读后续写人与动物+小猫助主人脱险+讲义 高三英语二轮复习写作专项

读后续写原文：TheChristmasholidayswerefastapproaching,andwehadorderedmanygiftsonline.So,whenthedoorbellrang,Iwassuresomeofthepackageshadarrived.Irantothedoorandswungitopen,butnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlookeddown,onlytofindabeautifulcalicokitten（杂色猫）sittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.There

was

no

way

that

she

could

have

rung

thedoorbellbyherself,wasthere?Wefiguredthatsomeonehadfoundthekittensomewhereandleftherthere,andthenthepersonrang

the

doorbell

and

ran

away.They

accuratelyguessed

we

would

welcome

an

additional

familymemberandtakecareofher.Myhusbandcalledherourlittleangel,sowenamed

herAngelica

accordingly.

She

had

a

calmaura（气

质）aboutherasshewalkedstraightintoourhomeandhearts,fittinginperfectly.Itseemedasifshewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisbighousewithus.Shewasanoldsoulandturnedouttobetheperfectcompanion.Alwaysbymyside,shewasmorelikeapuppythanakitten.Wisebeyondheryears,sheenjoyedwanderingthroughthetunnelsandmysteriousroomsasmuchasIdid,butwithmuchlessfear.Angelicathecalicowascourageous.So,Ilearnedfromheranddecidedtobebrave,too.Therewasanundergroundstonecellar（地窖）Ihadbeeneagertoexplore.Theonlywayinwasdownarickety（摇晃的）laddertoitsdarkdepths.Iguesseditwasanoldrootcellar,probablytwelvefeetdeep.I

had

promised

my

husband

that

I

wouldn’texploredangerousareasunlessheorsomeoneelsewasaround.ThoughIknewIwassortofafraid,IfiguredthatAngelicawouldcountasmycompanion.Iwasreadytoexplorethiscellar,andsowasshe.I

equipped

myself

with

a

good

flashlight

andwarmclothesandcarefullystarteddownthericketyladderwhileAngelicawaslookingdownatmefromabove.Suddenly,somethingunexpectedhappened.FaintcracksandasuddencrashwerewhatIcouldremember.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。Paragraph1:

Paragraph2:Itseemedmycompanion,Angelica,

wasmylasthope.

文本分析：本篇故事主题语境为人与自然。故事主要内容为：“我们”捡到了一只杂色猫，它聪明，可爱，爱探险。“我们”把它看作最好的伙伴。在它的影响下，“我”冒险去了丈夫一直不准“我”去的地窖。结果，“我”摔进了地窖。最终在小猫的帮助下，“我”脱离了困境。文章第四段提到了地窖可能有12英尺深。所以，在续写内容中，“我”很有可能受伤了。所给文本的最后一段提到“我”带着手电筒，穿着暖和的衣服，而Angelica则在上面看着“我”。所以，在续写的文章中，手电筒可能好用，但也有可能摔坏了。第一段的情节可以这样设计：根据第一段的段首句“我”醒来只看到了石地板上的梯子的零散碎块，说明“我”摔下来之后晕过去了。所以，醒来后，“我”的反应是想要爬起来，却发现自己受伤了。而在第二段段首句，似乎Angelica是“我”最后的希望，此句暗示在续写的第一段，“我”努力自救，但失败了。而在最绝望的时刻，“我”看到、听到或想到了Angelica，这样就可以顺利衔接到第二段。第二段的情节可以按以下思路设计：第二段的结尾应该是“我”被及时救出来，所以第二段的开头衔接的是“我”想办法让Angelica去找人帮忙。而Angelica走了之后，“我”焦急地等待，不知结果如何。当获救之后，回扣主题——Angelica是“我们”最好的伙伴。

参考范文：Paragraph1:Iwokeupwithpiecesoftherotting,brokenladderlyingaroundmeonthestonecellarfloor.Anacute

pain

tearing

me

into

pieces,I

struggledto

my

feet

and

glanced

at

the

remote

ray

of

lightwith

frustration.

Learning

that

I

had

to

get

out

ofthetwelve-foot-deepcellarbymyself,Igrabbedthebumponthewallandstartedtoclimbup.Thebrokenflashlightonthegroundwitnessedmyvainattemptstoescapefromthesituation.Eventually,Icollapsedontotheground,tremblinghelplessly.Suddenly,afaintmeowcameintomyears.Itwasmylittleangel,withitscalmauraasusual！Paragraph2:Itseemedmycompanion,Angelica,wasmylasthope.“Angelica,goandfindDad!”Icriedwith

all

my

strength.

Eyeing

me

with

itsintelligent

eyes

for

a

moment,

the

calico

kittenran

away.

Staring

at

the

entrance,

I

couldn’t

helpwonderingwhethershewenttoseekhelporjusttoplay.Myonlyhopeofsurvivaldimmedgradually.Afterwhatseemedtobecenturies,hurriedfootstepsbroke

the

dead

silence.

It

was

my

intelligentcompanion

that

found

my

husband

to

rescue

me!Havingleftthedarkcellar,Iliftedmylittleangel,Angelica,

up,

murmuring

my

heartfelt

gratitude.Undoubtedly,itwasablessingtohavemetsuchaperfectcompanioninthecoldwinter!范文分析：动作线：挣扎着站起来，了解形势—试图爬出地窖—失败后崩溃地瘫坐在地上—看到Angelica并求救—Angelica离开后焦急地等待—获救。情感线：刚开始的沮丧—自救失败时的崩溃—看到Angelica时产生一丝希望—等待中的焦急—获救后的感激。在语言方面：在范文第一段的段首句衔接，用

acute,opieces,struggle

来体现“我”受伤的情况，remoterayoflight

烘托出“我”渴望逃出去但又希望渺茫的困境；而

collapseontotheground,deadsilence

则体现出我的绝望；thetwelve-foot-deepcellar,

the

broken

flashlight,

intelligentcompanion,tremble,itscalmaura,angel,

很好地与原文形成了内容上的有效衔接和呼应。在语法方面：Anacutepaintearingmeintopieces,

使用了独立主格结构；Thebroken

flashlightonthegroundwitne