专题02并列句+亮点词汇一-2020年高考英语写作新题型备考技巧

2020年高考英语写作新题型备考技巧

专题二并列句+亮点词汇（一）备考技巧1顾名思义，并列句是用连词或分号把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来。.并列句的类型和并列连词并列（递进）关系and,both…and…，notonly…but（also）…，neither…nor…转折关系but,yet,选择关系or,otherwise,orelse,either…or…，not…but…因果关系for,so,therefore,thus对比关系while,whereas注意：@.therefore,thus引导的句子前需要用分号或and才能引导并列从句，如:Itrained;thereforethegamewascalledoff.②.连接并列主语时，需要注意“就近原则”，如：NeitherhenorIamgoingtoattendtheceremony.ThechoiceofthetraditionalChinesedressmeansextramoneyandextratime,forwehavetochangeitbackaftertheevent.（2019浙江高考书面表达）Somecompromiseswereunavoidable,butthevideoturnedoutperfect.（2017北京高考书面表达）Iplantogoforanouting,andIwouldliketoinviteyoutoparticipate.（2017浙江高考书面表达）Iknowyouareveryenthusiasticaboutping-pong,soIreallyhopeyoucanjoinourschoolteam.（2017全国三卷书面表达）Asmiddleschoolstudents,we,renotfamiliarwithforeigncultures,whileChinesecultureisn,tfittoappearinanEnglishnewspaper.（2014上海高考作文）二.并列句在高考写作中的运用：both・・・and・・・,既・・•又…OntheInternet,peoplecanseekinformationabouttheirfavoritestarsandbuyticketsatadiscountaswell,whichisbothtime-savingandeconomical.（2017江苏高考书面表达）either…or…,或者 或者 Peoplecaneithergivethemasgiftsorhangthemintheirhouses.neither…nor…，既不 也不 Inautumn,it,sneithertoocoldnortoohot.（2014年天津高考书面表达）notonly…butalso…，不仅 而且 IwouldreallyliketointerviewhimbecauseheisnotonlythefirstChinesetogotospacebutalsooneofthegreatestastronautsintheworld.（2015安徽高考书面表达）注意：此句型中，notonly可以放句首倒装，为写作加分，如：Ithinknotonlywillitbeagoldenopportunityforyoutoshowyourgreattalent,butalsoyoucanofferusguidance.（2018全国一卷书面表达）not・・・but・・・,不是・••而是・・・Frommyperspective,thesonrefusestocommunicatewithhismothernotbecausehehasnotimebutbecausehe,sunwillingto.6..・・while/whereas・ 而/却 Someofthestudiesshowpositiveresults,whereasothersdon,t.7.祈使句/名词词组+and/or/otherwise+陈述句Keepitinmind,andwecangainthisgoodlearninghabitandbenefitfromit.（2013四川高考书面表达）Itisreallyrisky.Onemorestep,andthebabywillfallintothewell.Studyhard,otherwiseyouwillfailinyourexams.Morehealthyfood,oryou,llbreakdownsoonerorlater.・when・・・, 这时 .sb.wasdoingsth.when…，某人正在做某事 这时候 Wewerehavingaconferencewhenhebrokein..sb.wasabouttodo・・・/sbwasonthepointofdoing...when.・・,某人正要做某事 这时……Iwasabouttogiveupwhenmyfathercameandinspiredmetokeepgoing.（2014福建高考书面表达）.sbhadjustdonesth.when….，某人刚做完某事 这时 Ihadjustfinishedsweepingthefloorwhenthetelephonerang.注意：并列句型8可经常用于记叙文续写写作，需要掌握透彻并学会运用。备考技巧2提升训练.用适当的并列连词填空willallkindsofpaper-cuttingworkscreatedbyfamousartistsofthisfieldbeonshowthatday,alotofusefulandinterestingactivitieswillbeheldaswell.Seizethechance,you,llregretsomeday.Anothertry,you,llfulfilyourdream.Theyoungmanhadwantedtohelpthedog,asheapproached,itstartedtobark.Wewereabouttosetoffitsuddenlybegantopourdown.Somepeoplebelievesmokingisharmfultohealthothersconsideritishelpfulinreducingworkingpressure.Itisnotwhatyouhaddonewhatyouhadsaidthatannoyedyourclassmates.【答案】：Notonly;but(also)or/orelse/otherwiseandbutwhenwhile/whereasbut・用并列句完成下列句子。1.他刚走就有人敲门。.你不但要和他们分享你的学习经验，而且一定要向他们敞开心扉。.虽然她是一位普通妇女，但是确实值得尊敬。.别犹豫，否则你将一事无成。.票价正在上涨。因此，电影业应该做出更大的努力来吸引更多的观众。The ticket price is on the increase..呆在完全不同的文化里令人害怕，我甚至想直接打道回府。Beinginacompletelydifferentculturewasscaring,.寄宿家庭不仅很友好，和我当时住一起的那个男孩对足球也感兴趣。 ,whichmademystaymoreenjoyableandstress-free..