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要求50250-300字的短文,20。ThesisTopicDetaileddiscussion(examples,有漂亮用词用句,即闪光点,20-17分：内容切题，包括题中所列的全部要点；表达清楚，文字连贯；句式有变16-13分：内容切题，包括题中所列的全部要点；表达清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语12-9分：内容基本切题，表达比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语法错误较多，其中有少8-54-21-0分：文不切题，语句，无法理解250201Threewordstoremember:Unity,CoherenceandUnity一致/统一/切题Whenyouwaitontables,rememberthatpeopleareunpredictable.Withthisinmindyouwon’tgetflustered,annoyed,orirritablewhencustomersaskformargarineinsteadofbutter,wholewheatinsteadofwhite,cottagecheeseinsteadofcoleslaw,andFrenchfriesinsteadofsaladwiththeirlinguiniAlfredo.Norwillyouthinkanythingofitwhena orderspumpkinpietoppedwithchocolateicecreamorscrambledeggbeaters(cholesterol-powderedeggs)withgreasyhomefriesandbacon.这段话的第一句表明了,其后紧跟六个例子说明食客难以伺候,整个段落主次分明,每个段落表达一个(通常用句来表达)段落内不应出现多余的或与不相UNITY。文章就不切题了。 议的文章结构一般有三个部分，文章开头部分提出中心论点，主体部分论证观点，议的三个构成要素分别是论点(proposition、论据(evidence和论证(logicalpresentation)。掌握议的论点、论据和论证的写作要求和方法是写好议的前提条件。,考生必须作出自己的选择,因此审题和构思很重要(见map)。 “丹是20世纪最伟大的篮球运动员”可以作为论点而“·是找最喜欢的篮球运动员”，染力。富有力的论据容易引起读者的共鸣．例如·在起草《》时，“Weholdthesetruthtobeself-evident，thatallmenarecreatedequal，thattheyareendowedofHappiness．”此外，论据应该充分。一篇议应该具备充足的论据用以支持中心论点。论据不充分阐明，驳论则是对观点加以驳斥。在议的写作中，通常的情形是破立结合，既有立家曾做过一个非常著名的关于“上帝是不存在的”的。“我们不得不承认上帝或者愿意扑灭世界上的，但他做不到；或者它能做,但他不愿然可以做得到，但他不愿做，这就不符合”上帝是全善的”这个观念了;如果他既愿意做，同时又做得到，那么世界上为什么还有的存在?sometimes,mostoften，moreoftenthannot，nearlyalways”或者“inmyopinion,Ithink，asfarasIamconcerned”这样的用语会不同程度地削弱文章的论证气势。比较段落结 文章结(引入句 一.引 概述展开 论点展开 二.正展开 结尾 1)展开 三.(评论同样，文章是由开头段、正文部分和结尾段三部分组成。开头段揭示文章。正文部。段落的句都必须围绕散着文章的思想展开，才能使文章做到全面、完整。考博作文基本结构：往往包括三个主要组成部分：引言段,正文(3段),引言段：一般由引言句介绍背景(backgroundintroduction)和论点句(thesisstatement)两部的“泛泛而谈”到个别(fromgeneraltospecific)，逐步深入。这样文章就显得自然，思路清晰，对于考生也容易下笔。论题或论题句(thesisstatement)是引言段的，也是整篇文章的，它决定了文章的内容和文章材料的组织安排。(插入“Map”[powerpoint文件(“thesis”[powerpoint文件]) borninthetwentiethcenturyhasseenalotofchangestakeceinalmostallareasofhumanlife.Somepeopleareexcitedbythechallengesthatthesechangesoffer;otherswanttoreturntothesimplerlessautomatedlifestyleofthepast.Livinginthetwentiethcenturyhascertainadvantagessuchasahigherstandardofliving,butitalsohassomedisadvantagessuchasapollutedenvironment,thede alizationofhumanrelationships,andtheweakeningofspiritualvalues.pollutedenvironmentdealizationofhumanrelationships…weakeningofspiritualvalues…Inconclusion,althoughthetwentiescenturyhasindeedgivenusalotofadvantagesbymakingusricher,healthier,rtoenjoyourlives,ithas,inmyopinion,notmadeuswiser.ThetwentiethcenturyhasalsomadeourEarthdirtier,ourpeoplelesshumane,andourspirituallivespoorer.SampleNodoubt,everyonewishestobesuccessfulinlife.Indiscussingthis,threefundamentalprinciplesshouldbeborneinmind:diligence,devotion,andperseverance.Thefirstkeyfactortosuccessisdiligence,whichsimplymeansnowasteoftime.Diligencecanhelpusremove