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1TherearearangeofdistinctionsbetweentwoofThefirstpointcomingupintomymindisthatcomparedwithtravelingabroad,…is..,while…iselseal Aslongas…when,Iwouldliketotraveltodifferentceswith…who.,toceslikewhere…,ngthingslike…what.(5官出发动名词)itwillbesoexcitingsinceIhaveneverthoughtofitbefore.IhavenoAslongasthefollowingcriteriacanbemet,itisthetimetogoaheadForexample,itisnecessary/fundamentalthatIhavetoMoreover,Iconsider…tobeindispensableaswell,withoutOnemoretomention,thefactorof…shouldberelevant…since..Sointhatcase,Ibelieveif2years’time,mydreamcanberealized.动机类八词listingreasons/solutions learnsomethingnew/ meetfriendsfromallovertheworld broadenhorizons studythenative survivalindependenceproblem-solvingCanbeagoodRaisepeople’sawarenessofprotectionPromotetheinfrastructureFacilitiescanbewellIfthereisalackofeco-protection,thoseirresponsiblewilllitteraround,whichwillunderminethelocalenvironmentLocalernmentshouldbemore Why peopleliketotravelabroad?Whatcanpeoplebenefitfrominternational防守(接过来考官的问题)BasicallythereareawiderangeofbenefitsoftravelingFirstly,itoffersusachance Inadditiontothat, ng…,weareabletoOnemoretomention,itissuchagreatopportunityforusThat’swhyitisgettingincreasingly/moreandmorepopularWhateffectswilltourismhaveonourenvironment?好处坏处类2+1ofaspectsforour好处两点:ThefirstpointI’dliketocoveristhatitistourismthatcan…Apartfromthat,tourismcouldofferachancefor…to…但是走呢:Butconverselyspeaking,iflocalresidentsrelytoomuchontourism,itislikelythat…localenvironmentwillbeundermined暗中的破坏结论就是——SotheconclusionIamtryingtomakeis 结论选一个就好abalancemustbe方要考虑周到 ernmentshouldbemore取决于不同的情况:itvariesfromcasetoWouldyoutravelaroundtheworldinthefuture?5W/AslongasI….在什么样的条件下,Iwouldliketotraveltodifferentcountrieswith谁,like…都哪些国家?whilewecandoavarietyofthingslike…( ngsth请用五官法,seeing….,listeningto…,tasting….,chattingwith…,trying…,ying…, Letmeputitinthisway,probablyitistooearlytomakemydecisionnow,yetaslongasIhavesufficientfundandtime,Idon’tmindtravelingaroundtheworldwithmygirlfriend/boyfriend,ngthingslikesightseeing,makingfriends,tastingfood,visitinglandmarks,experiencingdifferentlifestyleandsoon;inthatway,myhorizonscanbegreatlybroadened.Tobefrank,thisquestionhasneveroccurredtome,butIguessaslongasthefollowingrequirementscanbemet,itisoktogoaheadThemostimportantfactoristhat…financialBesides,…isalsoconsideredtoberelevant,sincewithoutit,…是?来个反证吧itmightintroduce….带来 alabilitiesOh,onemoretoadd,itwill/wouldbeperfectifI….haveBasedonwhatImentionedabove,IsupposeIwontbefarawayfromaround-worldtripWhat’sthedifferencebetweentravelingabroadandliving/studyinglivingabroad---Seemore/ experiencemore/moredifficultLearnlanguagetofitintheculture/acquireknowledge/getabetterpictureofothercultures emoretravelingabroad---easierandmoreinteresting/getabuzz/funoutofLoosenupandchillout放松/relievethetediumoflife/getthehangofothercultures理解The…betweentwoofthemarevarious/manifold/multipleComparedwith…,不能用 Unlike…itcalls…is…,while…isInmanywaystherearequite 