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1、目击者应该准确报告事实；

2、词数100左右；

3、结尾已为你写好。_________________________________________

AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.

LiHua2021/5/915附图12342021/5/916At7:15onthemorningofFebruary8,2000,

Isawawomandrivingacarhitthemaninthestreet.2021/5/917第二步抓要点一幅图，一要点时态直达语态到位介/副词紧随抓要点，配动词2021/5/918第三步扩展成句把要点变成完整的句子。注意使用介/副词2021/5/919第四步连句成文增加细节呼应首尾句与句相连词与词搭配2021/5/920第五步查错改错主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？时态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？2021/5/921第六步誊写卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！2021/5/922作业选评要改进吗？为什么？2021/5/923精彩范文赏析2021/5/924①At7:15a.m.

onthemorningofFeb.8th,2000,Iwasheading

eastonthesouthsideoftheParkRoad,takingmymorningwalkasusual.②IsawanoldmanontheothersideoftheroadoutsidethegateoftheCityPark.

精彩范文赏析2021/5/925③Hewasjustcrossingthestreetwhenacaronthe3rdStreet

made

asuddenrightturnatthecrossing.

精彩范文赏析2021/5/926④Thecarwas

sofastthattheoldmaneven

didn’thavetimetododge

andthecarhittheelderlyhard.精彩范文赏析2021/5/927⑤Ithoughtthedriverwouldhavestoppedtohelp,butshedidn't.⑥Instead,shejust

droveoff,leavingtheoldmanstilllying

ontheground

inpain.

精彩范文赏析2021/5/928⑦Fortunately,

I

noteddown

thedetails:

it

was

ayellowcar,

theplatenumberof

which

was

AC864,

and

thedriver

was

ayounglady.

⑧Afterthat,

I

wentoverto

checkout

theoldman.精彩范文赏析2021/5/929AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarand

tooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.

LiHua精彩范文赏析2021/5/930图12021/5/931图22021/5/932图3年轻妇女颜色：黄