2023广州二模读后续写写作学案写作指导逐句翻译【原卷版】

2023广州二模·读后续写第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。OutsidetheBoxTheHarvestfestcontestwasfallingonFridayandeveryoneinschoolwastalkingaboutit.Allthestudentswouldshowupintheirself-madecostumes(装扮)andawinnerwouldbechosenbytheprincipal.DoyouhaveyourcostumefortheHarvestfestcontest?Aliceasked.“I'mgoingasachocolatebar.MymomandIhavebeenworkingonitallweek”Yeah,Ihaveacostume,”saidJordanEastman,poppingupthetwofrontwheelsofhiswheelchairashewaitedforhisdadtopickhimup.“Butit'sboring.”Why?Whatisit?Aliceasked.“MaxMagthesuperhero,butDanny,TomandIzzyareallgoingasMaxMagtoo.”Jordanshookhishead.“That'stoomanytostandachanceatwinningthecontest.Hewavedtohisdad,whohadjustpulledupinfrontoftheschool.Jordanrolledhiswheelchairtowardhisdad,andAlicewalkedwithhimtotheminivan(小货车).Maybeyoushouldgoassomethingelse.”ThecontestisFridaynight.”Jordansighed.“It'stoolatetochangecostumes.”“Jordan,youhavetothinkoutsidethebox.Lookaroundyourhouseandseewhatyouhave.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems.”Shetookasipofherdrink,andtoldJordanthatherchocolate-barcostumewasmadefromoldfabrichermomhadlyingaroundandrecycledplastics.Onhiswayhome,Jordanwasquiet,HekeptthinkingaboutAlice'swords:Thinkoutsidethebox.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems.Whenhegothome,hefoundhismumhandlingwithsomewoodenpieces.Shewasputtinganewdesktogether.Ontopofthedeskwasthehugeemptycardboardboxthepieceshadcomein.MomsmiledatJordan,pointingatthedesk,“Whatdoyouthink?”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“It'sperfect...withmywheelchair.SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn'twaittoshowhiscostume1.情节分析：Character(人)：_________________________________（主要人物）_________________________________（次要人物）object(物)：__________________________________________________________________time(时间)：_________________________________location(地点)：_________________________________conflict(冲突/问题)：_________________________________Event（隐藏事件）：_________________________________情节设计Para1:Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“It'sperfect...withmywheelchair."→Mom__________(情绪)→Jordan___________→they______________together→thework________Para2:SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn’twaittoshowhiscostume.→Jordanwheeledhimselfwiththecostume(情绪___________)→others’___________(情绪___________)→_______________Alice→theresult:_____________→theme:________________.Usefulexpression:①情绪迷惑的__________________兴奋的__________________自豪的__________________满足的__________________自豪感与满足感_________________________________________②动作剪___________贴___________叠___________展开___________挖___________上色___________画___________设计___________发现_________推_________移动_________停_________接近_________猜测_________前往_________③说补充道____________解释____________宣布____________逐句翻译Para1:Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“It'sperfect...withmywheelchair."一个有创意的想法在他的脑海中闪现。_______________________________________________________________________________意识到妈妈很困惑，他很快补充道：“妈妈，那是一张很酷的桌子。但我能把这个大盒子给Harvestfest比赛吗？”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________然后他兴奋地解释了如何把它变成超级英雄MaxMag。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________她微笑着向他竖起大拇指。“没时间等了！我们开始吧！”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________两个晚上，他们把盒子剪、贴、叠、展开；他们在上面画画并上色，使其看起来像一辆真正的汽车，并将旧的MaxMag服装粘在上面。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________当新服装终于准备好时，乔丹试了几次，并继续进行必要的更改，直到满意为止。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2:SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn’twaittoshowhiscostume.当他把自己当作一个移动的MaxMag推进来时，他听到了钦佩的惊叹声。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________每个人都在猜测会是谁。_______________________________________________________________________________乔丹感到越来越自豪和满足。_______________________________________________________________________________当他发现一块巧克力棒时，他迅速向它靠近，在前面几英寸处停了下来，然后迅速打开了门。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“乔丹，是你！”爱丽丝喊道。“我之所以能做到，是因为你的鼓励。谢谢你。”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________到了宣布获胜者的时候，乔丹毫无疑问地赢得了比赛。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________当他被邀请在舞台上分享自己的感受时，他只是笑着说：“有时候你只需要跳出框框思考。”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________官方范文1Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“It'sperfect...withmywheelchair."Seeingthepuzzledlookonhismum'sface,Jordanquicklytoldherthedesignofhisnewcostume--MaxMagonhiscar.Shesmiledandgavehimathumbsup.“Notimetowait!Let'sgetstarted!”exclaimedhisdadwhojustwentin.Fortwonights,theycut,pasted,foldedandunfoldedthebox;theydrewonitandcoloredittomakeitlooklikearealcar,andtheygluedtheoldMaxMagcostumeontoit.Whenthenewcostumewasfinallyready,Jordantrieditonseveraltimesandcontinuedtomakenecessarychangesuntilsatisfied.SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn’twaittoshowhiscostume.Whenhewheeledhimselfintotheparty,heimmediatelyspottedthethreeMaxMags.Whentheysawhim,theycouldn'tbelieveit.“TheMaxMagandhiscar?That’sawesome!Danny'seyeslitup.“Thewheelsofyourchairarejustperfect!saidTom.“Youevenhavetheheadlights!It'ssocool.”Izzypointedtothefront.Jordanbeamed.“Thanks!”Whenitwastimetoannouncethewinner,Jordanjoinedhisfriendsbythestage.“ThewinnerofthisyearsHarvestfestcostumecontestis...”,theprincipalpausedtoreadthenameoffthecard,“JordanEastman!Everyoneclapped.“See?Youjustneededtobecreative!Alicesaid.“Youmeanthinkoutsidethebox!Jordanpattedontheflaming-redcarattachedtohischair,withaniconicMaxMagsmile.官方范文2Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“Itsperfect...withmywheelchair."RealizingMomwasconfused,hequicklyadded,“That'sacooldesk,Mum.ButcanIhavethebigboxfortheHarvestfestcontest?Hethenexplainedexcitedlyhowtoturnitintoamobilerefrigerator.“Brilliant!Youwilldefinitelybethesuperherooftheparty,servingpeopletheirfavouritedrinks,”Mumexclaimedwithabroadsmile.Inthefollowingdays,hispriorityafterschoolwasdesigningandmakingthenewcostume,fixingittohiswheelchairandexquisitelymakingadoorFinally,heevenpreparedsomesoftdrinkstosurprisehisfriends.SoonitwasFridaynigh,andJordancouldn’twaittoshowhiscostumetohisfriends.Whenhewheeledhimselfinasamobilerefrigerator,heheardadmiringexclamations,guessingaboutwhoitwouldbe.Jordanfeltanincreasingsenseofprideandsatisfaction.Whenhespottedachocolatebar,hequicklymovedtowardsit,stoppedjustseveralinchesinfrontandquicklyopenedthedoor“Jordan,it'syou!Alicecriedout.Jordanpassedherherfavouritedrink.“Thankyou,Alice.That'sanideaoutsidetheboxT