高考英语复习读后续写练习课件（体育精神：越野比赛中帮助竞争对手冲向终点）

高考英语读后续写语篇练习体育精神：越野比赛中帮助竞争对手冲向终点1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Inthesportoftrackandfield,athletescompetenotonlywithoneanotherbutagainstthemselves,andwitheachracetheystrivetoachieveanewpersonalbest.ForBrandonSchuttrunninginwhatwouldlikelybehisfinalcross-countrymatchbeforegraduatinghighschool,hispersonalbestturnedoutnottobeaboutmarkingthefastesttimebutdisplayingthebiggestheart.AlthoughitwasdifficultforhimtoadvancetoupcomingstatemeetlastThursday,ifhistimewasgoodenoughthatday,hestillhadthepotentialtoqualifyforthematch.Afterrunningforonemile,however,Schuttrealizedhewasn’tgoingtobeabletokeepupthefastspeed.Ratherthanriskinjury,heslowedtoanecessarypacethatwouldallowhimtoenterthestatemeet.4续写原文Meanwhile,OmahaBurkeHighSchoolsophomore(二年级学生)BlakeCervenywasrunningaverydifferentkindofrace.Aimingtobeathisownpersonalrecord,afterafaststart,hecontinuedtopushhimselfhard.Withlessthan400meterstogo,Cerveny’slegscrampedup(抽筋)andfailedhim.Buthiswilldidnot.Determinedtofinish,Cervenyrosefromthegroundandcontinuedon,onlytofallagainafteranother150meters…andagain,hegotupandstartedrunning.Thistimehe’dmadeitonly25metersmorebeforegoingdown.Buthewasn’tdoneyet.Concerned,hisdadandhiscoachaskedCervenyifhewantedtostop.Hedidn’t.Withalotofeffort,theyoungrunnerpulledhimselfupandwithanunsteadygait(步伐),movedforwardforonefinalpush.Itwasn’tenough.Aless100metersfromthefinishline,helaycurledonthegroundandhislegshadsimplygivenout.BeforeCerveny’sdadcouldreachhisson,anotherrunner—BrandonSchutt—wasathissidetoofferahelpinghand.5段首句Para1：However,hisfirstattempttogetCervenyupfailed.Para2：Deeplytouchedbythetwoboys’story,thelocalTVstationarrangedanon-camera(摄像机拍摄的)reunionwheretheboysweregiventhechancetoknoweachother.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章以跑步比赛为线索展开，讲述了在高中毕业前的一场越野比赛中，BrandonSchutt的个人成绩虽然不是最好的，但帮助原本很有实力但此时倒在地上的竞争对手BlakeCerveny冲向终点，这展示了真正的体育精神。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：However,hisfirstattempttogetCervenyupfailed.由第一段首句内容“然而，他第一次试图让Cerveny站起来的尝试失败了。”可知，第一段可描写Schutt成功帮助Cerveny抵达终点的过程。10续写思路分析Para2：Deeplytouchedbythetwoboys’story,thelocalTVstationarrangedanon-camera(摄像机拍摄的)reunionwheretheboysweregiventhechancetoknoweachother.由第二段首句内容“当地电视台被两个男孩的故事深深打动，安排了一次镜头前的聚会，让两个男孩有机会互相认识。”可知，第二段可描写Cerveny见到Schutt之后表示感谢，并且对真正的体育精神有所感悟。11续写思路分析续写线索拒绝放弃——再一次尝试——Cerveny站了起来——Schutt帮助Cerveny完成比赛——表达感谢——体育精神鼓舞人心12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①拒绝：refuse/reject②放弃：quit/giveup③站起来：beonone’sfeet/stand④帮助：help/assist情绪类①表达感谢：expressone’sappreciation/showone’sgratitude②鼓舞人心的：inspiring/encouraging13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]HardlyhadtheycrossedthelinewhenCervenywastakentothemedicaltentforcare.(运用了部分倒装)[高分句型2]Intoday’scompetitiveworldinwhichtheemphasisinathleticsissooftenputonbreakingrecords,itwasinspiringtoseethatforanathletelikeBrandonSchutt,thevalueoftruesportsmanshipstillhadlegs.(运用了inwhich引导定语从句)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现However,hisfirstattempttogetCervenyupfailed.ButlikeCerveny,hetoorefusedtoquit.Withasecondtry,Cervenywasonhisfeet.Atameasuredjog,withCervenyholdingSchuttforsupportandSchutthelpingCervenymaintainbalance,thetwocompletedthefinal75metersofthecourseintandem.Schuttevenmadesuretheinjuredrunnercrossedthefinishlinefirst,securinghisopponentafastertime.HardlyhadtheycrossedthelinewhenCervenywastakentothemedicaltentforcare.AndSchuttrejoinedhisteammatesevenwithoutsayingawordwithCerveny.16范文呈现Deeplytouchedbythetwoboys’story,thelocalTVstationarrangedanon-camerareunionwheretheboysweregiventhechancetoknoweachother.Thankstotheopportunity,Cervenymetthepersontowhomhealwayswantedtoexpresshisappreciation.Whentheymet,Cervenysaidwithhisheartflowingwithgratitude,“Brandonisanexcellentperson.Heisreallykind.Mygratitudeisbeyondwords.”Hearingthat,SchutthuggedCervenytightlyandsaid,“Ijusthelpsomeoneinneed.”Intoday’scompetitiveworldinwhichtheemphasisinathleticsissooftenputonbreakingrecords,itwasinspiringtoseethatforanathletelikeBrandonSchutt,thevalueoftruesportsmanshipstillhadlegs.17范文译文然而，他第一次试图把塞尔维尼扶起来却失败了。但和塞尔维尼一样，他也拒绝辞职。第二次尝试，塞尔维尼站了起来。在一次有分寸的慢跑中，塞尔维尼抱着舒特支撑，舒特帮助塞尔维尼保持平衡，两人一起完成了最后75米的比赛。舒特甚至确保受伤的跑者先冲过终点线，为对手争取了更快的时间。他们刚越过警戒线，塞尔维尼就被送到医疗帐篷接受治疗。舒特甚至没有和塞尔维尼说一句话就重新加入了他的队友。18范文译文当地电视台被两个男孩的故事深深打动，安排了一次在镜头前的重聚，让两个男孩有机会认识彼此。多亏了这个机会，