edifficulties,andenlightenourminds.Diligencecanmakeafoolwise,andapoormanrich.Ifweidleawayourtimenow,ourfuturelifewillbeafailure.Ifwearediligentnow,wewillsurelybesuccessfulinfuture.Devotion,whichmeanstheconcentrationofourmindandeffortinngthings,isanotherkeyfactortosuccess.Whateverjobweareng,wemustloveitanddoitwhole-heartedly.Onlywhenwesetoutourmindsonthejobcanwedoitwell.Furthermore,perseverance,orastrongwill,isalsonecessaryinordertomakesuccessacertainty.Ifwestudyorworkdayafterday,themisnothingthatcannotbeachieved.Withoutastrongwill,ontheotherhand,wearelikelytogiveupwhenwemeetsomedifficulties.Inshort,thethreebasicqualitiescanalwaysurgea toperformwonderfulforfinalsplendidsuccess.都有各自的思想而每一段的思想又都是围绕着全文的思想展开的。结尾一句话总结全文。整篇文章突出，思想统—，层次分明，结构严谨。SampleShouldStudentsGoinforTherearetwooppositeviewsonuniversitystudents’tryingtheirhandatbusiness.Oneisthatngbusinesshelpstoadaptthemselvesbettertosocietyaftergraduation,whiletheothersaysitmightoccupytoomuchofthestudents'timeandenergywhich,inturn,hasanegativeimpactontheiracademicstudy.Inmyopinion,aslongaswecansuccessfullystrikeabalance businessandstudying,theadvantageoftheformerismoreFirstly,itletsusputwhatwehavelearnedtopractice.In ngbusinessisnotthateasywehaveexpected.Itrequiresgoodcommunicationskills,negotiationknacks,andpresentationcapabilitiesandsoon.Althoughwecanlearnallthesefromtextbooks,theyareonlytheoretical.Andtherealsituationsarefarmorecomplicated.Aslongasweputtheoriesintopractice,wecangrasptheiressencebetter.Thatisalsowhyatpresent,moreuniversitiesemphasizeontheimportanceofpractice.Ifitisthecaseandmeanwhileweareprovidedwiththechancetodobusinessourselves,whyshouldwenothaveatry?Secondly,itletsusadaptbettertosociety.Itisknownthatitneedstimetoconducttherole-shiftingfromastudenttoaprofessional.Theearlierweareabletoadapttothebusinessenvironmentofsociety,thebetteritisforourfuturecareerdevelopment.Atthesametime,ngbusinessisbeneficialwhenwearetryingtofindtherightpositioninsocietyforourselves.Lastbutnotleast,itenrichesourcampuslife.Campuslifedoesnotmerelymeanacademicstudy;itinvolvesotheraspectstoo.Ifwecanmakebestuseofourleisuretimetodosomethingweareinterestedin,likebusiness,onthebasisoftheguaranteethatacademicstudyintheuniversitieswillnotbeaffected,itsurelymakesourcampuslifemorecolorfulandmeaningful.Undoubtedly,ngbusinessisfullofrisk.Tocopewithitwellnotonlyneedsbraveryandcreativitybutalsorequiresknowledgeandwisdom.So,throughngbusiness,we,universitystudentsaremorelikelytobeahigh-caliberinlectualandmakeagreatercontributiontosocietyinfuture.Exercise: MyViewontheConstructionoftheThreeGorgesAlthoughtheprojectoftheThreeGorgesDam,theworld’slargestdam,isnowunderconstruction,theissueofwhetheritisworthundertakingisstillincontroversy.Actuallyeversincetheproposaloftheconstructionprojectwasputforward,opinionsofithasvariedsharply.………AstheconstructionoftheThreeGorgesprojecthasbothmeritsanddemerits,whatwearegoingtodoisminimizeallpotentialnegativeeffects.ProspectoftheNewAgeofScienceandThereisnodoubtthatthecenturyhasmarkedbyaburstofnewscienceandtechnology.Yet,thetechnologysuchascloningandtheinternetfillseveryone’sheartwithdelightaswellasawe.