（2023年）福建省厦门市大学英语6级大学英语六级模拟考试(含答案)

（2023年）福建省厦门市大学英语6级大学英语六级模拟考试(含答案)学校:________班级:________姓名:________考号:________

一、1.Writing(10题)1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:China'sConfuciusCollegesintheWorld.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.中国在海外已经设立并将设立更多孔子学院

2.设立孔子学院有利于中国传统文化的传传播

3.对此有不同的看法，你如何看待

China'sConfuciusCollegesintheWorld

2.1．在大学中，室友之间和睦相处很重要；

2．有些人认为相互体谅是和睦相处的重要途径；

3．你的观点。

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteathank-youletteronbehalfofthestudentuniontoacompanywhosponsoredtheschoolfootballgame.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.代表学生会感谢×公司对校内足球赛的赞助

2．向该公司赠送一份很有纪念意义的礼物

3．表达美好的祝愿，希望该公司继续支持本校的各项活动

AThank-youLetter

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAnImpressiveFilm.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.简单介绍你最喜欢的一部电影

2.谈谈你对这部电影但感受

3.总结

5.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledSecondhandGoodsTransaction.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.二手物品的交换越来越多；

2.对此人们态度褒贬不一；

3.你的观点

SecondhandGoodsTransaction

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoBeSuccessfulintheFutureJob.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.影响将来事业成功的因素有很多，试举例说明

2．你对此的看法，并阐述理由

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowDoCollegeStudentsSpendTheirHoliday.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbasedonthechartandoutlinegivenbelow.

A:stayingathomeC:doingsocialinvestigation

B:travelingD:otherways

上述两图分别是对1999年和2008年大学生度假方式的调查统计。请按如下要求对两图进行对比：

1．10年来大学生度假方式的变化

2．产生这些变化的原因

3．预想今后大学生度假方式变化的趋势

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledMyViewonAutomobiles.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.汽车给人类带来的益处；

2．汽车给人类带来的副作用；

3．我的观点。

9.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicInformationintheModernSociety.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1．现代社会中信息的获得越来越重要

2．我获得信息的主要渠道(如：图书馆、报纸、电视、电台、网络等)

3．我是如何利用信息的(和别人交流，用于学习小等)

InformationintheModernSociety

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledAHarmoniousSocietyinMyMind.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.1.现在国家主张建立和谐社会

2.我心中的和谐社会

3.为了达到这样的目标我们应该如何做

AHarmoniousSocietyinMyMind

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10题)11.

Bysolvingyourdivorceproblemonline,youneedtopay￡100.

A.YB.NC.NG

12.TheInternetandmediacompanieshaverealizedtheimplicitvaluationsofsocialnetworking,buthaven'tmadeitaworkingrevenuemodel.

13.

Ahotclogisusuallymadefrompork,heel,turkeyandtofu.

A.YB.NC.NG

14.

Thepurposeoftheauthor'sinvestigationistostudy______.

A.whypeopletryhardtoseizeluck

B.whypeopleworshipgodssinceancienttime

C.whysomepeoplearealwaysluckyandothersaren't

D.whypeoplearefeelingluckywhileworshipinggods

15.

PatternsofAdhgeneofflieslivingatdifferentlatitudescanhelpscientiststosee______.

16.

LyubomirskydesignedaSubjectiveHappinessScalebecauseshebelieveditwaseachperson's______thatcanfaithfullyrecordtheirownhappiness.

17.Thosepeoplewhohavesetupcorrectgoalswillalwaysbehappy.

18.

Theoriginofhydroelectricpoweristhe______producedwhenwaterobeysthelawsofgravity.

19.DirtyMoneyforLaundries

Sellingillegaldrugsisbigbusinessandlaunderingtheproceedsanartform.Onekilogram,or2.2pounds,ofrawcocaleavesisworth$1,400inLatinAmerica.Bythetimeitisturnedintorefinedcocaine,itsvaluehasgrownto$100,000.Makingthemoneyappeartohavecomefromalegitimatesourcethatcancreateapapertrailspanningdozensofcountries,andaweboffinancialtransactionsthatmaybeimpossibletounravel.

TheUnitedNationshasestimatedthatbetween$120billionand$500billionislaunderedeachyearintheindustrialworldbiggerthanthevolumeoftheoiltrade.

