浙江地区中考英语复习专题二十一书面表达试卷部分

浙江地区中考英语复习专题二十一书面表达试卷部分第1页/共300页Writing1(2018杭州)假定你是李平(Tel:1361234567),家住滨海市人民路1号。你在美国旅行期间不慎遗失钱包,曾

向宾馆询问。以下是宾馆的答复邮件,请你阅读后进行回复,词数80左右。

A组2014—2018年浙江中考题组五年中考第2页/共300页答案[写作要点]1.本文是应用文。2.写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要为一般现在时。3.写作中应包含何时入住宾馆、所住房间和对失物的描述及里面的物品,并附上地址和电话

号码。[参考范文]DearMr.Smith,Thankyousomuchforyourreply.IstayedinyourhotelonJuly6,inRoom106,andIremember

havingleftmynewblackwalletonthetable.MyIDcard,twocreditcards,anda100-dollarbill,

areinmywallet.WouldyoubekindenoughtosendmethewallettoNo.1Renmin

Road,Binhai,

Chinabymailifyoufindit?Pleasecallmeatmyphonenumber1361234567ifneeded.Thanksagain.Yours,第3页/共300页LiPing精彩语句

1.精美词汇rememberdoing记得做过……2.出彩结构WouldyoubekindenoughtosendmethewallettoNo.1Renmin

Road,Binhai,China...?(拜托您

……)第4页/共300页

注意:文中若出现“Jack”以外的人名或任何学校名称,该作文得分不超过12分。WeekendorNot?

Writing2(2018温州)如今,国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末,如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这

种现象并谈谈你的看法,以Weekend

or

Not?为题写一篇约110词的英语短文向Parents杂志投

稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。第5页/共300页答案[写作提示]1.本文是看图作文。2.写作时应以第三人称为主,时态应以一般现在时为主。3.写作中应先描述Jack周末的基本情况,而后分析现象,谈论自己的看法。[参考范文]WeekendorNot?Jackhastoattendlotsofclassesatweekends.Hehaslittletimeforhisfavoritesport—soccer.

Still,hisparentsarepushinghimtodomoremathexercises,whichworrieshimalot.Nowadays,manystudentsareundermuchpressurelikeJack.Theirparentsbelieveitnecessaryfor

themtomakefulluseoftheweekendsandlearnasmuchaspossible.Asaresult,somestudents

arestressedoutandthereforeloseinterestinlearninganything.Whatisworse,theymaynotbe

abletolearntomanagetheirownlife.第6页/共300页Idohopeallthechildrencanhavethefreedomtochoosewhattheyliketodoandenjoytheirweekends.精彩语句

1.精美词汇makefulluseof充分利用asaresult结果是bestressedout紧张,饱受压力atweekends在周末2.出彩结构Still,hisparentsarepushinghimtodomoremathexercises,whichworrieshimalot.(使用定语从

句)Theirparentsbelieveitnecessaryforthemtomakefulluseoftheweekendsandlearnasmuchas

possible.(it是形式宾语,真正的宾语是动词不定式短语)Whatisworse,theymaynotbeabletolearntomanagetheirownlife.(连接词的使用)第7页/共300页Writing3(2018宁波)今年5月11日,你校组织了一次社会实践活动,部分学生选择去了红星农场(见导图一),其余学

生选择去了科技博物馆(见导图二)。请根据你所选择的实践活动写一篇英语日记,记录当天

的经历和感受。

注意:(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点,并适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;(3)词数:80~100。日记格式及首句已给出,不计入总词数。Friday,May11th第8页/共300页TodayIhadaschooltrip.

