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考研写作4连俊霞北京新东方学校2.2寓意说明+原因分析段2006Itisblindworshipthatmakesitpossibletodosuchcrazy/unreasonablethingsasthephotosdisplay.Themainreason,Iassume,wouldbethedistortededucationofthepopularcultureleadingtothepervasivenessofthestar-worshipping.Asisshowninthestatisticsofarecentsurveylaunchedbyanon-profitinstitution,theincreaseofteenagers’someoneissoprominentthattheresultcausedbyitmaybeconcludedasfollows.2023/6/26Writing21强调句说明寓意插入分词做定语3数据论证desire/aspirationsofrespectingeagernesstorespect2过渡说明原因2.2寓意说明+原因分析段…Itmaymisleadadolescentstodreamaboutanimmediatesuccess/triumph

ratherthantodedicatetotheirstudy.Anditisoflittlesurprisetofindtheirdisappointmentatlast.107words2023/6/26Writing34结果推导5进一步推导形式主语句二、高分范文得分解密2.2寓意说明段+举例说明段(1)五至六句(80-90词):第一句说明寓意(承上启下);第二句说明如下事例可以证明;第三四句一个事例及扩展;第五六句另一个扩展。具体化——切忌以理说理。(2)注意事项——切忌例子私人化。(3)扩展方式——数据论证、借用常识、引用权威、因果论证、比较论证例中人/例中事behave(s)/occur(s)inthesamewaythat图中人/图中事do(es)inthepicture.2023/6/26Writing42.3寓意说明+举例说明段1998(P34)Itseemsreasonablewhenpeoplelaughatthecartoon,butitwouldnolongerbelaughablewhenpeoplefindsimilarthingstakingplaceinourdailylife.1

Recentlythereisatrendofmakingpromisesinvariousfieldsofoursociety.Fromdepartmentsofgovernmenttocommonshoppingcenters,manybusinesseswhosupplyproductsorofferserviceshavemadevariouspromisestotheircustomersorservicereceivers.2

2023/6/26Writing5分词作定语定语从句2.3寓意说明+举例说明段Theyasserttheirproductstobeofgoodqualityorpromisetoofferexcellentservice.3

Asamatteroffact,manyofthesebusinessesclaiminthesamewaythat(比较)thehenintheabovecartoonpromisestolayeggs.4ofgreatimportance/significance=important/significantofgreat/littlepossibility=possible/impossibleofgreathelp=helpfulofpoor/outstandingquality2023/6/26Writing6of+n.=adj.比较论证2.3寓意说明+举例说明段举例论证常用过渡句:Abundantofexampleswoulddemonstratethephenomenon,whilethefollowingone,Isuppose,wouldsuffice.Hereisanexample.Take…foranexample/instance.…(短语/that主语从句)providesuswithanexcellentexample.Eg.Teenagerssurfingonlineprovidesuswithanexcellentexample.

Thatteenagers,inincreasingnumbers,surfonlineprovidesuswithanexcellentexample.2023/6/26Writing72.4寓意说明+利弊分析段2002,2009,2010积极中带有消极,消极中暗含积极五至六句(80-90词):第一句说明寓意(承上启下);第二句说明有利有弊;ononehand,第三四句一个优点及扩展;ontheotherhand,第五六句一个缺点及扩展。优点/缺点=原因

扩展=举例/数据/权威/常识/结果(五种论证)2023/6/26Writing8论点必须清晰2.4寓意说明+利弊分析段2009(P35)Fromthecartoon,wecanconcludethatthecartoonistwantstoconveysuchamessage:withthepopularityofcomputers,peoplefromallovertheworldbecomenearerbyusingtheinternettocommunicatewitheachother.1

Meanwhile,peoplealsobecomefarawayfromtheirfriends.2

Allofusacceptthefactthatthedevelopmentoftheinternetbringslotsofconveniencestoourdailylife,forinstance,wecanbuyabookonthenetinsteadofgoingtoabookstore.2023/6/26Writing9套话一句引出“利”ratherthan2.4寓意说明+利弊分析段Besides,wecancommunicatewithourfriendsonthenetwithoutgoingoutofhome.3Butwecan'tignoretheothersideofthese:thetimewespendwithfriendsorfamilybecomesless.Andwehardlyseethemonceinaweek.Itwillmakeusfeellonelyifwecontinuetousethetoolonthenettotalkwithfriendsinsteadoftalkingwiththemonthephoneorgoingoutwiththem.4158words2023/6/26Writing102.5建议措施段三至四句(50-55词):第一句过渡词(accordingly,asismentionedabove插入)引出重复论点;第二句改善建议(消极意义)或提升方式(积极意义);第三句表明期待结果。改善建议常用表达方式:Itishightimethat…(did)…Itisimperativefor…that…(should)…(3)提升方式常用表达方式:Asenhancingthesenseof…,wewouldbenefitmorefrom…

2023/6/26Writing112.5建议措施段三至四句:第一句过渡词(accordingly,asismentionedabove插入)引出重复论点;第二句改善建议(消极意义)或提升方式(积极意义);第三句表明期待结果。(4)表明期待结果常用表达方式:Onlyinthisway/bydoing/byexertingthiscanweboth…andembraceabrightertomorrow.2023/6/26Writing122.5建议措施段2003(P36)——消极寓义Childeducationhasbecomeoneofthemostpopulartopicsdiscussednotonlybyeducationalexperts,butalsobypeopleinallwalks

oflife.

Thefailureofchildeducationdoesmoreharmtothedevelopmentofoursocietyandourcivilizationthantothechildrenthemselves.Thus,it’shightime

thatparents,educatorsandthegovernmentmade

concerted

efforts

toputanendtothissituation.70words2023/6/26Writing13重复观点2.5建议措施段2008(P47紫)——积极寓义Accordingly,itisimperativeforustotakesomemeasurestoenhancethesenseofteamworkinoursociety.Weshouldbearinmindthatteamworkisofgreatsignificancetobothoursocietyandourselves.Everyoneshouldhavetheabilityofteamwork.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccessandonlyinthiswaycanoursocietybecomemoreharmonioustolivein.70words2023/6/26Writing14both三、短文写作篇章分析(1)写作三段论首段——图画描述段中间段1——寓意说明段+原因分析段中间段2——寓意说明段+举例说明段

中间段3——寓意说明段+利弊分析段尾段——建议措施段(2)篇章结构体现段与段之间过渡——第二段第一句寓意说明;第三段第一句重复观点段内衔接——各种连接词使用(P6)2023/6/26Writing15消极寓意类积极寓意类必须使用!!!利弊包含类三、短文写作步骤审题——积极还是消极列提纲——三段选择与句型填充(中文解决逻辑思路)开始写组——注意语法,书写工整检查——拼写、标点、语法、动词(唯一性原则)2023/6/26Writing16图画描述Thereisaboilinghotpot,asisillustratedinthepicture,withvariousingredientsofmulti-cultures,suchasfamousfigureshomeandabroad:BiShengandShakespeare,philosophicalconcepts:ConfucianismandTaoism,performingart:BeijingOperaandSwanLake,andthelike.Thecaptionunderthepictureisthattheculturalhotpotisbothdeliciousandnutritious.59words2023/6/26Writin

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