Illegallyobtainedmoneyisdifficulttoopenlyspendandinvest:Drugcashoftenconsistsoflargevolumesofmixeddenominationnotes;thephysicalvolumeofnotescanbefarlargerthanthevolumeofthedrugsthemselves.Performinglargetransactionswithoutarousingsuspicionisthelaunderer'sprincipalhurdle.

Differentcountrieshavedifferentdisclosurerequirements,andthelaundererseekstoexploitthatbymovingmoneybetweenjurisdictionsandcoveringuptheaudittrail.TerryBurkeoftheNationalDrugsIntelligenceUnitinBritainsaid:"Thebigcasesaresointernationalinscale,anditcanbeverydifficulttolifttheveilofsecrecy."

Investigatorshaveidentifiedthreemainstagesinthelaunderingprocess.

Inthefirststage,themoneycanbedepositedinalegitimatepremiumlifeinsurancepolicy.Orthecashcanbeusedtobuy'art,jewelry,antiquesorgamblingchips.

Thesecondstageiscalled"layering".Thelaundererwantstoseparatehisillicitproceedsfromtheirsourcesoheentersintoalargenumberoffinancialtransactionsdesignedtodisguisethetrailandprovideanonymity.

Finally,thereis"integration".Ifthelayeringhasbeensuccessful,thelaundererwillbringthemoneybackintotheeconomyinsuchawaythatitappearstobenormalbusinessfunds.So,anartobjectwillbesold,alifeinsurancepolicyredeemed,andsoon.

TheBCCIscandalisaclassicinstanceofdrug-relatedfinancialabuse.Withtotalassetsin1988of$20billionand417branchesin73countries,BCCIwasconsideredtheseventh-biggestprivatebankintheworld.Initscase,prosecutorsallegedthatoneschemeitoperatedwastocollectcashinvariousAmericancities,whichwasdeposited.ThemoneywasthentransferredbywiretoBCCIaccountsabroadandusedtobuycertificatesofdepositthatactedascollateralforBCCI"loans"tothedrugtraffickers,supplyingthemwith"clean"money.

AnothermoneylaunderinginvestigationintheUnitedStatesandBritain,code-namedOperationCougar,hassofaridentified$318millionof"dirty"money.ThelaunderingoperationspannedtheIsleofMan,theBritishVirginIslandsandtheU.S.mainland,andinvolvedsevendrugdealingorganizations.Atthecenterofeachorganizationwasalawyerwhocoordinatedthemovementofmoneybetweenoffshorebankaccounts,shelfcompaniesandnomineedirectors.

Onetrickwastousetheorganizations'offshorecompaniestomortgageproperty.Onthefaceofit,thepapertrailwaslegitimated--themortgagewasbonafide,andinterestpaymentsweremet.Butasthefinanciallayerswerepeeledback,theillicitoriginofthemoneybecameapparent.Sofar,OperationCougarhasresultedintheimprisonmentof40people.

Onemethodthathascometotheattentionoftheauthoritiesmorerecentlyisthelaunderers'useofHawalabanksfamily-runbusinessesofferingmoneytransmissionservices,Interpolbecamesufficientlyworriedtomountatwo-dayconferenceonthesubjectearlierthisyear.HawalaoriginatesinAsiaandisbasicallyasystemoflettersofcredit,providingalegitimatechannelforthemovementofmoneyfromoneareatoa

A.YB.NC.NG

20.ReturningtoScience

TeresaGarrettwasworkingpart-timeasabiochemistrypostdoc(博士后).Shehadaninfantathome,andshewasmiserable.Sheandherhusbandwereconsideringhavingasecondchild.Shedidn'tlikeleavingherdaughterwithadaycareprovider,andshewonderedifherslimincomejustifiedtheexpenseofchild-care.Shedecidedtostayhomefulltime.

Itwasalonelybutpracticaldecision,shesays.Shehadn'truledoutthepossibilitybutshedidnotexpecttoreturntoscience:Afterall,theconventionalwisdomwouldequateseveralyearsofparentingleavewiththeendofaresearchcareer.Garretteventuallyhadtwodaughtersandspenttheirearlyyearsathome.