………Inmyjudgment,however,suchproblemsanddangerswillbeoutweighedbysolutionsandopportunitiesaffordedbythedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,andbalancedbyhumanbeingstotakecorrectiveaction.ReformonMedicalCareIcan’tagreewithnewspapers’praiseofreformonmedicalcareserviceas“asuccess”.Onthecontrary,Ibelievethatthereformonmedicalcareservicewon’tworkinournation,atleastintheruralareasof.………Thehighcostithasincurredandmanydefectsithasbroughtaboutconfirmmeinthethatthereformonmedicalcareservice isafailureratherthanaOpening开头法BroadStatementNarrowingtoaLimitedForgenerations,moralityhasbeenmoldedprimarilybyparents,religion,andschools.Childrentraditionallyacquiredtheirideasaboutwhatisrightandwrong,whichgoalsareimportantinlife,andhowothersshouldbetreatedfromthesethreesources.Butnowthereisanotherpowerfulinfluencingyoungsters.(thesis) evisionisimntinginchildrennegativevaluesabout ,work,andfamilylife.Atalocalhighschoolrecently,studentsinapsychologycourseweregivenahintofwhatitisliketobetheparentsofanewborn.Each“parent”hadtocarryaraweggaroundatalltimestosymbolizetheresponsibilitiesofparenthood.Theeggcouldnotbeleftalone;itlimitedthe“parents”activities;itcedafull-timeemotionalburdenon“Mom”and“Dad.”Thisclassexerciseillustratesacommonproblemfacingthemajorityofnewmothersandfathers.(thesis)Mostpeoplereceivelittlepreparationforthejobofbeingparents.IdeaThatIstheOppositeoftheOneWehearagreatdealaboutdivorce’sdisastrousimpactonchildren.Wearedelugedwithadviceonwaystomakedivorceaspainlessaspossibleforyoungsters;welistentoheartbreakingstoriesabouttheconfused,grievingchildrenofdivorcedparents.Littleattentionhasbeenpaid,however,toadifferentkindofeffectdivorcemayhaveonchildren.(thesis)Childrenfromdivorcedfamiliesmayeskilledmanipulators,yingoffoneparentagainsttheother,worseninganalreadypainfulSeriesofShortWhathappensifachildiscaughtvandalizingschoolproperty?Whathappensifachildgoesforajoyrideinastolencarandaccidentallyhitsapedestrian?Shouldparentsbeliablefortheirchildren’smistakes?Shouldparentshavetopaywhatmightbehundredsofthousandsofdollarsindamages?Adultshavebeguntothinkseriouslyaboutsuchquestionsbecausethelawsconcerningthelimitsofparentalresponsibilityarechangingrapidly.(thesis)Withunfortunatefrequency,courtshavebeguntoholdparentsliablefortheirchildren’smistakes.EducatorNeilPostmanbelievesthatevisionhasblurredthelinebetweenchildhoodandadulthood.AccordingtoPostman,“Allthesecretsthataprintculturekeptfromchildren…arerevealedallatoncebymediathatdonot,andcannot,excludeanyaudience.”(thesis)Thismediabarrageofinformation,onceintendedonlyforadults,haschangedchildhoodfortheworse.BriefBackgroundontheForalongtime,adultsbelievedthat“childrenshouldbeseennotheard.”Onspecialoccasions,youngstersweredressedupandtoldtositquietlywhileadultssocialized.Evenwhentheywerealonewiththeirparents,childrenwerenotsupposedtobotheradultswiththeirconcerns.However,beginningwithpsychologistArnoldGesellinthe1940s,child-raisingexpertsbegantoquestionthewisdomofanapproachthatblockedcommunication.