第9页/共300页答案[写作要点]1.本文是应用文。2.写作时应使用第一人称,时态应为一般过去时。3.写作中应按照导图介绍人物、出行方式、活动,并补充自己对活动的感受,合理拓展。[参考范文1]Friday,May11thTodayIhadaschooltrip.Theweatherwasfine.MyclassmatesandIsetofftoHongxingFarmby

busearlyinthemorning.Theminutewearrived,wetookawalkaroundthefarm.Thenwefedthechickens.WhenIthrew

somefoodtothem,theyranovertomewithexcitementandsomeofthemevenwalkedintotheir

friends.Themostexcitingthingwasthatwepickedstrawberriesafterlunch.Whilewewerepick-

ing,weatealot.Howsweettheywere!Ihadawonderfultimetoday!Idohopetogothereagaininthenearfuture!第10页/共300页[参考范文2]Friday,May11thTodayIhadaschooltrip.Theweatherwasfine.MyclassmatesandIsetofftotheScienceMuse-

umbysubwayat7:00.Assoonaswereachedthemuseum,wewereamazedtoseelotsofpicturesaboutscience.Thenwe

watchedavideoaboutdifferentinventionsandtheirinventors.Itsunbelievablethattechnology

hasprogressedinsucharapidway.Intheafternoon,weplayedchesswithsomespecialrobots.It

wassurprisingtofindthatnobodycouldbeatthem.Beforeleaving,weboughtsomegiftsforour

friends.Ihadawonderfultimetoday!Idohopetogothereagain!精彩语句

1.精美词汇setoff出发withexcitement兴奋地第11页/共300页beamazedtodo惊讶地做……insucharapidway以如此快速的方式assoonas一……就……2.出彩结构Itsunbelievablethattechnologyhasprogressedinsucharapidway.Theminutewearrived,wetookawalkaroundthefarm.(theminute一……就……)Howsweettheywere!(感叹句的使用)第12页/共300页Writing4(2018金华)在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日,请你从所给的

卡片中任选一张,用英语写一篇发言稿,介绍该节日。

第13页/共300页注意:1.发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息,并适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;3.词数80~100;4.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometotheChineseculturetour.

Thatsall.Thanksforlistening.第14页/共300页答案[写作要点]1.本文是应用文。2.写作时应使用一般现在时。3.写作中注意包含时间、活动、意义,在列提纲时注意把必要的活动和意义补充完整。[参考范文1]Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometotheChineseculturetour.NowallowmetointroduceoneoftheChinesetraditional

festivals,theSpringFestival.TheSpringFestivalfallsinJanuaryorFebruary.ItisChineseNewYearandalsothebiggestday

ofyear.Sopeoplecomebackhomefromdifferentplacesandgettogetherforabigdinner.Many

peoplestayuplatetowelcomethenewyear,hopingtheywillhaveabrightnewstart.Duringthefestival,peoplevisittheirrelativesandfriendsandwisheachothergoodluckforthe

newyear.Childrencanoftengethongbaofromtheirelders.Doyouthinkitinteresting?第15页/共300页Thatsall.Thanksforlistening.[参考范文2]Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometotheChineseculturetour.NowallowmetointroduceoneoftheChinesetraditional

festivals,theMid-AutumnFestival.TheMid-AutumnFestivalusuallyfallsinSeptemberorOctoberwhenthemoonappearsthe

biggestandthebrightestintheyear.Duringthefestival,Chinesepeoplesitaroundthetablewiththeirfamilymembersandenjoy

mooncakesaswellasthebeautifulmoon.Peoplebelievethattheroundmooncakesandafull

moonaresymbolsofbeingtogether.Whenseeingthem,peoplewillmisstheirfamilymembersfar

away.Atthesametime,theywillexpresswishesandhopesforthem.Doesitsoundinteresting?Thatsall.Thanksforlistening.第16页/共300页精彩语句

1.精美词汇allowsb.todosth.允许某人做某事fallinJanuaryorFebruary恰巧在一月或者二月theirelders他们的长辈haveabrightnewstart拥有一个全新的开始aswellas也,又2.出彩结构TheMid-AutumnFestivalusuallyfallsinSeptemberorOctober.Manypeoplestayuplatetowelcomethenewyear,hopingtheywillhaveabrightnewstart.(现在