需要思路+句型清晰!HeapsTobeginwith,comparedwithlivingabroad,travelingcanbestressful,sincethetimeislimited theycantaketheirtimeoflivingthere overseasstudentsMoreover,unliketravelers,studyinginlocalcesmeansworkinghardondifferentsubjectsandexamsorpapersMoreimportantly,travelersmightbealone,whilelivingabroadneedsdeveloalrelationshiptoliveaqualitylife.Whydomagazineshavehealth-relatedarticles?Sincethereareawiderangeofbenefits ngThefirstpointIcancomeupwithisthatApartfromit,thosekindsofarticlesarealsoconsideredtobean…,especiallypeoplethesedaystendto…Somethinglikethat….ThefirstaspectIwouldliketocoveristhatithelpsusabsorbinformationandacquireknowledgeabouthealth,whichisreallyessentialforustoliveahealthylife/havealifestyleMorethanthat,afterreadingthosearticles,wecanbeencouragedtodomoreexercises,likesomeinstructionstolearnnewskillsThat’swhythosearticlesareWhatdo peopledotokeepfit?manvswomanoldvsyoung?versuslisting?(therebe的方式Oldpeople---Haveabalanceddiet&wholesomefood/keeparegularsleepItdependsondifferentgroupofpeople;foryoungsters/guys,theirpreferenceisto…;whileforseniors/girls,Isupposetheyarefansof…,including….;soitvariesfrompeopletoItdependsondifferentgenders,forguys,theyarepartialtowards表示Ilikesomethingcompetitiveandcooperative,likeyingBball,soccerandsoon,whileforgirls,Iguesstheyarefansofsomethinglessphysicaldemanding/relaxing,likeyogaorjustgoingjoggingSoitreallyvariesfrompeopleto如果不分呢 tokeepfit,likeng…(从五官的角度出发附加题目:Howtokeepahealthydiet?Whatkindsofthingsareunhealthyforpeopletoeat?Howdopeoplegetinformationabouthealth ?/listingthereOld--Newspapers&Magazines/TVshowsabouthealthAPP fingertipsold-fashioned,theytendtoYoung--Informationhighway–healthcarethereItvariesfromdifferentagegroups,foryoungergeneration,theytendtogetaccesstoinfoabouthealthfromsurfingoninternetorfromtheirfingertipsWhileforseniors,theyarelikelytodoitinold-fashionedways,likereading…,watching…or…SomethinglikethatDoyouyanysportYES-----Iamallyahugefanofngmanysports,including….Normallyspeaking,whenever/aslongasIhavesparetime(when),Iwouldliketodo…with…(who)at…(where)Ilikeit,sinceithelpsmekeepfitandmakenewfriends.BoostNo,becauseIfounditquitemoney-Doyouthinkchildrenshouldlearnhowtolivehealthily?观点类10/0证明法if Absoluy/undoubtedlyyes,they Leadanunhealthylifewithbadhabitsthey emal-nutritious营养不良的Surelyyes,ahealthybodyisacornerstone/foundationforeverythingandnooneshouldbeanWithouthavingahealthylifeforchildren,theymight eshortsightedwhentheywatchtoomuchTVorbeobese/over-weightedaftereatingtoomuchjunkfood,that’swhytheyshouldlearntohavegoodhabitsofdietaryandregulardailyschedule每个人的健康都是做好其他事情的基石,没有人可以例外;如果他们不知道如何健活,Onthecontrary,Itwouldintroducephysicalandmental(psychological)issuesArethereanynegativeinfluencesfromthehealthyinformation?10/0分走Withoutsupervisionandinformationtendstoberumorswouldbespreadingveryquicklyandwidely,whichcanresultinwastingDoyouthinksportscanhelppeopleimprovetheirhealth? 