(thesis)Thesedays,expertsagree,successfulparentsarethosewhoencouragetheirchildrentosharetheirthoughtsandconcerns.RefutationofaCommonAdolescentscareonlyaboutmaterialthings;theirlivesrevolvearoundbrand-namesneaker,designernsthelatestfadinstereoequipment.Theyresisteducation,don’tred,barelyknowwhois,andexistonasteadydietofRing-Dings,nachos,andbeer.Thisiswhatmanyadults,includingparents,seemtobelieveabouttheyoung.(thesis)Therealityis,however,thatyoungpeopletodayshowmorematurityandcommonsensethanmostadultsgivethemcreditfor.DramaticFactorSeventypercentoftherespondentsinapollconductedbycolumnistAnnLandersstatedthat,iftheycouldlivetheirlivesover,theywouldchoosenottohavechildren.Thisstartlingstatisticmakesonewonderwhatthesepeoplebelievedparenthoodwouldbelike.(thesis)Mostparents,itseems,haveunrealisticexpectationsabouttheirchildren.Parentswanttheirchildrentoaccepttheirvalues,followtheirpaths,andsucceedwheretheyfailed.(Type3(powerExercisewriteintroductionsentenceforaShopontheEbayhas epartoflife.AnyonesurfingonlinemustknowEbay,whichisanewly-risingindustryforcommercialgoods.Whetheritisroutinemarketingforgroceries,gifthunting,purchasingtrivialnecessities,orbuymajoritems,on-lineshoppershavetheopportunityofselectingandrejecting,ofweighingvaluesandofusingtheirownjudgment.Therefore,shopontheinternetoffersusaworldofchoices.………Toconclude,shoponEbayhas eanexpeditionofdiscovery.Itislittlewonderthatmostofusenjoythewidechoicesitofferswhenshoponline.IsStressaBad“Ican’tstandthepressureandcompetition,”exinedonefriendofminewhenaskedwhyhedecidedtoquithishighly-paidbutdemandingpositioninhis recently.Myfriendmayhavehisownreasons,butIdon’tthinkhisdecisiontoquitiswiseinreality.………Stressisanaturalpartofeverydaylifeandthereisnowaytoavoidit.Whatwecandoistodevelopouradaptiveabilitiestodealwithitratherthantoescapefromit.GoodDoyouwishtoworkhardforyourbrightfuture?Doyouwishtoreaptheharvestofyourpainstaking?Doyouwishtoenjoyyourlife?Yes?Thendoyouhaveagoodhealth?Asgoodhealthmakesitpossibletoenjoyyourlifeandachievewhatyouwishfor.Ifyouwanttorealizeyourwishes,youmaywanttotrysomeofthefollowingwaystohelpbuildinguphealth.………Infacttheabove-suggestedwayshavechangedmecompley.Iwasonceweakandoftencaughtcold.RecentlyIhaveattendedcalisthenicpracticeorganizedbyouruniversityandhavebenefitedalotfromit.Now,Ifindmylifefullofsunshine,withmybodyingodhealthcondition.Inshort,theopeningparagraphconsistingoftwoparts:thetopic(limitedsubject)andthethesis(yourpointofview)hasfourpurposes:ItstatesthethesisoftheItgivesbackgroundinformationonthe引言句要激发读者的Itshouldarousethereader’scuriosityaboutorinterestintheofthecomposition.WritinganEffectiveBodyParagraph正文发展法Thebodyofyourcompositionconsistsofseveralsentences,eachofwhichdeveloporsupporttheTitle:GoodHealth(1996)Outlinegiven:WaystokeepfitYouroutline:therearemanywaystokeepTogetridofsomebadTolearntorelaxTodosomeregularTherearemanywaystokeepfit.First,oneshouldtrytogetridofsomebadhabits.Secondly,oneshouldlearntorelaxoneselffromhisworkingpressure.Finally,oneshouldattendvariouskindsofphysicalexercises.→Nowthatweknowhealthistheresourceofourenergy,whatshouldwedotokeepfit?Firstofall,oneshouldtrytogetridofsomebadhabitsthatdamagehishealth,suchasovereating,drinking,smoking,andsoon.Secondly,thosewhoarealwaysunderpressureworkingshouldfindtimetorelaxbecausetoomuchstresscanleadtoillness.Finally,itisimportantforonetodolotsofphysicalexercise,whicharequiteessentialforhealthymindandbody.