非谓语动词在写作中的应用

关于非谓语动词在写作中的应用第1页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月阅卷老师喜欢的句子、同位语结构、with复合结构，使文章简洁、通顺；尽量使用动词短语和词组、定语从句等复合句，修辞润色文章。使用分词短语(非谓语动词）第2页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用第3页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月1.Seeingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.

2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.

3.—Whichteamisgoodatcooking?—Ateamcalleditselfthesuppercook.

Correction写作中非谓语动词常见的错误Seenclimbingcalling第4页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月1.Whensheheardthenews,sheburstintocrying._________thenews,sheburstintocrying.2.AustraliaislocatedonthewestcoastofthePacific.AustraliaisthelargestcountryinOceania.Australia，__________________thewestcoastofthePacific，isthelargestcountryinOceania.用非谓语结构改写句子Hearinglocatedon第5页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月3.ThoughIadmitwhathehassaid,Istilldoubthedidn’tdohisbest.__________________________________________,Istilldoubthedidn’tdohisbest.4.BecauseImissedthebus,Iwenttoschoollate.

__________________________,Iwenttoschoollate.AdmittingwhathehassaidMissingthebus第6页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月5.WhenIwaswalkinginthestreet,Isawhim._____________inthestreet,Isawhim.6.Ifyouworkhard,________________hard,youwillsucceed.WalkingWorking第7页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月7.Althoughhehadfailedmanytimes,hedidn’tloseheart.________________manytimes,hedidn’tloseheart.8.Asshewasscoldedbytheteacher,thegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead._____________________,thegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead.HavingfailedScoldedbytheteacher第8页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月例文(1)：Gettingback

whatyouhavelostwouldbeanunforgettableexperience.LastMonday,Ilostmyexpensivecellphone,onwhichmynamewasinscribed(刻).Fortunately,itwasreturned.Thatmorning,Irushedoutofmyhouseandjumpedintoataxi,forIwouldbelateforthefinalexamination.Onarrivingatschool,Iheadedtomyclassroomquickly,notnoticingthatIhadleftmycellphoneonthebackseat.

Enjoytwoessays第9页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Thereisalwayssomeonebehindus,caringaboutus.Oneverydaymorning,walkingoutofthedoorwaytogoto

school,wemaybetoldtopayattentiontothetraffic,nottofightorquarrelwithothers,andmayevenbetoldtochewslowlyattable.Being

achild,wemayfeeltiredofthosewords.whenwecomehomeafterschool,she

hastriedherbesttoprovidewhatshehasforus.Evenifwhatweneedisjust

aglassofwater,shewillalsokeepitinmind.例文(2)第10页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Whennoticinghergreyhairsandthewrinklesaroundhereyes,IrealizeIhavegrownupwhilesheisnolongeryoung.It’stimethatIshoulddosomethingforher,evenonlygivingherbacksomemassageormakingacupofteaforhercanmakeherfeelthatsheseemstobethehappiestwomanintheworld.Doyouknowwhosheis?SheisourMom.第11页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Funtime!

Pickoutapictureandfinishthetask

第12页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月playmusicmakehappy

Playingmusic

makesthem

happy.makeasentenceusingnonfiniteverbs第13页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月___________bythereporterfromCCTV,themansaidhewasveryhappy.(interview)InterviewedFinishthesentenceusingnonfiniteverbs第14页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月e.g.Havingfinishedmyhomework,Iwentontohelpmyparents.listento/

burstoutlaughingHavinglistenedtothesongcalled“Gangnamstyle”,weburstoutlaughing.Followtheexampleandmakeasentence.第15页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月3.Moyanstoodthere

andwassurroundedbymanyreporters.

Moyanstoodtheresurroundedbymanyreporters.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子←第16页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Combinethefollowingsentences1.Assoonastheyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.

Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.第17页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月2.IfIamgivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.第18页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月3.HewantstoimprovehisEnglish(目的)

Hestudiesharder.ToimprovehisEnglish,hestudiesharder.第19页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月4.Whenhelefttheclassroom,hedidn’tsaygoodbyetome.5.Becauseheisill,hecan’tattendthemeeting.

Whenleavingtheclassroom,hedidn’tsaygoodbyetome.

