2021高三英语书面表达优质课推荐资料

高三英语书面(shūmiàn)表达优质课课件第一页，共37页。山东2007年高考考试说明第II卷书面表达部分的解读(jiědú)与例证关于写作“‘写作’的词数要求提高到120—150词汇，既要求表达事实信息，又要陈述个人观点，相对以往试题而言，思维和表达的空间骤然增大，需要考生花大力气进行有关训练。”

第二页，共37页。《齐鲁晚报》2006年12月19日B2版[例证(lìzhèng)]当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：第三页，共37页。看电影：省时、有趣、易懂读原著：细节更多、语言(yǔyán)优美我的看法及理由注意：1、词数：100-120文章题目和开头已给出（不计入词数）。2、参考词汇：originalwork或bookintheoriginal（原著）

Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.……………第四页，共37页。

Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.……………[badbeginnings]

Idon’tthinkseeingafilmisbetterthanreadingabook.b.Asforme,……c.Othersholdtheviewthat……[badconclusions]

Ithinkbothfilmsandbookshavetheiradvantages.b.Ihavenopreferencebetweenthetwo.c.Ifirstwatchafilm,thenreadthebook.第五页，共37页。GoodConclusions：我的看法(kànfǎ)及理由：Revisedfilmisjustlikeonetreeintheoriginalwork’sforest.Iprefertogoacrosstheforestratherthanenjoyonlyonetree.Throughreading,everyreaderwillhaveadifferentHamletinmind.Sodon’tgiveupreading.Let’stastetheoriginalflavorofart.…Booksintroduceusintothebestsociety.Byreadingabook,wehearwhattheysaidanddid;weseethemasiftheywerereallyalive;wesympathizewiththem,enjoywiththem.第六页，共37页。[给出的参考答案]Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting,anditiseasiertofollow.Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal.Meanwhile,thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful.第七页，共37页。Personally,Iagreewiththesecondview.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.IthinkIcanstayathome,readingquietlyinasituationofmyown,andwhat’smore,Iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthor’sideas.Inaword,toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit.第八页，共37页。高考英语(yīnɡyǔ)作文模版

对比观点题型阐述主题题型解决方法题型

说明利弊题型

第九页，共37页。对比观点题型（1）

要求论述两个(liǎnɡɡè)对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1．有一些人认为。。。

2．另一些人认为。。。

3．我的看法。。。

（2）给出一个(yīɡè)观点，要求考生反对这一观点

第十页，共37页。Thetopicof①----------主题）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②-----------------（支持A的理由一）Whatismore,③------------理由二).Moreover,④---------------(理由三).

WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧--------------（我的观点(guāndiǎn)）.Thereasonisthat⑨--------------------(原因).Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.

第十一页，共37页。（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Somepeoplebelievethat①----------------（观点一）.Forexample,theythink②-----------------（举例说明)．Anditwillbringthem③-------(为他们带来的好处).Inmyopinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,④-------------(我不同意该看法(kànfǎ)的理由一).Foranotherthing,⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)．

FormallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法(kànfǎ))．第十二页，共37页。阐述主题题型

要求(yāoqiú)从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求(yāoqiú)进行论述．

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阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．

２．分析并举例使其更充实．第十三页，共37页。Thegoodoldproverb----------------（名言或谚语）remindsusthat-----(释义(shìyì)).Indeed,wecanlearnmanythingsformit.Firstofall,----------(理由一).Forexample,-------------(举例说明).Secondly,-------(理由二).Anothercaseisthat-------(举例说明).Furthermore,------------------(理由三)．

Inmyopinion,----------------(我的观点).Inshort,whateveryoudo,pleaserememberthesay---A.Ifyouunderstanditandapplyittoyourstudyorwork,you’llnecessarilybenefitalotfromit.

第十四页，共37页。解决(jiějué)方法题型

要求考生列举出解决(jiějué)问题的多种途径

１．问题现状

２．怎样解决(jiějué)(解决(jiějué)方案的优缺点第十五页，共37页。Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceaproblem-----A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,-----------(解决方法(fāngfǎ)一).Foranother-------------(解决方法(fāngfǎ)二).Finally,-------(解决方法(fāngfǎ)三).

