读后续写祖父的手表宁波二模

2021年4月

宁波二模读后续写祖父的手表

Thewatchwasmygrandfather’s.Hehungitbyhisbed.ThefacewasmarkedwithelegantRomannumbersandthecasewasgold.Mygrandfathergotitafterhisfiftyyearsoffaithfulservicewithhisfirm.IoftengazedatitlonginglyasIsatwithmygrandfatherafterschool.ThedayItoldhimofmysuccessintheexaminations,hewaspleased,“You’llbegoingtothenewschoolnext,Will.Rememberyou’llneedplentyofpatience.That’stherightway.”Inoddedwhenhandinghimthewatch.Hegazedatitforsomemoments,andwoundit.Thenextmorningmymothertoldmehehaddiedinhissleepandleftmehiswatch.Forsafety,mymotherwastoputitawayintrustuntilsheconsideredmeoldenoughtolookafterit.Iprotested(抗议)sostronglythatshefinallyagreedtohangitinthekitchenwhereIcouldalwaysseeit.Thesummersoonendedanditwastimeformetoenterthenewschool.Inevermadefriendseasily,andforatimeIdidlittlemorethangetonspeakingtermswithsomeboys.Oneofthemwasarichfellowwhosewayofimpressinguswastoparadehispossessionsbeforeus.EverythingCrawleyhadwasbetterthanours–untilhebroughtthewatch.

“Ihaveabetterwatchthanthat,”Iannounced,attemptingtoimpressthem.“Well,showittous,”Crawleysneered(冷笑)indisbelief.Embarrassed,Ipromisedtobringittothemthatafternoon.Consideringtherewasnowaytopersuademymothertoletmetakethewatch,Idecidedtowaitforhertostepoutsideandslipthewatchintomypocket.SoIdid.Afterlunch,asIwastooexcitedtowaitforthereturnbus,Igotmybikeoutoftheshed.Irodefast,excitementcoursingthroughme.Thensuddenlyapuppyranoutintomypath.Ipulledatmybrakessohardthatthebikestoppedtoasharpstandstill(急停)andIfellover.Paragraph1Ipickedmyselfupandputatremblinghandintomypocket.Paragraph2“That’snottherightway.Patience,Will.Patience,”avoiceechoedinmyearsaftertheboysleft.按时间顺序梳理事件

1.AfterschoolIoftengazedatitlongingly2.Theday3.Thenextmorning4.Timeformetoenterthenewschool5.Afterlunch6.OnmywaytoschoolGrandfather:Rememberyou’llneedplentyofpatience.That’stherightway.Grandfatherdiedandleftmehiswatch.IwantedtoimpressCrawleywithgrandfather’swatch.Istolethewatchandgotmybikeout.Ifelloverfrommybike.形容词副词梳理“I”情感

gazedatitlonginglyasIsatwithmygrandfatherafterschoolIprotested(抗议)sostronglyInevermadefriendseasilyEmbarrassed,IpromisedtobringittothemthatafternoonIwastooexcitedtowaitforthereturnbusIpickedmyselfupandputatremblinghandintomypocketLongtohavethewatchIvaluedthewatchIwaseagertomakefriendsIwasembarrassedtobesneeredat.Iwasexcitedtoshowoffmywatch.Iwasafraid.情节情感线1.AfterschoolLongtohavethewatch2.ThedayGrandfather:Rememberyou’llneedplentyofpatience.That’stherightway.3.ThenextmorningGrandfatherdiedandleftmehiswatch.4.TimeformetoenterthenewschoolIwaseagertomakefriends5.AfterlunchIstolethewatchandgotmybikeout.6.OnmywaytoschoolIfelloverfrommybike.Iwasafraid.文章的主题“You’llbegoingtothenewschoolnext,Will.Rememberyou’llneedplentyofpatience.That’stherightway.”“That’snottherightway.Patience,Will.Patience,”Patienceisthekey.Oneofthemwasarichfellowwhosewayofimpressinguswastoparadehispossessionsbeforeus.Howtodevelopfriendship“Ihaveabetterwatchthanthat,”Iannounced,attemptingtoimpressthem对衔接句子的自问自答梳理续写思路Paragraph1Ipickedmyselfupandputatremblinghandintomypocket.1.WhatdidIfindwhenIreachedthepocket?withwatchornowatch2.IfIcouldn’tfindthewatchinthepocket,wherecouldIfind?Ontheroadorinthebike3.Whathappenedtothewatch?Nothingorbroken4.HowdidIfeelandthink?desperate两段之间的衔接Paragraph2“That’snottherightway.Patience,Will.Patience,”avoiceechoedinmyearsaftertheboysleft.Theboysmustcomeandseethesituationandsaysomethingtomebeforetheyleft.对衔接句子的自问自答梳理续写思路Paragraph2“That’snottherightway.Patience,Will.Patience,”avoiceechoedinmyearsaftertheboysleft.1.WhatwouldIthinkwhenthinkingaboutgrandfather’swords?Irealizeditwasright.2.WhatwouldIthinkaboutmybehavior?Iadmittedmymistake.3.WhatwouldIsaytomymother?Itoldthetruth.

4.WhatdidIlearnfromtheexperienceIlearnedwhatitmeanttobepatientandtomaketruefriends.Ipickedmyselfupandputatremblinghandintomypocket.Empty!Ifoundnothinginmypocket,afactthatseemedlikeaspearpiercingintomyheartwhichstartedtobleedimmediately.Lookingaroundanxiously,Ialmostburstintocrying.Justnearmylyingbike,thegoldencaseofthewatchwasforcedopen.ClearlyIruinedmydeceasedgrandfather’spossession.Icautiouslyputthewholethingonmybothpalmstoinspectthedamage.TheglassofthewatchwascrackedintoseveralpiecesandsomeRomannumbersweredisplacedfromitsface.JustatthetimeIbrokedown,agroupofboysledbyCrawleypassedme.TheylaughedloudlywithCrawleyscreamingwordslike“Whatafinestbrokenwatch!”下水作文“That’snottherightway.Patience,Will.Patience,”avoiceechoedinmyearsaftertheboysleft.Grandfatherwasright!Iwipedawaymytears,andwrappedmypreciouswatchwithapieceofpaperandthenputitintomyschoolbag.“Whatwasdonewasdone,”thoughtItomyself.“Whatisimportantnowistodocorrectthingsnext.”Afterschool,IwouldtellmymotherhonestlythatIhadstolenthewatchouttoimpressfriendswhoturnedoutnottobemytruefriends.IwouldadmitthatIhadforgetthelastadvicethatgrandfathergaveme.However,fromthenonIpromisedthatthisbrokenwatchwouldalwaysremindmetobepatientuntiltruthemergeditself.Z下水作文答案范文Ipickedmyselfupandputatremblinghandintomypocket.Then

Ibroughtoutwhatwasleftofmygrandfather'sproudestpossession.Therewasdeepbulgeinthewatch,theglassshattered,andtheRomannumberslookingcrazilyatoneanother.Puttingitback,Irodeslowlyontoschool,numbwithmisery.Afterwhatseemedforever,Ifinallyturnedupbeforethewaitingboys.“Mymotherwouldn'tlet