读后续写“潮汐岛脱险”高三英语二轮复习写作专项

SurvivedfromthetidalislandIwasbornandgrewupintheNorthofScotland,whichwasnotfarfromthesea.WhenIwaslittle,Ienjoyedtheseasidesceneryverymuch.Ioftensatontherockbytheseaandwatchedtheviewofthesea.Iwasfondofplayingwiththesandonthebeachandchasedthewaveswithmyeldersister,Alastair.Acrossthebeachtherewasatidal(潮汐)island,whichmeansthatwhenthetidegoesout,youcanwalktoit,butwhenthetidecomesinagain,youcan'tgettoit.MomandDadneverletusgothere.Theytoldusthatitwasdangerous.However，thetidalislandwasfullofmysterytome.Isaidtomyself."Theremustbesomefascinatingsceneryworthexploring.HowIwishIhadachancetolandonit!"

OnalittlecolddayinOctober,whilemyparentswereawayforafriend'swedding.Mysisterwasdeterminedtotakemetothebeachnearthehouse,wherewewouldhaveagoodtime.Iwantedtobuildsandcastles.Whenwearrivedatthebeach,thetidewasout.Weranonthebeachbackandforthandenjoyedourselvesverymuch.Withthehelpofmysister,Imadeseveralsandcastlesofdifferentshapes.Feelingalittletired,Isatonthebeachforabreak.Isawthetidalislandopposite,whichlookedveryniceintheautumnsunshine."Let'sgotoexplorethetidleisland,Alastair."Isaidtomysister."That'sagoodidea.Butmomanddadsaidwecouldn't.Maybewewon'treturnsafely!"Alastairsaid."Don'tworry!Wewilltrytoreturnbeforethetidecomesinagain."IbeggedAlastair.Finally,sheagreed.Wereturnedhomeandbroughtsomepeanutbuttersandwichesandabottleofmilkwithus.

Thenwesetoffforthetidalisland.___________________________________________________________Thetidecameinandcoveredthebeachandthewaterwastoodeepandcoldforme.________________________________________________________________problem?gottrappedinthetidalislandemotion?excited/thrilled/joyfulscared/frightened/relievedThenwesetoffforthetidalisland.1.2.3.4.Thetidecameinandcoveredthebeachandthewaterwastoodeepandcoldforme.1.2.3.4.Wecouldn’tfindourwayhome/thewayhomewasfloodedbytheseawater.Whatdidwedo?ranto,played,chased,made/built,ate/enjoyedHowdidwefeel?excited,happy,relaxed,thrilled,joyfulWhatdidwesee?fascinatingscenery(sunshine,beach,trees,shells,crabs,seebirds,clouds,waves...)Whatdidwedo?I:swam,cried,shouted...Sister:comforted,helped...waitedforrescueHowdidwefeel?scared,helpless,frightened...calm,Howwerewerescued?Parentssavedus,self-rescuedEnding?promised,lookbeforeweleap心理描写快乐（p2）Iwasoverflowingwithhappiness,hummingandskippinglikeabird.(明喻)我开心得像小鸟一样哼唱跳跃。Iaminagoodmoodatthemoment,justlikethewhitecloudsinthebluesky.(明喻)我此刻心情舒畅，就像蓝天白云那样自在。心理描写恐惧（p29）Afloodoffearwelledupin/sweptover/swallowed/overwhelmedme.Mythroattightenedandmykneesfelfweak.我惊恐不已，喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。Iwasshakinglikealeaf.Ihadneverbeensoscaredinallmylife.(比喻)我瑟瑟发抖。我一辈子从未这么害怕过。环境描写太阳（p119）Thesunwasbeginingtoset,glitteringredthroughtheleaves.太阳开始西落，

树叶里映射出红色斜晖。Thesunsetglowtintedtheskyred.（拟人）夕阳染红了天空。环境描写大海（p119）Theseashonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookedwonderful.海水在落日的余晖下闪亮如镜，景色迷人。Theseawasstillquietasifithadfallenasleep,withoutwindorwaves.大海依旧风平浪静，好像睡着了一样。环境描写沙滩、椰树、螃蟹、贝壳、海鸟Onthebeach,therewererowsofcoconuttrees,underwhichwerecrabscrawlingaroundandcolorfulshellsshiningwithdazzlinglight.Thecrystalseareflectedthereddishskyandflyingseabirds,whosesongsbrokethesilenceofthequietbeach.海滩上有一排排的椰子树，树下爬满了螃蟹，五颜六色的贝壳闪耀着耀眼的光芒。晶莹的大海映照着微红的天空和飞翔的海鸟，它们的歌声打破了海滩的寂静。动作描写欢快地跑（p84）Wemadearushforthedreamingislandwithgreatjoy.我们快乐地冲向梦中之岛。Ipulledoffmyshoesandran,barefootandfastonthesoftsand.我脱下鞋子光着脚飞快地在柔软的沙地上跑着。动作描写姐姐安慰我（p75）Mysisterpattedmeontheshoulder,heldmyhandsgentlyandcomfortedmenottoworry.姐姐轻拍我的肩膀，轻轻地握着我的手，安慰我不用担心。Mysisterwrapped/putherarmsaroundme/gatheredmeintoherarmsandwhisperedtocomfortme.姐姐把我搂进怀里，小声安慰我。动作描写跑向高处的岩石（p83）Frighteded/Scaredtodeath,Idashedtowardsthebigrockasquicklyasmyshakinglegscouldmanage.吓得要死，我赶紧拖着颤抖的双腿以最快的速度冲向那块大岩石。结尾升华看到父母如释重负（p104）Reliefsweptovermybodyandtearsstreameddownmyface.HuggingMumtightly,Ipomisednevertoriskmylifeagain.我如释重负，泪水从脸上流了下来。紧紧地抱着妈妈，我保证以后再也不拿我的生命来冒险。Lookbeforeleap.（122）三思而后行。Thenwesetoffforthetidalisland.Myheartquickenedaswegotcloser.Themomentwesetourfootontheisland,IfeltlikeIcameintoaparadiseofcolorfulflowers,variousbirdsandsplendidscenery.

Excitedandcheerful,webuiltavarietyofsandcastles,feelingsatisfiedwithourworks.Afterseveralhours,wewereexhaustedandourstomachsstartedtoprotest.Bathinginthesunsetglow,withthegentlebreezekissingourcheeks,weenjoyedpeanutbutterbreadandmilktogetheronthebeach.However,weweretooimmersedinthefascinatingviews,notknowingthedangerwascoming.Afterwehadfunasmuchaswecould,wedecidedtocomebackhome,butfoundnoway!T