读后续写练习写作指导讲义-2023届高三英语三轮冲刺

读后续写练习写作指导讲义第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasoneofthosedayswhennothingseemedtogoright.Idraggedmyselfoutofthebedandalloftheroutinesbeganearly.Idroppedmytwoolderchildrenatschoolwithreliefandunwillinglyheadedtothesupermarkettobuygrocerieswithmyyoungest.Iwasn'tfeelinganysenseofappreciationformycomfortablehomeorlovelyfamily.Iwasgettingmadwiththisearlyday,andmyson,justfouryearsoldatthattime,wasbeingdifficult.Iracedaroundtopicktheitemswithnoregardtocost,whiletryingtocontrolmynaughtychildwhosebehaviorhadnowaddedtomycompletedispleasure.Yes,Iwasthatmother,threatening,androaringatasmallchild.Weeventuallymadeittothecheckoutandstoodinthequeuewaitingforourturn.Afterashorttime,Inoticedthatsomeonehadjoinedthelinebehindus.Iturnedandsawanoldman.Heworeadirtyovercoat.Hisshoeswerewornout,andhistrouserstappedaroundsocklessanklesonthiscold,wetday.Inhishandshejustcarriedasmallboxoflong-lifemilk.Ihadtoomanygroceries.Iaskedhimifhe'dliketogoaheadofme.Itwasn'tanactofkindnessonmypart,alsonotmyautomaticreaction.PerhapsIjustdidoutofasenseofguilt,orIjustwantedhimgone.Afterall,hispresencemademeuncomfortable.Inthesameway,Ifeltuncomfortableandavoidedmyeyeswhenpassingahomelessperson.Hedidn'trespondtomeasifIhadsaidnothingtohim.Ilookedathimandrepeatedmywords.Thistime,IwassurethathehadheardwhatIsaid.注意：.续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。审题：有段时间，作者“我"（可能是三孩的母亲）每天被家庭生活琐事所累所烦，身心身心俱惫，当天带4岁的小儿子去超市购物时，儿子又顽皮，这更令“我”恼怒。心情极为不好。恰在此时，一个满身臭味的老人过来排队结账。因为想打发他快走，“我”让他插队排我前面。老人开始没有回应（可能是从没有人对他那么客气和礼让，此处埋下了一处伏笔），后来听清楚了还是将信将疑。情节设计后面发生的故事应该怎样发展呢？从同学们的习作和我随机问询同学得知，他们一般看不出这个老人是个知恩图报的人。这篇文章如果要想写好，就必须很好把握原文中文中提到的二个细节：1）原文第二段中提到的“那位老人穿着一件脏大衣。在这寒冷潮湿的日子里，他的鞋子磨破了，裤子在光着脚的脚踝处打响。他手里只拿着一小盒长寿牛奶。”2）原文第三段中提至IJ的“这不是我的善意之举，也不是我的本能反应，也许我只是出于内疚，或者我只是想让他离开。毕竟，他的存在让我感到不舒服。”部分问题1）没有看懂所给第二段提示句中的change的意思为“零钱”；2）尽管理解change在这里的意思，但没有理解这个“零钱”是怎么留下来的。有的怀疑这个零钱是收银员找给老人的，有人猜测这个零钱是那个老人掉落的。但如果很好地分析了原文的细节，得出是老人为了回报“我”的善意就是最好的结局。(他笨笨地认为“我”是一个好心人，对他表示尊敬、礼让、友好，所以他在结账时有意塞给站在他身边的“我”孩子手里的或是他在结账时悄悄托请收银员把这些零钱转交给给排在后面的母子二人。)个人总结如果同学们能写至ij"rewardsomeonewithkindness"之类的句子，就说明看懂了原文，也理解了出题者的意图：歌颂人性的善良和伟大，唾弃生活中像“我”当初那样以貌取人、虚情假意的伪君子。本文的最后要达到的目的应该是警醒人们要平等待人，善待他人。至于续写第二段怎么写，自然就要写“我”终于找到那个老人，并把零钱退送回去了并表示感谢，当然也可写对方拒绝，凸显平凡人的不平凡。如果同学们能够写“我”除了退钱外，还把自己刚买的部分生活用品也送给老人，体现自己的羞愧和蜕变就更好了。