英语应用文写作-书信电子邮件

英语应用文写作-书信电子邮件第一页，共37页。[技法指导]书信、电子邮件的写作是高考中出现频率最高的一种题型。从内容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括致歉信、致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信、读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。，第二页，共37页。aletterofsuggestionapplicationintroductionsaiinvitation第三页，共37页。aletterofapplication?suggestion?introduction?石景山期末：请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，并针对所提问题提出2条合理建议。suggestion第四页，共37页。海淀期末：

你校正在招募志愿者，为中外学生交流活动做准备。请用英语写一封信，向学校外事办公室提出申请。applicationaletterofapplication?suggestion?introduction?第五页，共37页。西城期末：你的英国朋友Tom要来你校任教，打算在学校附近租房子。发来邮件向你咨询合适的房源。请你根据回复信件，向他介绍找到的房子。introductionaletterofapplication?suggestion?introduction?第六页，共37页。朝阳一模你的美国朋友Chris目前在北京学习汉语，他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣。本周五下午你校将要举办一个文化讲座，请你根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加。invitationaletterofapplication?suggestion?introduction?第七页，共37页。DearTom,(address)

IamwritingtotellyouthatI’vefoundahousewhichmaymeetyourneeds.Thehousewhichisonthesecondfloorcoversanareaof70squaremeters.Itfacessouthsothatyoucanenjoyenoughsunshine.....Ifyouareinterestedinit,pleasecall15382.Ifyouneedanymorehelp,justletmeknow.

Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua(signature)Structureofaletter主体(body)目的(purpose)交际性语句(communicativesentence)结尾语(ending)第八页，共37页。第一档(13-15分)内容完整，条理清楚；交际得体，表达时充分考虑了交际的需求；体现出较强的语言运用能力。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第二档

(9-12分)内容、条理和交际等方面基本符合要求；所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求；语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第三档

(4-8分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务;内容不完整；所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。第四档…未完成试题规定的任务;写了少量相关信息；语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。内容条理交际内容条理交际语言语言应用文评分标准第九页，共37页。高考应用文评分原则

内容是否______

条理是否______

交际是否______

语言是否______完整清楚得体准确第十页，共37页。

假定你是红星中学高三（1）班的李华，假期里你参加了一次“伦敦游学”活动。请根据下列提示给你的同学王明写封信，向他介绍整个游学过程。时间内容7月20早到达机场；受到接待家庭

(home-stayfamily)的热烈欢迎第二天参观牛津大学(OxfordUniversity)，听教授介绍学校第三天游览大本钟和伦敦眼(BigBen)；照相留念最后一天与英国学生开告别晚会注意：1.词数不少于50；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。第十一页，共37页。Telltheadvantages&disadvantagesgivethemmarks!letterstructure&evaluationstandards!第十二页，共37页。PassageA:DearWangMin,Duringthevacation,Itookpartinaninterestingactivity.MyschoolorganizedustowenttoLondon.InJuly20thmorningwearrivedatairportandthehome-stayfamilywelcomeusheartedly.Thesecondday,wewerevisitedOxfordUniversityandlistenedtotheprofessorintroducedtheirschool.Thethirdday,wevisitedBigBen,whichisthemostfamousbuildinginLondon.Alloftookphototorecordtheunforgettablemoments.Thelastday,weheldapartytosaygoodbyewithEnglandstudents.Thisactivityisverymeaningful.

缺少交际性语句、未写结尾语二档第十三页，共37页。PassageB：

IhadanunforgettableexperienceinwintervacationandIwillsharethisactivitywithyou.IwenttoLondontostudythisvacation.OnJuly20th,AssoonasIarrivedattheairport,myhome-stayfamilywelcomemewarmly…Thesecondday,wevisitedOxfordUniversitywhichisafamousschoolintheworld.Theprofessorwasenthusiasticand…IhopedthatIcouldstudythere.Thethirdday,wewenttotheBigBen.….ThedaybeforeIleft,studentsinLondonheldapartywithustosaygoodbye.Everyoneenjoyedtheparty.Itwasameaningfulexperienceforme.Doyouthinkitwasinteresting?Lookingforwardtoyourletter.交际性语句结尾语一档第十四页，共37页。

你是红星中学的李华，假期里你参加了一次“伦敦游学”活动。请给你的同学王明写封信，向他介绍整个游学过程。aletter---introducinganactivityIthinkitisameaningfulexperience.Doyouthinkitisinteresting?Whatdoyouthinkofmyexperience?Doyouhavesimilarexperience?Iameagertohearthat!communicativesentences第十五页，共37页。1.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!2.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucangivemethechance.3.Ithinkit’sgoingtobegreat!Areyousatisfiedwithit?4.Ifyoucankindlygivemetheopportunity,Iwilldomyworkwell.application?suggestion?introduction?suggestionapplicationintroductionapplicationcmcommunicativesentences第十六页，共37页。OnJuly20thmorning,wearrivedattheairport.Thehome-stayfamilygavemeaheatedwelcome.3.Aprofessortookusaroundtheuniversity.4.IvisitedtheOxfordUniversityandlistenedtotheintroduceoftheschool.OnthemorningofJuly20warmwelcomeshowedusaroundintroductiongaveusacorrectmistakes第十七页，共37页。Sentenceappreciation*Thefollowingday,wevisitedthewell-knownOxfordUniversity.Aprofessorintroducedthiscollegetous.Iwasattractedandreallybenefitedalotfromit!