分词作伴随状语)Atthesametime,theywillexpresswishesandhopesforthem.第17页/共300页Writing5(2017杭州)第18页/共300页答案[写作提示]1.本文时态是一般现在时。2.文章应对来信的两个问题进行答复,一是tablemanners,二是推荐杭州的景点。[参考范文]HiArmino,Gladtohearfromyouagain.Asyoumentionedinyouremail,thereareindeedsometablemanners

inChina.Forexample,wearenotsupposedtostarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthe

table.Anditsimpolitetopointatanyonewithchopsticks.Asforplacesofinterest,Isuggestyou

gototheHangzhouNationalTeaMuseum,whereyoucouldwatchteaartperformancesanddrink

tea.Imlookingforwardtoseeingyou!LiPing第19页/共300页精美语句

1.精美词汇besupposedtodosth.应该做某事;hearfrom收到……的信2.出彩结构Asyoumentionedinyouremail...(as引导定语从句)Itsimpolitetodo...(“itis+形容词+不定式短语”句型)Writing6(2017温州)假如你是李华,就读于WenzhouTangheMiddleSchool。你想去美国的WashingtonInternational

School(WIS)读高中。现在你需要给对方学校写一封简明扼要、有说服力的自荐信,争取让学

校录取你。参考要点:•个人信息•学习成绩•爱好、能力•……第20页/共300页要求:(1)不能出现真实的个人身份信息;(2)词数:110左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear

Sir/Madam,

I

am

looking

forward

to

your

kind

reply.Yours

sincerely,Li

Hua第21页/共300页答案[写作提示]1.本文使用一般现在时态,要写清楚个人信息。2.介绍自己喜爱的学科及成绩。3.写出自己的爱好和能力。[参考范文]Dear

Sir/Madam,IamLiHuafromWenzhouTangheMiddleSchool.IwishtogetanopportunitytostudyatWIS.Likemanyotherboys,Ienjoydoingsports,butmathsandsciencearemyfavourite.IlikeChinese,

Englishandmusicaswell.Ihavewonseveralprizesinvariouscompetitions,includingasecond

prizeinaninternationalmathscompetition.Ihavejoinedinthreeone-month-tour-studyprogramsintheUS,learntalotaboutAmericancul-

tureandmademanyfriendsthere.SoWISismyfirstchoicetostudyabroad.AlthoughIamnotthebestnow,IwillmakeeveryefforttobecomeatopstudentandIbelieveyou第22页/共300页willbeproudofme.I

am

looking

forward

to

your

kind

reply.Yours

sincerely,Li

Hua精美语句

1.精美词汇makeeveryeffort尽最大的努力2.出彩结构IwishtogetanopportunitytostudyatWIS.(动词不定式作定语是英语表达中的一种特色)enjoydoing喜欢做……第23页/共300页AdviceforstudentsAdviceforparents◆keephealthy◆joinclubs◆developyourstudyskills◆...▲encourage...more▲notcompare...with▲allow...tomakedecisions▲...Writing7(2017宁波)三年的初中生活让你收获满满。校英语报邀你写一篇短文,给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹或

他们的父母提一些建议。请你结合自己的学习经历选择其中一个对象,阐述你的观点。第24页/共300页注意:(1)短文必须包括你所选择一方的所有要点,并适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;(3)词数:80—100;(4)短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。短文首句:Howtimeflies!Now

(you/yourchildren)arestudentsofGrade9.

第25页/共300页答案[写作提示]1.本文使用一般现在时态。2.覆盖答题要点。3.行为连贯,连接词使用恰当,指代清晰。[参考范文]Possible

version

1:Howtimeflies!NowyouarestudentsofGrade9.HereIdliketotellyousomethingthatwill

makeyourschoollifemorecomfortableandwonderful.Firstofall,itisimportantforyoutokeephealthy,sodontforgettoexerciseeveryday.Second,

youdbetterjoinclubssothatyoucanlearnbetterandmakemorefriends.Third,youwillbeable

tomakegreatprogressifyoudevelopyourstudyskills.Besides,therearemanywaysforyouto

loweryourstress,suchaslisteningtomusic,hangingoutwithfriends,andwatchingmovies.Ihopeyouwillenjoyyourschoollifeandachieveyourdreams.第26页/共300页Possible

version

2:Howtimeflies!NowyourchildrenarestudentsofGrade9.HereIdliketotellyousomething

thatwillmaketheirschoollifemorewonderful.Firstofall,itisimportanttoencourageyourchildrenmoresothattheywillbemoreconfident.

