英语作文预测-看图作文

英语作文预测——看图作文PartI.看图作文的分类&典型提纲PartII看图作文的解题步骤PartIII看图作文的解题思路（三段论）1.Introduction2.Body3.ConclusionPartI.看图作文——图画作文分类：图画作文可分为图片、漫画与照片等多种。特点：图画作文总体上比图表作文的结构变化多，更为灵活，因此难度也更大。图画类作文提纲1)describethedrawingbriefly；2)explainitsintendedmeaning；3)giveyourcommentsPartII看图作文解题步骤1.认真审题（把握图中提示语，附文,对比、类似等细节，准确把握出题者意图）2.列出提纲(已给），整理基本的框架3.开始落笔写作的过程中，要注意如下几点：突出重点用词准确（语法、词汇、语气、标点符号等）字数要达标PartIII看图作文思路写作三段论Introduction——图画描述段，引言段，起始段Body———主体/拓展段,意义阐释段（积极寓意类，消极寓意类）Conclusion——结论段，建议措施段第一段：图画描述段的写法三至四句(50-55词)：1.Generaldescription：套话+总体描述寻找出图画的中心事物，确定中心事物的位置，从动作和状态两方面来描述画面中的中心事物；2.Details：挖掘细节词，联结成句寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述(细节描述）3.Caption：文字说明+段尾套话过渡若图画下方有caption，可将其翻译为英语。段落写作—描述段写法Writeanessayof120-180wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,and，3)giveyourcomments确定关键词火锅Hotpot文化元素Culturalelements/ingredients/terms文化名人Culturalcelebrity提示语的翻译文化“火锅”，既美味又营养Thecaptionreads,“Cultural‘hotpot’isbothdeliciousandnutritious”连词成句宏观概述+细节描述一个大大的火锅，火锅里有很多东西方文化元素的名字，比如：莎士比亚、孔子、京剧、天鹅湖等。Thereisahotpotinthepicture.Inthehotpotwecanseemanyculturalterms,suchas….(改善表达）Inthepicturestandsahotpot,whichcontainsavarietyofculturalelementsofbothwesternandeasternbackground,suchasShakespeare,Confucius,BeijingOpera,SwanLakeandsoon.（宏观概述）Inthepictureaboveis/standsalargehotpot,（细节描述)whichcontainsavarietyof/variousculturalterms/ingredients/elementsofbothwesternandeasternbackground,suchasShakespeare,Confucius,BeijingOpera,SwanLakeandsoon.（提示语翻译）Thecaptionreads,“Cultural‘hotpot’isbothdeliciousandnutritious”.结尾套话)Simpleastheimageseemstobe,theimpliedmeaninggoesfardeeper.描述段写作套路与表达图画描述段首套话①Whatacompellingandthought-provokingdrawingitis!Howinterestingandenlighteningitis!Thisisaverythought-provokingpicture.Thisisquiteanextraordinaryandmeaningfulpicture.Thecartoonrevealsaverythought-provokingscene.Thepicturedescribesanincreasinglycommonphenomenonintoday’sworld.图画描述套话②--半套+描述1（图画总述）Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,…（图画总述）Asisshown/describedinthepicturesabove,wecanseeclearlythat…Whatisclearlyillustrated/presented/describedinthedrawingaboveisthat…Itissymbolically/vividlydemonstratedinthedrawingthat…Itisaveryalarmingcartoon,inwhich…图画描述套话③--半套+细节描述（重点信息）Whatimpressesmemostisthat（图画重点信息）.Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingis(thefact)that…图画描述段尾套话④(承上启下/总结)Simpleastheimageseemstobe,theimpliedmeaninggoesfardeeper.Uncomplicatedasthepictureis,thesymbolicmeaningisasdeepasocean.Simplydesignedasthepicturesare,thesymbolicmeaningtheyconveyisratherdeepandprofound.Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.第一段的思路：