Personally,Ibelievethat-----------(我的解决方法(fāngfǎ)).Consequently,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause--------------(带来的好处).第十六页，共37页。写作中需要注意的问题表示让步关系的词：although,though,eventhough/if…Throughreading,everyreaderwillhaveaaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocope版[例证(lìzhèng)]amabletobetterunderstandtheauthor’sideas.以简洁明了的句子为主，避免为追求使用However,othersprefertogooutfortraveling,________itcanincreasetheirknowledgeandbroadenOthersholdtheviewthat……表示选择关系的词：or,either…or,…Marygotupanddressingquickly.filmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.modernworld,andtobepunctualisnotonlyagoodquality,Icanstayathome,readingquietlyinasituationofmyown,andwhat’smore,Istudentshavenotarrivedanyagreement.……………说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发(chūfā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）

１.说明事物现状２.事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）

３.你对现状（或前景）的看法第十七页，共37页。NowadaysmanypeoplepreferAbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First-------(Ａ的优点(yōudiǎn)之一).Besides-----------（Ａ的优点(yōudiǎn)之二）.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．Tomakemattersworse,--------------(Ａ的第二个点)．

Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo---------------(我的看法)．

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图表作文(zuòwén)的框架第十九页，共37页。StudyingAbroadAttendingschoolsabroadhasmanyadvantages.Firstly,bylookingatourowncountryformoutside,wecanwidenourvisionandbroadenourminds.Secondly,wecanvisitfamousscenicspotsandmakefriendswiththelocalpeople.thirdly,wecanusetheforeignlanguage…quickly.However,therearealsosomedisadvantagesinattendingaforeignschool.Themostseriousproblemisthelanguagebarrier.Moststudentsdonothaveadequateknowledgeoflanguagespokenthere.Onarrivingthere,theyfinditdifficulttounderstandwhattheteachersaresaying.Furthermore,thecostoflivingismuchhigherthanthatinourcountry,somoststudentshavetofindpart-timejobtosupportthemselves.Onthewhole,itisagoodthingtostudyabroad.However,onemustnotlosesightofthedisadvantages.说明(shuōmíng)利弊型第二十页，共37页。

OnpunctualityPunctualitymeansobservingregularorappointedtime.Thereisnodoubtthatpunctualityisofgreatimportanceinmodernworld,andtobepunctualisnotonlyagoodquality,butitisalsotoshowrespectforothersandtowintrust.AsfarasIamconcerned,failuretobepunctualinkeepingone’sappointmentisinvitedtoadinnerandarriveslaterthantheappointedtime,hekeepsalltheothersguestswaiting.Thisisgreatdiscourtesytowardsboththeguestsandthehost.Asaproverbsays,“Timefliesnevertoberecalled”,thisistrue.Ifwelosesomething,wemayfinditagain.Butlosttimecanneverberegained.Infact,timeitselfislife.Therefore,wastingother’stimeisthesameastakingawaytimefromothers’lives.阐述(chǎnshù)主题题型第二十一页，共37页。