坏处2+1的方式whatdoyouseeabout…?SurelySurelyyes,sincefirstly,and expandsocialcircle ngYetwhenitcomestodrawbacks,IhavetoSurelyit’sagoodthing,sincefirstly,itisbeneficialforburningcaloriesandkeeagoodAdditionally,itislikelytoexpandsocialcirclewhentheymakesfriendsduringngsports,andthenthefriendshiptheygetisgoodfortheirmentalhealth/releasingpressure.Yetontheotherhand,Ifthereisalackofprotection,theymighthurtIf---workouttoointensely/causestressandDomost Tobehonest,thisquestionhasneveroccurredtomebefore,butIguessforthosepeoplewho…Takeupsomeexerciseregularly/Haveabalanceddiet/keeparegularsleepschedule/Theywillliveahealthylifestyle;otherwisetheanswerwillbebarelydoIhaveachanceofknowingthisquestion,sinceitreallyvariesfromcasetocase,yetinthefuture,Iwillfindoutmoreifthereisanecessity;乾坤大挪移;Whydopeopleliketokeeppets?Basically,thereareanumberofreasonsforpeopletokeepFirstofall,itcancheertheirmasterup,especiallywhentheyfeeltiredorMoreover,itisalsoagoodwayformasterstofosterasenseofcaring/lovingandBesides,IbelievesomekindsofpetscanbeagoodhelpforWhatshouldwedotoprotectendangeredanimals?Therebe解决方案emotionhealthp2pcareercostefficiency;quality;safetyFromwhereIstand,IguessavarietyofactivitiescanbedonetoprotectthemThefirstthingcomingintomymindisthatpeople’sawarenessofprotectionshouldberaised,sothateveryonecancontributetothisMoreover,ernmentshouldspendmoremoneyonbuildingmoreanimalsanctuary动物保护区andpunishthosewhokillendangeredanimalsillegally.SomethinglikeDoyousupport ngexperimentonanimals?我也不好说,那就给条Tobehonest,thisquestionisreallybeyondmyunderstandingandknowledge,butIguessaslongasthefollowingcriteriacanbemet,itisoktogoaheadFirstofall,thosescientistsmustobeytheruleofnottorturingthoseBesidesthat,theyshouldhavealistofqualifiedanimalstobetested,otherthanthoseendangeredAndtheyshouldbeveryhumanetodealwiththosetestinganimalsOtherwise,Iamnotafanofsupportingthem.Whydosomepeoplerefusetoeatanimals?8Idon’tknowactually,Icouldonlymakeaguess,probablytheyfeeleatinganimalsisthewaytokillmoreanimals;oritisalsolikelyforsomeofthemthinkthatbeingavegetarianisgoodforhealthandtheydon’tneedtoeatmeattoliveawholesomelifeaswell;wellitisalsooneofthepossibilitiesthatduetothereasonofreligiousbelief,theyshouldbeSomethinglikeWhatwouldhappenwhensomespeciesdisappearonearth?证明Itisreallyheardtosay,wellIsupposeifmoreandmorespeciesdisappearingonearth,thechainsystemwouldbeundermined,inthatcase,moreanimalswouldbeendangered,asaresult,humanbeingwouldlostthefoundationofsurvival;eventually,ournetwouldbedoomed,whichisunimaginable.Whatisthedifferencebetweendreamandgoal?对比题(comparedLetmethinkaboutit,thisquestionactuallyisveryinteresting,probablytherewillbesomeForexample,comparedwithadream,thegoalshouldbemorereasonableandspecific,likefindingawell-paidjoborpassingmyIelts,whileadreamcanbeimaginaryandunrealistic;Inaddition,agoalcanbeshortterm,whiledreamcanbelongterm,forinstance,Idreamtobeabillionaire,itdoesn’tmeanIwill eoneinashortwhileAndsomethinglikeif/withoutIwontdothat,sinceifthereisnodream,Iwouldhavenomotivatetokeepworkinghardinreality;forexample,mydreamistobuyahouseatNice,France,ifIonlyconsideritasadream,otherthankeefighting,mydreamwillneverberealized;Howdoyouachieveyourgoal?