Second,pleasedonotcompareyourchildrenwithothers,becauseifyoupushthemtoohard,they

willfeelstressedout.Third,thechildrenshouldbeallowedtomaketheirowndecisions.Thereis

noneedtogeteverythingreadyforthem.Besides,beingagoodlistenerwillhelpyougetalong

wellwithyourchildren.Ihopeyourchildrensdreamswillcometruewithyourhelp.深度解析题目大胆创新,突出两个关键词:“自主选择”、“自由发挥”,使不同层次的学生

都能表达自己的真实感受,让不同层次的学生都有发挥的空间。第27页/共300页精美语句1.精美词汇forgettodosth.忘记做某事makegreatprogress取得巨大的进步compare...with...把……和……做比较makeonesowndecision做好自己的决定2.出彩结构Besides,therearemanywaysforyoutoloweryourstress,suchaslisteningtomusic,hangingout

withfriends,andwatchingmovies.而且,有很多减轻你压力的方式,比如听音乐、和朋友闲逛、

看电影。第28页/共300页

注意:(1)短文可结合图片信息或自身经历,作适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;(3)词数:80—100,短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。短文首句:Lastweek,wehadadiscussionaboutthetopic“Tochangeornot”.Writing8(2017湖州)英语课上,老师组织大家就以下两幅图进行“Tochangeornot”的话题讨论,请用英语阐述你

对此话题的看法。第29页/共300页

第30页/共300页答案[写作提示]1.本文要恰当运用时态,对一般事实的论述用一般现在时,而对自己的经历要用一般过去时。2.书写规范整洁。3.用词恰当,句型变化多样。[参考范文]Lastweek,wehadadiscussionaboutthetopic“Tochangeornot”.Ithinkdifferentpeoplehave

differentchoicestodealwithproblems.Forexample,whenmeetingwiththeweightproblem,

somepeopledecidetotakeexercisetoloseweightwhileothersthinktheycantdoanythingabout

it.WhenIwasinGrade7,IhaddifficultywithmyspokenEnglish.Insteadofgivingup,Ichoseto

change.Itriedmybesttolistentotapesandpracticespeakingeveryday.Nowmypronunciation

hasbeenimprovedalot.Inaword,facingproblems,weshouldtakeactionstochange.Surelyitwillmakeagreatdiffer-第31页/共300页ence.深度解析本文是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。语言运用中要注意时态的结构和形式,特别要避免

be动词与实义动词的混淆。在写作前,请务必将答题要点归纳为提纲,这样就不会遗漏要点

了。精美语句

1.精美词汇dealwith处理loseweight减重tryonesbesttodosth.尽某人最大的努力去做某事2.出彩结构WhenIwasinGrade7,IhaddifficultywithmyspokenEnglish.当我在七年级的时候,我的口语

有很大困难。第32页/共300页Writing9(2016杭州)请查看你校英语节安排表(Schedule),给外教老师Dave写一封80词左右的电子邮件,告知他调整的内容并给出你认为恰当的理由。ScheduleforEnglishDayDateTimeActivitiesPlaceJune21st13:00~14:3012:30~14:00EnglishTalkShowArtTheater14:00~15:30EnglishSpeechContestLibrary15:40~16:40EnglishCornerSchoolHallPlayground第33页/共300页

第34页/共300页答案[写作要点]1.英语节调整的内容有两个:①EnglishTalkShow的时间;②EnglishCorner的地点。2.恰当的理由。3.对调整表示道歉,并邀请外教参加。[参考范文]HiDave,ImsorrytoinformyouthattherearetwochangestothescheduleforEnglishDay.First,

therewillbeaveryimportantmeetingafterlunchinourschool,soEnglishTalkShowwillbeput

offby30minutes.Thatis,itstartsat13:00andendsat14:30.Second,theplaceofEnglishCorner

willbechangedfromPlaygroundtoSchoolHallbecausetheweatherreportsaysitsgoingtorain

thatafternoon.Pleasecomeandjoinusontime.LiPing第35页/共300页精彩语句

Imsorrytoinformyouthat...我很遗憾地通知您……First第一Second第二Writing10(2016宁波)“传递爱心,服务他人”是文明社会所倡导的理念。狮子会(theLions)就是一个以此为宗

旨的国际性服务团队。杨敏是狮子会的一名成员,多年来她一直乐于助人。请根据提示用英

语写一篇短文,向校刊的EnglishWorld栏目投稿,简要介绍杨敏的事迹,然后谈谈你的观点和打

算。第36页/共300页要求:1.短文内容必须包含表格所提供的要点,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名;3.词数:80—100(短文开头已给出,仅供选择使用,不计入总词数)。短文开头:Fromtimetotime,wearemovedbythepeopleandthingsaroundus.YangMinisone

ofthepersonsIadmiremost.