出题者参考答案：Helookedsurprisedanduncertain.Heaskedmequietly;"Madam,Ipossiblycouldn'tdoit.Areyousure?”"Sure!"Iconfirmed,noddingathimunwillingly.Hewentaheadslowly,paidforthemilk,andtookhischange.Then,tomyamazement,heturnedtomychildandpressedthechangeintohishand.Withoutaword,heleftanddisappearedintothecrowds.Seeingthis,asenseofguiltfloodedintomymind.(69)Ihadtofindhimandgavebackthechange.Outofthesupermarket,theexactoldmanwasstillwalkingslowly,notgoingfar.Irantohimquickly,pressingbackthechangeintohishandwithabigbagofbreadforhiskindness.Ihurriedawayfastbeforehecouldexpresshisthanks.Atthismoment,myguiltgavewaytorelief.Amazingly,themadnessthathadlongbeendisturbingmethosedaysalsodisappeared.Agentlebreezesoftlykissedme.Iwenthomewithmylovelychildhappilyaswellasgratefully.(80)下水文：Helookedsurprisedanduncertain.Noticingmyslightnod,hesaidthanksagainandagain.Whenhepassedme,theterriblesmellfromhimgrewheavier,whichmademealmostpassout.Iwasturningawayandpinchingmynosewhenmyfour-year-oldsonrushedoverwithaLOLLIPOPinhismouth.Curious,Ilookedaroundandsawthesmellyoldmanleavingthecheckout,wherethecashierwascountingsomechange，"It'sleftbythemanrightinfrontofyou!"shesaidtome.(81words)Ihadtofindhimandgavebackthechange.Themomentwecheckedout,werushedoutofthesupermarket.Withthegroceriesandthechangeinthehand,Isearchedthecrowd.Luckily,Ispottedhimboardingabus.Ishouted,"Hey!Sir!Here'syourchange!"/"That'sarewardforyourkindness"."Thankyou!”Icried."Haveagoodday!”hesmiled.Thesmilewaslikesunlightpiercingthroughthegreyclouds,lightingupmydrearyheart.Hedisappeared,buthisvoicelingeredintheairasbeautifulasthecarolfloatingfromthechurch.Ifroze,ashamedandmoved.(92words]优秀学生作文选:ParagraphI:一加炳。御他and皿优件而」$加血弘枇成的娜用。即触叫也wmt她仞$厕心paidfsittigm取蒯tank必,加呼"s1极硼讹was刎力如仙55眦“rropaid，*"畋"油，加0/4IhMtKHffit切鹿，飒硼M薪/加chanqe，加戊网a$硼，勿知伍「制欣渺：也had此娜侬黑狗曲$仇帆1仞刎n也S痂q施椒优近㈣加仞声e攸T眼而脚帙w制除口旗甲忙p加勿加f卿* Paragraph2:此ina 期咳加皮娅颁n强士储俭邓怔化mmUi现眸皿⑪毗抽血"址加L刚"肺篇网:四加优Imein加］hime而i加岫!岫助切妣而%:h小虫族华村唱d喃工旅d吗败力叫呼?’加m恤aperiod'饰e，"'婴：'sw小眈4坪，历啊.尔也，旗q^cHaXq施^1（〃u*"him治龙，说皿，物t的泡£。伏伉政）以他/1out才帐切就J〃//加饰Qand刎必吗chUl时ead彳刎po旗欣八Hqtook】oat叫疝MMa叫力m不,old/to加，?。修7i/Hd毗*」必孰八f/加QhMor3旗由g,『ma〃irtie(^^晰-吗—S7 H法basket工彳cudSo。。Ch岫祖力■"火前舟〃勿。勺加力-meI S1 M*jV ，./S/cyX ■・■■■■... rfParagraph2:…干加b(W力洗心力淅一办/qa优ba(k也二廿次olJ力4匕如忆ip^mj卯）M也anJM研鬲$hqnj,旗布加A/t/加CJ/was72,/哗牛在心工秋"* 】r 10_IJpowk和小明胆。t?wM皿土MA也双，5、购辍风r f7 L8MHj*Udw他|jjzJ