①段首套话→②半套+描述1(宏观概述)→③半套+描述2(细节重点，提示语)→④段尾套话①Whatacompellingandthought-provokingdrawingitis!②Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,描述1（图画概述）.③Whatimpressesmemostisthat(=Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthat)描述2（图画重点信息）.④Simpleastheimageis,thesymbolicmeaningisratherdeepandprofound.第二段：Body主体/意义阐释段/拓展段五至六句(80-90词)：1.Topicsentence:主题句，1句该句说明图画的象征意义(symbolicmeanings)，即阐释图画的深层寓意。此句为文章的中心思想，也是第二段的主题句，承上启下。2.Arguments：论证，3-4句常用手段：因果论证；对比论证；例证；利弊分析等3.Summary：小结，1句对论证的句子进行总结，与本段主题句首尾呼应。Topicsentence主题句(中心句）的写法在图画背后或“隐藏”在火锅里的含义显而易见：全球文化融合的趋势。Whatliesbehindthepicture,or“buried”inthehotpot,isclear:itimpliesaprevailingtrend--theintegrationofglobalculturesandtheco-existenceofmulti-cultures.中心句子套话Thepictureshavesubtlyreflectedthesocialphenomenonthat…Theideaconveyedbythethought-provokingdrawingisapparent:Itisapparentthatthecartoonistaimsatremindingusoftheimportanceof...inourdailylife.Thepurposeofthedraweristoshowusthat…Undoubtedly,thedrawinghassymbolicallyrevealedaseriousprobleminourdailylife:Argument论证部分的写法思路

A谈背景

B摆事实

C驳观点（欲扬先抑）

D讲原因

E论后果（利弊）

主要手段1.因果分析论证；2.举例论证；3.利弊分析……1.原因分析1）五至六句(80-90词)：第一句说明寓意(承上启下)后；第二句说明原因如下；第三四句一个原因及扩展；第五六句一个原因及扩展。具体化——切忌以理说理。2）常见原因——法律法规不完善、教育体制不健全、个人意识较薄弱(选一，原创一)常见原因Thelackofseriouspunishmentaccordingtothelawsandregulationsisthecorereasonof…,whichprovidesthechancesforpeopletodothemisdeeds/wrongdoings.People’sawarenessisnotthatstrongin…,whichisdecisivetothephenomenon.Thedistorted/insufficient/inadequateeducationmayleadtothepervasivenessof…原因扩展方式（1）举例论证Forexample,forinstance,take…forexample,…providesanillustration.（2）数据论证Asisshowninthestatisticsofarecentsurveylaunchedbyanon-profitinstitution,theincrease/declineof…issoprominentthattheresultscausedbyitmaybeconcludedasfollows.原因扩展方式（1）举例论证Forexample,forinstance,take…forexample,…providesanillustration.（2）数据论证Asisshowninthestatisticsofarecentsurveylaunchedbyanon-profitinstitution,theincrease/declineof…issoprominentthattheresultscausedbyitmaybeconcludedasfollows.原因分析常用过渡句：Thefollowingreasonsmayberesponsibleforthemeaningdeducedabove.Therearetwomainreasonsaccountingforthesymbolicmeaning.Severalfactors,bothindividualandsocial,couldcontributetothenegativephenomenon.Thereasonforthephenomenonmaybecomplicated,butwecan,toalargeextent,attribute/ascribeittothefollowinginterrelatedfactors.2.举例论证1）五至六句(80-90词)：第一句说明寓意(承上启下)后；第二句说明如下事例可以证明；第三四句一个事例及扩展；第五六句另一个扩展。2）注意事项——切忌例子私人化。3）扩展方式——数据论证、借用常识、引用权威、因果论证、比较论证举例论证常用过渡句：Abundantofexampleswoulddemonstratethephenomenon,whilethefollowingone,Isuppose,wouldsuffice.Hereisanexample.Take…foranexample/instance.…isagoodcaseinpoint…(短语/that主语从句)providesuswithanexcellentexample.Eg.Teenagerssurfingonlineprovidesuswithanexcellentexample.举例论证常用过渡句：Abundantofexampleswoulddemonstratethephenomenon,whilethefollowingone,Isuppose,wouldsuffice.Hereisanexample.Take…foranexample/instance.…isagoodcaseinpoint…(短语/that主语从句)providesuswithanexcellentexample.Eg.Teenagerssurfingonlineprovidesuswithanexcellentexample.3.利弊论证积极中带有消极，消极中暗含积极1）五至六句(80-90词)：第一句说明寓意(承上启下)后；第二句说明有利有弊；ontheonehand,第三四句一个优点及扩展；ontheotherhand,第五六句一个缺点及扩展。2)扩展方式---举例/数据/权威/常识/结果(五种论证)利：表示影响好：influence①bringabouta(n)far-reachinginfluence/impacton②layasolidfoundationfor③playanirreplaceable（不可替代的）rolein思路一：Culturalhotpot1.图画寓意文化融合和文化的多样性2.原因分析：两个层次加以说明a.世界的融合，任何一个国家不能孤立存在b.现代人的大包容度（中心句）Whatliesbehindthepictureisclear:itimpliesaprevailingtrend--theintegrationofglobalculturesandtheco-existenceofmulti-cultures.（原因分析）Thefollowingreasonsmayberesponsibleforthetrend.Tobeginwith,inthehighly-integratedworldtoday,nocountryisanisolatedisland.Everynationisfacedwithadiversityofforeigncultures,roaringtooverwhelmthedomesticcultureandChinaisnoexception.What’smore,alongwiththerapidadvancementofboththeworldeconomyandcommunication,thecustomofacultureismorelikelytobeacceptedandsharedbyotherones.Peoplecometoknowtheimportanceofinclusivenesstotheirownculture.Ifthissituationgoesasitis,theconsequencewillbeencouraging.思路二：Culturalhotpot1.图画寓意文化融合和文化的多样性2.谈背景

