书面表达之道歉信学案高考英语作文复习专项

书面表达之道歉信答案〖专题限时集训P135〗假定你是李华，你和美国留学生Tony相约通过网上交流学习彼此的语言，经过一年的交流学习，彼此都取得了进步，但由于高三下学期学习时间紧张，你无法再抽出时间上网与他交流。请你给Tony写一封e-mail，表达对他的歉意。主要内容：1．表达歉意；2．说明具体原因、提出补救办法；3．希望得到谅解。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题(Review):1.体裁__应用文道歉信____第三人称为主___一般现在时、一般将来时__4.要点____________II.写前（Pre-writing）套用词组：因某事向某人道歉____________________2.向……说对不起____________________Apologizetosbforsthsaysorrytosb给你带来不便_____________________4.给你带来许多麻烦_____________________Bringyoutheinconveniecemakeyoulotsoftrouble应当受到责备______________________6.承担责任______________________Betoblametake/shouldertheresponsibilityfor参考句型夺人眼球开头句（表明写信意图）1.I'mwritingtoconveymysincereapologiestoyoufornotaccompanyingyoutothegalleryatourappointedtime.我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意，因为我没有在我们约定的时间陪你去画廊。2.Ihatetosaysorry,butthereisachangeinmyschoolarrangement,soIcan'tattendyourbirthdayparty.很抱歉，我学校的安排有变动，所以我不能参加你的生日聚会了。亮点出彩篇中句（说明道歉原因）1.ThereasonwhyIwon'tbeavailableatthattimeasplannedisthatmygrandfatherfellillsuddenlyyesterdayandIhavetocareforhim.我不能按计划届时到场，因为我祖父昨天突然生病了，我必须照顾他。2.IhavejustfoundIhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingthatafternoon.Ihopethechangewillnotcausetoomuchtrouble.我刚发现我那天下午要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这个变化不会造成太大的麻烦。3.Ifeelsosorryfornotkeepingmyword,butwouldyougivemeachancetosaysorrytoyoufacetoface？我很抱歉没有信守诺言，但你能给我个机会当面向你道歉吗？4.Muchtomyregret,IwasunabletokeepmyappointmenttodiscussChinesepaintingswithyou.非常遗憾，我不能如约和你讨论中国画。5.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldallowmetofixanothertime.Ifnot,pleasekeepmeinformedinadvanceofwhattimesuitsyoubest.如果您能允许我另安排时间，我将不胜感激。如果不能，请提前告诉我何时最适合您。韵味无穷结尾句（再次致歉，请求谅解)1.Isincerelyapologizetoyouforanyinconveniencecausedbytheunexpectedchange.对于这个意外的变化给您带来的不便，我深表歉意。2.Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesforthisunhappyexperienceandunderstandmysituation.对于这次不愉快的经历，希望你能接受我的道歉并理解我的处境。3.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain,andI'lltrytomakeupformyfault.请允许我再次致歉，我将尽力弥补我的过错。套用句式：我写这封信是因……向你致歉。I’mwritingthislettertomakeanapologytoyoufor......_我十分歉意地告诉你……。Ifeelsosorrytotellyou.....对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。Isincerelyapologizeagaintoyouforanyinconveniencecausedby......我真心希望你能理解我的处境，并接受我的道歉。Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesfor.....andunderstandmysituation.词组:取得进步____________________2.抽出时间做某事______________________Makeprogressinsparetimetodosth______________________4.交流_____________________Bebusydoing/beoccupiedindoingcommunicatewithsb句式：高考临近，我忙于学习。Withthecollegeentranceexamapproaching,I’moccupiedinstudying.仿写：暑假临近，我正在为旅游做准备。Withsummervacationapproaching,I’mbusypreparingforthetrip.没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。Withoutyourhelp,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogressinEnglish.仿写：没有你的指导，我的写作不会取得如此快的进步。Withoutyourguidance,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogressinwriting.我经常回忆起我们一起学习的美好时光。Ioftenrecalledthewonderfultimewhenwestudiedtogether.Thewonderfultimewhenwestudiedtogetheroftenlingeredinmymind.仿写：我经常回忆起我生活在农村的美好时光。IoftenrecalledthewonderfultimewhenIlivedinthecountryside.III.写中（While-writing）谋篇布局：三段式说明写信的目的。2.道歉的理由及补救的方法和采取的措施。3.再次致歉并希望得到谅解。写作模板：DearXX,I'mwritingthislettertoapologizetoyoufor道歉的事由。Itisowingtothefactthat道歉的原因。Iwonderif(询问对方能够接受补救方案)。Isincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.Nothingdelightsmemorethanyourpromptreply.YourssincerelyLiHuaPara.One说明写信的目的。Para.Two道歉的理由及补救的方法和采取的措施。Para.Three再次致歉并希望得到谅解。成篇：DearTony，WordsfailtodescribemyheartwhenIhavetoquithelpingyoulearnChineseonline.Iamveryhappy,soIamwritingtoapologizetoyouforit..Itisowingtothefactthat,withtheCollegeEntranceExam,IampreparingfortheexamsothatIcansparenotimetoonline.However,Iamgratefulforyourselflesshelpandguidance.Withoutyourhelp,inEnglish.Ioftenrecallthehappytimeinthepastyear.Idohopewecanaftertheexam.Isincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituationand.Nothingdelightsmemorethanyourpromptreply.Iamprayingforstudyingwithyouonlinesoon.Bestwishes!Yourstruly，LiHuaIV.写后（Post-writing）润色：DearTony，WordsfailtodescribemyachingheartwhenIhavetoquithelpingyoulearnChineseonline.Bathedinasadatmosphere,Iamwritingtoapologizetoyouforit.Itisowingtothefactthat,withtheColl