高中英语读后续写积累素材积累(一)

续写累积姓名：______________班级：_______________一、环境描绘的素材环境描绘分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物自己下手，主观则从察看者角度描绘。平常在描绘时主客观交替进行，主观描绘比重稍大。客观环境描绘：Part1环境描绘的adj要求：有声，有色，有质感，有滋味thebluesky(蓝天）thesongsofbirds（鸟鸣）thethunderingclouds（电光闪雷鸣）thefragileflowers(娇贵的花）;（thedark,rainingevening雨夜交加的夜晚）thegreengrass（青草）thefragrantroses（明朗的玫瑰）;thesetting/risingsun(夕阳/逐渐升起的太阳）Part2环境描绘的verb（vi&vt）要求)．Wind（blow/click/howl/wail/roar）1.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain,一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。2.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.风，柔和却严寒，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。3.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthequietpark凉.爽的细风吹拂着宁静的公园。4.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.(凉风吹拂过我的头发）Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift.（今天正是放风筝的晴天气，强烈的风力带动了风筝的上涨。）)．Water(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)声音：1.Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。颜色2.Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。3.Alittlewayoffwasasmallbrook,rushingandsparklingalongbetweengreenbank.离此不远,有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔跑闪耀。4.Itmurmuredinasoftvoicelikealittleinnocentgirlwhisperedtoherlovingmother.忧如它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈祥的母亲细细密语。(action,sound,colour))．Sky(stand/appear/turn)1.Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥堵的朵朵云2.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar蓝蓝的天空高高矗立1主观环境描绘：1.Sbfoundsthadj/doing/done某人发现某物（状态/动作/被）...2.Sbsaw/heard/felt/smeltsthdoing/done某人看到/听到/感觉/闻到某物（状态/动作/被）3.Itwassoadjthatwefind/feel它是这样....以致于4.Sthkeptsbspellbound/amazed/光景使我这样沉醉/吃惊/sthheldsbentirelyintheirpower光景让我完满惊呆了5.Itlooked/seemed/appeared/feltlike光景看起来像二、场景描绘的素材（来自原著：追风筝的人）Atleasttwodozenkitesalreadyhunginthesky,likepapersharksroamingforprey.Withinanhour,thenumberdoubled,andred,blue,andyellowkitesglidedandspuninthesky.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift,makethesweepseasier.（放风筝的场景描绘，从各个角度，立体描绘）空中已经挂着最少二十来只风筝，忧如纸制的鲨鱼，巡游搜猎食品。不到一个钟头，这个数字翻了一番，红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹往返飞舞，熠熠生辉。严寒的细风吹过我的头发。这风正适合放风筝，风速不大，恰巧能让风筝飘浮起来，也便于控制。Thewaterwasadeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.湖水澄蓝，波平如镜，阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。3.ThenIglancedupandsawapairofkites,redwithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovethetreesonthewestendofthepark,overthewindmills,floatingsidebysidelikeapairofeyeslookingdownonSanFrancisco,thecityInowcallhome.（场景、比喻）我抬初步，看见两只红色的风筝，带着长长的蓝色尾巴，在天空中逐渐升起。它们飞舞着，飞越公园西边的树林，飞越风车，并排飘浮着，忧如一双眼睛俯视着旧金山，这个我此刻看作家园的城市。Blueskiesstoodtallandfar,thesunlikeabrandingironsearingthebackofyourneck.CreekswhereHassanandIskippedstonesallspringturneddry,andrickshawsstirreddustwhentheysputteredby（.场景、比喻）天空一碧如洗，阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春季我和哈桑在溪流取水漂，到了夏季它们也枯竭了。黄包车嗒嗒走过，扬起阵阵尘埃。Somewhere,abranchsnapped,anowlhooted.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.Andfrombelow,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音，还有猫头鹰的喊声。北风轻轻拂动树枝，吹过山坡上的灌木丛。而下边，水流在山谷淌动，传来阵阵略微的声音。2Bythreeo'clock,therainhadstoppedandtheskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthepark（.天气）到三点时，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布，一阵北风吹过公园。Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthecracksbetweentheramshacklebuildings.（情况）太阳开始下山，那些危如累卵的房屋的裂痕中，溢出闪闪的红色斜晖。三、描绘时间，动作，心理和感情)、感情好词：喜乐Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她脸上的笑脸像钻石同样闪闪发光。②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface他.脸上露出了一种理解的浅笑。③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵激动声穿过他们。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里缭绕。⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛闪耀着快乐。Awildgaiety（快乐）tookholdofher.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石同样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着坚固的浅笑。Iwaswildwithjoy.我惊喜若狂。Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我快乐得难以形容。Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她脸上带着绚烂的笑脸。Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑脸照亮了整个房间。Sheshedtearsofjoy.她快乐得流下了眼泪。Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光辉。Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢着幸福。Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激动得满脸通红。?Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起欢喜。Iwasfloatingonair.我飞扬在空中。Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛显现出快乐的神态。2.生气：Iwasseizedbyanger我.充满了生气。Hewasfumingwithrage.他气得雷霆之怒。③Hisangerboiledover.他的生气迸发了。④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他几乎控制不住怒火。⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充满着怒火。Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因生气而发抖。⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.他生气地看了我一眼。⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼热的眼光怒目着我。⑨Heflaredupattheword.他一听到这个字就勃然震怒。⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他气得神态阴森。3.伤心烦忧①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来。3IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我飞扬在悲的大海里。Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears她.的手在发抖。她快要哭了。④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine听到.这个信息，他无望地把伤心吞没在酒里。Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom她.忽然哭了起来，跑出了房间。⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands她.掩面呜咽。Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼泪。/我的眼里充满了泪水。Afrown（眉）nowstoodonhisface.他皱起了眉头。Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸烦闷。⑩Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.这信息使他脸上蒙上了一层暗影。?Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen...他是悲⋯⋯?Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他们沉醉在沉痛之中。Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.这些日子他情绪低沉。4.惧怕：Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了惧怕。Fearslowlycreepsuponher.惧怕慢慢地延伸到她身上。③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...她感觉惧怕⋯⋯④Shewaschokedbyfear.她因惧怕而窒息。Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied她.神态苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。⑥Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中涌起一阵惧怕。/惧怕吞没了他。Herheartbeat