用时间的维度(firstly,andthen,afterwards,intheend)Letmesortitout;Iguessfirstofall,Ineedtoputforwardan,withallthedetailsanddates,afterthat,Iwillhavetospendalotoftimeandenergyonthis,throughout,ifthereisanyproblem,Iwillsolveitbymyownorwithmyfriends;eventually,IbelieveIwillgetwhateverIwantaslongasIputallmymindintothis.Whatkindsofgoalsdoyoungpeopleusuallyhave?TherebeThereareseveraltypicalgoalsforyoungpeopletorealize,likestudyingatprestigiousuniversities,findingawell-paidjob,meetingtheirMr/Mrsrightandsoon.Whatwillbethemostpopularjobsinthefuture?我也不知道,只要是Itisreallytrickytoanswer,Isupposeaslongasthefollowingpointscanbecovered,itwillbegoodFirstofall,wedoappreciatestabilityintermsoflocation Additionally,probablytheyshouldfindthatindustryisratherpromisingandhighlyvaluedintheMoreover,theiralabilitiescanbeimprovedthroughngsuchaInthatcase,Iguessjobslikeafinancialspecialist,anaccountant,teachersormanagerswouldbedesiredbythem.WhatkindsofpollutionareseriousinyourcountryTherebeTherearearangeofpollutionsourcesinmycountry,likecarorindustryemission,coalburninginwinterseasonorstrawburninginautumn,allcombinedtogetherwillleadtotheproblemofhaze,whichpushesthelevelofPM2.5sohigh,andthat’sthemostseriousoneinmycountryWhatcanindividualsdotoprotectourenvironment?Therebe五官列Itisreallyhardtosay,sinceforindividuals,environmentalprotectionseemstoocomplicatedandwell-rounded,yetIsupposetherearestillsomethingcanbedonebyindividuals,likenosmokinginpublicces,tryingtousepublictransportinsteadofprivateoneandsoon.Doyouthinkindividualsshouldberesponsibleforpollutions?当然了Iamnotsureaboutthis,sincenoonecanhavetheconclusionnow,sinceasoneofthesocietymembers,weareallpartoftheoperation,andIthinkindividualsshouldbepartiallyresponsibleforthatproblem,afterall,weallproducesdifferentkindsofenergyconsumption;whileIstillbelievethatthepursuitofGDPshouldbethemainsourceofit.Whyisthereaneedtoinvolve 8if/withoutDefiniyyes,sinceifthereisnoinvolvementofernment,noonewouldtaketheleadershiptocoordinateallthosedepartmentstodealwithit;morethanthat,therewillbenoonewhocanlegislateandpunishthosewhoviolatethem,that’swhythereisnodoubtthaternmentisreallycentralinthisissue.Peoplenowadaysaresurroundedbyallkindsofadvertising.Advertisingaffectswhatpeoplethinkisimportantandsometimeshasanegativeinfluenceonpeople’slives.towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?八词Adsadvertstvcommercials,flyers,billboards,postsPublicserviceannouncementCreativeBecause,if/without,especially,forexample,comparedwith,Asaresult时代背景和讨论的必要性今天无处不在的已经极大地影响了人们的生活方式和公司的运营模式andcommercialmodeling/patternThebestscenarioofadsistofacilitatepeople’slifeotherthanthe我相信在严格的管理下,是利大于弊Accordingly,Ibelievetheoverallbenefitscanoutweighitsdisadvantagesfromthefollowingaspectstobeginwith,Forconsumers,itoffersachancetoabsorbinformationaboutdetailsofaproduct,like….