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ScarsofloveTheScarsoflovestructurePart1(para1-6)Part2(para7-8)ThestoryAuthor’sunderstandingTip1:whenwritingastory,youcanfirstdescribethestorythenaddyourunderstandingtomakeitclear.Part1:thestoryMainidea:Onahotsummerday,aboyinSouthFloridawasattackedbyanalligatorandfinallysavedbyhismotherandapasser-by.Tip2:use5W+Htoconclude/summarizethemainideaofastory.Para2-4Inahurrytojumpintothecoolwater,heranoutthebackdoor,leavingbehindshoes,socks,andshirtashewent.Hedivedintothewater,notrealizingthatasheswamtowardthemiddleofthelake,analligatorwasswimmingtowardtheshore.Hismother,whointhehousewaslookingoutofthewindow,sawthetwoastheygotcloserandclosertogether.Inutterfear,sherantowardthewater,yellingtohersonasloudlyasshecould.Whatdidtheboydesiretodo?excited/thrilledInahurrytojumpintothecoolwater,heranoutthebackdoor,leavingbehindshoes,socks,andshirtashewent.Hedivedintothewater,notrealizingthatasheswamtowardthemiddleofthelake,analligatorwasswimmingtowardtheshore.Hismother,whointhehouse,waslookingoutofthewindow，sawthetwoastheygotcloserandclosertogether.Inutterfear,sherantowardthewater,yellingtohersonasloudlyasshecould.anxious/worried/fearTip3:usevariousverbstomakethestoryvividandshowthecharacter’sfeelingsHearinghervoice,thelittleboybecamealarmedandmadeareturntoswimtohismother.Itwastoolate.Justashereachedher,thealligatorreachedhim.Fromthedock,themothergrabbedherlittleboybythearmsjustasthealligatorsnatchedhislegs.Thatbegananincredibletug-of-warbetweenthetwo.Thealligatorwasmuchstrongerthanthemother,butthemotherwasmuchtoopassionatetoletgo.Afarmerhappenedtodriveby,heardherscreams,racedfromhistruck,tookaimandshotthealligator.Para3-4alarmed/panic/scaredpassionatedeterminedstrong-willednervousbutdetermined,relieved/gratefulThinking1.Howmanyscarsdidtheboyfinallyhave?2.what’shisfeelingorattitudetothem?Para.5-6Para5-6ThescarcausedbythealligatorThescarcausedbyhismother’sfingernailsbravetoaccept,thepriceofcarelessnessProudtoshow,themarkofloveThechangeoffeelings:Theboy:excitedalarmedrelievedproudThemother:feareddeterminedrelievedanxiousTip4:usesomeadjectivesorfacialexpressionstoshowthecharacter’sfeelingstomaketheemotionclueclear.Part2understandingYouandIcanidentifywiththatlittleboy.Wehavescars,too.No,notfromanalligator,oranythingquitesodramatic.Butthescarsofapainfulpast.Someofthosescarsareunsightlyandhavecausedusdeeplyregret.But,somewounds,myfriend,arebecausebysomeonewholovesyoubecausehehasrefusedtoletgo.Inthemidstofyourstruggle,He'sbeenthereholdingontoyou.YouandIcanidentifywiththatlittleboy.Wehavescars,too.No,notfromanalligator,oranythingquitesodramatic.Butthescarsofapainfulpast.Someofthosescarsareunsightlyandhavecausedusdeeplyregret.But,somewounds,myfriend,arebecausebysomeonewholovesyoubecausehehasrefusedtoletgo.Inthemidstofyourstruggle,He'sbeenthereholdingontoyou.YouandIcanidentifywiththatlittleboy.Wehavescars,too.No,notfromanalligator,oranythingquitesodramatic.Butthescarsofapainfulpast.Someofthosescarsareunsightlyandhavecausedusdeeplyregret.But,somewounds,myfriend,arebecausebysomeonewholovesyoubecausehehasrefusedtoletgo.Inthemidstofyourstruggle,He'sbeenthereholdingontoyou.Thinkhard:Q:what’syourunderstandingofthedifferentscarsinyourlife?Scar:visible/invisible

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