Thechallengeofmanagingasciencecareerandpersonalandfamilyobligationsisnotanewissue,particularlyforwomen.Inacareerwhereproductivityandpublicationsdefineyourvalue,canyoutakeacoupleofyearsoffandthenmakeasuccessfulreturn?Whenyoudo,willemployerstrustyourdevotiontoyourjob?

ForGarrett,theanswertobothquestionswas"Yes".First,shefoundashort-termteachingtutoratDukeUniversity,theinstitutionwhereshehaddoneherPh.D.AndthenChristianRaetz,whohadbeenherPh.D.adviser,offeredherapostdoc.Thetimingwasperfect:Shewasreadytostartamoreregularworkschedule,andherhusbandwasinterestedinstartingabusiness.Today,sheisachemistryprofessoratVassarCollege.GarrettcreditsRaetzbothforhisfaithinherabilitiesandhiswillingnesstojudgehercontributionsonqualityandproductivityandnotthenumberofhoursshespentinthelaboratory."Peoplearealwaysshockedtoknowthatyoucantaketimeoffandcomeback,"shesays.

Returningtoresearchafteranextendedpersonalleaveispossible,butitmaynotbestraightforward.Progresscanbeslowandtheremaybesomefalloutfromabreak.Thepathbackdoesn'tcomewitharoadmaporatimeline.Yourreentrywillhaveadifferentrhythmthanyourinitialapproachbecausethistimeyouhavetobalanceyourcareerwiththeneedsofafamily.Theuncertaintycanmakeyoufeelisolatedandalone.Butifyouarepersistentandtakeadvantageoftheresourcesthatareavailable,youcangetitdone.

SteppingSideways

Aftertimeawayfromtheworkforce,it'sparticularlyeasytounderestimateyourvalueasascientistand--hence--totakeoneormorebackwardsteps.Don't,saysRuthRoss,whonearlymadethatmistakeafterspending4yearsathomewithherchildren.APh.D.pharmacologistwithindustryexperience,sheappliedforatechnicianjobattheUniversityofAberdeenintheUnitedKingdomassheplannedherreturntoscience.Shewouldhavetakenthejobifithadbeenoffered,shesays,but"thatprobablywouldhavebeenabadcareermove".Asitturnedout,theuniversitydecidedshewasover-qualified.

Insteadoftakingastepback,takeastepsideways:Ifyouleftapostdoc,returntoapostdoc,perhapswithaspecialcareerreentryfellowship.AfacultymemberatAberdeenencouragedRosstoapplyforanewlyestablishedcareerreentryfellowshipfromtheWellcomeTrust.Fundingfromthatorganizationsupportedherpostdoctoralresearchuntiltheuniversityhiredherintoafacultypositionin2002.

After2yearsathomewithhersonandtwindaughtersfollowedby3yearssearchingforprojectmanagementjobsinthebiotechindustry,biochemistPlaAbolagotwindofanopeningattheMolecularSciencesInstitute(MSI).AnMSIstaffscientistneededskillslikehersbutlackedmoney,sothetwoappliedjointlyforanNIHcareerreentrysupplement.She'snowaproteinbiochemistandgrantwriteratProsettaBioconformatics.

IndependenceandFlexibility

Insteadofsteppingbackwardorsideways,physicistShireenAdenwallatookastepforward.Insteadoftakinganotherpostdoc,shesetupan

A.hercommonsense

B.herseveralyearsofparentingleave

C.herslimincome

D.hercomingsecondchild

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10题)21.听力原文：M:Ihaveinvitedourformerforeignteacherstomyhousefordinnertonight.Whydon'tyoucometojoinus?Iamsuretheywillbegladtoseeyou.

W:I'dliketo.PerhapsIwillhavearaincheckbecauseIhavesomevisitorsfromCanadatonight.

Q:Whycannotthewomanaccepttheman'sinvitation?

(17)

A.Sheisgoingtohavesomevisitorstonight.

B.Shedoesnotliketheirformerforeignteachers.

C.Sheisgoingtoseeherforeignteacherstonight.

D.Shehasalreadybeeninvitedtotheman'shouse.

22.听力原文：W:Hello!

M:Goodevening.IsthatMrs.Philips?

W:Yes,itis.

