写作技巧点拨系列(五)

写作技巧点拨系列(五)完美衔接过渡,编织流畅作文【典例呈现】阅读下例,体会其中的过渡性词语。假设你是星光中学的李华,将参加主题为“Let’sRideBicycles”的英语演讲比赛,请撰写一份演讲稿,内容主要包括:

1.目前汽车造成的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题;

2.骑自行车的益处,如节能环保、有利于健康、是一种低碳的生活方式等。Goodmorning,everyone,

I’mLiHuafromXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let’sRideBicycles”.①Asisknowntoall(众所周知),withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.②However(然而),theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.③Howcanwesolvetheproblemsthen(那么我们怎么才能解决这些问题呢)?④AsfarasI’mconcerned(据我所知),ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.Foronething,bicyclesdon’tneedanypetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Foranother,bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywon’tgiveoffwastegas.⑤What’smore(此外;而且),ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexerciseanditisbeneficialtoourhealth.⑥Therefore(因此),let’staketheresponsibilitytobuildupalow-carboncitybyridingbicycles.Comeonandjoinus!

Thankyou!【核心点拨】能使书面表达的整篇文章浑然一体的就是一些过渡性词语的使用。这些衔接过渡性词语在句与句之间、段与段之间起承上启下,使文章前后连贯、结构紧凑、过渡自然的作用,从而提升了表达的层次,成为增分的亮点。具体使用时,请注意下面两点:

一、使用过渡性词语1.表递进关系的过渡词besides,inaddition,moreover,what’smore,what’sworse等。2.表转折对比的过渡词but,however,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,despite,inspiteof,whereas,nevertheless等。3.表结果的过渡词so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat等。4.表换一种方式表达的过渡词inotherwords,thatistosay,toputitanotherway等。5.表达普遍规律generallyspeaking,ingeneral,allinall等。6.表总结的过渡词inaword,inshort,tosumup,finally,inconclusion,insummary等。7.表特定的顺序关系的过渡词first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,aboveall,firstofall,then,next,finally,intheend,atlast,eventually等。二、使用过渡性句子段与段之间除了借助于一些篇章层次上的连接性词语,如however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,similarly,therefore,inconclusion,inshort等以外,还经常需要使用一些表示过渡的句子来确保其连贯性。常见的过渡性句子类型有:1.设问引出下文为了引出下文所要表达的内容,作者有时采用设问的方式引出下文。2.总体陈述不同观点有时作者在前一个段落列举各种现象或者引出某个要供大家讨论的话题,接下来就要从整体上论述人们对此持有的不同看法,然后再具体论述各种观点,如Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.等。3.举实例佐证有时为了增强某个观点或者现象的说服力,我们可以使用实例加以佐证。可以使用forexample/instance,suchas,asfollows等来引出下文。【写作指导】常见的逻辑连接语有:①表示平行、对等或选择关系and,both...and,aswell,aswellas,either...or,notonly...butalso等。②表示转折关系but,yet,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,although,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,otherwise,while等。③表示因果关系so,therefore,asaresult(of),because,owingto,dueto,thanksto,onaccountof,seeingthat等。④表示时间顺序关系shortlyafter,first,second...,then,next,finally,immediately,suddenly,soon,intheend,eventually等。⑤表示空间顺序关系here,there,ontheright/left,onthesideof...ontheothersideof,inthemiddle/center/frontof,nextto等。⑥表示对称关系ontheonehand,ontheotherhand;foronething,foranotherthing等。⑦表示递进、强调关系besides,furthermore,what’smore,inaddition,moreover,worsestill,aboveall,certainly,importantofall,tomakemattersworse,afterall,infact等。⑧表示解释、说明关系namely,actually,suchas,forexample/instance,thatistosay,inotherwords,andsoon,totellyouthetruth,accordingtothis,believeitornot等。⑨表示结论inshort,inbrief,inaword,asyouknow,asfarasIknow,onthewhole,inconclusion等。【对点训练】Ⅰ.根据句意填入适当的过渡性词或短语1.Forthem,theimprovementofstudentsisthebestreward._________,Iwanttosay“HappyTeachers’Day”sincerelytoteachers.2.Insummerdays,theweatheristoohottostand.____studentshavetostayoutsidealltheday.__________,thetrainingisveryhard.3.__________,heunderstoodwhatIsaid.ThereforeButInadditionAsaresult4.Comparedwiththewestern,theChinesechildrenareshyerincommunication.________________,astheonlychildinthefamily,theycan’tenjoythehappinessfrombrotherorsister.5.Inthisaspect,workingisnotonlyawaytomakealiving,butalsoawayforustoachieveourselves._____________,workingcanbringsatisfactiontousinspirit.6.Theboywasn’tallowedtoenterschool.____________,hewastooyoungtogotoschool.OntheotherhandInotherwordsThat’stosay7._________________,thecoldestweathercomesinJanuary.8.Wedislikepeople_______him.9.Idon’tdislikehimatall;______________Iamveryfondofhim.10.Myaimwas_________todeterminewhatIshoulddonext.GenerallyspeakingsuchasonthecontraryfirstofallⅡ.阅读下列短文,选择适当的过渡词或短语填空so,as,dueto,but,inaword,inasense

(2013·重庆高考)Thismotherisnottheonlyonethathastheproblemofthegenerationgap.______differentattitudesandopinions,asolidgenerationgapappears.Theteenagersthinktheirparentsdon’tunderstandthem__theyprefertotalktotheirfriendsratherthantelltheirparentstheirproblems.Duetoso

_________,thegenerationgapisasignofsocialprogress,___italsoresultsindifficultiesincommunication.Boththeparentsandtheteenagersshouldmakeeveryefforttosolvetheproblem.___te