Beingill,hecan’tattendthemeeting.第20页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月6.Thepolicemansawthethiefwhowasstealingabike.7.Theboyswhoswamintheriverwereindanger.Thepolicemansawthethiefstealingabike.

Theboysswimmingintheriverwereindanger第21页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月8.Becausehehadn’tseenthefilmbefore,hewenttothecinema.Nothavingseenthefilmbefore,hewenttothecinema.第22页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月用非谓语结构改写和美化句子1.因为在这国家没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。用连词becauseBecauseshehasnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非谓语结构Havingnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.第23页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月2.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂用定语从句Thebook,

iseasytounderstand.用非谓语结构Thebook,

iseasytounderstand用非谓语结构改写和美化句子whichwaswritteninsimpleEnglish,

writteninsimpleEnglish,第24页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月3.他们是来自于几个国家的游客。用定语从句Theyarevisitorswhocomefromseveralcountries.用非谓语结构Theyarevisitorscomingfromseveralcountries.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子第25页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月4.发现他好朋友沮丧，他竭尽所能让他朋友开心。用并列句He

foundhisbestfriendfrustratedand

hedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非谓语结构Finding

hisbestfriendfrustrated,hedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子第26页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

①Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.②Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.

Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.4.用非谓语结构合并下列句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子第27页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.用非谓语结构美化文章第28页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.用非谓语结构美化文章↓第29页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.用非谓语结构美化文章↓第30页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams用非谓语结构美化文章↓第31页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams.用非谓语结构美化后的文章第32页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月要求：1.用2-3句话表达表格内容

2.2-3句话要有连贯性necessaryaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.thebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.（2011高考模拟）高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。Havingatry第33页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月翻译:高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文)①高考临近。(NationalCollegeEntranceExamination)②保持良好的心态很重要。(havearightattitude)③它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难。Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.

②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Havingatry第34页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Step3：合并句子

With

NationalCollegeEntranceExamination

coming,itisimportant

tohavearightattitude

to

relaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.

②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Sentence1:Havingatry第35页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Step3：合并句子

WithCollegeEntranceExamination

coming,itisimportant

tohavearightattitude

whichhelpsusto

relaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.①CollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.

②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Sentence2:Tip:Trytousedifferentwaystoexpress.Havingatry第36页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月要求：1.用2-3句话表达表格内容

2.2-3句话要有连贯性（2011高考模拟）Havingatrynecessaryaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.thebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.第37页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月HavingatryItisnecessarytohaveenoughsleep.Havingenough

sleepisnecessary.Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.

Keepinghealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.ToKeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.第38页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

Passage：

Havingenoughsleep

isnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewayto

improveourlearningintheclass.Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.Tip:Neverignoretheconjunction.Havingatry第39页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

WithCollegeEntranceExamination

coming,itisimportant

tohavearightattitude

whichhelpsusto

relaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.

Havingenoughsleepisnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewayto

improveourlearningintheclass.

Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.

Besides,doingexerciseregularlyisofgreatbenefittoourhealth.Lastbutnotleast,itisveryimportanttokeepabalanceddiet.第40页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档三.巧用倒装增强句子表现力四.尝试多

样化表达方式一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力①强调句②With短语复合结构③定语从句④名词性从句(主宾表同从句)⑤各种状语从句⑥被动语态第41页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月1.beggar,lie,sleep2.Mr.Li,hurry,paynoattentionto3.stickout，tripover(绊倒),angry…Abeggar第42页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月1.一天，一个乞丐在路边讨钱，但是李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。2.结果这个乞丐很生气，伸出拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了。3.意识到他是个残疾人，李先生想给他一些钱。4.于是他拿出了一张百元钞票,突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。5.看到被风吹到空中的百元钞票，乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票，使李先生非常惊讶。实战演练：用五个句子写出下列信息点，注意非谓语和复合句的运用。第43页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月AbeggarWriting2.MrLihurriedhome,payingnoattentiontoabeggar.1.Thebeggarlayontheground,sleeping.3.Suddenly,thebeggarstuckouthislegs,trippingoverMrLi,which

madehimveryangry.

Makeanending第44页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

Exchangeanddiscussyourpartner’scomposition,followingthecriteria.Pairwork第45页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Abeggar

Oneday,

hurrying

home,Mr.Lipaidnoattentiontothebeggarwholayontheground,sleeping.Suddenly,thebegga