M:Well,Mrs.Phillips.Thisevening,(19)I'mcallingtoofferyouaspecialdiscounton...

W:Ah,no,letmeguess.YouwanttosellasubscriptiontothenewspaperoragreatdealontheairfaretoHawaii,right?Or,youwanttooffermeanunbelievablebargainondancelessons?

M:No,no,actually...Mrs.Philips.Oh,sorry.Thatwasthelastguy.Uh,(20)wewanttoofferyouafreemembershiptooursportsclubdowntownattheintroductorypriceof$39.95...

W:Thirty-nineninety-five?Ithoughtyousaidfree!Uh,listen,I'mnotinterested.

M:Well,itincludesunlimitedaccesstoallourfacilities,includingthegym,weightroom,tenniscourts,andswimmingpool.

W:Again,I'mnotinterested.IhavemyownfitnessprogramIdoaroundthehouseanyway.

M:Well,thisisaonce-in-a-lifetimedeal.Inaddition,thelocationofthesportsclubisnearyourhouse.Thatwillbeconvenientforyou.

W:LikeIsaid,I'llpassthistime.(21)Andpleaseputmeonyour"don'tcall"list.

M:Okay.It'lltakebetweenfourandsixmonthsbeforeyournamewillberemovedfromourdatabase.Youmightbecalledbyanotherrepresentativeduringthattime.

W:Ah,man.Ah,great.

M:Haveaniceevening,Mrs.Philips.

(20)

A.Heispromotingthesalesofsomethingbytelephone.

B.Heistalkingwiththewomanonhowtostayhealthy.

C.Heisdiscussingwiththewomanonhowtostayfit.

D.Heistalkingwiththewomanaboutafitnessprogram.

23.(25)

A.TheywillgototheGrill.

B.Theywillgotothelibrary.

C.Theywillgoswimming.

D.Theywillwalkhome.

24.(35)

A.Physician.B.Fictionalwriter.C.Psychologist.D.Historian.

25.

【B8】

26.

【B5】

27.听力原文：W:Ijustfoundouttheregistrationofthecreativewritingclassisfull.NowIhavetowaitanotherwholeyeartogetin.

M:Whydon'tyoucheckbackafterthefirstweek?Somebodymightdropit.

Q:Whatdoesthemansuggestthewomando?

(14)

A.Sheshouldgiveuptheclass.

B.Shehastowaitanothertimeforregistration.

C.Shecancomebackforregistrationaweeklater.

D.Shecancomebacktoseeifthereisachanceafterthefirstweek.

28.听力原文：W:Hey!Ifyoucan'tenjoythatatasensiblevolume,pleaseuseearphones.I'mtryingtostudy.

M:Oh!I'msorry.Ididn'trealizeitwasbotheringyou.

Q:Whatisthemanprobablydoing?

(13)

A.Singingloudly.

B.Listeningtomusic.

C.Studying.

D.Talkingonthephone.

29.(28)

A.Tohaveatalkwithhim.

B.Toinform.himoftheirdecision.

C.Todiscussaproblemwithhim.

D.Totellhimaproblemtheymetwith.

30.听力原文：M:Haveyoumadeupyourmind?

W:Yes,I'llgiveupbiologyandswitchtoarcheology,wheremyinterestlies.

Q:What'stheprobablerelationshipbetweenthetwospeakers?

(19)

A.Customerandclerk.

B.Professorandstudent.

C.Bossandemployee.

D.Lawyerandclient.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)31.

Theword“packages”(LinePara.2)means______.

A.parcelscarriedintraveling

B.acomprehensivesetofactivities

C.somethingpresentedinaparticularway

D.charityactions

32.Citiesmakegoodhomesforperegrinefalconsbecausetheyprovide______.

A.bountifulnestingareas,abundantfood,andrainwatercontrolbasins

B.abundantfood,buildingsthatresemblecliffs,endnonaturalpredators

C.largebuildingswithchimneys,otherwildlife,andwell-lightednestingareas

D.abundantfood,chimneys,rubble,andwindowsills

33.By2030thegovernmentsindevelopedcountriesmayputanendtofixedretirementages______.

A.tosavethecurrentpensionsystem

B.toensurethebenefitsforhealthypensioners

C.torealizefullretirementbenefitssubstantially

D.torelievethepensionsburdenontheworkingpopulation.