因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一些不重要的事情上浪费时间，而要经常与我们的父母进行推心置腹的谈话。Therefore,fromnowon, .因此，如果你努力学习的话，展览不仅可以帮助你更好地了解中国民间艺术作品，而且可以帮助你获得一些剪纸技巧。Therefore, Ifyoutryhardtolearn..音乐不仅在人类社会发展中扮演重要的角色，而且也能丰富我们的精神和文化生活。.生活的质量已经提升，而且看电影也被看作是一种娱乐的好方式。【答案】1.Hewasabouttoleave/onthepointofleavingwhensomeoneknockedatthedoor.Notonlyshouldyoushareyourstudyexperiencewiththem,but(also)youmustkeepyourheartopentothem.Sheisanordinarywoman,but/yetsheisreallyworthrespecting.Don,thesitate,or/otherwiseyou,llaccomplishnothing.Therefore,thefilmindustryshouldmakegreatereffortstoattractmoreviewers.andIeventwantedtogostraightbackhome.Thehomestayfamilywasnotonlyvertkind,butalsotheboythatIwasstayingwithwaskeenonfootballlet,snotwasteourtimeoninsignificantthingsbuthaveaheart-to-heartchatwithourparentsonaregularbasis.theexhibitioncannotonlyhelpyouhaveabetterunderstandingofChinesefolkartworks,butcanalsohelpyouacquiresomepaper-cuttingskills.Musicnotonlyplaysanimportantpartinthedevelopmentofhumansociety,butitalsocanenrichourspiritualandculturallife.Thequalityoflifehasimprovedandwatchingfilmsisregardedasagoodmeansofentertainment.备考技巧3亮点词汇（一）平常写作中，学生除了要掌握和运用基本词句的能力外，还要学会遣词造句的技巧。使用亮点词汇无疑会对考生的写作起着升华的作用。考生平时一定要多积累地道自然的单词短语，这样写的东西才会不落俗套和单调。值得注意的是，学生要把握好使用高级词汇的度，不能为了追求“高级”而将复杂甚至偏、难、怪的词堆砌在写作中，这样反而会适得其反。所以考生在完成写作任务时，要遵循千合当、准确、自然”的原则，也要注意使用的场合。.请将下列句子的划线部分用不同的或更好的单词短语替代。I,mbusywithmylessonnow,fortheCollegeEntranceExamination,whichisveryimportanttome,isnear.;;SoIhavetobotheryoutocorrectmymistakesinthematerialIattachtotheletter.Theteamwillholdmanyactivities,someofwhichwillattractyou,includingmanymatches. ; We,vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe,vealsobuiltalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe. ; I,vedecidedtoteachyouTangPoetryinRoom101Building1at8a.m.onWednesday,whichwilllasttwohours.Weshouldtrytoimproveourselvesthroughlearningandprepareforthefuture. ; IshouldsaysorryforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.Second,Iamtryingmybesttogetthenecessaryknowledgeandskillsaboutmyposition.Thecraftsmanwillshowvisitorshowtocutpaperintodifferentshapesonthespot.Ourclassthoughtoftheideatomakebetteruseofoldmaterials.Thereasonsarethefollowing.Ashighschoolstudents,weshouldbeneatlydressedwhenatschool.There,snoharminyourgoingtobedlatesometimes.Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbecomedifficult.That,swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverwillbeabetterchoice.【答案】1.occupiedwith;ofgreatimportance;aroundthecorner/approachinghavenochoicebuttoputyoutotroubleappealto;arangeofconstructed;setupmadeupmymindtotakepains;getpreparedoweyouanapologyforamsparingnoeffortvariouscameupwithasfollowsaresupposedtostayingupchallengingalternative二.请尝试用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文。DearJason,I'm①veryhappytohearfromyouandknowaboutyourbeautifulhomecityLondon.NowI,dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometownQuanzhou.Quanzhouisa②beautifulplaceforpeopletolivein.Itseconomyhasbeendeveloping③fastduringthepast⑷tenyears.Newbridgesandroadshavebeen⑤built,⑥tallbuildingsstandinginmanypartsofthecity.⑦Moreandmoreschoolsandhospitalsare⑧usefultothenativepeople.Itisdevelop