改革开放政策3.摆事实，举例论证（celebrateChristmas,theValentine’sDay)4.分析利/好处（中心句）Thepicturehassubtlyreflectedthephenomenonthatwearenowinanageofculturaldiversificationandintegration.（背景）WithChinaadoptingherpolicyofopeninguptotheoutsideworld,peoplehavebeenexposedtoadiversityofcultures.（摆事实）Ontheonehand,thishasmadepeople’slifecolorfulandentertaining.（举例）Forinstance,wedonotonlycelebratetraditionalChinesefestivalsbutalsoenjoyourselvesonChristmas,theValentine’sDayandevenHalloween.（利）Ontheotherhand,thistrendhascontributedtotheall-sidedandsounddevelopmentofthenation’sculture.Asoundcultureshouldbediversifiedandembracing,sothatitcandrawuponvariousbeneficialfactors.三、Conclusion:结论段、建议措施段三至四句(50-55词)：1+2+1总→分→总1.Concludingsentence:结论句，1句引出重复论点（总结归纳中心句）2.Suggestions：2句两点建议或两句评论3.包装结尾，展望未来/趋势，1句1.Concludingsentence:结论句（1句）（1）总之，我们很有必要从这些发人深省的图画中获得积极的含义。/采取有效措施扭转这些图画中所反映的负面趋势。Accordingly,itisimperative/vitalforusto(1)derivepositiveimplicationsfromthesethought-provokingdrawing./(2)Weshouldtakesomeeffectiveandefficientmeasurestoreversethedisturbingtrendillustratedinthepictures.（2）因此，偶像崇拜这一发人深省的社会现象，是能够对年轻人成长产生深远影响的一柄双刃剑。Hence/Therefore,idolworship,thethought-provokingsocialphenomenon,isadouble-edgedswordwhichcanexertprofoundinfluenceonthegrowthofyoungpeople.(3)Judgingfromwhathavebeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizethevalueofmutualaid.(积极寓意类）2.suggestions两点建议或两句评论（2句）经常提到的几个方面：A.authorities(专家参与）;B.education（增强意识）;C.public;D.media（社会和媒体关注）E.self-effort（1）Tobeginwith,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetoseverelypunishthosewhoplagiarizeothers’works.(法律)Inaddition,weshouldenlighten/educatetheawarenessoftheyoungthatacademichonestyisextremelyvitaltous.(教育)（2）Itis,therefore,necessarythateffectivestepsbemadetoadvocatespiritofsupportingeachother.Tobeginwith,thegovernmentshouldmakelawstoencouragepeopletounite.Inaddition,peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessofcaringeachotherespeciallywhentheyareintrouble.(3)Tobeginwith,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetoseverelypunishthosewhoshuntheresponsibilitiesofcaringtheirparents.Inaddition,weshouldcultivatetheawarenessoftheyoungthatrespectingtheoldhasalwaysbeenthetraditionalvirtueofChineseculture.（4）Asaconsequence,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticactions.Ontheonehand…….Ontheotherhand,thereshouldbeanincreasinglyloudvoicefromthepublicformeasuresagainst……（公众）3.包装结尾，展望未来（1句）三大常用句型1）倒装句2）强调句3）虚拟语气Onlyinthiswaycanwepromoteculturaldevelopmentpositivelyandmakeourworlddimensional,colorfulandvigorous.强调句Inconclusion,itispersistentworkthatisconduciveto(对……有利）yourgraspingaconsiderablevocabulary.虚拟语气Itishightimethatweplacedgreatemphasisonthisphenomenon.(中心句)Tosumup,the