合并句子广州和四川课件

二、超级仿写[2009江门二模]你的英国朋友向你了解广州,请用英语写一篇短文介绍广州。包括上表中所有内容。概况中国第三大城市;别称:五羊城、花城等;广东省省会;全市面积7,434平方公里;人口1,000多万。历史2,200多年历史的文化名城,历史上丝绸之路（海路）的始发港。地理珠江从市中心穿过,温暖湿润。旅游风光旖旎,旅游资源丰富。LetmetellyousomethingaboutGuangzhou.Guangzhou,thecapitalcityofGuangdongProvinceandthethirdlargestcityinChina,isalsoknownasFive-lambCity,FlowerCityandsoon.Thiscity

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coversatotalareaof7,434squarekilometerswithapopulationofmorethantenmillion.Guangzhou,afamouscitywithahistoryofmorethan2,200years,isastartingportoftheSilkRoadontheseainhistory.With

thePearlRiverwindingitsway/runningthroughthecity,Guangzhouenjoysawarmandwetclimate.Thebeautifulcity,whichis

well-knownforitsbeautifulscenery,isalsorichintravelingresources.

IhopeyouwillhaveagoodtimeinGuangzhou.SichuanProvince,locatedinthesouth-westofChina,coversanareaofabout485,000squarekilometers,,whosecapitalisChengdu.定语应尽量靠近所修饰的词定语从句尽量靠近先行词Locatedinthesouth-westofChina,SichunProvince,whosecapitalischengdu,coversanareaof…Jiuzaigouwhichisfamousforitslakesislocatedinthenorth-westofSichun,withbeautifulrivers.专有名词（独一无二的）如人名、地名后应该使用非限制性定语从句Jiuzaigou，whichisfamousforitslakeswithbeautifulrivers，islocated…Jiuzaigou，whichislocated…,isfamousforitslakeswithbeautifulrivers.TheDujiangyanIrrigationProjecthasplayedaimportantrolenow,withalonghistoryofmorethan2,000years.TheDujiangyanIrrigationProject,withalonghistoryofmorethan2,000years,isstillplayinganimportantrolenow.Sichunisneithertoocoldnortoohot.逻辑关系TheweatherinSichunisneithertoocoldnortoohot.Jiuzhaigouiswellknownforitsbeautifullakes,whosewaterissoclearthatyoucanseethebottomofthem.AnotherattractionistheJujiangyanIrrigationProject,whichwasbuiltover2,000yearsagoandisstillplayinganimportantpart(inirrigation)today.What’smore,thenice/comfortableweather,convenienttransportationandthevarietyoffamoushotfoodcanalsomakeyourtripevenmoreenjoyable.李明一直很想实现自己的理想,成为一名探险家。2.他的父母一直试图说服他放弃这个想法。3.一天，李明离家出走,并留下一封信,为自己的不辞而别向父母道歉。4.李明决定启航去无名的岛屿,寻找刺激感。5.在海上遇上了龙卷风(tornado),李明意识到自己陷入了困境。Limingwantedtoachievehisambitionof

beinganexplorer.Buthisparentstriedtopersuadehimtogiveuptheideaallthetime.Oneday,LiMinglefthomeandleftaletter,inordertomakeanapologytohisparentsfor

leavingwithoutsayinggoodbye.LiMingdecidedtosetsailtotheunknownisland,insearchofexcitement.5.Onthewaytotheisland,LiMingmetthetornado,whichmadeLiMingbeawareofgettingintotrouble.6.ItwasthefirsttimethatLiMinghadgoneoutaloneandheseemedtoscaredtodeath.7.Withthehelpofthekindpeople,hesurvived.beawareof+nbeaware/realizethat+句子8.Afterlivinginthehospitalfortwoweeks,he

recovered.9.Hemanagedto

getintouchwithparents,madethempickhimupfromthehospital.stayingaskingthemtopick没有语法错误但不建议使用的句子1.LiMingwentawayfromhomewithaletterleftforthepurposeofapologysingwithoutsayinggood-byetohisparents.1.从简原则leavingaletter2.目的forthepurposeof+n(名词)

to+do(动词)toapologise没有语法错误但不建议使用的句子2.LiMingdecidedtosetsailtotheunknownisland,justforfindingthefellingofexcitement.1)表目的for+n(名词)to+do(动词)2)find找到lookfor/searchfor寻找/寻求tolookfor没有语法错误但不建议使用的句子3.Oneday,LiMinglefthomeandleftaletterwiththepurposeofmakinganapologytohisparentsforleavingwithoutsayinggood-bye.目的forthepurposeof+n(名词)to+do(动词)tomake没有考虑逻辑关系进行的错误合并2.LiMingwantedtorealizehisdreamthathewouldbecomeanexplorersothathisparentsalwaystriedtopersuadehimintogivingupthisthought.李明想实现当探险家的梦想，以致于他的父母总是想劝他放弃。but为了减少句子数量而拼命堆砌信息的错误合并3.Whenthefirsttimeforhimtotravelonhisown,hewasscaredtodeathashewasfacingthetornadointhesea,whichhelphimcometorealizethathewasstuckintrouble.

Since/Becauseitwasthefirsttimethathehadtraveledon…,hewasscaredtodeath.Whenhewasfacedwith…,herealizedthathewas…1.李明一直很想实现自己的理想,成为一名探险家。LiMingalwayswantedtoachievehisambitiontobeanexplorer.2.他的父母一直试图说服他放弃这个想法。Hisparentshavebeenalwaystryingtopersuadehimtogiveupthisidea.4.李明决定启航去无名的岛屿,寻找刺激感。LiMingdecidedtosetsailforunknownislands,insearchofexcitement.5.在海上遇上了龙卷风(tornado),李明意识到自己陷入了困境。LiMingranintoatornadoonthesea,andrealizedhegotintotrouble.6.这是李明第一次独自出行,他差点被吓死了。ThiswasLiMing’sfirsttimethathehadtraveledonhisown,andhewasscaredtodeath.7.在好心人的帮助下,他幸免于难。Withthehelpofkind-heartedpeople,hesurvivedtheaccident.Runningintoatornadoonthesea,LiMingrealizedhegot

intotrouble,andsince

thisisLiMing’sfirsttimethathehastraveled