第37页/共300页答案[写作要点]1.本文要记叙和议论相结合,时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。2.第一段介绍YangMin助人为乐的事情。观点包括:(1)她是狮子会的成员。(2)她帮助他人多

年。(3)经常去养老院帮忙。(4)在雨天借给他人雨伞和雨衣。3.第二段表明自己的观点,并表明自己的计划。4.语句通顺,行文流畅。[参考范文]Fromtimetotime,wearemovedbythepeopleandthingsaroundus.YangMinisoneoftheper-

sonsIadmiremost.AsamemberoftheLions,shehasbeenhelpingothersformanyyears.She

goestotheoldpeopleshometwiceamonthtocuthair,washclothesanddosomecleaningfor

them.Besides,onrainydayssheofferspeopleumbrellasorraincoatsforfree.Imdeeplymovedbyherstory.Imgoingtostartwithsmallthingsaroundme.Iplantogive

booksandclothestochildreninpoorvillages.Whatsmore,Illaskmyparentsandmorefriends第38页/共300页tojoinme.Smallactioncanmakeabigdifference.Letshelpthosewhoneedhelp!精彩语句Asamemberof...作为……的一员bedeeplymoved被深深感动makeadifference产生不同,有影响第39页/共300页Writing11(2016温州)假如你是Lingling,学校根据下表中新西兰来温暑期交流师生的意愿,决定安排他们去100公里

外的许村游玩一天,但自行车来回路程需要8—9小时,权衡利弊,需调整这项内容,请你发邮件

给对方带队老师Mr.Black做好说明、沟通工作。第40页/共300页要求:(1)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(2)文本长度:110词左右。开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数。)Dear

Mr.Black,Im

Lingling.My

school

asked

us

to

make

the

one-day

tour

plan

for

you

and

we

tried

to

make

it

best

to

your

preferences,but

Im

afraid

well

have

to

make

some

changes.

Looking

forward

to

your

reply.Best

wishes.Lingling第41页/共300页答案[写作提示]1.首先要对活动、地点、用时和交通等情况进行描述。2.其次表明自己对安排进行了哪些调整以及调整的理由,符合逻辑。3.语句通顺,行文流畅。[参考范文]Dear

Mr.Black,Im

Lingling.My

school

asked

us

to

make

the

one-day

tour

plan

for

you

and

we

tried

to

make

it

best

to

your

preferences,but

Im

afraid

well

have

to

make

some

changes.WellvisitamountainvillagecalledXucun,whichisveryfamousforitsoldhouses,fantastic

sightsanddeliciousfood.Imsureyouwilllikeit.However,itwilltakeusabout8to9hourstogoandcomebackbybike.Evenifwesetoutat7:00

a.m.,wellgetthereatabout11:30.Goingaroundthebeautiful,culturalplaces,includingsome

oldhousesallwithahistoryofover500years,willtakeusatleast2to3hours.Havinglunch(lo-第42页/共300页calfoodanddrinks)takesanotherhour.Whatsmore,itsveryhothereinsummer.Sowethink

takingabustherewillbeamuchbetterchoice.Looking

forward

to

your

reply.Best

wishes.Lingling写作分析本文具有读写结合的特点,试题呈现了“一日游”的安排和需要调整的内容,难点

在于考生首先要读懂表格,明确需要调整的内容,并对调整写出符合逻辑的理由。精彩语句Imsureyouwilllikeit.我确信你会喜欢的。befamousfor因……而著名whatsmore而且第43页/共300页大部分学生愿意1.方便与同学交流;2.学会照顾自己;一些学生不愿意1.在家能休息得更好;2.与家人相处时间更长;你…………Writing12(2016绍兴)针对大部分高中要求学生住校的现状,英语课上同学们就“Wouldyouliketoliveinschool?”

