七年级上unit59与朋友共度时光

第二部分高频话题写作指导七年级（上）Units5-9与朋友共度时光写作导图从云南近四年与朋友共度时光相关话题书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题角度如下：描述快乐时光，如2014昆明：怎样放松自己；如2014曲靖：有趣的人或事；如2011曲靖。WhoMyclassmates,friends…Ontheplayground,athome,intheclassroom,atthecinema...WhereInmysparetime,afterschool,duringtheschooltrip…WhenSpendingtimewithfriendsExcited,happy,satisfied,moved,interesting…Shareyourhappinessandsorrowwithyourfriends;playsports;haveatrip;studytogether…YourfeelingsWhat写作范文详见：

亮点句型速成常用句型：Thanksforstayingwithme.推荐句型：①Thanksforstayingwithmeverymuch.

②Thanksforstayingwithmeverymuchduringthesedays.

③ThankyouverymuchforstayingwithmeduringthesedaysandIdofeelhappy.亮点句型速成常用句型：Iblewoutthecandles.推荐句型：①Iblewoutthecandlesinabreath.

②Tobeginwith，Iblewoutthecandlesinabreath.

③IblewoutthecandlesinabreathwhileCindywascomingin.1.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.2.Icanget/receivemany/lotsofpresents/gifts.3.IstillrememberthatwewenttothemoviestogetheronSunday.4.I’mveryhappytogotothecinemawithMikelastweekend.5.Wereallyhadagood/greattime.6.Ireallyenjoythatwegottogetherduringthesedays.7.Ihope/wishthatIcanhaveawonderfulpartywithyou.（常用词汇见本书“话题词汇分类速记表”话题（七）情感与情绪、话题（八）人际交往、话题（十）节假日活动）典例剖析（2014昆明）A.AhappytimeB.Letmetellyou_____要求：1.请从所给的A，B两个题目中任选其一作答，分值相同。如选B题，请把题目补充完整再作答，例如：你可以写“Letmetellyoumydream”,

“LetmetellyouhowtolearnEnglish”,“LetmetellyouIloveyou,Mom”等。2.注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。3.不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike,Gina等英文名字，校名统一用

GuangmingMiddleSchool。4.词数不少于60。【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1.

本题给出的是命题作文，要求写出快乐的时光，应是记叙文；2.着重写出快乐的事情的经过和原因；3.

文章是叙述过去的事情，用一般过去时；4.

词数不少于60，不得使用真实姓名和校名，紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范【范文点评】AhappytimeAfterschoolthisafternoon,①Ihadahappytimewithtwoforeignfriendswholosttheirway.①开头使用who引导的定语从句，使得句子层次感更强，句式更加丰富。ForIknewtheroad,Idecidedtotakethemtotheirhotel.Ontheroad,wetalkedalot.②Itoldthemaboutthegreatchangesinthecity,suchasthewiderroad,themoreconvenient②thegreatchanges,thewiderroad,themoreconvenienttransportation,thefresherair等名词短语既写出城市的变化，也展现出作者丰厚的语言功底和词汇量。transportation,thefresherairandsoon.IalsointroducedthatnowChinesestudentslikelearningEnglish.③Intheirsparetime,theycouldwatchEnglishmovies,sing③watchEnglishmovies,singEnglishsongsandtakepartinEnglishactivities.写出了目前中国学生学习英语的乐趣，作为交谈的一部分，写出了中外文化的交流与融合。EnglishsongsandtakepartinEnglishactivities.Theforeignerstoldmealotaswell.ItwaslatewhenIgothome,butIwasveryhappy.④