打个比方:itsappearance,price,designfunctionfeaturesandreference反证:withoutit,consumershavetospendextratimeorlabortocheckitoutinthesolid进一步举例:meanwhile,forcompanies,theywouldloseanopportunitytoincrease/fosterpublicityandmarketingexposure;accordinglytheirsaleswouldplummet第二支持段的中心句:PSAistheadvertisementthatcanraiseawarenessofanimalprotection/environmentalprotection;Withoutitwiththeabsenceofit, publicwouldloseanopportunityofbeingeducatedorinformedfrommassmedia;:Forexample,inthepsanof“wherethebuyingstops,thekillingcantoo”,Thosecelebritiessetagoodexampletocallforthepublictoboycottthoseanimal-relatedproducts,likeivoryorsharkfin,inthewaythoseendangeredspeciescouldbewellpwithout7712让步 Admittedly/nevertheless,itwouldbeunfairtonotrecognizeitspotential13举例说明forexample,ifthereisalackofsupervisionorregulationfromthe,itislikelyforthoseTVcommercialstocontainmisleadingormisguidinginformation,14导致的asaconsequence,consumers’moneywouldbeDeterminingtheprosandconsitisobviousthatadvertisingcarriesmore16明天会更好whilethisindustryshouldbewellregulatedandcontrolledtoensurethatconsumersbenefitfromadvertisingbothefficientlyandproductively.Forcompanies,itcanbeconsideredasachannelofincreasingPSAcanraiseawarenessofLackmanagement/supervision/regulation,informationcontainedinthoseadswillbemisleadingorexaggerating夸张的Ifpeople’slifeisoverwhelmedbyallsortsofads,theirlifewouldbe解决方案,Themustbestringent,andatowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree可以定义为argumentation论证题,观点相,建议写成7/3分五段式,其中7分支持给人们生活带来的好处,3分让步存在的弊端7分支持优势观点1+支持句7分支持优势观点2+支持句3分让步劣势观点+支持句Foreachparagraph,central evidencetoEmotionhealthp2pcareer costefficiencyqualitysafetyNuclearenergy1EnergyThebestscenarioofnuclearenergydevelopmentistointroduceefficiency,powerandtheguaranteeofsafety顺带出自己的观点inthatcase,IbelievetheprosoutweighconsfromthefollowingaspectsLearnasecondGlobalizationThebestscenarioistoputtheirpreference,productivity,goalinto顺带出自己的观点Accordingly,studentsatearlystageiflifearebelievedtobemoreadvantageousintermsoflanguageacquisition.alsavingsorernmentsAgingsocietyTheessence/essentialsformuseumistorecordfootstepsofcivilizationandhistorical Healthisvital,theessenceofhealthisthecornerstoneofeveryone’sphysicalandpsychologicalwellbeing. 信息量 误导信Helpsusmake fraudulentonline Consumer Informationis 2.竞争 饱Opensupthe Toomuch打开市 过多的Keepsprices Annoyingadson 3.influence 影响儿童Adsthesedaysaremore putpressureon创意性吸引眼 Socialmedia persuadechildrentofollow社交的植 Simon Incentives让步带来竞争,降低价格(7分支持导致购物上瘾(3分让步人们获得产品信息和功能的有效途径(7分支持公益传递正能量(7分支持公益能够更好地教育和引大众(7分支持虚假和网络诈骗(3分持步Simon法分析7分支持–给生活带来的好是,反证:否则消费者不得不花时间和精力去比较不同的产品(comparingbrandsbytheir,效果:因此可以让消费者的决定更加简单和快捷(moreefficienttodecideon,益可以是protectsociallyvulnerablegroups)举例:例如一个叫做WildAid的非组织就用名人效应号召人们保护珍稀动物(raiseawarenessofprotectingendangeredspecies)分让步—给生活带来的弊是举例:包括了虚假信息,网络诈骗,夸张的功效,内容不实等问题(misleadinginformation,overratedfunctionality,falsecontent)效果:需要严刑峻理行业去保障消费者的权益(en morestringentIntroductionTodays’advertisinghasgreatlyposedimpactsinmanyaspectsintermsofconsumers’wayofthinkingandbehaviors.时代背景Today’sadvertisinghasimpactedourlivesinevitablyinmanyaspectsintermsofconsumptionbehaviorandbusinessconductionpattern.rather/otherthanthecontrary.