这一话题展开调查。请你根据下表内容,用英语写一篇短文,汇报调查结果,表达你的意愿并阐

述理由。第44页/共300页注意:1.短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;2.你的理由至少两条;3.词数:80—100;4.短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。参考词汇:方便的convenient短文首句:Wouldyouliketoliveinschool?Wehadasurveyaboutitandherestheresult.

第45页/共300页答案[写作提示]1.汇报调查结果:①大部分同学愿意,原因:方便与同学交流;学会照顾自己;②一些学生不愿意,

原因:在家能休息得更好;与家人相处时间更长。2.表达你的意愿并阐述自己的理由。[参考范文]Wouldyouliketoliveinschool?Wehadasurveyaboutitandherestheresult.Moststudents

prefertoliveinschoolbecausetheyfinditconvenienttocommunicatewiththeirclassmates.Also,

theycanlearnhowtolookafterthemselvesinthisway.However,somestudentsthinklivingathomeisabetterchoice.Themainreasonisthattheycan

relaxbetterathome.Besides,theycanspendmoretimewiththeirfamilymembersandgetonbet-

terwiththem.Asforme,Idliketoliveinschool.ThatsbecauseIcanspendmoretimeonstudy.Whatsmore,

itsawonderfulexperiencetolivewithotherclassmates.第46页/共300页精彩语句preferto更喜欢besides而且Asforme...对于我来说……第47页/共300页

CityACityBFlying2hours4hoursTemperature30℃18℃Hotel★★★★★★Thingstodo★★★★★★Food★★★★★★Writing13(2015杭州)根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。内容须包括:对下表中关于这两个城市(CityA和

CityB)的全部信息进行比较,分析利弊,确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。第48页/共300页Inmyopinion,

isthebetterplacetospendmysummerholiday.

第49页/共300页答案[写作要点]1.本文属于说明性的文章,主体时态为一般现在时。2.内容要点:①确定暑假旅游的目的地;②比较两个城市的信息,分析利弊。3.参考词汇:flying,temperature,hotel,thingstodo,food[参考范文]①Inmyopinion,CityAisthebetterplacetospendmysummerholiday.Althoughthetemperature

thereishigher,thehotelislesscomfortable,andeventhefoodisnotasdeliciousasthatinCityB,I

stillchooseCityA.ThemostimportantreasonisthatIcanhavealotofthingstodoinCityA.Ican

enjoymorebeautifulsceneryanddomoreactivities.Besides,ittakesusonlytwohourstoflythere,

whichsavesusalotoftime.Ihopetheholidaywillbeanunforgettableexperience.②Inmyopinion,CityBisthebetterplacetospendmysummerholiday.Althoughittakesmetwo

morehourstoflythereonanairplane,andIdonthavemanythingstodo,IstillchooseCityB.The

mostimportantreasonisthatCityBhasbetterweather,nottoohotortoocold.Besides,thehotel第50页/共300页thereismorecomfortableandthefoodismoredeliciousthanthatinCityA.Allthesemakemy

holidaymorerelaxing.Ihopethecomingsummerholidaywillbeanunforgettableexperience.深度解析审读所给信息,弄清楚所要表达的内容要点,然后对所给的信息进行梳理,可根据内

容要点适当调整写作顺序,使文章行文连贯。精彩语句Themostimportantreasonisthat...最重要的原因是……Ittakessb.sometimetodosth.花费某人多少时间做某事。第51页/共300页Writing14(2015温州)美中文化交流中心(ACCEC)暑期将组织学生来华学习、交流,现正在中国招募志愿者,帮助他

们学习中文。假如你是扬帆中学的学生李平,请按要求给该项目负责人Mr.Miller写一封申请

信。内容包括:(1)申请担任志愿者;(2)说明自己乐于助人、擅长中文;(3)谈谈学好中文的方法;(4)……参考词汇:volunteer,begoodat,improve,culture注意:(1)申请信需要涵盖以上所有要点,可适当发挥;(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(3)词数:110词左右。开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。第52页/共300页DearMr.Miller,ImLiPingfromYangfanMiddleSchool.