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3题)34.

【S9】

35.

【S10】

36.

【S3】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3题)37.

【S7】

38.【S1】

39.

【S5】

参考答案

1.China'sConfuciusCollegesintheWorldTheverybeginningofthe21stcenturywitnessedtheestablishmentofmanyConfuciusCollegesinforeigncountries.ThesecollegesaremainlyinvolvedintheeffortstoteachChineselanguageandtodisseminateChineseculturetotheworld.ManypeoplebelievethatthefoundingoftheseConfuciusCollegesispropitioustotheChinesepeople'srenaissance.FirstlyitbecomesahallmarkofChinesepeople'ssenseofprideandhelpsChinesepeopletorediscoverthemselves.FurthermoreitcanalsohelptheworldhaveabetterunderstandingofChinesepeopleandChinesecultureaswellascurrentpoliciesofChinesepeoplesoastocreateaharmoniousenvironmentforChina'sfurtherdevelopment.HowevertherearedifferentvoicesfromtheworldabouttheestablishmentoftheConfuciusCollegesabroad.Somewelcomethisnewphenomenonasacontributiontothediversityoftheworldwhileothersviewitasaformofculturalinvasionandasathreattotheworld.ThisisquitenormalfortherearealwaystwokindsofpeopleintheworldwhotakedifferentattitudestowardsChina'sdevelopment.What'sthebestinsuchasituationistotakefulladvantagesoftheConfuciusCollegestopromotetheworld'sunderstandingofChinaandthustochangethesecondattitudetoChina.China'sConfuciusCollegesintheWorldTheverybeginningofthe21stcenturywitnessedtheestablishmentofmanyConfuciusCollegesinforeigncountries.ThesecollegesaremainlyinvolvedintheeffortstoteachChineselanguageandtodisseminateChineseculturetotheworld.ManypeoplebelievethatthefoundingoftheseConfuciusCollegesispropitioustotheChinesepeople'srenaissance.Firstly,itbecomesahallmarkofChinesepeople'ssenseofprideandhelpsChinesepeopletorediscoverthemselves.Furthermore,itcanalsohelptheworldhaveabetterunderstandingofChinesepeopleandChinesecultureaswellascurrentpoliciesofChinesepeoplesoastocreateaharmoniousenvironmentforChina'sfurtherdevelopment.However,therearedifferentvoicesfromtheworldabouttheestablishmentoftheConfuciusCollegesabroad.Somewelcomethisnewphenomenonasacontributiontothediversityoftheworld,whileothersviewitasaform.ofculturalinvasionandasathreattotheworld.ThisisquitenormalfortherearealwaystwokindsofpeopleintheworldwhotakedifferentattitudestowardsChina'sdevelopment.What'sthebestinsuchasituationistotakefulladvantagesoftheConfuciusCollegestopromotetheworld'sunderstandingofChinaandthustochangethesecondattitudetoChina.

2.HarmoniousDormitoryLifeObviouslydormitorylifeisanindispensablepartofcollegelife.[1]Tokeepaharmoniousrelationshipinthedormitoryisreallyimportantforcollegestudents.[2]Somestudentsthinkthatthebestwaytokeepaharmoniousrelationshipistobeconsiderate.[3]Foronethingconsiderationforothersisaneffectivesolutiontoconflictsinlifebecausebeingconsideratemeansbeingcarefulnottobringinconveniencetoothers.[4]Sowhenenjoyingchattingwithfriendsonthephoneweshouldavoidspeakingtooloudanddisturbingthosewhoarestudyingorhavingarest.[5]Foranotherconsiderationforothersisabridgeforfriendship.[6]Withconsiderationwecanstandinothers'shoestodealwithproblemswhichisthepreconditionoffriendship.[7]I'minfavoroftheaboveopinion.Apartfrommutualconsiderationweshouldalsorespectourroommatestreatthemequallyandkindly.Harmoniousdormitorylifebringsusasenseofcomfortanditpaystomaintainaharmoniousdormitoryrelationship.HarmoniousDormitoryLifeObviously,dormitorylifeisanindispensablepartofcollegelife.[1]Tokeepaharmoniousrelationshipinthedormitoryisreallyimportantforcollegestudents.[2]Somestudentsthinkthatthebestwaytokeepaharmoniousrelationshipistobeconsiderate.[3]Foronething,considerationforothersisaneffectivesolutiontoconflictsinlife,becausebeingconsideratemeansbeingcarefulnottobringinconveniencetoothers.[4]Sowhenenjoyingchattingwithfriendsonthephone,weshouldavoidspeakingtooloudanddisturbingthosewhoarestudyingorhavingarest.[5]Foranother,considerationforothersisabridgeforfriendship.[6]Withconsideration,wecanstandinothers'shoestodealwithproblems,whichisthepreconditionoffriendship.[7]I'minfavoroftheaboveopinion.Apartfrommutualconsideration,weshouldalsorespectourroommates,treatthemequallyandkindly.Harmoniousdormitorylifebringsusasenseofcomfortanditpaystomaintainaharmoniousdormitoryrelationship.解析：[1]点题，指出和谐的宿舍关系对大学生来说非常重要。