IstheonlywayouttogotocollegeWehadadiscussionaboutwhetheritistheonlywayoutforseniorstudentstogotocollege.Viewsvaryfrompersontoperson.Themajorityofstudentsconsideritnecessarytogotocollege.Theythinkitcanwidentheirknowledgeandimprovetheirqualities.Onlyinthiswaycantheyfindbetterjobsaftergraduation.Veryfewstudentsthinkitunnecessarytogotouniversity,becausethetuitionistoohighfortheirfamilytoafford.What’smore,it’sratherhardforcollegegraduatestofindsatisfactoryjobs.Thirtypercentofthestudents,however,believe“AllroadsleadtoRome.”Therefore,itdoesn’tmakeanydifferencewhethertheygotocollegeornot.Inmyopinion,wecanreceiveabettereducationatcollegesothatwecanseverourmotherland.图表(túbiǎo)作文第二十二页，共37页。怎样写好一篇英语(yīnɡyǔ)作文第二十三页，共37页。写作中需要注意的问题了解短文(duǎnwén)写作的内容及要求把握好写作步骤写作时要注意“三忌”形式上要一致避免犯小的笔误（语法，拼写）书写规范，工整第二十四页，共37页。形式上的一致也是运用英语进行(jìnxíng)表达时需要十分注意的Twentypercentofthestudentsinourclassisfromthesuburb.b.人称、指代要一致BringyourbooksheretomorrowandIwillreturnittothelibrary.c.平行(对称)关系要一致Myteacher,MrWang,ispatientaswellasimagination.d.时态（语态）的起点要一致Marygotupanddressingquickly.第二十五页，共37页。书面表达(biǎodá)注意衔接与连贯表示转折关系的词：but,while,however,yet,ratherthan,not…but,whereas,…表示选择关系的词：or,either…or,…表示原因，结果关系的词：for,thus,because,since,…表示并列关系：notonly…butalso,and,both…and,aswellas.neither…nor..,…表示时间关系的词：when,while,as,before,after,….表示目的的词：forthispurpose,sothat,inorderthat,…表示让步关系的词：although,though,eventhough/if…表示条件的词：if,unless,as/solongas,…第二十六页，共37页。eg:Therefore,it’sveryimportantforustoformhealthyeatinghabits.__________,badeatinghabitsarestillverycommonamongusstudents.(2006福建卷)______youdidn’tspeakclearly,_____Ididn’tlistenwell.However,othersprefertogooutfortraveling,________itcanincreasetheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizons.(2006陕西卷)However,thischangehasbad_________goodeffects,especiallydependenceontheInternet.(2006广东(guǎngdōng)卷)________hegothome,hesaidtohisgrandpa,“Birdsalsoneedfriends!”(2006辽宁卷)HoweveraswellassinceEitherorWhen第二十七页，共37页。写好主题句：一.主题句在段落中常出现的位置由两种。1.段落开端:后面(hòumian)的句子提供支持信息或论证。Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymoreinterestinganditiseasiertofollow.段落结尾：前面提供细节的支持句，最后用一句总结性的主题句加以概括。I’mahighschoolstudentsinBeijing,wheretheWinterAsianGameswillstart.MyspokenEnglishisgoodandIcancommunicatewithforeignersfluently.AndIhaveothervirtues.IlikesportsandI’mfamiliarwithBeijing.SoIthinkI’msuitableforservingtheWAG.第二十八页，共37页。写好段落主题句的三原则概括(gàikuò)全段主要内容，既不能以偏概全，也不能随意扩大范围如：在一段介绍“我在英语学习听说读写方面发生的变化”的段落中，主题句应该是：MyspokenEnglishhasimprovedalot.GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyEnglishstudy.2.有体现中心思想的关键词或短语。3.以简洁明了的句子为主，避免为追求使用复杂结构而导致理解错误或主题不鲜明的句子。

第二十九页，共37页。请根据下面选篇的结构(jiégòu)形式和内容确定一个主题句。________________Firstly,thetuitionisreasonable.Secondly,theuniversitycanhelpthestudentsgetasumofloanfromthebanks,whichreducestheloadofpeasantfamilieslikemine.Thirdly,itsprogramincomputerisrecognizedastheleaderinthecountry.WhydoIchoosetomajorincomputerscienceinthisuniversity?B.ThereareseveralreasonswhyIhavedecidedtoattendthisuniversity.Learningaforeignlanguagehaschanged.Notsolongagostudentswouldsitwithpensinhand,writingthebasicformsofalanguage,andthelearningstructurestheywouldneverbeabletospeak.Inthatsameclassroomtoday,pensandnotebookshavebeenputaway.Thespokensoundsofforeignlanguagefilltheroom…第三十页，共37页。写好段落扩展句扩展句是主题句的具体例证或有力支持。写好扩展句要注意以下三点:扩展句要紧扣文章中心和主题句的内容(nèiróng)。扩展句是主题句的补充和支持。2.扩展句的层次很重要。一个主题句可以从以下几方面展开，每一个方面就是一个扩展句。这些扩展句只有按照时间，空间，因果等逻辑顺序展开，文章才能层次分明，条理清晰。3.关联词对扩展句来说很重要。汉语注意思想相联，英文强调形式相联。从属于一个主题句的几个扩展句不能简单地堆砌在一起了事，而要用丰富多采的连词连接起来。第三十一页，共37页。阅读(yuèdú)下面的文段，并为所给的扩展句排列顺序：IthinkI’mfitforthejob._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SoI’msureIcandothejobwellifIgettheposition.I’mfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.B.Asastudent,Ihavereadalotandhavemuchknowledgeinmanyfields.C.Aboveall,Ionceworkedasareporterformyschoolbroadcastingstation.D.Besides,I’measytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingtogetherwithothers.BADＣ第三十二页，共37页。写好结尾句结尾句要紧扣段落主题，有要有所扩展。结尾句要力求简洁有力，意味隽永。结尾句可以借鉴一下几种方法：总结法如04年湖北试题关于英语学习(xuéxí)的