个人观点,accordingly,advertisingisbelievedtocarrymoremeritsthandisadvantages.Taskresponse 有中心句有支持Lexicalresource Bodyparagraph1(oneofthemostsupportingargumentsisconsumerswithnecessarydetailsaboutacertainproduct,includingtheappearance,function,efficiencyandavailabilityaswellastheprice.Conversely,thosepotentialbuyershavetowastetimeandenergysearchingforinformationandmakingcomparisonsamongbrandsifthereareinsufficientadvertisingchannels,suchasTVcommercials,printedadsorclassifiedwebsitesads.效果:(forthesereasonsornewmediatoabsorbinformationwhentheyneedtomakeapurchasingdecision.Bodyparagraph2Besides,publicserviceannouncementsservesanessentialpurposeineducatingandraisingpublic’sawarenessinawiderangeoffieldsthatincludepreservingtheenvironment,protectinganimalsorcaringforthesociallyvulnerablegroups.(toToillustrate,theningof“nobuying,nokilling”wasconductedandpromotedbyanon-profitorganizationnamedWildAidandhassuccessfullyattractedattentionwithimpressiveTVcommercialsadvocatedbycelebrities,效果(whichshowsshowinghowpublic’ssharedresponsibilityandboycottresolutioncanmakeahugedifferenceinsavingendangeredanimals.Bodyparagraph让步观点Admittedly,irresponsibleadvertisingbringsabout/introducesaseriesofdisturbancestobothindividualsandsociety,举例(includingandincludingmisleadinginformation,overratedfunctions,inappropriatecontentorevendefraudingmoneyontheinternet.效果Therefore,ernmentsneedtomakemorestringentlegislationstoprotectconsumersfrompotentialabusesbywrongdoers.Conclusion综述:(determiningtheprosandLookingatprosandcons,itisobviousthatadvertisingcarriesmore,明天会更好:(meanwhile)给出解决方案becenteredbyandbesupplementedby…to但同时要更加严格的去和控制行业来保证消费者能够通过而让生活变,Attheme,thisindustryisoughttobewellregulatedandcontrolledtoensurethatconsumersbenefitfromadvertisingbothefficientlyandproductively.GrticalRangeandSimon:Theomnipresenceoftoday’sadvertisinghashadinevitableimpactinseveralaspects.Thishasbeenapparenteversinceconsumers’shophabitswerereshapedand1. conductingbusinesswasrevolutionized.Frommy,theoverallinfluence2.carriesmoremeritsthandrawbacksforthefollowingreasons.Wayne:Theomnipresenceoftoday’sadvertisinghashadaninevitableimpactinseveralaspects.Thishasbeenapparenteversinceconsumers’shophabitswerereshapedandbusinessconductwasrevolutionized.Frommy,thisoverallinfluencecontainsmoremeritsthandrawbacksforthefollowingreasons.WayneWayofconductingbusinessbusinessconductBusinessconduct表示商业行为,更加简洁Carry造句元素:theomnipresenceof…无处不在的…;impact=influence影响;reshapeshophabits重塑了购物习惯;conductbusiness经营企业;berevolutionized被BodyparagraphSimon:Oneofthemostsupportingargumentsisthatadvertisingisbothreliableandefficientforinformingconsumerswithnecessarydetailsaboutacertainproduct,includingtheappearance,function,efficiencyandavailabilityaswellastheprice.Conversely,thosepotentialbuyershavetoareinsufficientadvertisingchannels,suchasTVcommercials,printedadsorclassifiedwebsitesads.2.That'swhyconsumersnowincreasinglyrelyonemerging3.waysofadvertisingsuchassocialnetwork,ornewmediatoabsorbinformationwhen4.theyneedtomakeapurchasingWayne:Oneofthemostsupportingargumentsisthatadvertisingisbothreliableandefficientforinformingconsumerswithnecessarydetailsaboutacertainproduct,includingtheappearance,function,efficiencyandavailabilityaswellastheprice.Conversely,thosepotentialbuyershavetowastetimeandenergysearchingforinformationandcomparingbrandsifthereareinsufficientadvertisingchannels,suchasTVcommercials,printedadsorclassifiedwebsiteads.Forthesereasons,consumersnowincreasinglyrelyonemergingtechniquesofadvertisingsuchassocialnetworkingornewermediatoabsorbinformationwhendecidingonapurchase.WayneMakingcomparisonsamongbrandscomparingThat’swhy改为forthesereasons, That’swhy过于口语化,不在写作中使用Waystechniquesway过于简单information搜集信息;insufficient=notenough不够的;TVcommercials电视;printedads平面;classifiedwebsitesads分类的;emergingmeansofmedia新兴的Bodyparagraph1.public’sawarenessinawiderangeoffieldsthatincludepreservingtheenvironment,protectinganimalsorcaringforthesociallyvulnerablegroups.2.Toillustrate,theningof“nobuying,nokilling”wasconductedandpromotedbyanon-profitorganizationnamedWildAidandhassuccessfullyattractedattentionwithimpressiveTVcommercialsadvocatedbycelebrities,3.showinghowpublic’ssharedresponsibilityandboycottresolutioncanmakeahugedifferenceinsavingendangeredanimals.Wayne:Besides,publicserviceannouncementsserveanessentialpurposeineducatingandraisingawarenessinawiderangeoffieldsthatincludepreservingtheenvironment,protectinganimalsorcaringforsociallyvulnerablegroups.Toillustratethispoint,theningof“nobuying,nokilling”wasconductedandpromotedbyanon-profitorganizationcalledWildAidandhassuccessfullyattractedattentionwithimpressiveTVcommercialsadvocatedbycelebrities,demonstratinghowthepublic’ssharedresponsibilityandboycottresolutioncanmakeahugedifferenceinsavingendangeredanimals.Waynepublic(Thewordpublicisusedtoomanytimesinthisparagraph)Publicawareness,即表示公众的意识ToillustratetoillustratethisShow造句元素:ningof……的造势运动;Nobuying,nokilling conductandpromote实施和推动;non-profitorganization非营利组织;advocate相应,支持;publicserviceannouncement公益;serveanessentialpurpose发挥重要的作用;raiseawarenessof…提高…的意识;preservetheenvironment保护环境;careforsociallyvulnerablegroup关注弱势群体;sharedresponsibility共同责任;boycottresolution的决心;makeahugedifference做出巨大的改变;saveendangered/extinctanimals保护濒危BodyparagraphSimon:Admittedly,irresponsibleadvertising1.bringsaboutaseriesofdisturbancestobothcontentoreven3.defraudingmoneyontheinternet.Therefore,ernmentsneedto4.makemorestringent5.legislationstoprotectconsumersfrompotentialabusesbywrongdoers.Wayne:Admittedly,irresponsibleadvertisingintroducesaseriesofdisturbancestobothindividualsandsociety,andincludemisleadinginformation,overratedfunctionality,inappropriatecontentorevenfraudulentonlinebehavior.Therefore,ernmentsneedtoenmorestringentlegislationtoprotectconsumersfrompotentialabusesbywrongdoers.WayneBringaboutFunctionsDefraudingmoneyontheInternetfraudulentonlineMakemorestringentlegislation改为 morestringentLegislationslegislationneverLegislation保护…不受…的危害;potentialabuse潜在的权益行为;wrongdoer做坏事的人Conclusion结论段Simon:1.lookingatprosandcons,itisobviousthatadvertisingcarriesmoremerits.2.Attheme,thisindustry3.isoughttobewellregulatedandco

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