecantelthtthesonistalkngtohisfaherabouthisconernaboutther.srdmtfenen,enossnttgsteeosnsdourliefirt,andthenthethngsgratenoghintheword.Inourlife,itiscommontofindsomepeoplethattalkabouttheirgreatmidsontopisthtfarfromthrlives.,providelitleconernonstatarondternlives.Thesepeolearenotsucsflerser.os,sotoearman,havetoknowthatonecanbecomegreaterandgreaterifcancompletethingsaroundtheirlifewelloneone.standonthetopofthemountaininthe第2页共7页第二套Teimprtneofleanngbaicsilstenemenstersgesebsicmahmaicsil.Howve,somestdntsaewondrngthtifitwillbeoudtdintefuue.Thepcueriestequetnofteimpraceofthefnamntlsklsussuensleaninourclsss.Itiswrhmeninngtattoseaicadsiswelandinsholaidpnsberleinorfuuewok.Thepeaseudralainonklstatwefidamongcretstdetsadevensoetacescanbeattiuedtotherlakofviinofftueandthooghudesningonteknoldg.Afrall,itsanobvoustthttwecoldnotbuldaatantodts;edtagelsemkeasoldsttatfit.Toebascsilslksipletolr,butwiotthmitwilnotbesipleatalltoachivefuthrgoal.Tosmu,wesholdtnkfteimprneofbascandfnaenlsklstatgaateourwodruladbriintfte.Futror,wesholdmkefulueoftosekis,thminourwoksandlie.Baicskllwilnverbeoudae.第3页共7页第三套TeimprtneofreaiglieaueAsisinthecato,ateaherishadigaclssclieatreboktoasdet,asigtestdntto“ustreaditasifyouaeredngalngtetmssg.”Obviul,thesyblclmenngoftspcreistoshwusteiprtnceofrednglieaur.Itsoldbecnoldedthtclsicltrtreasinfcntrlenotolyinprsrigteessnceofgratmidsbutasoinenacigthequaiyofoe’slf.Tobeinwit,lieatreasthecolecinofgratmidswillhlpusnr,gseteeeoslsswewo’teabetoeny.hatsmor,tofnesrsseetdadconeedbytegeatathr,alhuhhapnedinthepas,stllsoeusflinfratonandiplainforourlvs.Inadiin,tebauilworsandsenecsfloiginthepgsofltruecaneseortidns,maigusfeladqit.Terfr,weougttoteimpraceofredigliraue.Jstasthetacerinthepitreput,rediglitrtreshuldbeasadcmmonasreaig.gegsne,edopshntsinebtalolieauewhchwecanurlieandteword.第4页共7页提心康woeslhMoreandmorepepehsentocoertirmenlheathttaniottroeinure.uessuerrmmetlies,hchifueceonthiradie.越始生重心严响和心。scolsshudeetmeasrestoslethispl.Thelhealthconsuldtshouldbebuiltinschooltohelptoeesosufferfrommentalillness.Inthisthosewhoaresubjectedtothementalillnesscangetrdofthesaowandbuldupteircofdet.Onteonehan,scholcanprovieachanceforstudentstoshowtheirtension.Ontheotherhand,presidentandteachersshudrbesttohelptsesuet.Inadiin,giigmorecnenrtnonterhalhwoldhepthmtorebidthirmetlhelh.因此咨些立长教应尽些。Fromwhtasnmetoed,assuns,wesoldourbestocommunicatewithour,friends,parentsorteachers.Lastbutnottheleast;weshouldnothesitatetogotothementalhealthconsultroomforhelpwhenwehavetroubleinmentalillness.inthiscanwereduceourmentalillness,andwewillbecomeastrongadconintpesnintheed.综上所，为学，们该尽们大的力我的朋，母老师流最应豫康求理。课OenasnoetsThegeneralaefcollgessaebetween8to25Frometf,snemf.eeyeestudentsareadultsthathandlewellwithproblems.However,therestarguethatcollegestudentsarenotsomaturewhenfacedwithproblems.Iagreetothelatterandithinkit’snecessarytoopenapsychologicallessontothecollegesuetseaseoftefoligresn.大学的般年龄是在18到5大第5页共7页年理时同心。inrecenttherearemorendmorecollgetsrpoutmschoolduetoprobems.Grigsud,hoidsandoernlseriousiitsaereprdfrmtimetotime.,thesocialtintocollege’metlhealthhasreacedtoclia.,esseinaandage.Ontheonehand,havetoinschooltoenrichthemselvesandtogetadiploma.Ontheotherhand,thinkarematuretoliveanidpnetlie,butmostofthmsildependontheirp.Inadiin,calne,prsueandliestescoldprdceprbes.首先，几，越越的学生于理问而学越多杀谋以及他正学于惑的一面大母压问。Tosumup,collegestudentsareadultsbutarestillfacedwithpressuresglstyntl.h,sytoopenalessontocollegestudents,helpingthemgetthroughthisperiod总之，学是成人但他们然临很他不解决引心问题压。一。：woe'lh'menalhhhsbeennintreinr.，tsdttsdggsnlsf.esalnteefrinbris.tstesdenot.snsalene.onh，school，suchssr，nesrenoer.s，eeg，tseeogpotential.shaveachanceodthminadae.Besides，sclsinisedreoberidtoaeflleronorssinm.Figtecss，nlhtnalheseeorbetroppotntestosaveusthanotes.Fromthefactorsmentionedabove，wedrawtheconclusionthatwecanesmlsgn.r，easorinmind，findingafriendtotheseisagoodtoreaepsr.teeislitedoubttatfurhratetonwillbepaidtotheisse.第6页共7页Hwtoipvesdnsmnalelh1、要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