→Therearemanywayswhichhelptobuildupone’shealth.Inthefirstce,thosewhoarealwaysonthegofrommorningtillnightshouldfindtimetorelaxbecausetoomuchstresscanleadtopoorperformanceandillhealth.Secondly,ifonewantstokeepfit,hemustgiveupthehabitsthatdamagehishealth.Finally,regularexerciseisessentialforahealthymindandbody.Tothebestofmyknowledge,thereisnothingmorehealthfulthanabriskwalkinthemorning.Furthercanbedifficult,frightening,evendangerous.”YoucandevelopthebodyinatleastthefollowingDescription:Detailsaboutachildwho,whilebeingbabysat,wasbadlyhurtyingonabackyardNarration:Storyaboutthetimeafriendbabysatachildwhobecameseriouslyillandwhoseconditionwasworsenedbythebabysitter’sremedies.Illustration:Examplesofbabysittingproblems:aninfantwhorollsoffachangingtable;atoddlerwhosticksobjectsinanelectricoutlet;aschool-agechildwhoisbittenbyaneighborhooddog; ysis:Step-by-stepaccountofwhatababysittershoulddoifachild esillorComparison:Contrastbetweentwobabysitters:onewell-prepared,theotherCause-effect:Whychildrenhavebadtemper;theeffectofsuchtemperonanunskilledArgumentation:Aproposalforababysittingtrainingprogramtobeofferedbythelocalcommunitycenter.TipsforbodyparagraphItmustbe“FairlyfoughtargumentscanstrengthenYouwillusematerialsaboutanargumentyouhadwithafriend:howthedisagreementstarted,howyouandyourfriendworkedoutyourdifferences,howyourfriendshipdeepenedbecauseofwhatyourlearnedabouteachother.Itwouldnotserveyourthesis,toincludedetailsaboutthewaynegotiatingstrategiescanbackfire.ItmustbeTopreventreadersfromthinkingWhocares?WhoEg.Focusonyourownexperienceworkingatafast-foodrestaurant.Youmightstartbydescribinghowyouonceworkedinsucharestaurant.Astorytol.Thespecificwillhelpreadersto“see”thepointyouaremaking.ItmustbeToenlargethereader’sEg.Towriteabout“Peoplewhoaffirmthevalueofliferefusetowearfurcoats”.Youwillwrite:mostanimalskilledfortheirfurarecaughtinsteel-jaw,leg-holdtrapssnapshutonananimal’slimb,crushingtissueandboneandleavingtheanimaltodie,inseverepain…ItmustbeSupposetowritethatdormitorysecurityisYoubeginsupportingyourthesisbynarratingthetimeyouwerenearlyattackedinyourdormhallway.Youcaneveninventsomematerials,toexaggeratetheamountoftimeittookcampussecuritytorespondtoanemergencycall.SampleGoingAbroadforTheotherdayIannouncedthatIwouldgoabroadforfurtherstudiesrightaftermycollegeeducation.Mydecisionevokedtheimmediateobjectionofmyfamily:WhyshouldIborrowahugestunofmoneyforoverseasstudieswhileImightreceivethesameeducationathomeatrelativelylowcost?Myansweris:inadditiontoknowledge,Icangainexperiencesthatthosewhostayathomewillneverhave.(用个人经历引出，继而引出了文章观点：我出国读书不只是为了First,experienceistheopportunityforthereal-lifeuseofforeignlanguages.(句)Whilecanstudyaforeignlanguageathome,theeffectcanneverbecomparedwithconstantuseofthelanguageinacademicandeverydaylife.Thereisnobetteropportunitytoimprovesecond-languageskillsthanlivinginthecountryinwhichitisspoken.LivinginEnglish-speakingcountriessuchasAmericaandAustraliaforseveralyears,forexample,myEnglishwillbeasperfectasnativeSecond,livingandstudyingabroadoffersmeadifferentoftheworld.