*Onthethirdday,IpaidavisittoBigBen.Iwasamazedatitandcouldn’thelptakingphotos!*Onthelastday,weheldafarewellpartywithEnglandstudents.Allofuswereunwillingtosaygoodbye.细节补充第十八页，共37页。I’mwritingtoshareanexperiencewithyou,whichisaboutastudytourtoLondon.Thisismyunforgettableexperience.Doyouthinkitisinteresting?点明目的得体的交际第十九页，共37页。准确的语言OnthemorningofJuly20thIarrivedattheairport.Thehome-stayfamilypickedmeupandgavemeawarmwelcome.ThethirddaywasthemostexcitingdaybecausewewenttoBigBenforsightseeing.第二十页，共37页。[技法指导]书信、电子邮件的写作:不论哪种书信、电子邮件，一般都有固定的写作模式，只要记住其特定的写作模板，并能在具体的写作中加以融会贯通，一定能让你的作文水平快速提高，从而在考场上写出档次较高的文章。下面介绍一下几种常考书信的模板，供大家写作时借鉴。，第二十一页，共37页。1．投诉信Dear________，

Mynameis/Iam________.Iamwritingtoyoufor________.Firstly,________.Secondly,________.Thirdly,________.Therefore,Irequirethatyousendmeanewoneofthesamemodelwithinamonth.Tobehonest/Honestlyspeaking,________.Therefore,Idorequire(hope)________.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Sincerelyyours,LiMing第二十二页，共37页。2．建议信Dear________，

Iam________.Yourcollectionofsuggestionon________is________.Asisknown,________.Mysuggestionsare________：

First,________.(Peoplecan________.)Second,(tomakeeconomicprofits,)_______.Third,________.(Asmanyofthem_______.)第二十三页，共37页。

Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails(Or：Yourkindconsiderationofmysuggestionswillbehighlyappreciated)．

Goodluckwithyour________(祝愿)．Yourssincerely,LiMing第二十四页，共37页。3．求职信DearSirorMadam,Iwritethislettertoapplyforthepositionthatyouhaveadvertisedin________(报纸名称)of________(广告发布时间)．

Iam________from________.Asa/an________，Ihavebeen________.Besides,Iwon________in________.Ifyouconsidermeappropriateforthejob,pleasecallmeat_____.第二十五页，共37页。4．邀请信Dear________，

Howiseverythingwithyou?Iamwritingtotellyouthattherewillbea________(内容)at/in________(地点)on________(时间)．Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.Theoccasionwillstartat________(具体时间).Thiswillbefollowedbya________(进一步的安排)．Ataround______(时间)，________(另一个安排)．

第二十六页，共37页。Ringmeupandtellmewhetheryouwillcomeornot,willyou?Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.Myphonenumberis________.Lookingforwardto________.Yourssincerely,LiMing第二十七页，共37页。5．感谢信Dear________，

Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudefor________(感谢的原因)．

Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistancein________(对方给你的具体帮助)，IfearthatIwouldhavebeen________(没有对方帮助的后果)．

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwho________(给出细节)．Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.Yourssincerely,LiMing第二十八页，共37页。6．道歉信Dear________，

Iamtrulysorrythat________(道歉的原因)．

Thereasonisthat________(介绍原因).Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.Yourssincerely,LiMing第二十九页，共37页。邀请信：1．开头：说明计划并邀请某人参加

我们打算本周六去爬香山并邀请你参加。WearegoingtoclimbXiangshanthisSaturday,andwesincerelyinviteyoutojoinus.

我们将在学校礼堂举行成人仪式并邀请你参加。Wewillholdthecoming-of-ageceremonyinourlecturehallat3:30pmonMarch30thandwesincerelyinviteyoutocome.

欢迎你来参加Youare(morethan)welcometocometojoinus.2．说明活动时间

我们早8点在门口集合，下午5点回来。Wewillgatheratthegateat8amandwillcomebackat5pm.

活动8点开始下午3点结束，将持续7个小时。

第三十页，共37页。Ouractivitybeginsat8amandendsat3pmanditwilllast7hours.3．结尾:如果你能参加，我们会很高兴.We’llbemorethanhappyifyoucancome.我保证你会玩得高兴。I’msureyouwillhavealotoffun./Youaresuretohavealotoffun.如果你能来我们将不胜感激。

I’dappreciateitifyoucancomeandgiveusaspeech.建议信：1．开头：得知……，现在我来给你提些实际建议Learning…,I’mveryhappy.NowI’dliketogive/offeryousomepracticaladvice.2．正文：你可以在校园张贴海报

Youcan/may/hadbetterputupaposterintheschool.第三十一页，共37页。课间听听音乐不错。

It’sagoodideatolistentosomemusicbetweenclasses.Listeningtosomemusicbetweenclassesisagoodidea..是时候调整你的学习方法了

It’stimetoadjustyourlearningmethods.定期锻炼很有用

Takingexerciseregularlyisveryuseful//helpful.Whynottakeexerciseregularly?Isuggesttakingexerciseregularly.Whatabouttakingexerciseregularly?3.结尾：希望我的建议对你有帮助。

Ihopemyadvicewillhelpyou.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelp//willbehelpfultoyou.

如果你需要更多信息，别犹豫告诉我

第三十二页，共37页。Ifyouneedmore//furtherinformation,don’thesitatetotellme//contactme.

我会尽最大努力帮助你

Iwilltrybesttohelpyou//giveyouahand.I’mmorethanwillingtohelpyou.申请信：1．表达意愿：我写信是申请英文网络编辑。

I’mwritingtoapplytobeawebeditor.我写信是申请成为寄宿家庭

I’mwritingtoapplytobeahostfamily.我想申请做导游志愿者

Iwanttoapplytobeavolunteerguide.我的理由如下。Myreasonsareasfollows.