Thankyouforyourconsideration.Yourstruly,LiPing第53页/共300页答案[写作要点]1.本文属于应用文,主体时态为一般现在时。2.内容要点:①申请担任志愿者;②说明自己乐于助人、擅长中文;③谈谈学好中文的方法。[参考范文]DearMr.Miller,ImLiPingfromYangfanMiddleSchool.Iamveryinterestedinyourprojectandwanttobethe

volunteertohelpthestudentslearnChinese.Iamwarm-heartedandalwaysreadytohelpothers.IamgoodatChinese.Lastyear,Iwonthefirst

prizefortheChineseSpeechCompetitioninmycity.IhavemanygoodwaystolearnChinesewell.

Forexample,wecanlistentotheradioandreadaloudeverymorning.AlsolearningsomeChinese

classicalsongshelpsimprovethelanguagequickly.Besides,talkingwithlocalpeopleisafunand第54页/共300页effectivewaytolearnChineseanditsculture.IfIcangetthejob,IbelieveIcanbeagreathelper.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Yourstruly,LiPing写作分析本题要求写一封申请信,开头和结尾已经给出,学生不必考虑。重点是根据要求把

三个要点的内容表达出来。精彩语句warm-hearted热心的forexample例如第55页/共300页学生主要观点家长主要观点你的观点●与学生相处融洽●课堂生动有趣●学识广博●严格要求学生……Writing15(2015绍兴)你校英语社团正在开展主题为“Whatshouldagoodteacherbelike?”的讨论,为此你采访了一

些学生和家长。请你根据下表内容,用英语写一篇短文进行交流,并阐述你的观点。第56页/共300页注意:1.短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;2.你的观点至少两条;3.词数:80—100;4.短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。短文首句:Studentsandparentshavedifferentopinionsaboutwhatagoodteachershouldbelike.Whatshouldagoodteacherbelike?

第57页/共300页答案[写作要点]1.可以采用三段式作文。2.第一段写学生的主要观点:(1)与学生相处融洽;(2)课堂生动有趣。3.第二段写家长的主要观点:(1)学识广博;(2)严格要求学生。4.你的观点(至少两条)。[参考范文]Whatshouldagoodteacherbelike?Studentsandparentshavedifferentopinionsaboutwhatagoodteachershouldbelike.Asforstudents,theythinkgoodteachersshouldgetalongwellwiththeirstudents.Andtheyare第58页/共300页supposedtomaketheirclasseslivelyandinteresting.However,parentsthinkdifferentlyfromstudents.Forthem,goodteachersshouldfirsthaveplentyof

knowledge.Atthesametime,theyareexpectedtobestrictwiththeirstudents.Inmyopinion,themostimportantthingforagoodteacheristolovestudents.Theyshouldtryto

encouragestudentswhentheyhaveproblemswiththeirstudies.Whatsmore,theyshouldhelp

theirstudentslearnhowtolearn.精彩语句thinkdifferently考虑不同atthesametime同时bestrictwithsb.对某人要求严格第59页/共300页

◆51%practicespokenEnglish◆25%watchEnglishmovies◆18%readmoreclassics◆6%learnforeigncultureWriting16(2015宁波)最近,学校就空中俱乐部的英语学习内容设置做了意向调查(结果见下面图表)。请你帮俱乐

部用英语写一篇报告,并谈谈你自己的想法或建议。第60页/共300页注意:(1)文中应包含图表所提供的要点,可适当发挥;(2)想法和建议至少两条;文中不能出现真实姓名和校名;(3)词数:80—100(短文开头不计入总词数,考生可以选择使用)。RecentlywevemadeasurveyofschoolskyEnglishclub.