(句Onauniversitycampus,foreignstudentsarelikelytoencountertheircounterpartsfromdifferentcountriesandareasandareexposedtodifferentideasmidvalues.Thishelpsmetohaveameaningfulunderstandingofdifferentsocietiesandinevitablyseesmyowncountryinanewlight.Third,overseasexperience,frustratingandpainfulasitmaybe,ishelpful(句).goingabroadforstudyoftenexperiencesmuchmoredifficulty—difficultyinadaptingtoanewcultureandindealingwithallproblemsalone.Yet,thedifficulty,coupledwiththefrustrationbroughtonbycultureshock,isarewardingexperienceforone'sfuturelifeanddevelopmentofAlthoughgoingabroadisexpensiveandperhapspainful,thepayoffisworthwhile.Forthebenefitisnotmerelyknowledgegained,buttheexperiencesdesirableinone's allife．(回到评语首尾呼应：Myanswerisinadditiontoknowledge，Icangainexperiencesthatthosewhostayathomewillneverhave．一Thebenefitisnotmerelyknowledgegained，buttheexperiencesdesirableinone's allife.用词变化：goabroadforstudy--studyabroad—overseasstudy—studyexperience；offeradifferentof—haveameaningfulunderstandingof—seesomethinginanewlight; goingabroadforstudyoftenexperiencemuchmoredifficulty--difficultyinadaptingtoanewculture(同位语)；Thedifficulty,coupledwiththefrustrationbroughtonbycultureshock,isarewardingexperience(插入过去分词句).Thereisnobetteropportunitytoimprovesecond-languageskillsthan...(句)．词汇亮点：evoke,offeradifferentof…,seesomethinginanewlight,betoideas,adaptSampleTraditionally,wetendtobelievethatthemajortaskofastudentisstudyingatschoolandstrivinghardtoachievegoodacademicrecords.Nowthereisagrowingawarenessoftheimportanceofpreparinguniversitystudentsfortheirfuturecareers.Sotherehasbeenageneraldebatethesedaysonwhethertoencourageuniversitystudentstogoinforbusiness.Inmyview,theadvantagesderivedfromlettinguniversitystudentsstarttheirownbusinessoutweighitsnegativeeffects.Tobeginwith,runningabusinessprovidesuniversitystudentswithprofoundhands-onexperienceandinsightsthatnevertobegainedfromtextbooksbysittingintheclassroom.Forauniversitystudent,especiallyabusinessmajor,thebestwaytotestwhattheyhavelearnedoncampusistodobusinessoneself.Onecanneverknowwhetheratheoryisrightornotbywithoutapplyingittothepractice.Somepeoplethenmayarguethatrunningabusinessmightconsumetoomuchofthestudents'timeandenergyandresultinlowscoreacademically.Butwhatisthepointofachievingastrikinglyhighscorewithoutknowinghowtoapplytheknowledgetotherealbusinesspractices?BillGates,thesoftwaregiantoftoday,droppeduniversityhalfwayandsoonbecamesuccessful.Thisisagoodcaseinpoint.Inthesecondce,runningabusinesshelpsuniversitystudentsgetpreparedfortheircareeraftergraduation.Weallknowworklifeisquitedifferentfromthelifeintheivorytower.Enteringthesociety,theyhavetobebothfinanciallyandpsychologicallyindependentandtakeresponsibilityforthemselves.Therefore,theymustcontactwiththeoutsideworldasmuchaspossibleinordertogetthemselvesfullyprepared.Inconclusion,universitystudentshavealreadygrownuptomakegoodchoicesfortheirown.Thesocietyshouldprovideguidanceratherthanmakedecisionsforthem.Weshouldadoptamoretolerantattitudeandlettheuniversitystudentschoosetheirownway.Ending结尾法Contrarytowhatmanyadultsthink,mostadolescentsarenotonlyawareoftheimportantissuesofthetimesbutalsodeeplyconcernedaboutthem.Theyaresensitivetotheplightofthehomeless,thedestructionoftheenvironment,andthepitfallsoframpantmaterialism.Indeed,today’syoungpeoplearenotlessmatureandsensiblethantheirparentswere.Ifanything,theyaremoreso.Thegrowingtendencyonthepartofthejudicialsystemtoholdparentsresponsiblefortheactionsoftheirdelinquentchildrencanhaveadisturbingimpactonallofus.Parentswillfeelbittertowardtheirownchildrenandcynicalaboutasystemthatholdsthemaccountablefortheactionsofminors.Children,continuingtoescapetheconsequencesoftheiractions,will eevenmorelawlessanddestructive.Societycannotaffordtwosuchpossibilities.ThecomicW.C.Fieldsisreputedtohavesaid,“Anyonewhohateschildrenanddogscan’tbeallbad.”MostpeopledonotshareFields’scynicism.Viewingchildhoodasatimeofpurity,theyarealarmedatthewayevisionexposeschildrentotheseamysideoflife,stripyoungsterstheirinnocenceandgivingthemaglibsophisticationthatisapoorsubstituteforGranted,divorcemay,insomecases,bethebestthingforfamiliestornapartbyparentswhobattleoneanother.However,inlongitudinalstudiesofchildrenfromdivorcedfamilies,psychologistJudithWallersteinfoundthatonly10percentoftheyoungstersfeltreliefattheirparents’divorce;theremaining90percentfeltdevastated.Suchstatisticssurelycallintoquestionparents’claimsthattheyaredivorcingortheirchildren’ssake.mendationorCallforItisamistaketoleaveparentingtoinstinct.Instead,weshouldmakeparentingskillsarequiredcourseinschool.Inaddition,anationwidehotlineshouldbeestablishedtohelpparentsdealwithcrisessuchtrainingandcontinuingsupportwouldhelpadultsdealmoreeffectivelywithmanyoftheproblemstheyfaceasparents.Thebusyschedulesthatmotadultsfacefromdaytodayhavecreatedarisinghealthprobleminthemodernworld;Stressaffectsalmosteveryone,fromthehighlypressuredexecutivetothebusyhomemakerorstudent.Itcancauseavarietyofphysicaldisorders,rangingformheadachestostomachulcersandevenalcoholism;Stress,likeacommoncold,isaproblemthatcan’tbecured;however,itcanbecontrolled.A canlearntocontrolstressbysettingrealisticgoals,enjoyingahobbyand/orphysicalexercise,andbymaintainingagood,warmrelationshipwithfamilyand(2句),KeyforTosumup,theproblemofstressisquitecommoninoursociety.Althoughdisorderscausedbystressvaryfrom ,stresscanbebroughtundercontrolifpeopledecideuponpracticaltargets,stayrelaxedanddevelopcloseandwarmrelationshipwithothers.Thesis:…AlthoughShanghaiisaculturallyrichcityandanimportantcenterofnationalandinternationalbusiness,itstillhasseveralseriousproblems. A.inadequatetransportationB.extremelycongestedconditionintheC.lackofaffordablehousing…keyforInconclusion,Shanghai’spublictransitsystemisinbadshape.Furthermore,thehighcostofhousingandmassivetrafficjamsareallnegativeaspectsofthiscity.Thesis:…Flextimehasobviousadvantagesforbothworkersandmanagementalthoughitmaynotbepracticalinalltypesofbusinesses. 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