[2]提出某些人的观点。

[3][5]用Foronething…Foranother…列举理由，说明相互体谅是和睦相处的重要途径。

[4]通过举例，使观点更有说服力。

[6]standinothers'shoes为语言亮点，意为“站在他人的立场”。

[7]提出“我”的观点，并对全文予以总结。

[写作指南]

根据题目所给的提纲，这篇作文结构如下:

第一段阐明宿舍里的和谐关系对大学生来说十分重要；

第二段提出有些人认为相互体谅是和睦相处的重要途径，并予以分析:一方面相互体谅是解决冲突的有效方法；另一方面相互体贴是建立友谊的桥梁；

第三段提出“我”的观点:赞同上述说法，并进一步指出室友之间还应相互尊重，平等对待。

3.AThank-youLetterJune19th[l]DearSirorMadam[2]OnbehalfoftheStudentUnionofouruniversityIsincerelythankXcompanyAThank-youLetterJune,19th[l]DearSirorMadam,[2]OnbehalfoftheStudentUnionofouruniversity,IsincerelythankXcompany解析：这篇作文属于应用文写作。在写信的时候，首先必须把自己置于相关的情境中：明白写信人(“我”)是谁，收信人(“你”)是谁，二者关系如何，写这封信的目的是什么。在此基础上，再根据outline的要求考虑如何把相关信息融入信中。这样的信，才能得体。

以本作文为例，我们可以判断：①写信人是代表学生会动笔的，不应看做私人信件。这种信可以用DearSirorMadam作抬头，也可以直接称呼对方DearMr.Smith之类(当然可以假定写信人是认识对方X公司的经理或老总的了)。落款则应写自己的名字。②写信的目的有两个，首先是感谢对方的赞助(送礼也是表示谢意的方式)，其次是表达良好的祝愿。要辨明重点，应该以表示谢意为主，祝愿的内容只需最后简短表示即可。③学生会这样的学生团体如果要给赞助过自己的企业表示感谢，应该会送什么礼物呢?outline没有明确说明，需考生没身处地杜撰一个——这是本作文题的难点!绝不能太贵；一定要有纪念意义；该礼品注重精神价值而非物质价值；该礼品应该可以为公司收藏，可以放入公司“陈列室”里。从这些要求出发设想一个礼品出来吧!范文用记录足球赛颁奖典礼的DVD作礼品，就很好，很得体。(此外还可以考虑送什么礼物呢?书画作品、相册、都可以吧!)

Analysis

[1]这是公函的格式。

[2]把outline的第1点开门见山说出来。应用文忌套话空话，直接点题是最好的办法。注意“代表……表示感谢”的说法。

[3]写信时的必背句型。无论求职求学还是别的场合，都有可能需要随信附送别的文件/物件之类，就要用到attached/enclosedpleasefind…。

[4]说明送礼意图。remembrance，用得好。此处也可以用gift等。

[5]对礼物的含义加以说明是必要的。下面的几句话都是说明该礼物与公司赞助的活动之间的关系的。

[6]再次表示感谢。

[7]紧扣outline的第3点。表示祝愿。注意文中“感谢”的表达方法：thank,gratitude，appreciate。词语富于变化才能显得有文采。

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