第61页/共300页答案[写作要点]1.本文主体时态为一般现在时。2.内容要点:①介绍调查内容;②陈述你的想法或建议,至少两条。3.词数:80—100。参考词汇:practicespokenEnglish,watchEnglishmovies,readmoreclassics,learnforeignculture[参考范文]RecentlywevemadeasurveyofschoolskyEnglishclub.Herearetheresults.Wefindthatfifty-

onepercentofthestudentswanttopracticetheirspokenEnglishbyusingInternet.Twenty-five

percentlikewatchingEnglishmovies,whichcanmaketheirholidaylifebetter.Eighteenpercent

wouldliketoreadmoreEnglishclassicsbecausetheyareinterestedinthem.Sixpercenthopethat

theycanlearnmoreforeignculture,suchasgoodmannersandwesternfestivals.第62页/共300页AsfarasIknow,itsveryhelpfultoimproveEnglishbylearningEnglishsongs.Maybewecanin-

viteforeignerstointroducegoodwaystolearnsongs.Imsureallofuswillhavefuninthesky

Englishclub.精彩语句suchas例如beinterestedin对……感兴趣AsfarasIknow...据我所知……第63页/共300页Writing17(2014杭州)假设你是李平,最近你学习上遇到困惑。请用英语给你的英国朋友Nancy写一封电子邮件,讲

述你的问题并寻求她的帮助。注意:1.邮件必须包括下面三幅画所描述的内容;2.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计词数)。参考词汇:考试不及格failtheexam熬夜stayuplate第64页/共300页Love,LiPingHiNancy,Howareyou?Hopeyourewell.

Imreallylookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplysoon.第65页/共300页答案[写作要点]本篇是看图作文。要求写一封电子邮件。首先考生要对三幅图中的三个问题进行描述,然后

寻求对方的帮助。从第一幅图中可知,图片中的妈妈看到李平的考卷,非常生气,要把她们的表

情描写出来;第二幅图是李平在熬夜学习;第三幅图李平上课时打瞌睡。通过分析可知本文主

要使用一般过去时态,因此要注意动词的形式,并要求表达流畅。[参考范文]HiNancy,Howareyou?Hopeyourewell.Ihaveaproblemandneedyourhelp.Ifailedthemathexamyes-

terday.Mymomwasreallymadwithme.Inordertodobetternexttime,Istayeduplatelastnight

doingmymathhomework.SinceIdidntgetenoughsleep,Ifeltsleepythismorning.Myteacher

noticedit.Shecameupandaskedwhatwaswrongwithme,butIdidnttellherthetruth.What

shouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Imreallylookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplysoon.Love,LiPing第66页/共300页Writing18(2014绍兴)最近,你随机调查了你校50名同学的课外英语学习现状(结果见下面图表)。请你就此用英语

写一篇短文,在英语课上进行汇报,并谈谈你的看法和建议。注意:1.文章必须包括图表中四项内容,可适当增加细节;2.看法和建议至少两条;3.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数,你只需接着写;4.词数:80—100。参考词汇:背诵recite第67页/共300页IhaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowstudentslearnEnglishoutofclass.

第68页/共300页答案[写作提示]1.本文属于说明、议论结合的文章,主体时态为一般现在时。2.内容要点:①描述图表内容;②简述你的观点;③怎样去做。3.参考词汇:recite;practicedoing;chatwithsb.。[参考范文]IhaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowstudentslearnEnglishoutofclass.Almostallstudents

readandreciteEnglishwords.TheythinkvocabularyisthemostimportantforEnglishlearning.

Morethan40studentsdoalotofwrittenexercises.Somestudentsgoovertheirnotestheyhave

takeninclass.However,onlyafewstudentsspendtimepracticinglisteningandspeaking.Inmyopinion,listeningandspeakingarethesecretsofbecomingagoodlanguagelearner.Weneed

todolotsoflisteningandspeakingpractice,suchaswatchingEnglishmoviesandlisteningtoEng-

lishsongs.Also,chattingwithforeignerscanbehelpful.第69页/共300页Writing19(2014温州)假如你是林思,要去澳大利亚的MelbourneHigh留学,需要在当地找一个寄宿家庭(hostfami-

ly)。请按要求写一封约100词的电子邮件给寄宿家庭中介公司的经理Mr.Porter。内容包括:(1)简单介绍自己的个人情况,如语言、爱好等;(2)提出自己对寄宿家庭的要求(如下表所示):FamilymemberEnglishspeaker,nosmokerHousingneartheschool,abedroomwithabathroomOtherscookingbymyself...第70页/共300页注意:邮件需涵盖以上所有要点,可适当发挥;开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数);文中不能

出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。DearMr.Porter,MynameisLinSi.