2023学年完整公开课版九年级Unit13 SectionB Period 6 Writing

Bytheendoftheclass,youwillbeableto:1.writealetterabouttheenvironmentalproblemsandgivesuggestions.2.learnhowtoimprovethewritingskills.3.understandtheimportanceofprotectingenvironment.LearningobjectivesThinkabouttheenvironmentinChengdu.DoyouthinktheenvironmentinChengduisgoodorbad?HowmanypartsofChengduarementionedinthevideo?Whatarethey?HowmanypartsofChengduarementionedinthevideo?Whatarethey?businesscardhistoryculturescenerystreetlifedeliciousfoodhoteleconomytransportationRenminParkandQingchengMountaininChengduhaveagoodenvironment.1.clean,quietandpeaceful2.flowers,greentrees,beautifullakesandbridges3....Whichpartsofthecityhaveaniceenvironment?Whyaretheynice?waterpollutionwastepollutionlandpollutionairpollutionnoisepollutionlitteringWhichpartsneedtobeimproved?WhataretheenvironmentalproblemsinChengdu?1.TheriversinChengduarebadlypolluted.2.Thereisrubbishcomingoutofthebins.EnvironmentalproblemsinChengdu.1.Whichpartsofthetown/cityhaveaniceenvironment?Whyaretheynice?2.Whichpartsneedtobeimproved?Why?GoodenvironmentWhy?BadenvironmentWhy?Inmyopinion,RenminParkandQingchengMountainhaveagoodenvironment,becausetherearegreentreesandfreshair.However,IthinktheriversinChengduarebadlypolluted,becausetheyaredirtyandfullofrubbish.审题：Style(体裁):Tense(时态)&Grammar:Person(人称):LetterSimplePresentTense&ModalVerbsThefirstperson:I/WeReadandcirclethekeypoints.

Whenwritingalettertothemayor,whatshouldwepayattentionto?Wblemsandcauses}suggestions}Theriversarebadlypolluted.Therearenotenoughdustinssopeoplethrowrubbishintotherivers.Thefactoriesneartheriverpourwastewaterintotheriver.Nobodycleanstherubbishintheriver.Governmentsshouldclosedownthefactories.Weshouldcalloneveryoneinthiscitytothrowrubbishinthedustbins.WhataretheenvironmentalproblemsinChengdu?Andthesolutions?Thereisrubbishcomingoutofthebins,andflies,ratsandcockroachesarerunningallovertherubbish.Weshouldaskpeopletoproducelessrubbish.Rubbishcollectorscouldcollectrubbishmoreoftenaswell.Therubbishcollectorsdonotcomeoftenenoughtocollecttherubbish.Thepeoplelivingheremayalsobethrowingawaytoomuchrubbish.ProblemsCausesSolutionsWecanusethesesentencestructurestogivesuggestions.Firstofall/Tobeginwith,...Besides/Inaddition/What'smore/What'sworse/Moreover/Furthermore,...Anotherproblemisthat...Whynotdosth/Whydon'twedosth...?Howabout/Whataboutdoing?Wecould/should/can/hadbetterdosth...inordertodosth.Isuggest/advisethatsbshoulddosth.Ithinkifwecandosth,theenvironmentwillgetbettersoon.It'sagoodidea/agoodwaytodosth.It'sbesttodosth.IfIwere...,Iwoulddosth.Onlyinthiswaycanwedo....It'shightimethatweshould...StructureContentBeginningBodyEnding1.Showyourlovetothecity.2.Showtheintentionofyourletter.

IhavelivedinthiscityeversinceIwasborn/IstudiedherethreeyearsagoandIlovethiscityverymuch.IthinkourcityisbeautifulandIdoenjoyliving/studyinghere.I'mwritingthisletterbecuaseIfindthattherearesomeenvironmentalproblemsweneedtopayattentionto.Showyourbestwishestothecity.Ihopetheseproblemswillbesolvedinthenearfutureandourcitywillbecomebetterandbetter.Ibelievethatabetterenvironmentcanbecreatedinthiscityandwecouldallpulltogethertoacheiveit.Firstofall,...because...Ithinkweshould...Besides,...Tosolvethisproblem,wecould...DearSir/Madam,Iamajunior3student.IhavelivedinthiscityeversinceIwasbornandIlovethiscityverymuch.Therearemanybeautifulareasinthiscity.I'mwritingthisletterbecuaseIfindthattherearesomeenvironmentalproblemsweneedtopayattentionto.Firstofall,Ifindthattheriversinthecitywhichusedtobeverycleanandbeautifularebadlypolluted.Theyaredirtyandfullofrubbishandalsoproducebadsmell.Therearesomereasonsfortheseproblems.Firstly,therearenotenoughdustinssopeoplethrowrubbishintotherivers.Secondly,thefactoriesneartheriverpourwastewaterintotherivers.Itisbelievedthatthefactories

arethemaincauses.Ithinkthatgovernmentsshouldclosedownthefactoriesandwecanalsocalloneveryoneinthiscitytothrowrubbishinthedustbins.Anotherproblemisthattherubbishdisposalareasatthebottomofourapartmentblocksareveryunpleasantandsmelly.Exactlyspeaking,thereisrubbishcomingoutofthebins,andflies,cockroachesandratsrunningallovertherubbish.Theploblemistherebecausetherubbishcollectorsdonotcomeoftenenoughtocollecttherubbish.Meanwhile,thepeoplelivingheremayalsobethrowingawaytoomuchrubbish.It'sagoodideatoaskpeopletoproducelessrubbish.Besides,Istronglysuggestthatrubbishcollectorscollectrubbishmoreoftenaswell.Ibelievethatabetterenvironmentcanbecreatedinthiscityandwecouldallpulltogethertoacheiveit.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaSamplepayattentiontotheformatWritingtimeAccordingtothechartin3a,writealettertothecitymayorabouttheproblemsandsuggestionsinChengdu.Inyourletter,youneedtomentionatleasttwoenvironmentalproblems.审题：Style(体裁):Tense(时态)&Grammar:Person(人称):LetterSimplePresentTense&ModalVerbsThefirstperson:I/WeCheckinglistDoesitcoveralltheneededinformation?Isitcoherent?Arethespellingandthegrammarcorrect?Isitwithinthewordlimit?Arethewordsyouusesimpleorrich?5CstandardComplete(完整的)Coherent(连贯的)Correct(准确的)Concise(简明的)Choiceofwords(用词)Self-evaluationEvaluateyourarticleyourselfandremembertocheckwhetherit's:1.Shareyourarticlewithyourpartnersandteacher.2.Evaluatethearticletogether.Peer-appreciationApprec